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As a team leader of the Amazon its my responsibility to explain newly joined interns how to
draft business messages by “Adapting the messages to your audience”. This can be done
through these ways:
Using the You Attitude: The "you" method comprises speaking and writing in terms
of your audience's interests, hopes, and preferences. You and your should replace I,
me, mine, we, us, and ours. It is a matter of genuine appreciation and concern for your
receivers. Instead of stating - our company creates a wide range of gorgeous styles
and types. You might say that you have a wide range of stunning styles and models to
choose from.
We offer MP3 players with storage capacities of 50, 75, or 100 gigabytes.
Write this: Please send your purchase order requests on Tuesday if you require a
speedy answer.
You have the option of purchasing an MP3 player with 50, 75, or 100 gigabytes of
capacity.
If you're writing to a shopkeeper, try to think like a shopkeeper, if you're dealing with
a production team, put yourself in that situation, and if you're writing to an unhappy
customer, understand how would he feel after reading.
Maintaining standard of Etiquette: By limiting negative emotional reactions, good
etiquette demonstrates respect for your audience and helps build a more fruitful
atmosphere for conversation. Instead of this, I am weary of seeing so many errors on
the blog! Proofreading blog content thoroughly helps us prevent embarrassing
blunders that harm our brand.
Instead of this: You've managed to bring the entire website down again again due to
your inept programming.
You've had our order from almost two weeks, and we need it right away!
Write this: Let's go over the most recent website upgrade and look for ways to
improve the process.
Emphasizing the Positive: Throughout your career, you will face circumstances in
which you must deliver some bad news. Never attempt to hide bad news; instead, seek
for positive factors that will help you build a strong relationship with your audience.
If you must critique or correct, avoid phrases such as failures, issues, and deficiencies
and instead use words that can enhance the situation.
Write this: Tightening cost controls can increase this department's performance.