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In the first place, Ao Vua is located at foot of Tan Vien mountain. There is no
denying that Ao Vua is a popular public space in Ba Vi due to myriad alluring
qualities. Firstly, it has large spaces of mountains and it is also famous for
waterfalls and streams. As a result, when tourists come here, they can participate
in walks with the mountains, take beautiful photos with waterfalls, streams,
mountain landscape, or even recharge their batteries after hectic schedules during
the days. Secondly, not only can travelers visit the landscape here, but they can
also gain knowledge of the legend and history of Hung King’s life. To illustrate,
when visitors visit Son Tinh -Thuy Tinh cave, they can see Son Tinh’s marriage
proposal with unique features recreating the old legend. Lastly, Ao Vua is a
renowned place due to the fact that it has a wide range of modern and fascinating
games. Of course, tourists are attracted by experiencing outdoor activities such as
climbing mountains, rowing, making a campfire, and other exciting games.
Therefore, Ao Vua is a well-known appealing activities and breathtaking views.
On the other hand, Ao Vua has certain undesirable qualities. The first issue is that
there are some groups of tourists who come here, throw the garbage
indiscrimininately. Thus, they have accidentally made the natural landscape here
less beautiful and have polluted the public environment. The second issue is that
ticket prices to visit this place are quite expensive compared to other tourist
destination tickets. For instance, ticket price to visit Ao Vua is 150,000 per ticket,
while the ticket price to visit Tam Coc Bich Dong in Ninh Binh is only 120,000 per
ticket. Hence, the number of visitors can decline as they cannot afford tickets.