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1 MUET PAPER 4 WRITING
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MUET [Task 1] - SAMPLE ESSAY 2-23
MUET [Task 2] - SAMPLE ESSAY 24-146
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Task 1
Sample Essay 1(Informal Letter)- MUET BAND 4.5
You are advised to spend about 25 minutes on this task.
Your friend, Danny, was unable to join the English Language Skills Workshop because he was sick. Read the
letter from him asking about the workshop which he missed.
STEP 1:
Read the INSTRUCTIONS and 70, Jalan Tanjung,
HIGHLIGHT the PROMPTS and NOTES 42000 Kajang,
Selangor.
13 January 2021
Notes:
Dear Shafiq,
Informative…
How was the English Language Skills Workshop? I am so disappointed that I missed
it because I was admitted to hospital due to gastric problem.
I have never been to a workshop on English Language Skills and I heard that it was
filled with exciting activities. Which activity did you enjoy the most? Describe
I also heard that a famous speaker showed up to give a talk. Was it interesting? Yes, because…
Did you take notes at the workshop? If yes, can you share them with me? Yes, share via
softcopy
Thanks in advance. Hope to hear from you soon.
Your friend,
Danny
Using all the notes given, write a reply of at least 100 words in an appropriate style.
[30 marks]

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STEP 2:
PLAN your response and EXPAND the notes given
Paragraph Prompts (Questions/ Notes Answers + Elaboration

Sentences)
Greeting Dear Shafiq, Dear Danny,
1 … English Language Informative I am sorry to hear that you are hospitalized due to
Skills Workshop… so … gastric. I hope that your condition is better now. I am a
disappointed… due to little upset that you missed the opportunity to join the
gastric problem. English Language Skills Workshop. Well, the
workshop was very informative as it has a lot of
beneficial content on how to improve English
Language Skills like reading, listening, speaking and
writing. [CAN ELABORATE MORE]
2 exciting activities… Describe The English Language Skills Workshop was filled with
Which activity did a lot of interesting and exciting activities to develop
you enjoy the most? English language skills. The activities carried out
[For this stimulus, include impromptu speaking activity, group
only ONE activity discussions, vocabulary quizzes and more. [CAN
(you enjoy the most) ELABORATE MORE] Among all of these activities, I
is given] enjoyed the impromptu speaking activity the most. I
need to formulate answers to questions I hadn't thought
about before, so I had to stay focused to avoid making
funny colloquial mistakes. The activity was enjoyable
as I was often amused by the tone and pronunciation of
others and I learned a lot from them. As I could move
around and interact with each other during the activity,
I did not feel bored. This type of <on the spot=
interaction improves our language fluency and comfort
level with spoken English. [LINK the activity to
English language skills that you have learnt]

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3 a famous speaker Yes, Yes, a famous speaker showed up, he is Datuk Eric
showed up… Was it because… Chong. I was really surprised, and so were the others.
interesting? He made a surprise appearance at the end of the
workshop. When he spoke, all eyes were on him,
because the audience could sense an air of gaiety about
his behaviour [related to 8interesting9] He shared the
tips to enhance English language skills and put all the
salient points in amusing stories. He was so humorous
as he always told jokes and interacted actively with
participants. All of us enjoyed listening to the talk as
the environment was lively and we learnt a lot of useful
knowledge about English language skills.
4 Did you take notes at Yes, share Yes, I took some notes at the workshop on several
the workshop? … can via softcopy important points mentioned by the speaker. For
you share them with instance, idioms for conversation, note taking skills,
me? reading strategies and so much more. I believe this is a
good reference for you as you are always looking for
useful and complete English notes to memorise. I will
share my notes with you via softcopy. Please give me
your email address so that I can send them to you as
soon as possible. Hope you can learn from my notes.
[Expand the notes given]
Closing Thanks in advance. Take care, Danny. Write again soon.
Hope to hear from
you soon.

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STEP 3: No 50, Jalan Kemboja,
Present your answer. 42000 Kajang,

Selangor.
20 January 2021
Dear Danny,
I am sorry to hear that you are hospitalized due to gastric. I hope that your condition is better now. I am a
little upset that you missed the opportunity to join the English Language Skills Workshop. Well, the workshop
was very informative as it has a lot of beneficial content on how to improve English Language Skills like reading,
listening, speaking and writing.
The English Language Skills Workshop was filled with a lot of interesting and exciting activities to
develop English language skills. The activities carried out include impromptu speaking activity, group discussions,
vocabulary quizzes and more. Among all of these activities, I enjoyed the impromptu speaking activity the most.
I need to formulate answers to questions I hadn't thought about before, so I had to stay focused to avoid making
funny colloquial mistakes. The activity was enjoyable as I was often amused by the tone and pronunciation of
others and I learned a lot from them. As I could move around and interact with each other during the activity, I
did not feel bored. This type of <on the spot= interaction improves our language fluency and comfort level with
spoken English.
Yes, a famous speaker showed up, he is Datuk Eric Chong. I was really surprised, and so were the others.
He made a surprise appearance at the end of the workshop. When he spoke, all eyes were on him, because the
audience could sense an air of gaiety about his behaviour. He shared the tips to enhance English language skills
and put all the salient points in amusing stories. He was so humorous as he always told jokes and interacted
actively with participants. All of us enjoyed listening to the talk as the environment was lively and we learnt a lot
of useful knowledge about English language skills.
Yes, I took some notes at the workshop on several important points mentioned by the speaker. For instance,
idioms for conversation, note taking skills, reading strategies and so much more. I believe this is a good reference
for you as you are always looking for useful and complete English notes to memorise. I will share my notes with
you via softcopy. Please give me your email address so that I can send them to you as soon as possible. Hope you
can learn from my notes.
Take care, Danny. Write again soon.
Your friend,
Shafiq

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Task 1
Sample Essay 2(Informal Letter)- MUET BAND 5
You received a letter from your friend, Kenny, who lives in Singapore, inviting you to spend the holidays with
him and his family. Read the letter from him.
STEP 1:
Read the INSTRUCTIONS and 743 Daisy Road,
HIGHLIGHT the PROMPTS and NOTES Singapore 238858.

21 November 2021
Hi Allen,
How are you? The December holidays are coming soon, and my mum and dad would Notes:
like to invite you to spend a week with us in Singapore. Please come! Yes! …
Tell us exactly when you get here. Will you be arriving by plane or train? Let us know
Tell Kenny
so that we can fetch you from the train station or the airport.
You did not visit Sentosa Island the last time you were in Singapore. Would you like
Yes, because …
to visit it this time?
Also, what sort of Singaporean dishes would you like to try this time? Do you have
any special requests? Suggest two dishes
Write soon! Bye for now.

Your friend,
Kenny
[30 marks]

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STEP 2:

Sentences)
Greeting Hi Allen, Hi Kenny,
1 How are you? Yes! ... I am fine and I hope you and your family are in the
December holidays… (Must say pink of health. I am looking forward for the December
invite you to spend a Yes… holidays and cannot wait to spend the break with my
week with us in Explain) family. Yes, I would like to spend a splendid holiday
Singapore. Please with your family in Singapore for a week. Thank you
come! for inviting me and I am looking forward to my trip to
Singapore soon.
2 Tell us exactly when Tell Kenny I think the best option to travel to Singapore is by air.
you get here. Will (Explain) This is because there will be a huge traffic jam at the
you be arriving by border checkpoint. Traveling by train has become dull
plane or train? and tedious for me because it takes a lot of time. Thus,
I prefer to fly to Singapore, not only because the travel
time is greatly reduced, but the fare is cheaper than
taking the train. After buying the ticket, I will give you
the details so you know the exact time of my arrival.
3 …did not visit Yes, Yes, I will definitely grab this golden opportunity to go
Sentosa Island…last because … to Sentosa Island after I missed it on my last visit to
time…Would you (Must say Singapore. This is due to the fact that Sentosa Island
like to visit it this Yes… Give has a lot of attractions, such as Universal Studios and
time? your Skyline Luge. For me, Universal Studios is a must
justification) because I can try different rides, shows, and attractions,
from Transformers to Jurassic Park. This man-made
island attracts many happy families around the world to
spend a whale of a time on this island. Thus, it will be
an eye-opening experience for me and my family, too.

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4 what sort of Suggest two I think I will go for the national dish of Singapore
Singaporean dishes dishes which is Singapore Chilli Crab, one of the most famous
would you like to try (Must local delicacies in Singapore. The reason for my choice
this time? Do you suggest 2 is that I love the sauce that is sweet yet savoury,
have any special dishes slightly spicy and extremely satisfying. In addition, my
requests? ONLY… trip to Singapore would not be complete if I didn't try
Explain) Hainanese Chicken Rice. A plate of poached or roasted
chicken on a bed of fragrant rice is a meal that just
looks so droolworthy. It would be great if I could dine
at Wee Nam Kee Chicken Rice as the restaurant offers
boneless chicken. You know I am a lazy eater who
hates gnawing on bones!
Closing Write soon! Bye for I will catch up with you another time. Bye.
now.

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STEP 3: 4, Jalan Lily,
Present your answer. Taman Enggang,

10600 Georgetown,
Pulau Pinang, Malaysia.
29 November 2021
Dear Kenny,
I am fine and I hope you and your family are in the pink of health. I am looking forward for the December
holidays and cannot wait to spend the break with my family. Yes, I would like to spend a splendid holiday with
your family in Singapore for a week. Thank you for inviting me and I am looking forward to my trip to Singapore
soon.
I think the best option to travel to Singapore is by air. This is because there will be a huge traffic jam at
the border checkpoint. Traveling by train has become dull and tedious for me because it takes a lot of time. Thus,
I prefer to fly to Singapore, not only because the travel time is greatly reduced, but the fare is also cheaper than
taking the train. After buying the ticket, I will give you the details so you know the exact time of my arrival.
Yes, I will definitely grab this golden opportunity to go to Sentosa Island after I missed it on my last visit
to Singapore. This is due to the fact that Sentosa Island has a lot of attractions, such as Universal Studios and
Skyline Luge. For me, Universal Studios is a must because I can try different rides, shows, and attractions, from
Transformers to Jurassic Park. This man-made island attracts many happy families around the world to spend a
whale of a time on this island. Thus, it will be an eye-opening experience for me and my family, too.
I think I will go for the national dish of Singapore which is Singapore Chilli Crab, one of the most famous
local delicacies in Singapore. The reason for my choice is that I love the sauce that is sweet yet savoury, slightly
spicy and extremely satisfying. In addition, my trip to Singapore would not be complete if I didn't try Hainanese
Chicken Rice. A plate of poached or roasted chicken on a bed of fragrant rice is a meal that just looks so
droolworthy. It would be great if I could dine at Wee Nam Kee Chicken Rice as the restaurant offers boneless
chicken. You know I am a lazy eater who hates gnawing on bones!
I will catch up with you another time. Bye.
Your friend,
Allen

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Task 1
Sample Essay 3(Email)- MUET BAND 4.5
Your classmate, Rizal, was unable to join the state drama competition because he was hospitalized. Read the
email from him asking about the competition which he missed.
STEP 1:
Read the INSTRUCTIONS and HIGHLIGHT the PROMPTS and NOTES
From <rizal@gmail.com>
Subject State Drama Competition
Hi Johan,
Notes:
I am finally back home and feeling much better. By the way, congratulations for bringing
back the drama competition trophy to our school after 5 years. I am happy and proud of all Thank Rizal
of you.
I saw your pictures holding the trophy on Instagram. All of you looked cheerful. I am sure
Describe two.
you must have many interesting stories to share about the competition.
There must have been challenges during the competition too. I would love to hear about
Tell Rizal
them.
I hope that our drama coach will let me be part of the drama team next year. It would be fun. Certainly!...
Until later.
Rizal
[30 marks]

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STEP 2:

Sentences)
Greeting Hi Johan, Hi Rizal,
1 … finally back home Thank Rizal It is nice to hear from you. I am glad that you are on the
and feeling much mend and are back home from the hospital. You need to
better. take care of your health so you can get back to school as
Congratulations… I soon as possible. Thank you for your congratulations
am happy and proud message. We still could not believe that we won the state
of all of you. drama competition after 5 years. The team and I are
sorry that you were unable to attend due to illness. So,
this win is also dedicated to you and all those who
supported us during our rehearsals and training.
2 I saw your pictures Describe Compared to Facebook, I didn't post many photos on
holding the trophy on two. Instagram. You should go to my Facebook to see some
Instagram. … many of the photos and videos I have taken for the team and
interesting stories… me. They are fun and hilarious! There is also a video of
about the competition. us performing on Youtube. You should check it out.
Maybe you are curious about our experience in the
competition. A lot of exciting and interesting things
happened during the competition. One of them was that
we met one of the famous Malaysian actresses, the
fabulously beautiful Fazura. Apparently, she was one of
the judges for the competition. I was in seventh heaven
when I managed to get her autograph. She even took a
photo with me. It is on Instagram now. Go check it out.
Another amusing thing that made us all dumbfounded
was that we won the Best Actor and Actress awards. Can
you imagine Zuklifi and Mastiara winning the Best

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Actor and Actress? Who would have thought that those
two shy people could perform so flawlessly.
3 … challenges during Tell Rizal Given all the challenges we had to go through, it was a
the competition… I complete surprise that we won. One of the challenges
would love to hear was Doreen9s costume, which was accidentally torn.
about them. Don't ask me how that happened. There must be
something tangled in it. Luckily, one of our talented
prop committees and needlework genius, Silvia,
managed to patch it for Doreen. Did you know that
Muhamad, one of the main actors, suddenly fainted.
Everyone wanted to help him, the situation was chaotic
and Mr Harun had to drive him to the nearest clinic. We
were relieved to find he passed out on an empty stomach
and nervousness. We were all on pins and needles when
it was our turn to perform. Thanks to countless
rehearsals and trainings, we go through it successfully.
[Can ELABORATE MORE]
4 … hope that our Certainly!... Our coach, Mr Harun told me that we should not rest on
drama coach will let our laurels. Instead, we should start thinking about our
me be part of the new play next year. He asked me to organize a meeting
drama team next year. and we certainly need you back on the team as our stage
manager. So, make sure you are healthy enough to join
us. It will definitely be more fun to have you with us.
[NO EXPANSION of IDEAS]
Closing Until later. That9s all for now!

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STEP 3:
Present your answer.
From: <johan@gmail.com>
Subject: State Drama Competition
Hi Rizal,
It is nice to hear from you. I am glad that you are on the mend and are back home from the hospital. You need
to take care of your health so you can get back to school as soon as possible. Thank you for your congratulations
message. We still could not believe that we won the state drama competition after 5 years. The team and I are
sorry that you were unable to attend due to illness. So, this win is also dedicated to you and all those who
supported us during our rehearsals and training.
Compared to Facebook, I didn't post many photos on Instagram. You should go to my Facebook to see some
of the photos and videos I have taken for the team and me. They are fun and hilarious! There is also a video of
us performing on Youtube. You should check it out. Maybe you are curious about our experience in the
competition. A lot of exciting and interesting things happened during the competition. One of them was that
we met one of the famous Malaysian actresses, the fabulously beautiful Fazura. Apparently, she was one of the
judges for the competition. I was in seventh heaven when I managed to get her autograph. She even took a
photo with me. It is on Instagram now. Go check it out. Another amusing thing that made us all dumbfounded
was that we won the Best Actor and Actress awards. Can you imagine Zuklifi and Mastiara winning the Best
Actor and Actress? Who would have thought that those two shy people could perform so flawlessly.
Given all the challenges we had to go through, it was a complete surprise that we won. One of the challenges
was Doreen9s costume, which was accidentally torn. Don't ask me how that happened. There must be something
tangled in it. Luckily, one of our talented prop committees and needlework genius, Silvia, managed to patch it
for Doreen. Did you know that Muhamad, one of the main actors, suddenly fainted. Everyone wanted to help
him, the situation was chaotic and Mr Harun had to drive him to the nearest clinic. We were relieved to find he
passed out on an empty stomach and nervousness. We were all on pins and needles when it was our turn to
perform. Thanks to countless rehearsals and trainings, we go through it successfully.
Our coach, Mr Harun told me that we should not rest on our laurels. Instead, we should start thinking about our
new play next year. He asked me to organize a meeting and we certainly need you back on the team as our
stage manager. So, make sure you are healthy enough to join us. It will definitely be more fun to have you with
us.
That9s all for now!

Johan

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Task 1
Sample Essay 4(Email)- MUET BAND 5
Your sister, Dina, has just enrolled in a public university to continue her tertiary education there. Read the email
from her asking about the family and your preparation for your upcoming examination.
STEP 1:
Read the INSTRUCTIONS and HIGHLIGHT the PROMPTS and NOTES
From <dina@gmail.com>
Subject I have arrived in Ireland!
Dear Amanda,
How have you been? I am really missing the whole family now that I have arrived safely. It Notes:
was very touching that everyone showed up at the airport to send me off. Could you do me
a favour and tell everyone that I'm doing well and the weather in Dublin is not that cold. Sure, I will.
Mum and dad mentioned that they would like to visit me here in July during summer. Please
tell them that they should start doing some online research to find out what they would like
to do here. Will you be joining us? Yes, of course.
I remember that you told me that your exams are around the corner. Are you ready to face
them? Do tell me about your preparations. Describe.
I'm a little worried about my studies. I always get nervous before exams. Do give me some
advice on how to stay calm before I take a test since you seem to always do well during
examinations. Tell Dina.
That's all for now. Write soon!
Dina
[30 marks]

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STEP 2:

Sentences)
Greeting Dear Amanda, Dear Dina,
1 How have you Sure, I will. I am all hale and hearty. I hope you are not too homesick
been? … really and can make a lot of friends there! Everyone in the
missing the whole family misses you terribly, but we understand that it is
family… Could you important for you to be in Ireland as you have been
do me a favour… tell studying hard and have finally seized the golden
everyone that I'm opportunity to pursue your higher education there. Sure,
doing well… the I will inform mum and dad that you are staying healthy
weather in Dublin is and safe there. I am glad to hear that Dublin is not as
not that cold. cold as we thought. It is good for you because you are
afraid of the cold.
2 summer… Please tell Yes, of Yes, of course. I will definitely take this opportunity to
them that they should course. visit you in Dublin and have an unforgettable time with
start doing some (Must say you there. In fact, mum and dad have started online
online research… Yes… research on all the magnificent places in Dublin. It
what they would like Explain) would be exhilarating to spend the whole summer there!
to do here. Will you be I am helping mom and dad with travel itineraries to
joining us? make the most of our time there as we plan to stay there
for four weeks. Since you will be on summer break when
we visit you, we can spend a whale of a time exploring
Ireland together.
3 exams are around the Describe. Yes, as I told you, my school exams are coming up, and
corner… Are you (Explain… I am still working assiduously to prepare for them. For
ready to face them? give instance, I create a flexible study timetable to divide
Do tell me about your examples) time between study and leisure so that I have adequate
preparations. time for my revision and do not overexert myself.
Furthermore, I also practise doing past year's exam

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[Give more than 1 questions and making simple notes to ease the
preparation] memorising of facts.
4 a little worried about Tell Dina. Perhaps I can give you some advice to keep your cool
my studies… Do give (Explain) before the exam because you mentioned that you are
me some advice on struggling with your studies. Honestly, I am also always
how to stay calm on pins and needles before exams. Exams are an
before I take a test… unnerving experience for almost every student. A good
suggestion is that you make some simple yet effective
study notes so that you can remember all the important
facts. Besides that, I also find that doing some breathing
exercises before and during the exam is key to helping
you focus on the exam. It will help you succeed in the
exam.
Closing That's all for now. It was a joy to receive news from you. All the best in
Write soon! your exams and write again soon!

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STEP 3:
Present your answer.
From: <amanda@gmail.com>
Subject: Congratulations and Stay Safe!
Dear Dina,
I am all hale and hearty. I hope you are not too homesick and can make a lot of friends there! Everyone in the
family misses you terribly, but we understand that it is important for you to be in Ireland as you have been
studying hard and have finally seized the golden opportunity to pursue your higher education there. Sure, I will
inform mum and dad that you are staying healthy and safe there. I am glad to hear that Dublin is not as cold as
we thought. It is good for you because you are afraid of the cold.
Yes, of course. I will definitely take this opportunity to visit you in Dublin and have an unforgettable time with
you there. In fact, mum and dad have started online research on all the magnificent places in Dublin. It would
be exhilarating to spend the whole summer there! I am helping mom and dad with travel itineraries to make the
most of our time there as we plan to stay there for four weeks. Since you will be on summer break when we
visit you, we can spend a whale of a time exploring Ireland together.
Yes, as I told you, my school exams are coming up, and I am still working assiduously to prepare for them. For
instance, I create a flexible study timetable to divide time between study and leisure so that I have adequate
time for my revision and do not overexert myself. Furthermore, I also practise doing past year's exam questions
and making simple notes to ease the memorising of facts.
Perhaps I can give you some advice to keep your cool before the exam because you mentioned that you are
struggling with your studies. Honestly, I am also always on pins and needles before exams. Exams are an
unnerving experience for almost every student. A good suggestion is that you make some simple yet effective
study notes so that you can remember all the important facts. Besides that, I also find that doing some breathing
exercises before and during the exam is key to helping you focus on the exam. It will help you succeed in the
exam.
It was a joy to receive news from you. All the best in your exams and write again soon!
Amanda

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Task 1
Your cousin, Jeff, could not attend a relative9s wedding because it was not a semester break. Read the email from
him asking about the wedding.
From <jeff@gmail.com>
Subject I Missed the Wedding!
Hi Torres,
Notes:
How are you? I am fine, although I9m busy with classes and assignments. I was a little
disappointed as I could not go home to attend Marsita9s wedding. How was the wedding? Great!
I heard that Uncle Jade arranged for something special for the wedding. Can you tell me
Describe two events.
what he did?
I will be coming home in two weeks9 time. I will buy a belated wedding gift for Marsita. Do
Yes, …
you want to share in the gift?
I heard that the family is planning a short holiday. Will you be joining us? Please do! Tell Jeff
That is all for now. Can9t wait to see you when I get back. So many things to catch up on.
See you soon!
Jeff
[30 marks]

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STUDENT’S ESSAY
From <torres@gmail.com>
Subject Great Wedding! Wrong Subject Reference (WSR).
Whose wedding? Ex: Marsita9s Great Wedding!
Hi Jeff,
How are you? Not answered.
I am so sorry to hear that you could not attend Marsita9s wedding as you are too busy with
classes and assignments. The wedding was great and awesome. Just descriptions.
The element of 8GREAT9 in the wedding? Ex: I met many old friends and we had a great reunion. Nothing much about
the SPECIAL elements.
Uncle Jade arranged something special for Marsita9s wedding. He prepared a huge chocolate You need to have these
words to show the
cake himself for Marsita and her husband. Secondly, since Marsita loves fireworks, he also SPECIAL elements:
arranged a firework show for Marsita9s wedding. He really loves Marsita so much! amazing, remarkable,
special, mesmerising,
(I will buy a belated wedding gift for Marsita.)- The prompt is IGNORED. noteworthy, impressive
Ex: Amazingly, we
I am glad you will be home in two weeks. We can buy the wedding gift together. Yes, I
never knew that Uncle
would share some money to buy the gift because Marsita would be delighted to receive it Jade can bake so well.
from both of us.
It9s great to hear that Marsita9s family is planning a short holiday. Sure, I will be joining it.
It must be enjoyable and I cannot wait for it!
Paragraph 5 is MISSING! The prompts in paragraph 5- not answered.
Ex: Same goes for me! I can9t wait to see you soon!
Take care!
Torres

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Task 1
Your classmate, Adora, is very keen to join a fitness centre. Read the letter from her asking about the fitness
centre that you have joined.
8, Jalan Tanjung,
84100 Muar,
Johor.
18 June 2021
Notes:
Dear Rozita,
How have you been doing lately? I heard from your sister that you have recently joined a
fitness centre. What is the name of the centre and where is it located? Tell your classmate
My lifestyle involves little or no physical activity but now I want to live a healthy lifestyle.
I would like to join a fitness centre because I have gained weight lately. However, I am not
sure which one to choose. I want to make sure I join a good fitness centre. How do you like
Great amenities
your present fitness centre?
I heard that a fitness centre normally offers a range of group classes and individual workout
programs. Can you please suggest some classes that are suitable and interesting for
Describe two activities
beginners? Preferably, classes that have a little dancing and music.
I would like to know the membership fees too. Is it costly? Tell your classmate
Till we meet again, take care!

Your friend,
Adora

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STUDENT’S ESSAY
92, Jalan Gembira,

84100 Muar,
Johor.
29 June 2021
Dear Adora,
I am fine, thank you. It is true that I joined a fitness centre. The centre name is Fitness World,
What are the great
which is located at Lot 856, Jalan Bukit Jalil. amenities? (Give More
than one example)
Ex: namely comfortable
I am happy to hear that you want to change your lifestyle and join a fitness centre to become steam room, spacious
changing room,
healthy. I am surprised that you have gained weight. No need to worry about it as joining a cardiovascular
equipment and
fitness centre can help you lose weight. My present fitness centre provides great amenities
enormous jacuzzi.
that ensure the efficiency of my fitness sessions.
Some Prompts are not

Yes, a fitness centre normally offers group and individual classes or workout programs. I answered.
would suggest you to join Zumba and Square dancing, which includes dancing and music. Suitable for Beginners?
Elaborate more on the
activities.
Interesting?
The membership fees is RM30 and you need to pay on a monthly basis. It is affordable and
not costly.
Goodbye. See you soon.

Your friend,
Rozita

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Task 1
Your class teacher, Mrs. Kong, is organising a school programme to encourage students to have a healthy lifestyle.
Read the following email from her.
From Mrs. Kong <kong@gmail.com>

Subject Stay Healthy!
Hi everyone,
Notes:
In celebrating International Youth Day, I am happy to inform you that our school is
organising a stay healthy programme and it will involve all students. Wonderful! ...
The aim of the programme is to encourage students to have a healthy lifestyle. It is important
Agree, because…
to be healthy.
I need students to help me organise this programme. I have set up many teams to help me
Great! ...
and you can choose to be in one of those.
I have some activities in mind. Perhaps you can suggest a few. Remember, the activities
Suggest two.
must be fun and at the same time benefit all of us.
If you have any questions about the programme, please ask!
Take care and write soon.
Mrs. Kong
[30 marks]

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STUDENT’S ESSAY
From Carol <carol@gmail.com>
Subject A Stay Healthy Programme
Hi Mrs. Kong,
Wow! It must be a wonderful programme in celebrating International Youth Day. I am glad

that I can take part in this stay healthy programme.
You have to agree with TWO things (1-AIM, 2-OPINION). However, you only agree with Mrs. Kong9s OPINION.
I agree that health is very important. This is because a healthy body enables us to go about
our daily lives well. Therefore, we cannot take it lightly.
Wrong Subject Reference(WSR)-IRRELEVANT-What is great?
That is great! I will help teacher to organise this programme. Can I gather my friends from
other classes to help teacher? I am sure that with the help of all of us, the program will run
smoothly. (I have set up many teams to help me and you can choose to be in one of those) The prompt is IGNORED.
The teacher has set up teams. Which team do you choose?
I would like to suggest two activities for the programme. One of them is treasure hunting. Need TWO elements
(FUN & BENEFICIAL)
Treasure hunting is fun and interesting as students can move around and will not get bored Element of Beneficial-
during the activity. Next, aerobics is fun too and can keep us in good shape. Missing.
Alright teacher. I will inform you if I have any questions about the programme.
Write soon and take care!
Carol

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 1– MUET BAND 4.5
You listened to a speech by the head prefect of your school during your school9s English week. The following
comment was made by the head prefect:
<Information and communication technology (ICT) is the cause of today’s many social ills.=
Do you agree with the statement? Write an essay of at least 250 words.
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY [60 marks]
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
PARAGRAPH 1 (INTRODUCTION)
Information and communication technology (ICT) includes Introduce the topic
digital products that can store, process, transmit, or receive electronic *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
information. Examples of ICT are software applications, web-based
to start your essay.
information and computer hardware. ICT has a profound impact on
society. ICT has brought about a lot of positive developments in today9s
world as ICT enables people to obtain a voluminous amount of
information and facilitates communication. However, ICT has its dark
sides.
I agree with the statement that information and communication Stand (Compulsory)
technology (ICT) is to blame for many of today's social ills. *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
This is because ICT causes addiction, obsession and depression. Thesis statement
*LAST SENTENCE of
paragraph 1. Write 3
POINTS in the thesis
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*Low Frequency Words
1. profound

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2. voluminous amount
PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)

First and foremost, ICT causes addiction, which leads to many Topic Sentence (T)
of today9s social ills. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Point no. 1 should be
written there.
With the advent of the digital era, anyone can own a mobile phone or a Elaboration 1 (E1)
computer to conduct daily activities. Rapid-paced technology enables * Give the first
explanation for your
people to gain access to various types of information with just a click of
TOPIC SENTENCE.
the mouse. However, the convenience brought by ICT has lead to an
over-reliance on technology. Nowadays, people cannot live without
mobile phones or computers since these digital devices have brought a
lot of convenience and entertainment to their lives. The easily-accessible
digital entertainment due to user-friendly technology has caused people
to become addicted to the entertainment.
For example, people are now rely on digital entertainment like playing Example 1 (Ex1)
computer games to spend their free time.
Comment:
Elaboration to
1. Good-
example 1 (EEx1)
Point no.1 is
discussed in
detail.
The introduction of e-Sport, which is a form of sports competition using Elaboration 2 (E2)
2. Some video games, has gained popularity in today9s society due to the * Give the second
grammatical explanation for your
errors. advancement of ICT. E-Sport players are addicted to e-Sport as they can
TOPIC SENTENCE.
spend the whole day playing video games and they can9t stop playing.
For instance, they even stop eating and sleeping in order to play video Example 2 (Ex2)
games that are thematic and include a lot of interesting themes like
fighting, shooting, and survival.

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They are addicted to video games and have neglected their priority, Elaboration to
which is study or work. Addiction to video games may even lead to example 2 (EEx2)
crimes like theft or robbery. This is because teenagers tend to spend a
lot of money on buying consoles or computers in order to play video
games.
Therefore, ICT may lead to social ills as ICT can cause addiction. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. rapid-paced
2. over-reliance
3. easily-accessible
4. e-Sport
5. thematic
6. consoles

Furthermore, ICT is the cause of today9s many social ills because Topic Sentence (T)
ICT causes obsession. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Comment:
written there.
1. Some
Obsession is the domination of one9s thoughts or feelings by a persistent Elaboration 1 (E1)
sentences
don't sound idea, image, or desire. The ubiquitous internet enables society to gain * Give the first
right. access to various kinds of information and news about the latest fashion explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
2. Some trends. Through social media and digital news, young people can follow
grammatical
the latest fashion trends started by celebrities.
errors.

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For example, youths are following the trend of wearing bike shorts or Example 1 (Ex1)
having a pixie cut, inspired by Korean celebrities.
Youths can spend a whale of time dressing up to look fashionable and Elaboration to
trendy so that they can be accepted by the society. This has resulted in example 1 (EEx1)
youths becoming fashion victims as they become increasingly obsessed
with the latest fashion trends. Peer influence is crucial in influencing
youth fashion attitudes. Poor fashion choices may cause youths to be
ostracised by their peers.
Youths tend to follow fashion trends started by their favourite celebrities Elaboration 2 (E2)
as informations on fashion is widespread and disseminated through ICT. * Give the second
In the long term, youths may become fashion obsessed. This may
TOPIC SENTENCE.
eventually lead to the neglection of their obligations like studying or
working, as youths are obsessed with fashion and they are not
concentrate on their priority tasks.
Example 2 (Ex2)
Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)
Thus, there is no doubt that ICT can cause obsession and lead to social Concluding Sentence
ills. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
Comment:
SENTENCE.
1. Point no.2
NOTES:
and Point
no.3 can be *Low Frequency Words
reorganised in 1. domination
terms of their
seriousness. 2. persistent
Point no.3 3. ubiquitous
should be
4. ostracised
discussed
first. Point 5. disseminated
no.2 should
be the last
one.

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Last but not least, ICT can cause depression, which leads to Topic Sentence (T)
social ills. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
It is an undeniable fact that depression and anxiety are popular and Elaboration 1 (E1)
prevalent social problems. These social issues can be attributed to ICT. * Give the first
The advancement in ICT enables people to use social media anytime
TOPIC SENTENCE.
and anywhere. Cyberbullying can take place on social media, which
leads to depression. Cyberbullying is bullying with the use of digital
technologies. Cyberbullying mostly takes place on social media like
Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter.
For example, youths are vulnerable and can easily succumb to Example 1 (Ex1)
cyberbullying.
Comment:
This sentence can be used to elaborate further on the effect and to
highlight social ills caused by ICT.
Correction of example:
For example, <body shaming= is a problem that is popular among
internet users, especially on Facebook and Twitter. Body shaming
is a type of cyberbullying (elaborate briefly on what body shaming
is).
The lack of parental supervision and proper moral upbringing has Elaboration to
resulted in the soaring rate of cyberbullying. example 1 (EEx1)
Those who have been cyberbullied are more prone to mental problems Elaboration 2 (E2)
like depression and anxiety as they lack mature judgement and cannot * Give the second
make rational decisions on ways to overcome their problems.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
Depression can have a severe impact on young people.

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For instance, some victims of cyberbullying may tend to commit suicide Example 2 (Ex2)
as they feel that life is meaningless.
Some may even resort to juvenile delinquency, such as committing Elaboration to
murder against those who have bullied them for relief from the mental example 2 (EEx2)
conflict or mental stress. The increasing juvenile crime rate may be the
negative impact of ICT on immature youths.
Hence, ICT can lead to social ills as it causes depression. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. prevelant
2. succumb to
3. prone to
4.juvenile delinquency
PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
In conclusion, ICT has a huge impact on today9s society. Concluding Line(s)
*Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my opinion, I strongly agree that information and communication Restate your stand /
technology (ICT) is the cause of today9s many social ills. This is due to opinion
the fact that ICT causes addiction, obsession, and depression. &
Summarise your 3
points
The accessibility of information due to technological advancement has Hope / Suggestion
brought about lots of negative impacts on society. The government
should develop and implement suitable policies to combat the social

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problems caused by ICT. This is to ensure that our nation can develop
sustainably and prosperously.

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Task 2
You listened to a speech by the head prefect of your school during your school9s English week. The following
comment was made by the head prefect:
<Information and communication technology (ICT) is the cause of today’s many social ills.=
Information and communication technology (ICT) includes digital products
Introduce the
that can store, process, transmit, or receive electronic information. Examples of ICT topic
are software applications, web-based information and computer hardware. ICT has
a profound impact on society. ICT has brought about a lot of positive developments
in today9s world as ICT enables people to obtain a voluminous amount of
information and facilitates communication. However, ICT has its dark sides. I agree
with the statement that information and communication technology (ICT) is to Stand
blame for many of today's social ills. This is because ICT causes addiction,
Thesis
obsession and depression. Statement

First and foremost, ICT causes addiction, which leads to many of today9s Topic Sentence
social ills. With the advent of the digital era, anyone can own a mobile phone or a E1
computer to conduct daily activities. Rapid-paced technology enables people to
gain access to various types of information with just a click of the mouse. However,
Comment:
the convenience brought by ICT has lead to an over-reliance on technology.
1. Good-
Nowadays, people cannot live without mobile phones or computers since these
Point no.1 is
discussed in digital devices have brought a lot of convenience and entertainment to their lives.
detail. The easily-accessible digital entertainment due to user-friendly technology has
2. Some caused people to become addicted to the entertainment. For example, people are Ex1
grammatical
now rely on digital entertainment like playing computer games to spend their free
errors.
time. The introduction of e-Sport, which is a form of sports competition using video E2

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games, has gained popularity in today9s society due to the advancement of ICT. E- Ex2
Sport players are addicted to e-Sport as they can spend the whole day playing video
games and they can9t stop playing. For instance, they even stop eating and sleeping EEx2
in order to play video games that are thematic and include a lot of interesting themes
like fighting, shooting, and survival. They are addicted to video games and have
neglected their priority, which is study or work. Addiction to video games may even Concluding
Sentence
lead to crimes like theft or robbery. This is because teenagers tend to spend a lot of
money on buying consoles or computers in order to play video games. Therefore,
ICT may lead to social ills as ICT can cause addiction.
Furthermore, ICT is the cause of today9s many social ills because ICT Topic Sentence
causes obsession. Obsession is the domination of one9s thoughts or feelings by a E1
persistent idea, image, or desire. The ubiquitous internet enables society to gain
access to various kinds of information and news about the latest fashion trends.
Through social media and digital news, young people can follow the latest fashion
Comment: trends started by celebrities. For example, youths are following the trend of wearing Ex1
1. Some bike shorts or having a pixie cut, inspired by Korean celebrities. Youths can spend EEx1
sentences
a whale of time dressing up to look fashionable and trendy so that they can be
don't sound
right. accepted by the society. This has resulted in youths becoming fashion victims as
2. Some they become increasingly obsessed with the latest fashion trends. Peer influence is
grammatical crucial in influencing youth fashion attitudes. Poor fashion choices may cause
errors.
youths to be ostracised by their peers. Youths tend to follow fashion trends started E2
by their favourite celebrities as informations on fashion is widespread and
disseminated through ICT. In the long term, youths may become fashion obsessed.
Comment:
This may eventually lead to the neglection of their obligations like studying or
1. Point no.2 working, as youths are obsessed with fashion and they are not concentrate on their
and Point
no.3 can be priority tasks. Thus, there is no doubt that ICT can cause obsession and lead to Concluding
reorganised in Sentence
social ills.
terms of their PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)
seriousness.
Point no.3 Last but not least, ICT can cause depression, which leads to social ills. It Topic Sentence
should be is an undeniable fact that depression and anxiety are popular and prevalent social
discussed E1
first. Point problems. These social issues can be attributed to ICT. The advancement in ICT
no.2 should
be the last Copyright ©2020 IVY Wong MUET Course. All Rights Reserved.
one.

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enables people to use social media anytime and anywhere. Cyberbullying can take
place on social media, which leads to depression. Cyberbullying is bullying with
the use of digital technologies. Cyberbullying mostly takes place on social media
Comment:
This sentence can be used to elaborate further on the effect and to
Correction of highlight social ills caused by ICT.
example:
For example, like Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter. For example, youths are vulnerable and can Ex1
<body
easily succumb to cyberbullying. The lack of parental supervision and proper moral
shaming= is a EEx1
problem that upbringing has resulted in the soaring rate of cyberbullying. Those who have been
is popular E2
cyberbullied are more prone to mental problems like depression and anxiety as they
among
internet users, lack mature judgement and cannot make rational decisions on ways to overcome
especially on
their problems. Depression can have a severe impact on young people. For instance, Ex2
Facebook and
Twitter. Body some victims of cyberbullying may tend to commit suicide as they feel that life is
shaming is a
meaningless. Some may even resort to juvenile delinquency, such as committing EEx2
type of
cyberbullying murder against those who have bullied them for relief from the mental conflict or
(elaborate
mental stress. The increasing juvenile crime rate may be the negative impact of ICT
briefly on
what body on immature youths. Hence, ICT can lead to social ills as it causes depression. Concluding
shaming is). Sentence
In conclusion, ICT has a huge impact on today9s society. In my opinion, I Concluding

strongly agree that information and communication technology (ICT) is the Line(s)
cause of today9s many social ills. This is due to the fact that ICT causes addiction, Restate
Stand/Opinion
obsession, and depression. The accessibility of information due to technological & Summarise 3
advancement has brought about lots of negative impacts on society. The Points
government should develop and implement suitable policies to combat the social Hope/Suggestion
problems caused by ICT. This is to ensure that our nation can develop sustainably
and prosperously.

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Teacher’s Comments
Task Fulfilment (TF) -fulfil the task satisfactorily

Language & Organisation (L) -some variety of sentences
-reasonably appropriate and varied vocabulary
MUET Band 4.5
CEFR Level B2
Low Frequency Words (LFW)
List of LFW in this essay:
1. profound
3. rapid-paced
4. over-reliance
5. easily-accessible
6. e-Sport
7. thematic
8. consoles
9. domination
10. persistent
11. ubiquitous
12. ostracised
13. disseminated
14. prevelant
15. succumb to
16. prone to
17. juvenile delinquency

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Task 2
You have watched a debate competition on television. The following comment was made by one of the debaters:
<Fashion is fast becoming a new craze among today’s youths.=
Write an essay expressing your opinion on the statement. Write at least 250 words.
DISCURSIVE ESSAY [60 marks]
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
Fashion is a popular aesthetic expression at a particular time, Introduce the topic
especially in clothing, footwear, makeup, hairstyle, lifestyle, and body *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
proportions. Fashion is something we deal with every day. It is used for
self-expression. If we observe carefully, we will notice that fashion
trends have evolved a lot over time. Fashion trends affect society
greatly.
In my opinion, I agree that fashion is fast becoming the new craze for Stand
today's youth. *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
This is because youths want to express themselves through fashion, Thesis statement
they want to be accepted by society, and fashion can lead to job *LAST SENTENCE of
creation.
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

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First and foremost, fashion is becoming a new craze among Topic Sentence (T)
today9s youths because it is one of the best ways for youths to express *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
themselves.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Fashion gives youths the opportunity to be who they are through their Elaboration 1 (E1)
fashion sense. Fashion, like clothing, is a personal statement for an * Give the first
individual.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For example, teenage girls tend to follow Western fashion in dressing to Example 1 (Ex1)
Comment: highlight their individual style, such as being athletic, girly, nerdy, or
tomboy.
1. Good-
Point no.1 is The clothes allow youths to express their personalities and preferences. Elaboration to
discussed in example 1 (EEx1)
detail.
2. Some
sentences Next, since rebellion is often a huge aspect of youths9 lives, youths tend Elaboration 2 (E2)
don't sound to use shocking fashion to rebel against their parents, classmates, and * Give the second
right. explanation for your
society.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, some rebellious teenage girls follow the fashion of going Example 2 (Ex2)
braless to showcase their rebellion towards society.
Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)
Fashion is also a way for young people to enhance their appearance and Elaboration 3 (E3)
make a good impression. Young people will feel better about themselves * Give the third
if they look attractive and wear fashionable clothes.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
To illustrate, the right clothing, makeup, and accessories will make Example 3 (Ex3)
youths feel confident and able to impress others.

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A youth who has no knowledge of how to dress and accessorise in Elaboration to
current styles may lack of confidence. Fashion can bolster confidence example 3 (EEx3)
among youths and increase their self-esteem.
Therefore, fashion allows youths to express themselves, and this is why Concluding Sentence
fashion is becoming a new craze among today9s youths. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. personal statement

Furthermore, youths follow the latest fashion trends because they Topic Sentence (T)
want to be accepted by society. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
Comment: written there.
1. Good- Many teens pick up on fashion trends in an effort to stave off humiliation Elaboration 1 (E1)
Point no.2 is
and mocking from their peers. Poor fashion choices may cause youths * Give the first
discussed in
detail. to lose their friends or be ostracised.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
2. Some
grammatical
errors. For example, if a teenage girl dresses in inappropriate clothes or does Example 1 (Ex1)
not apply the latest makeup, she may be mocked by her friends, and this
may result in a decline in confidence level.
Hence, peer pressure is a factor which causes youths to pay a lot of Elaboration to
attention to dressing in order to appear up-to-date and accepted by their example 1 (EEx1)
peers.

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The way youths dress up identifies them as belonging to specific cliques Elaboration 2 (E2)
or groups who wear similar apparel. It will give them a sense of * Give the second
belonging and togetherness with other like-minded youths. They will
TOPIC SENTENCE.
feel included and accepted, which is essential to a youth's self-esteem.
Example 2 (Ex2)
Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)
Moreover, youths have the desire to be like a celebrity. Celebrities have Elaboration 3 (E3)
a great influence on young people's choices of dress and ideas about * Give the third
fashion. When the people around them is following the current fashion
TOPIC SENTENCE.
trend started by celebrities, youths will be influenced to follow the trend
too.
For instance, bike shorts are all the rage among Instagram celebrities. Example 3 (Ex3)
Another example is the pixie cut, inspired by Korean celebrities.
Elaboration to
example 3 (EEx3)
Thus, youths follow the latest fashion trends in order to be accepted by Concluding Sentence
society. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. stave off
2. ostracised
3. cliques

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Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that fashion leads to job Topic Sentence (T)
creation, as fashion is becoming a new craze for today's youth. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
A career in fashion is a glamorous idea. The fashion industry is diverse Elaboration 1 (E1)
and has different roles. * Give the first
TOPIC SENTENCE.
Comment: For example, garment technologist is an innovative job that involves Example 1 (Ex1)
1. Should working on the design and development of new materials for garments.
consider Fashion designers and fashion stylists are also in high demand due to Elaboration to
giving better
points other the popularity of the latest fashion trends. example 1 (EEx1)
than Point
no.3. Please
The increasing demand for latest fashion like clothing, footwear, Elaboration 2 (E2)
search for
more accessories, and makeup has resulted in the fashion industry's * Give the second
information expansion, which creates a wide range of job opportunities. explanation for your
on other TOPIC SENTENCE.
points.
For instance, the soaring demand for makeup products like LOreal Paris Example 2 (Ex2)
2. Some and Maybelline New York has created more job opportunities in the
grammatical
errors. cosmetic industry.
Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)
In addition, youths9 increasing spending on fashion clothing has boosted Elaboration 3 (E3)
online sales for clothing. * Give the third
TOPIC SENTENCE.
E-commerce platforms like Shopee, Lazada, and Amazon offer Example 3 (Ex3)
opportunities for online retailers to sell their clothes online.

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This has created a lot of online jobs for online retailers and Elaboration to
entrepreneurs. The creation of jobs can reduce a country9s example 3 (EEx3)
unemployment rate and increase its Gross Domestic Product (GDP),
which is beneficial for economic growth.
Hence, as fashion is fast becoming a new craze among today9s youths, Concluding Sentence
it can create lots of jobs, which is important for a country9s *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
development.
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. garment technologist
2. E-commerce
3. online retailers
4. Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
In conclusion, there is a strong connection between fashion and Concluding Line(s)
youths. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my opinion, I still strongly believe that fashion is fast becoming a Restate your stand /
new craze among today9s youth. This is due to youths' desire to express opinion
themselves, be accepted by society, and fashion can create a lot of &
job opportunities. Summarise your 3
points
Youths are quick to follow fashionable trends for them to fit in. Fashion Hope / Suggestion
may cause stress and anxiety among young people who take it too
seriously. Hopefully, being trendy will not enslave 束缚 them, but they
will instead learn to adopt a stronger positive mindset and exercise
moderation in their thoughts and actions.

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Task 2
<Fashion is fast becoming a new craze among today’s youths.=
Fashion is a popular aesthetic expression at a particular time, especially in
Introduce the
clothing, footwear, makeup, hairstyle, lifestyle, and body proportions. Fashion is topic
something we deal with every day. It is used for self-expression. If we observe
carefully, we will notice that fashion trends have evolved a lot over time. Fashion
trends affect society greatly. In my opinion, I agree that fashion is fast becoming Stand
the new craze for today's youth. This is because youths want to express themselves Thesis
through fashion, they want to be accepted by society, and fashion can lead to Statement
job creation.
First and foremost, fashion is becoming a new craze among today9s youths Topic Sentence
because it is one of the best ways for youths to express themselves. Fashion gives E1
youths the opportunity to be who they are through their fashion sense. Fashion, like
clothing, is a personal statement for an individual. For example, teenage girls tend Ex1
to follow Western fashion in dressing to highlight their individual style, such as
Comment:
being athletic, girly, nerdy, or tomboy. The clothes allow youths to express their EEx2
1. Good-
Point no.1 is personalities and preferences. Next, since rebellion is often a huge aspect of youths9 E2
discussed in lives, youths tend to use shocking fashion to rebel against their parents, classmates,
detail.
and society. For instance, some rebellious teenage girls follow the fashion of going Ex2
2. Some
braless to showcase their rebellion towards society. Fashion is also a way for young E3
sentences
don't sound people to enhance their appearance and make a good impression. Young people
right. will feel better about themselves if they look attractive and wear fashionable
clothes. To illustrate, the right clothing, makeup, and accessories will make youths Ex3

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feel confident and able to impress others. A youth who has no knowledge of how
EEx3
to dress and accessorise in current styles may lack of confidence. Fashion can
bolster confidence among youths and increase their self-esteem. Therefore, fashion
Concluding
allows youths to express themselves, and this is why fashion is becoming a new Sentence
craze among today9s youths.
Furthermore, youths follow the latest fashion trends because they want to Topic Sentence
be accepted by society. Many teens pick up on fashion trends in an effort to stave E1
off humiliation and mocking from their peers. Poor fashion choices may cause
youths to lose their friends or be ostracised. For example, if a teenage girl dresses Ex1
in inappropriate clothes or does not apply the latest makeup, she may be mocked
Comment:
by her friends, and this may result in a decline in confidence level. Hence, peer
1. Good- pressure is a factor which causes youths to pay a lot of attention to dressing in order EEx1
Point no.2 is
discussed in to appear up-to-date and accepted by their peers. The way youths dress up identifies E2
detail. them as belonging to specific cliques or groups who wear similar apparel. It will
2. Some give them a sense of belonging and togetherness with other like-minded youths.
grammatical
They will feel included and accepted, which is essential to a youth's self-esteem.
errors.
Moreover, youths have the desire to be like a celebrity. Celebrities have a great E3
influence on young people's choices of dress and ideas about fashion. When the
people around them is following the current fashion trend started by celebrities,
youths will be influenced to follow the trend too. For instance, bike shorts are all Ex3
the rage among Instagram celebrities. Another example is the pixie cut, inspired by
Comment:
Korean celebrities. Thus, youths follow the latest fashion trends in order to be Concluding
1. Should Sentence
accepted by society.
consider
giving better PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)
points other Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that fashion leads to job creation, Topic Sentence
than Point
no.3. Please as fashion is becoming a new craze for today's youth. A career in fashion is a E1
search for glamorous idea. The fashion industry is diverse and has different roles. For
Ex1
more example, garment technologist is an innovative job that involves working on the
information
on other design and development of new materials for garments. Fashion designers and EEx1
points. fashion stylists are also in high demand due to the popularity of the latest fashion
2. Some trends. The increasing demand for latest fashion like clothing, footwear, E2
grammatical
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accessories, and makeup has resulted in the fashion industry's expansion, which
creates a wide range of job opportunities. For instance, the soaring demand for Ex2
makeup products like LOreal Paris and Maybelline New York has created more job
opportunities in the cosmetic industry. In addition, youths9 increasing spending on E3
fashion clothing has boosted online sales for clothing. E-commerce platforms like
Shopee, Lazada, and Amazon offer opportunities for online retailers to sell their Ex3
clothes online. This has created a lot of online jobs for online retailers and EEx3
entrepreneurs. The creation of jobs can reduce a country9s unemployment rate and
increase its Gross Domestic Product (GDP), which is beneficial for economic
growth. Hence, as fashion is fast becoming a new craze among today9s youths, it Concluding
Sentence
can create lots of jobs, which is important for a country9s development.
Concluding
In conclusion, there is a strong connection between fashion and youths. In
Line(s)
my opinion, I still strongly believe that fashion is fast becoming a new craze among
Restate
today9s youth. This is due to youths' desire to express themselves, be accepted by Stand/Opinion
& Summarise 3
society, and fashion can create a lot of job opportunities. Youths are quick to
Points
follow fashionable trends for them to fit in. Fashion may cause stress and anxiety
among young people who take it too seriously. Hopefully, being trendy will not Hope/Suggestion
enslave 束缚 them, but they will instead learn to adopt a stronger positive mindset
and exercise moderation in their thoughts and actions.

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-paragraphs show some evidence of planning and unity
MUET Band 4.5
CEFR Level B2
1. personal statement
2. stave off
3. ostracised
4. cliques
5. garment technologist
6. E-commerce
7. online retailers
8. Gross Domestic Product (GDP)

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Task 2
SAMPLE ESSAY 3– MUET BAND 4
You attended a talk by a youth speaker talking about international sporting events. The following comment was
made by the guest speaker:
<International sporting events such as Olympic Games and the football world cup provide an outlet for
patriotic feelings and help to reduce international tensions.=
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
The word "sport" itself is magical enough to thrill people, Introduce the topic
especially those who love sports in their own way. Generally, sports *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
promote the idea of physical and mental well-being. The globalisation
of sports has lead to the introduction of international sporting events.
International sports refer to sports when participants represent at least
two or more countries.
I agree with the statement that international sporting events such as the Stand (Compulsory)
Olympic Games and the World Cup provide an outlet for patriotic *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
sentiments and contribute to the reduction of international tensions.
This is because international sporting events provide a platform to Thesis statement
express patriotic emotions, develop understanding among nations *LAST SENTENCE of
and promote world peace.
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

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First and foremost, international sporting events provide an outlet Topic Sentence (T)
for patriotic feelings, as the sporting events serve as a platform to *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
express patriotic emotions.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Comment: Malaysia is a fine example where sports enable Malaysians from all Elaboration 1 (E1)
1. It's better to walks of life to express their patriotism. * Give the first
explain this explanation for your
term TOPIC SENTENCE.
<patriotism=
first before
giving an For example, Malaysia hosted the 1998 Commonwealth Games, which Example 1 (Ex1)
example. involved Commonwealth member nations. When Malaysians support
You should their team and cheer for them whenever they defeat the rival team, they
forget about their differences and exhibit their patriotic emotions. Ever
since Nicol David and Lee Chong Wei went on to win international
games, namely squash and badminton, Malaysians have faithfully
rallied behind them when they were on the court defending their
championships.
The moral support gives them the impetus to defend world titles and Elaboration to
show sheer determination to bring glory to Malaysia. Athletes can show example 1 (EEx1)
their nationalism and patriotism by giving their best effort in the games.
Although they lose the games, they still display great sportsmanship in
defeat.
Comment:
1. They are
actually one Other nations are also involved in international sporting events to Elaboration 2 (E2)
of the top express their patriotism. * Give the second
teams-always explanation for your
make it to the TOPIC SENTENCE.
finals.
For instance, during the Football World Cup, the Brazilians experience Example 2 (Ex2)
You should
exhilaration and patriotic feelings as the Brazilian football team is
supposed to be the best in the world. People wear shirts with their team
names and buy national flags to showcase their patriotism.

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Football is said to have the power to bring people together regardless of Elaboration to
Comment: their age, race, and gender. During the World Cup, fans from the same example 2 (EEx2)
1. You should country unite to support their team, and this can raise their patriotic
explain spirit.
<patriotism=
more or less
like this. Therefore, international sporting events can give vent to patriotic Concluding Sentence
feelings. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. impetus
2. exhilaration

Furthermore, international sporting events can help to reduce Topic Sentence (T)
international tensions because they develop understanding among *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
nations.
Look at your THESIS
Comment:
STATEMENT.
1. It should be Point no. 2 should be
<disputing=, written there.
not <foe=.
What are the Rivalry will encourage foe countries to compete with each other through Elaboration 1 (E1)
reasons for sporting events. * Give the first
the dispute? explanation for your
You should TOPIC SENTENCE.
For example, the 1998 World Cup in France managed to ease political Example 1 (Ex1)
tensions between the United States and Iran as they got to develop
mutual understanding through sports.
Elaboration to
example 1 (EEx1)

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International sports provide opportunities for people to explore the Elaboration 2 (E2)
Comment: cultures of their rival countries. They closely observe the host country, * Give the second
1. For explanation for your
and many misconceptions or cultural barriers are eliminated. This is a
badminton, TOPIC SENTENCE.
great way to banish hatred, racism, and class division.
you can use
the Thomas
Cup (men) For instance, during the SEA Games, people from different nations Example 2 (Ex2)
and Uber Cup obtain suitable information about each other's cultures, traditional and
(women) as
religious beliefs.
examples.
This is one of This assists governments in understanding each other and has a direct Elaboration to
the best impact on international relations, which strengthens diplomatic ties with example 2 (EEx2)
examples of
how sports other countries.
unite people.
You should Besides, citizens from different nations tend to forget their differences Elaboration 3 (E3)
when they gather in stadiums or sports arenas to watch their teams play * Give the third
in global events.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
To illustrate, during the Olympic Games, people gather from all over Example 3 (Ex3)
the world to witness the games. They can experience local customs,
traditions, and hospitality in the host country.
When they spend time together, they will develop reciprocal respect and Elaboration to
this will release tensions among nations. example 3 (EEx3)
Thus, there is no doubt that international sports can ease international Concluding Sentence
tensions and promote understanding among nations. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. rivalry
2. reciprocal respect

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Last but not least, international sporting events can help promote Topic Sentence (T)
world peace. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
It is an undeniable fact that global sports can be an icebreaker as Elaboration 1 (E1)
competitors from different nations create a platform for athletes, global * Give the first
leaders, and organisations to interact in a more sophisticated way.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For example, a good illustration is the Olympic Games, in which the Example 1 (Ex1)
whole world gets the opportunity to interact and maintain global
harmony.
Sportsmen and sportswomen from developed nations can compete with Elaboration to
world-class sportsmen and sportswomen from third world countries. example 1 (EEx1)
It can be seen that during international tournaments, athletes from Elaboration 2 (E2)
various nations are competing against each other in a sportive way. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, the World Cup has been proven to be a catalyst for change Example 2 (Ex2)
as it brings people from different nationalities together.
Elaboration to
Comment: example 2 (EEx2)
1. It sounds
realistic and
practical, but These international games open new avenues in the world that bestow Elaboration 3 (E3)
it doesn't boons for different foe nations. This is because during international play, * Give the third
happen explanation for your
the presidents of different countries go to the host country to watch the
actually. TOPIC SENTENCE.
games, and this provides opportunities to discuss issues between the
enemy countries.

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To illustrate, during the FIFA World Cup, many nations9 leaders get to Example 3 (Ex3)
meet each other, which enables them to ease the tensions among nations
Comment:
and helps prevent war and bloodshed.
1. Find out
more about The world is already in turmoil with discrimination, political instability, Elaboration to
the games and sporting events can act as a remedy by promoting international example 3 (EEx3)
that were
harmony.
played at the
Olympic
Games. Hence, international sporting events can lead the world to live in peace. Concluding Sentence
You should *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. catalyst
2. bestow boons
3. turmoil
4. political instability
In conclusion, international sporting events indeed help promote Concluding Line(s)
and sustain many positive benefits for different nations. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
I strongly agree that international sporting events such as the Restate your stand /
Olympic Games and the football world cup provide an outlet for opinion
patriotic feelings and help to reduce international tensions. This is due &
to the fact that international sports provide a platform to express Summarise your 3
patriotic emotions, improve understanding between countries and points
develop world peace.
Sport delivers a clear message of peace and paves the road to building Hope / Suggestion
world harmony, which helps reduce international tensions. This will

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ensure the sustainable development and growth of the nations in the
world and ensure prosperity in the future.
NOTES:
1. paves the road to building world harmony

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Task 2
You attended a talk by a youth speaker talking about international sporting events. The following comment was
made by the guest speaker:
<International sporting events such as Olympic Games and the football world cup provide an outlet for
patriotic feelings and help to reduce international tensions.=
The word "sport" itself is magical enough to thrill people, especially those
Introduce the
who love sports in their own way. Generally, sports promote the idea of physical topic
and mental well-being. The globalisation of sports has lead to the introduction of
international sporting events. International sports refer to sports when participants
represent at least two or more countries. I agree with the statement that international
Stand
sporting events such as the Olympic Games and the World Cup provide an outlet
for patriotic sentiments and contribute to the reduction of international tensions.
This is because international sporting events provide a platform to express Thesis
patriotic emotions, develop understanding among nations and promote world Statement
peace.
First and foremost, international sporting events provide an outlet for Topic Sentence
patriotic feelings, as the sporting events serve as a platform to express patriotic
Comment: emotions. Malaysia is a fine example where sports enable Malaysians from all E1
1. It's better to walks of life to express their patriotism. For example, Malaysia hosted the 1998 Ex1
explain this Commonwealth Games, which involved Commonwealth member nations. When
term
Malaysians support their team and cheer for them whenever they defeat the rival
<patriotism=
first before team, they forget about their differences and exhibit their patriotic emotions. Ever EEx1
giving an since Nicol David and Lee Chong Wei went on to win international games, namely
example.
squash and badminton, Malaysians have faithfully rallied behind them when they
You should

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were on the court defending their championships. The moral support gives them the
Comment:
impetus to defend world titles and show sheer determination to bring glory to
1. They are
Malaysia. Athletes can show their nationalism and patriotism by giving their best
actually one
of the top effort in the games. Although they lose the games, they still display great
teams-always sportsmanship in defeat. Other nations are also involved in international sporting E2
make it to the
events to express their patriotism. For instance, during the Football World Cup, the Ex2
finals.
Brazilians experience exhilaration and patriotic feelings as the Brazilian football EEx2
team is supposed to be the best in the world. People wear shirts with their team
names and buy national flags to showcase their patriotism. Football is said to have
Comment:
the power to bring people together regardless of their age, race, and gender. During
1. You should
explain the World Cup, fans from the same country unite to support their team, and this can
<patriotism= raise their patriotic spirit. Therefore, international sporting events can give vent to Concluding
more or less Sentence
patriotic feelings.
like this.
Furthermore, international sporting events can help to reduce international Topic Sentence
tensions because they develop understanding among nations. Rivalry will E1
Comment:
encourage foe countries to compete with each other through sporting events. For
1. It should be example, the 1998 World Cup in France managed to ease political tensions between Ex1
<disputing=,
not <foe=. the United States and Iran as they got to develop mutual understanding through
What are the sports. International sports provide opportunities for people to explore the cultures E2
reasons for
of their rival countries. They closely observe the host country, and many
the dispute?
misconceptions or cultural barriers are eliminated. This is a great way to banish
You should
hatred, racism, and class division. For instance, during the SEA Games, people Ex2
Comment: from different nations obtain suitable information about each other's cultures,
1. For traditional and religious beliefs. This assists governments in understanding each EEx2
badminton,
other and has a direct impact on international relations, which strengthens
you can use
the Thomas diplomatic ties with other countries. Besides, citizens from different nations tend to E3
Cup (men) forget their differences when they gather in stadiums or sports arenas to watch their
and Uber Cup
(women) as teams play in global events. To illustrate, during the Olympic Games, people gather Ex3
examples. from all over the world to witness the games. They can experience local customs,
This is one of
traditions, and hospitality in the host country. When they spend time together, they EEx3
the best
examples of will develop reciprocal respect and this will release tensions among nations. Thus,
how sports
unite people. Copyright ©2020 IVY Wong MUET Course. All Rights Reserved.
You should
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there is no doubt that international sports can ease international tensions and Concluding
Sentence
promote understanding among nations.
Last but not least, international sporting events can help promote world Topic Sentence
peace. It is an undeniable fact that global sports can be an icebreaker as competitors E1
from different nations create a platform for athletes, global leaders, and
organisations to interact in a more sophisticated way. For example, a good Ex1
illustration is the Olympic Games, in which the whole world gets the opportunity EEx1
to interact and maintain global harmony. Sportsmen and sportswomen from
developed nations can compete with world-class sportsmen and sportswomen from E2
third world countries. It can be seen that during international tournaments, athletes
Comment: from various nations are competing against each other in a sportive way. For
1. It sounds instance, the World Cup has been proven to be a catalyst for change as it brings Ex2
realistic and people from different nationalities together. These international games open new
practical, but
it doesn't avenues in the world that bestow boons for different foe nations. This is because E3
happen during international play, the presidents of different countries go to the host country
actually.
to watch the games, and this provides opportunities to discuss issues between the
enemy countries. To illustrate, during the FIFA World Cup, many nations9 leaders Ex3
Comment: get to meet each other, which enables them to ease the tensions among nations and
helps prevent war and bloodshed. The world is already in turmoil with EEx3
1. Find out
more about discrimination, political instability, and sporting events can act as a remedy by
the games promoting international harmony. Hence, international sporting events can lead the Concluding
that were Sentence
played at the world to live in peace.
Olympic PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION)
Games.
In conclusion, international sporting events indeed help promote and sustain Concluding
You should Line(s)
many positive benefits for different nations. I strongly agree that international
sporting events such as the Olympic Games and the football world cup provide an Restate
Stand/Opinion
outlet for patriotic feelings and help to reduce international tensions. This is due to & Summarise 3
the fact that international sports provide a platform to express patriotic emotions, Points
improve understanding between countries and develop world peace. Sport
delivers a clear message of peace and paves the road to building world harmony,
Hope/Suggestion
which helps reduce international tensions. This will ensure the sustainable

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development and growth of the nations in the world and ensure prosperity in the
future.
Task Fulfilment (TF) -development of paragraph 1 & 2- the flow of ideas seems lacking;
certain terms are left unclear. (Touch and go)
- the contents of the discussion appear to be <lacking= in information.
MUET Band 4
CEFR Level B2
1. impetus
2. exhilaration
3. rivalry
4. reciprocal respect
5. catalyst
6. bestow boons
7. turmoil
8. political instability
9. paves the road to building world harmony

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Task 2
You came across an article on peer pressure. The following question came to your mind:
<Can peer pressure help mould a student’s life?=
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
Students are learners that learn in schools, colleges, or Introduce the topic
universities. Students spend most of their time in class studying for *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
exams or doing school assignments. They work hard to achieve
academic excellence and learn a lot of skills during school life. A
student9s life involves receiving an education through classroom
learning and developing desirable personality traits. There are many
aspects that affect a student9s life.
In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can help mould a student9s Stand
life. This is because students may be immature and unable to make good *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
decisions in choosing friends that are beneficial to their lives.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
with the statement)
Instead of peer pressure, parents, teachers, and the mass media can Thesis statement
have a great influence on a student9s life. *LAST SENTENCE of
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.


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First and foremost, parents have a great impact on a student9s Topic Sentence (T)
life. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Parents are students9 first teachers, and they have a key role in shaping Elaboration 1 (E1)
students9 character. Parents can be a helping hand in a student9s * Give the first
educational journey. It is true that parents can be role models for
TOPIC SENTENCE.
students to emulate. They should demonstrate good moral values and a
caring, loving and responsible character for students to follow. Open-
mindedness is essential for parents to allow their children to try new
things and accept differences.
For example, parents should be open-minded in terms of education Example 1 (Ex1)
which allow their children to think out of the box and be creative in
Comment:
learning.
1. Result This can help to boost children9s confidence levels and enhance Elaboration to
creativity. Parents should let go of control and not overschedule their example 1 (EEx1)
Comment: children with learning activities at home.
1. Good-
Point no.1 is
Next, parents can be great listeners for students in times of trouble. They Elaboration 2 (E2)
discussed in
detail- shows can motivate their children by offering adequate moral support and * Give the second
RESULT explanation for your
valuable suggestions.
(change in a TOPIC SENTENCE.
student's life.) For instance, when a student faces the problem of cyberbullying, he can Example 2 (Ex2)
2. Some turn to parents for help.
grammatical
His parents will share some of their personal experiences with him and Elaboration to
errors
advise him to have sheer determination in facing problems. This will example 2 (EEx2)
Comment: encourage him to face problems optimistically and confidently.
1. Result
Therefore, parents play an important role in student9s life. Concluding Sentence

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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. emulate
2. open-mindedness
3. cyberbullying
4. sheer determination
5. optimistically

Furthermore, teachers play a vital role to mould a student9s life. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Teachers take the place of parents in school and they mould the Elaboration 1 (E1)
personality and character of the student. An ideal teacher should be * Give the first
impartial, disciplined, and courteous to set a good example for students
TOPIC SENTENCE.
to emulate. A teacher can be a mentor, a motivator, and a source of
inspiration to students. A teacher has a unique way of improving the
social development and academic performance of students.
For example, a teacher can create a curriculum that fosters students' Example 1 (Ex1)
development.
Comment: They can teach problem-solving skills by conducting class projects Elaboration to
1. Result? relating to issues like water shortages. example 1 (EEx1)
You should

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Teachers can help to nurture students' self-esteem. Whenever students Elaboration 2 (E2)
fail in their exams, teachers can inspired students and give students the * Give the second
Comment:
impetus to try even harder.
1. What type TOPIC SENTENCE.
of goal?
For instance, teachers will guide students to set goals in life. Example 2 (Ex2)
During the learning process, teachers help students understand their Elaboration to
strengths and weaknesses. When students have a better understanding example 2 (EEx2)
Comment:
of themselves, they will have a higher confidence level and will be
1. Result
motivated to achieve goals in life.
Thus, there is no doubt that teachers play a great role in moulding a Concluding Sentence
student9s life. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. impartial
2. impetus

Last but not least, the mass media can help mould a student9s Topic Sentence (T)
Comment:
life. *SHORT &
1. Point no.3
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
is NOT
Look at your THESIS
discussed in
detail- doesn’t STATEMENT.
shows
Comment:
RESULT written there.
The
(change in a The most common platforms for mass media are the internet, Elaboration 1 (E1)
discussion is
student's life.)
more on the newspapers, television, and radio. The ubiquitous internet in today9s * Give the first
advantages of world allows free sharing of thoughts through social networking sites. explanation for your
social media TOPIC SENTENCE.
than how it Students tend to use social media to stay connected, make friends, and
would mould satisfy their social needs.
a student's
life. (There is
NO result
given.) Downloaded by FONG YU FENG - (feng.fong@yes.my)
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For example, students love to spend time socialising through social Example 1 (Ex1)
media like Facebook, Instagram, and WeChat because they can meet
different people from all walks of life.
Students can create other online identities that the real world doesn't Elaboration to
allow. Social networking gives students the freedom to meet like- example 1 (EEx1)
minded people with the same interests. They can also gain new
perspectives by viewing other people's lives through social media.
Comment:
Needs to Students not only meet new people through social media, but they can Elaboration 2 (E2)
explain from
also have a better understanding of global issues through mass media. * Give the second
the student's
side. explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
1. share ideas,
stay For instance, students can learn more about human rights, poverty, Example 2 (Ex2)
connected, inflation, recession, or global warming issues through newspapers or
freedom, gain
search engines like Google Chrome.
new
perspectives, Mass media spreads knowledge internationally, thereby making Elaboration to
viewing other students better global citizens. Students will be well informed about example 2 (EEx2)
people’s lives
(So, what can global issues and this makes their life more interesting as they can learn
students new things every day.
benefit from
social media?
How can it Hence, student9s life will be greatly influenced by the mass media. Concluding Sentence
mould *ONE SENTENCE.
student's Refer to your TOPIC
life?)
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. ubiquitous
2. search engines
In conclusion, students9 life is a period of confusion as they are in Concluding Line(s)
search of their personal identity.

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topic
Correction: In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can help mould a student9s Restate your stand /
RESULT: life. Students that are immature tend to be influenced by bad peers, opinion
which is detrimental to their future. It is the role of parents, teachers &
1. be
knowledgeable and the mass media that affect a student's lives and help to shape the Summarise your 3
2. can have a character of a student. points

more mature Students need the support of parents and teachers in order to grow up Hope / Suggestion
treatment of
with better social skills and improved behaviour. Students with good
certain topics
support from home and school will grow up with higher self-esteem.
3. help
students Hopefully, every student will become a successful person and become
achieve a future leader of tomorrow who can ensure a nation9s prosperity.
academic
NOTES:
excellence
1. detrimental to

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Task 2
Students are learners that learn in schools, colleges, or universities.
Introduce the
Students spend most of their time in class studying for exams or doing school topic
assignments. They work hard to achieve academic excellence and learn a lot of
skills during school life. A student9s life involves receiving an education through
classroom learning and developing desirable personality traits. There are many
aspects that affect a student9s life. In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can
help mould a student9s life. This is because students may be immature and unable Stand
to make good decisions in choosing friends that are beneficial to their lives. Instead
Thesis
of peer pressure, parents, teachers, and the mass media can have a great influence Statement
on a student9s life.
Comment: PARAGRAPH 2 (POINT NO. 1)
1. Good- First and foremost, parents have a great impact on a student9s life. Parents Topic Sentence
Point no.1 is are students9 first teachers, and they have a key role in shaping students9 character.
discussed in E1
detail- shows Parents can be a helping hand in a student9s educational journey. It is true that
RESULT parents can be role models for students to emulate. They should demonstrate good
(change in a
moral values and a caring, loving and responsible character for students to follow.
student's life.)
Open-mindedness is essential for parents to allow their children to try new things
2. Some
grammatical and accept differences. For example, parents should be open-minded in terms of Ex1
errors education which allow their children to think out of the box and be creative in
learning. This can help to boost children9s confidence levels and enhance creativity. EEx1
Comment: Parents should let go of control and not overschedule their children with learning
1. Result activities at home. Next, parents can be great listeners for students in times of E2

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trouble. They can motivate their children by offering adequate moral support and
valuable suggestions. For instance, when a student faces the problem of
Ex2
Comment: cyberbullying, he can turn to parents for help. His parents will share some of their
EEx2
1. Result personal experiences with him and advise him to have sheer determination in facing
Concluding
problems. This will encourage him to face problems optimistically and confidently.
Sentence
Therefore, parents play an important role in student9s life.

Furthermore, teachers play a vital role to mould a student9s life. Teachers Topic Sentence
take the place of parents in school and they mould the personality and character of E1
the student. An ideal teacher should be impartial, disciplined, and courteous to set
a good example for students to emulate. A teacher can be a mentor, a motivator,
and a source of inspiration to students. A teacher has a unique way of improving
the social development and academic performance of students. For example, a Ex1
Comment: teacher can create a curriculum that fosters students' development. They can teach EEx1
1. Result? problem-solving skills by conducting class projects relating to issues like water
shortages. Teachers can help to nurture students' self-esteem. Whenever students E2
Comment: fail in their exams, teachers can inspired students and give students the impetus to
1. What type try even harder. For instance, teachers will guide students to set goals in life. During Ex2
of goal?
the learning process, teachers help students understand their strengths and EEx2
weaknesses. When students have a better understanding of themselves, they will
Comment:
have a higher confidence level and will be motivated to achieve goals in life. Thus, Concluding
1. Result
there is no doubt that teachers play a great role in moulding a student9s life. Sentence
Comment: PARAGRAPH 4 (POINT NO. 3)

1. Point no.3
is NOT Last but not least, the mass media can help mould a student9s life. The Topic Sentence
discussed in most common platforms for mass media are the internet, newspapers, television, E1
detail- doesn’t
and radio. The ubiquitous internet in today9s world allows free sharing of thoughts
shows
RESULT through social networking sites. Students tend to use social media to stay connected,
(change in a make friends, and satisfy their social needs. For example, students love to spend Ex1
student's life.)
time socialising through social media like Facebook, Instagram, and WeChat
because they can meet different people from all walks of life. Students can create
EEx1
other online identities that the real world doesn't allow. Social networking gives

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Comment:
The discussion is more on the advantages of social media than how it
would mould a student's life. (There is NO result given.)
students the freedom to meet like-minded people with the same interests. They can
also gain new perspectives by viewing other people's lives through social
Comment:
Correction: Needs to explain from the student's side.
RESULT: 1. share ideas, stay connected, freedom, gain new perspectives, viewing
other people’s lives (So, what can students benefit from social media?
1. be How can it mould student's life?)
knowledgeable
media. Students not only meet new people through social media, but they can also E2
2. can have a
more mature have a better understanding of global issues through mass media. For instance,
Ex2
treatment of students can learn more about human rights, poverty, inflation, recession, or global
certain topics
warming issues through newspapers or search engines like Google Chrome. Mass
3. help
students media spreads knowledge internationally, thereby making students better global EEx2
achieve citizens. Students will be well informed about global issues and this makes their
academic life more interesting as they can learn new things every day. Hence, student9s life Concluding
excellence
will be greatly influenced by the mass media. Sentence
In conclusion, students9 life is a period of confusion as they are in search of Concluding

their personal identity. In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can help mould Line(s)
a student9s life. Students that are immature tend to be influenced by bad peers, Restate
which is detrimental to their future. It is the role of parents, teachers and the mass Stand/Opinion
& Summarise 3
media that affect a student's lives and help to shape the character of a Points
student. Students need the support of parents and teachers in order to grow up with
Hope/Suggestion
better social skills and improved behaviour. Students with good support from home
and school will grow up with higher self-esteem. Hopefully, every student will
become a successful person and become a future leader of tomorrow who can
ensure a nation9s prosperity.

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-some points are not discussed in detail
MUET Band 4.5
CEFR Level B2
1. emulate
2. open-mindedness
3. cyberbullying
5. optimistically
6. impartial
7. impetus
8. ubiquitous
9. search engines
10. detrimental to

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Task 2
<The rise of online education during the COVID-19 pandemic is effective.=
DISCURSIVE ESSAY
[60 marks]
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
Coronavirus Disease 2019 (Covid-19) was named by the World Introduce the topic
Health Organization (WHO) in February 2020. WHO has declared *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
COVID-19 as a pandemic, which means that the disease is affecting the
entire world. Due to this contagious COVID-19, new norms are
emerging in various sectors, like the economic sector, education sector,
and healthcare sector. People are struggling in order to adapt to these
new norms. In terms of education, COVID-19 has forced education to
be offered online.
In my opinion, I agree with the statement that online education is Stand
effective. *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
with the statement)
This is because online education increases both students’ and Thesis statement
teachers’ efficiency, as well as it is a more economical way of *LAST SENTENCE of
learning.
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.
NOTES:

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1. emerging

First and foremost, online education is more effective because it Topic Sentence (T)
increases students’ efficiency in learning. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Comment: Most students more digitally prepared and comfortable with online Elaboration 1 (E1)
learning. This enables students to get acquainted with online learning * Give the first
1. Point no.1
is discussed in explanation for your
easily. Digital learning is an alternative method of learning that enables
detail. TOPIC SENTENCE.
students to learn digitally and aids students9 engagement. Digital
2. Some learning includes the combination of recorded video and live streaming
grammatical
errors. classes.
For example, students can preview and self-study recorded videos and Example 1 (Ex1)
online materials prepared by teachers through a mobile phone
application like WhatsApp.
Students can join the live streaming classes by being better prepared Elaboration to
with questions regarding the online materials prepared by teachers. example 1 (EEx1)
The real-time interaction offered by live streaming platforms allows Elaboration 2 (E2)
online interactions between teachers and students. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, during online classes through Zoom, students are Example 2 (Ex2)
encouraged to participate, ask questions, engage and share their
opinions with classmates more comfortably.

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Students are actively involved in online learning rather than just Elaboration to
absorbing the information given to them. This gives students the example 2 (EEx2)
impetus to learn actively.
As students is more engaged in the online lessons, this can also enable Elaboration 3 (E3)
students to have better retention of information. This is because students * Give the third
can see visuals and graphics provided by teachers through live streaming
TOPIC SENTENCE.
classes.
Example 3 (Ex3)
Elaboration to
example 3 (EEx3)
Therefore, the shift from physical classrooms to online classes due to Concluding Sentence
COVID-19 benefits students, as online education improves students9 *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
efficiency.
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. acquainted
2. live streaming
3. impetus
4. retention of information

Furthermore, the growing popularity of online education after Topic Sentence (T)
Comment: COVID-19 can benefit teachers because it can increase teachers’ *SHORT &
1. Point no.2 STRAIGHTFORWARD.

efficiency in providing their education.
is discussed in Look at your THESIS
detail. STATEMENT.
2. Some Point no. 2 should be

grammatical written there.
errors.

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Teachers have to adapt quickly by using digital devices like laptop Elaboration 1 (E1)
computers to prepare for online classes. Online teaching can increase * Give the first
teachers9 efficient and productivity. explanation for your

TOPIC SENTENCE.
For example, teachers are able to plan their lessons ahead by scheduling Example 1 (Ex1)
online tasks like marking assignments, teaching and recording lectures.
Teachers can do an oline search to get endless materials and a Elaboration to
voluminous amount of information that can be used in lessons. example 1 (EEx1)
The use of digital education tools can save teachers9 time in preparing Elaboration 2 (E2)
online lessons. Teachers can prepare online teaching materials by using * Give the second
slides, videos, graphics, quizzes and questions through educational tools
TOPIC SENTENCE.
to make their lessons more effective.
Example 2 (Ex2)
Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)
Moreover, teachers can conduct live streaming classes to live stream Elaboration 3 (E3)
their lessons through Youtube Live, Facebook Live, etc. As live * Give the third
streaming classes enable student-centred learning, teachers are able to
TOPIC SENTENCE.
reach out to different students. There are comprehensive capabilities
with online education platforms that allow online interactions between
teachers and students.
For instance, Zoom meetings allow teachers to conduct online classes Example 3 (Ex3)
and record them to be accessed later by students.
Elaboration to
example 3 (EEx3)
Thus, teachers9 efficiency can be increased and they can provide quality Concluding Sentence
education through e-learning methods.

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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
2. comprehensive capabilities

Last but not least, online education is a more economical way of Topic Sentence (T)
learning because it saves educational costs and time. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
The implementation of distance education or remote learning can lower Elaboration 1 (E1)
Comment:
the cost of education. The ubiquitous internet allows schools or learning * Give the first
1. Can add
additional institutions to provide online courses as an alternative way of learning
TOPIC SENTENCE.
information in response to COVID-19.
-now we can
just scan the For example, schools can offer online classes through Youtube, Zoom Example 1 (Ex1)
barcode to and Facebook, which lowers the printing costs.
gain access to
Learning materials are keep online and can be downloaded easily Elaboration to
e-book
without having to print out the materials. example 1 (EEx1)
- There is no
need for a
physical book. Not only can students reduce their education costs, they can also save Elaboration 2 (E2)
lots of time through online learning. * Give the second
Comment: explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
1. Point no.3
lacks For instance, students can save time on travelling to and from school Example 2 (Ex2)
information. every day, and they do not have to waste time waiting for their parents
2. Some to bring them home after school.
grammatical
errors. Copyright ©2020 IVY Wong MUET Course. All Rights Reserved.

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Students can also learn in a suitable and comfortable environment at Elaboration to
home, which can aid students9 concentration and require less time to example 2 (EEx2)
comprehend the learning materials.
Hence, online learning is effective because it reduces costs and time. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. ubiquitous
In conclusion, the COVID-19 pandemic has changed the Concluding Line(s)
education sector dramatically. The pandemic has forced education to be *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
offered online.
In my opinion, I still strongly believe that online education is effective Restate your stand /
due to the fact that online education boosts students’ learning opinion
efficiency, improves teachers’ productivity, and can cut down on &
educational costs and time. Summarise your 3
points
Online education should be improved in order to provide a more Hope / Suggestion
comprehensive learning experience for students and teachers.
Hopefully, all students can reap the benefits of online learning to ensure
that they have a wonderful learning experience and can improve their
academic performance.

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Task 2
DISCURSIVE ESSAY
[60 marks]
Coronavirus Disease 2019 (Covid-19) was named by the World Health
Introduce the
Organization (WHO) in February 2020. WHO has declared COVID-19 as a topic
pandemic, which means that the disease is affecting the entire world. Due to this
contagious COVID-19, new norms are emerging in various sectors, like the
economic sector, education sector, and healthcare sector. People are struggling in
order to adapt to these new norms. In terms of education, COVID-19 has forced
education to be offered online. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that online Stand
education is effective. This is because online education increases both students’
Thesis
and teachers’ efficiency, as well as it is a more economical way of learning. Statement

First and foremost, First and foremost, online education is more effective Topic Sentence
because it increases students’ efficiency in learning. Most students more digitally
E1
prepared and comfortable with online learning. This enables students to get
Comment: acquainted with online learning easily. Digital learning is an alternative method of
learning that enables students to learn digitally and aids students9 engagement.
1. Point no.1
is discussed in Digital learning includes the combination of recorded video and live streaming
detail. classes. For example, students can preview and self-study recorded videos and Ex1
2. Some online materials prepared by teachers through a mobile phone application like
grammatical
WhatsApp. Students can join the live streaming classes by being better prepared EEx1
errors.
with questions regarding the online materials prepared by teachers. The real-time
interaction offered by live streaming platforms allows online interactions between E2
teachers and students. For instance, during online classes through Zoom, students Ex2

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are encouraged to participate, ask questions, engage and share their opinions with EEx2
classmates more comfortably. Students are actively involved in online learning
rather than just absorbing the information given to them. This gives students the
impetus to learn actively. As students is more engaged in the online lessons, this
can also enable students to have better retention of information. This is because E3
students can see visuals and graphics provided by teachers through live streaming
classes. Therefore, the shift from physical classrooms to online classes due to
Concluding
COVID-19 benefits students, as online education improves students9 efficiency. Sentence
Furthermore, the growing popularity of online education after COVID-19 Topic Sentence
can benefit teachers because it can increase teachers’ efficiency in providing
their education. Teachers have to adapt quickly by using digital devices like laptop E1
computers to prepare for online classes. Online teaching can increase teachers9
efficient and productivity. For example, teachers are able to plan their lessons ahead Ex1
Comment:
by scheduling online tasks like marking assignments, teaching and recording
1. Point no.2 lectures. Teachers can do an online search to get endless materials and a EEx1
is discussed in
detail. voluminous amount of information that can be used in lessons. The use of digital
E2
education tools can save teachers9 time in preparing online lessons. Teachers can
2. Some
grammatical prepare online teaching materials by using slides, videos, graphics, quizzes and
errors. questions through educational tools to make their lessons more effective. Moreover,
teachers can conduct live streaming classes to live stream their lessons through E3
Youtube Live, Facebook Live, etc. As live streaming classes enable student-centred
learning, teachers are able to reach out to different students. There are
comprehensive capabilities with online education platforms that allow online
interactions between teachers and students. For instance, Zoom meetings allow
Ex3
teachers to conduct online classes and record them to be accessed later by students.
Thus, teachers9 efficiency can be increased and they can provide quality education Concluding
through e-learning methods. Sentence
Comment:
1. Point no.3
lacks Last but not least, online education is a more economical way of learning
information. Topic Sentence
because it saves educational costs and time. The implementation of distance
2. Some E1
grammatical Copyright ©2020 IVY Wong MUET Course. All Rights Reserved.
errors.

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education or remote learning can lower the cost of education. The ubiquitous
Comment:
internet allows schools or learning institutions to provide online courses as an
1. Can add
additional alternative way of learning in response to COVID-19. For example, schools can
Ex1
information offer online classes through Youtube, Zoom and Facebook, which lowers the
-now we can printing costs. Learning materials are keep online and can be downloaded easily
just scan the without having to print out the materials. Not only can students reduce their E2
barcode to
gain access to education costs, they can also save lots of time through online learning. For instance,
Ex2
e-book students can save time on travelling to and from school every day, and they do not
- There is no have to waste time waiting for their parents to bring them home after school. EEx2
need for a Students can also learn in a suitable and comfortable environment at home, which
physical book.
can aid students9 concentration and require less time to comprehend the learning Concluding
materials. Hence, online learning is effective because it reduces costs and time. Sentence
In conclusion, the COVID-19 pandemic has changed the education sector Concluding
dramatically. The pandemic has forced education to be offered online. In my Line(s)
opinion, I still strongly believe that online education is effective due to the fact that Restate
online education boosts students’ learning efficiency, improves teachers’ Stand/Opinion
& Summarise 3
productivity, and can cut down on educational costs and time. Online education Points
should be improved in order to provide a more comprehensive learning experience
Hope/Suggestion
for students and teachers. Hopefully, all students can reap the benefits of online
learning to ensure that they have a wonderful learning experience and can improve
their academic performance.

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-paragraphs show some evidence of planning and unity
MUET Band 4.5
CEFR Level B2
1. emerging
2. acquainted
3. live streaming
4. impetus
7. comprehensive capabilities
8. ubiquitous

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Task 2
You attended a talk by a non-governmental organization, which was organized by Council of the City of Kuching
South (MBKS). The following statement was made by the guest speaker:
<The elderly should live in nursing homes.=
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
The word <elderly= refers to people who are 65 years of age or older. Those Introduce the topic
aged 65 to 74 are referred to as "early elderly" and those over 75 years old as "late *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
elderly". In today's world, where fewer children are being born into households, caring
for the elderly has become a challenge for many families. Some children tend to place
their ageing parents in nursing homes as they are busy with their jobs. The question
is, should the elderly live in nursing homes?
I disagree with the statement given that the elderly should be sent to nursing homes. Stand (Compulsory)
*Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
This is because living in a nursing home can lead to feelings of loneliness, nursing Thesis statement
homes can be depressing, and the elderly lose their freedom and independence. *LAST SENTENCE of
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

First of all, nursing homes can lead to feelings of loneliness. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.

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Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
This is because the elderly need time to adapt to their new environment. Some elderly Elaboration 1 (E1)
people are very friendly with one another, but others are not as friendly or talkative as * Give the first
we think.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain why nursing
homes can lead to
loneliness)
For example, they may spend most of their time alone and avoid talking to people, Example 1 (Ex1)
especially people they have only recently met.
Some of them think that it can be awkward to strike up a conversation with strangers Elaboration to
because they might have different opinions and viewpoints. example 1 (EEx1)
The elderly will also avoid interacting with residents of the nursing home because they Elaboration 2 (E2)
are too shy to inquire about the whereabouts of the new place. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
homes can lead to
loneliness)
For instance, they will observe people9s actions in order to gain information instead Example 2 (Ex2)
of asking them directly.
They may lack companionship and feel lonely due to their reluctance to associate with Elaboration to
结交 people around them. example 2 (EEx2)
Next, some elderly people believe their standards are higher than anyone in a nursing Elaboration 3 (E3)
home and will avoid contact with other people. * Give the third
TOPIC SENTENCE.
homes can lead to
loneliness)

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To illustrate, they can be arrogant in their speech and manner. Example 3 (Ex3)
This will make others feel annoyed and uncomfortable, eventually leading to an Elaboration to
increase in the likelihood that they will be marginalised or ostracized by others in example 3 (EEx3)
nursing homes.
Therefore, the elderly in nursing homes may be isolated due to their difficulty Concluding Sentence
adjusting to the new surroundings, resulting in loneliness in daily life. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
*No repetition of words (Avoid repeating the same vocabulary)
1. environment- surroundings
2. adapt to- adjust to
3. strike up a conversation- talking to
4. interact with- associate with, contact with
5. marginalized- isolated

1. companionship
2. ostracized

Furthermore, nursing homes can be depressing. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Depression in the elderly is due to the fact that most nursing homes don't have the Elaboration 1 (E1)
suitable living conditions. * Give the first
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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homes can be
depressing)
For example, there could be a few hundred seniors living under the same roof within Example 1 (Ex1)
a nursing home. Some facilities are not disabled-friendly which causes inconvenience
to those with physical disabilities.
This means that the elderly don't have as much space and amenities as a real home. In Elaboration to
the long run, elderly people are more susceptible to anxiety and depression. example 1 (EEx1)
Other than that, nursing homes are said to be depressing because there is a lack Elaboration 2 (E2)
of activities for the elderly to spend their leisure time. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
homes can be
depressing)
For instance, nursing home residents do not have various activities to pass the time, Example 2 (Ex2)
such as board games, billiards 台球, and puzzles.
A lack of activities like board games not only increases the chances of the elderly Elaboration to
feeling bored but also reduces the chances of activating memories and improving example 2 (EEx2)
cognitive functions.
In addition, some nursing home staff members lack the patience to take care of the Elaboration 3 (E3)
elderly. * Give the third
TOPIC SENTENCE.
homes can be
depressing)
To illustrate, irresponsible staff may be reluctant to pay extra attention to the elderly Example 3 (Ex3)
with disabilities.
As a result, the disabled elderly may not be properly cared for, which may eventually Elaboration to
lead to severe depression as they are unable to cope with everyday life. example 3 (EEx3)

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Thus, the elderly who live in nursing homes with inappropriate settings can be Concluding Sentence
depressed. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. due to the fact that- because
2. spend leisure time- pass the time
3. improve- enhance, boost
4. cope with- deal with, handle

1. disabled-friendly
2. susceptible
3. activating memories
4. improving cognitive functions
*Change word forms

1. the elderly with disabilities- the disabled elderly

Last but not least, the elderly will lose their freedom and independence. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
This is because most nursing homes control every activity held in the nursing homes, Elaboration 1 (E1)
including the elderly9s routine. * Give the first
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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(Explain why elderly will
lose their freedom and
independence)
For example, in a nursing home, the elderly only have control over their meals, Example 1 (Ex1)
participation in activities, and establishing routines.
They do not have much freedom and flexibility in their lives. Elaboration to
example 1 (EEx1)
Next, the elderly will stay in their comfort zones for unreasonably long periods of Elaboration 2 (E2)
time. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
independence)
For instance, the staff will prepare everything for the elderly, such as folding their Example 2 (Ex2)
clothes, washing the dishes, and cleaning their beds.
The elderly may not be able to do the chores by themselves. Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)
Not only that, there are schedules in nursing homes that every elderly person should Elaboration 3 (E3)
obey without any objections. * Give the third
TOPIC SENTENCE.
independence)
In other words, elderly people have limited time to entertain themselves, such as Example 3 (Ex3)
watching TV or playing board games.
Some elderly people need more entertainment in their lives to eliminate their feelings Elaboration to
of loneliness and listlessness. example 3 (EEx3)
Hence, if the elderly stay in nursing homes, they will lose their independence, Concluding Sentence
especially if they are forced to do so against their will.

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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. flexibility
2. listlessness
In conclusion, living in nursing homes is not beneficial for the elderly. Concluding Line(s)
topic
I disagree that the elderly should live in nursing homes as they may feel lonely, Restate your stand /
depressed, and lose freedom. opinion
&
Summarise your 3
points
They should be close to their families. In their old age, it is a must for their children Hope / Suggestion
to take on responsibilities towards them. The elderly should be appreciated for what
they have sacrificed during their younger days. They deserve to be cared for and
valued.

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Task 2
You attended a talk by a non-governmental organization, which was organized by Council of the City of Kuching
South (MBKS). The following statement was made by the guest speaker:
The word <elderly= refers to people who are 65 years of age or older. Those aged 65 to 74
Introduce the
are referred to as "early elderly" and those over 75 years old as "late elderly". In today's world, topic
where fewer children are being born into households, caring for the elderly has become a challenge
for many families. Some children tend to place their ageing parents in nursing homes as they are
busy with their jobs. The question is, should the elderly live in nursing homes? I disagree with the Stand
statement given that the elderly should be sent to nursing homes. This is because living in a nursing Thesis
home can lead to feelings of loneliness, nursing homes can be depressing, and the elderly lose Statement
their freedom and independence.
Topic Sentence
First of all, nursing homes can lead to feelings of loneliness. This is because the elderly
need time to adapt to their new environment. Some elderly people are very friendly with one E1
another, but others are not as friendly or talkative as we think. For example, they may spend most Ex1
of their time alone and avoid talking to people, especially people they have only recently met.
EEx1
Some of them think that it can be awkward to strike up a conversation with strangers because they
might have different opinions and viewpoints. The elderly will also avoid interacting with residents E2
of the nursing home because they are too shy to inquire about the whereabouts of the new place.
For instance, they will observe people9s actions in order to gain information instead of asking them Ex2
directly. They may lack companionship and feel lonely due to their reluctance to associate with EEx2
people around them. Next, some elderly people believe their standards are higher than anyone in E3
a nursing home and will avoid contact with other people. To illustrate, they can be arrogant in their Ex3
speech and manner. This will make others feel annoyed and uncomfortable, eventually leading to EEx3
an increase in the likelihood that they will be marginalised or ostracized by others in nursing homes.

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Therefore, the elderly in nursing homes may be isolated due to their difficulty adjusting to the new Concluding
Sentence
surroundings, resulting in loneliness in daily life.
Furthermore, nursing homes can be depressing. Depression in the elderly is due to the fact Topic Sentence
that most nursing homes don't have the suitable living conditions. For example, there could be a E1
few hundred seniors living under the same roof within a nursing home. Some facilities are not Ex1
disabled-friendly, which causes inconvenience to those with physical disabilities. This means that
the elderly don't have as much space and amenities as a real home. In the long run, elderly people EEx1
are more susceptible to anxiety and depression. Other than that, nursing homes are said to be E2
depressing because there is a lack of activities for the elderly to spend their leisure time. For
instance, nursing home residents do not have various activities to pass the time, such as board Ex2
games, billiards, and puzzles. A lack of activities like board games not only increases the chances EEx2
of the elderly feeling bored but also reduces the chances of activating memories and improving
cognitive functions. In addition, some nursing home staff members lack the patience to take care E3
of the elderly. To illustrate, irresponsible staff may be reluctant to pay extra attention to the elderly Ex3
with disabilities. As a result, the disabled elderly may not be properly cared for, which may EEx3
eventually lead to severe depression as they are unable to cope with everyday life. Thus, the elderly Concluding
who live in nursing homes with inappropriate settings can be depressed. Sentence
Topic Sentence
Last but not least, the elderly will lose their freedom and independence. This is because
most nursing homes control every activity held in the nursing homes, including the elderly9s E1
routine. For example, in a nursing home, the elderly only have control over their meals, Ex1
participation in activities, and establishing routines. They do not have much freedom and flexibility EEx1
in their lives. Next, the elderly will stay in their comfort zones for unreasonably long periods of E2
time. For instance, the staff will prepare everything for the elderly, such as folding their clothes, Ex2
washing the dishes, and cleaning their beds. The elderly may not be able to do the chores by EEx2
themselves. Not only that, there are schedules in nursing homes that every elderly person should E3
obey without any objections. In other words, the elderly have limited time to entertain themselves, Ex3
such as watching TV or playing board games. Some elderly people need more entertainment in EEx3
their lives to eliminate their feelings of loneliness and listlessness. Hence, if the elderly stay in Concluding
nursing homes, they will lose their independence, especially if they are forced to do so against Sentence
their will.

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PARAGRAPH 5 (CONCLUSION) Concluding
In conclusion, living in nursing homes is not beneficial for the elderly. I disagree that the Line(s)
elderly should live in nursing homes as they may feel lonely, depressed, and lose freedom. They Restate
Stand/Opinion
should be close to their families. In their old age, it is a must for their children to take on & Summarise 3
responsibilities towards them. The elderly should be appreciated for what they have sacrificed Points
during their younger days. They deserve to be cared for and valued. Hope/Suggestion
Task Fulfilment (TF) -good response to the task

-develop ideas reasonably well
-info- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -meaning comes across very clearly
-able to LINK ideas effectively
-shows reasonable evidence of planning
-display reasonably confident control of language
*demonstrate the use of Low Frequency Words (LFW)
MUET Band 5
CEFR Level C1

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Important Notes!!!
A. LFW is a MUST for C1 as it differentiates C candidates from other candidates.
B. Minimum 3 @ 4 LFW for higher language scores
C. List of LFW in this essay:
1.companionship
2.ostracized
3.disabled-friendly
4.susceptible
5.activating memories
6.improving cognitive functions
7.flexibility
8.listlessness

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Task 2
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
Students are learners that learn in schools, colleges, or universities. Students Introduce the topic
spend most of their time in class studying for exams or doing school assignments. *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
They work hard to achieve academic excellence and learn a lot of skills during school
life. A student9s life involves receiving an education through classroom learning and
developing desirable personality traits. There are many aspects that affect a student9s
life.
In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can help mould a student9s life. This is Stand
because students may be immature and unable to make good decisions in choosing *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
friends that are beneficial to their lives.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
with the statement)
Instead of peer pressure, parents, teachers, and the mass media can have a great Thesis statement
influence on a student9s life. *LAST SENTENCE of
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

First and foremost, parents have a great impact on a student9s life. Topic Sentence (T)

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*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Parents are students9 first teachers, and they have a key role in shaping students9 Elaboration 1 (E1)
character. Parents can be a helping hand in a student9s educational journey. It is true * Give the first
that parents can be role models for students to emulate. They should demonstrate good
TOPIC SENTENCE.
moral values and a caring, loving and responsible character for students to follow.
(Explain how parents
Open-mindedness is essential for parents to allow their children to try new things and mould a student’s life)
accept differences.
For example, parents should be open-minded in terms of education which allow their Example 1 (Ex1)
children to think out of the box and be creative in learning.
This can help to boost children9s confidence levels and enhance creativity. Parents Elaboration to
should loosen up control and not overschedule their children with learning activities example 1 (EEx1)
at home. Balancing the time between lessons and leisure is important to having a
quality student life.
Next, parents can be great listeners for students in times of trouble. They can motivate Elaboration 2 (E2)
their children by offering adequate moral support and valuable suggestions. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how parents
mould a student’s life)
For instance, when a student faces the problem of cyberbullying, he can turn to parents Example 2 (Ex2)
for help.
His parents will share some of their personal experiences with him and advise him to Elaboration to
have sheer determination in facing problems. This will encourage him to face example 2 (EEx2)
problems optimistically and confidently. It is equally important for parents to give
constructive criticism if their children are not performing well in school. By doing so,
students can understand what is right and what is wrong in order to become a better
person in life.

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Therefore, parents play an important role in student9s life. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. boost- enhance, improve
2. important- essential, vital
3. adequate- appropriate

1. emulate
2. open-mindedness
3. cyberbullying
5. optimistically
6. constructive criticism
*Change word forms

1. Open-mindedness is essential- parents should be open-minded

Furthermore, teachers play a vital role to mould a student9s life. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Teachers take the place of parents in school and they mould the personality and Elaboration 1 (E1)
character of the student. An ideal teacher should be impartial, disciplined, and * Give the first
courteous to set a good example for students to emulate. A teacher can be a mentor, a
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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motivator, and a source of inspiration to students. A teacher has a unique way of (Explain how teachers
improving the social development and academic performance of students.
For example, a teacher can create a curriculum that fosters students' development. Example 1 (Ex1)
They can teach problem-solving skills by conducting class projects relating to issues Elaboration to
like water shortages, and this enables students to apply decision-making and problem- example 1 (EEx1)
solving skills.
Besides, teachers can help to nurture students' self-esteem. Whenever students fail in Elaboration 2 (E2)
their exams, teachers can inspire students and give students the impetus to try even * Give the second
harder.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how teachers
For instance, students will be guided by teachers to set learning goals for the exam, Example 2 (Ex2)
such as getting a better grade than the last exam.
During the learning process, teachers help students understand their strengths and Elaboration to
weaknesses. When students have a better understanding of themselves, they will have example 2 (EEx2)
a higher confidence level and will be motivated to achieve goals in life.
Teachers can also promote student self-determination and self-awareness by giving Elaboration 3 (E3)
challenging assignments. When students complete those assignments successfully, * Give the third
they will have a sense of achievement and become more confident.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how teachers
To illustrate, coursework and presentations are two mandatory tasks as Form 6 Example 3 (Ex3)
students.
It is part of the things that Form 6 students need to do throughout their three semesters. Elaboration to
So, doing tough tasks like coursework and presenting them is part of developing self- example 3 (EEx3)
determination and confidence among students.
Thus, there is no doubt that teachers play a great role in moulding a student9s life. Concluding Sentence

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*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. promote- develop

1. impartial
2. impetus
*Change word forms

1. become more confident- a higher confidence level

Last but not least, the mass media can help mould a student9s life. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
The most common platforms for mass media are the internet, newspapers, television, Elaboration 1 (E1)
and radio. The ubiquitous internet in today9s world allows free sharing of thoughts * Give the first
through social networking sites. Students tend to use social media to stay connected,
TOPIC SENTENCE.
make friends, and satisfy their social needs.
(Explain how mass
media moulds a
student’s life)
For example, students love to spend time socialising through social media like Example 1 (Ex1)
Facebook, Instagram, and WeChat because they can meet different people from all
walks of life.
Students can create other online identities that the real world doesn't allow. Social Elaboration to
networking gives students the freedom to meet like-minded people with the same example 1 (EEx1)

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interests. Students can have a more mature treatment of certain topics. They can also
gain new perspectives by viewing other people's lives through social media. This helps
to increase the confidence level of students and increase their mental maturity.
In addition, students not only meet new people through social media, but they can also Elaboration 2 (E2)
have a better understanding of global issues through mass media. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how mass
media moulds a
student’s life)
For instance, students can learn more about human rights, poverty, inflation, recession, Example 2 (Ex2)
or global warming issues through newspapers or search engines like Google Chrome.
Mass media spreads knowledge internationally, thereby making students better global Elaboration to
citizens. As a result, it broadens students9 spectrum of knowledge and students become example 2 (EEx2)
more knowledgeable. It also helps them with academic writing and academic
excellence, which contributes to a brighter future.
Hence, student9s life will be greatly influenced by the mass media. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. impact- influence, affect

1. ubiquitous
2. search engines
3. spectrum of knowledge
*Change word forms

1. students will be more mature- increase their mental maturity

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In conclusion, students9 life is a period of confusion as they are in search of their Concluding Line(s)
personal identity. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
I still disagree that peer pressure can help mould a student9s life. Students that are Restate your stand /
immature tend to be influenced by bad peers, which is detrimental to their future. It is opinion
the role of parents, teachers and the mass media that affect a student's lives and help &
to shape the character of a student. Summarise your 3
points
Students need the support of parents and teachers in order to grow up with better social Hope / Suggestion
skills and improved behaviour. Students with good support from home and school will
grow up with higher self-esteem. Hopefully, every student will become a successful
person and become a future leader of tomorrow who can ensure a nation9s prosperity.
NOTES:
1. detrimental to

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Task 2
Students are learners that learn in schools, colleges, or universities. Students spend most
Introduce the
of their time in class studying for exams or doing school assignments. They work hard to achieve topic
academic excellence and learn a lot of skills during school life. A student9s life involves receiving
an education through classroom learning and developing desirable personality traits. There are
many aspects that affect a student9s life. In my opinion, I disagree that peer pressure can help Stand
mould a student9s life. This is because students may be immature and unable to make good
decisions in choosing friends that are beneficial to their lives. Instead of peer pressure, parents, Thesis
Statement
teachers, and the mass media can have a great influence on a student9s life.

First and foremost, parents have a great impact on a student9s life. Parents are students9 Topic Sentence
first teachers, and they have a key role in shaping students9 character. Parents can be a helping
E1
hand in a student9s educational journey. It is true that parents can be role models for students to
emulate. They should demonstrate good moral values and a caring, loving and responsible
character for students to follow. Open-mindedness is essential for parents to allow their children
to try new things and accept differences. For example, parents should be open-minded in terms of
Ex1
education which allow their children to think out of the box and be creative in learning. This can
help to boost children9s confidence levels and enhance creativity. Parents should let go of control EEx1
and not overschedule their children with learning activities at home. Balancing the time between
lessons and leisure is important to having a quality student life. Next, parents can be great listeners
E2
for students in times of trouble. They can motivate their children by offering adequate moral
support and valuable suggestions. For instance, when a student faces the problem of cyberbullying, Ex2
he can turn to parents for help. His parents will share some of their personal experiences with him
EEx2
and advise him to have sheer determination in facing problems. This will encourage him to face

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problems optimistically and confidently. It is equally important for parents to give constructive
Concluding
criticism if their children are not performing well in school. By doing so, students can understand Sentence
what is right and what is wrong in order to become a better person in life. Therefore, parents play
an important role in student9s life.
Furthermore, teachers play a vital role to mould a student9s life. Teachers take the place Topic Sentence
of parents in school and they mould the personality and character of the student. An ideal teacher E1
should be impartial, disciplined, and courteous to set a good example for students to emulate. A
teacher can be a mentor, a motivator, and a source of inspiration to students. A teacher has a unique
way of improving the social development and academic performance of students. For example, a
teacher can create a curriculum that fosters students' development. They can teach problem-solving Ex1
skills by conducting class projects relating to issues like water shortages, and this enables students EEx1
to apply decision-making and problem-solving skills. Besides, teachers can help to nurture E2
students' self-esteem. Whenever students fail in their exams, teachers can inspire students and give
students the impetus to try even harder. For instance, students will be guided by teachers to set Ex2
learning goals for the exam, such as getting a better grade than the last exam. During the learning
process, teachers help students understand their strengths and weaknesses. When students have a EEx2
better understanding of themselves, they will have a higher confidence level and will be motivated
to achieve goals in life. Teachers can also promote student self-determination and self-awareness E3
by giving challenging assignments. When students complete those assignments successfully, they
will have a sense of achievement and become more confident. To illustrate, coursework and
Ex3
presentations are two mandatory tasks as Form 6 students. It is part of the things that Form 6
EEx3
students need to do throughout their three semesters. So, doing tough tasks like coursework and
presenting them is part of developing self-determination and confidence among students. Thus, Concluding
there is no doubt that teachers play a great role in moulding a student9s life. Sentence

Last but not least, the great impact of the mass media on students' lives is an undeniable Topic Sentence
fact. The most common platforms for mass media are the internet, newspapers, television, and
E1
radio. The ubiquitous internet in today9s world allows free sharing of thoughts through social
networking sites. Students tend to use social media to stay connected, make friends, and satisfy
their social needs. For example, students love to spend time socialising through social media like Ex1

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Facebook, Instagram, and WeChat because they can meet different people from all walks of life.
Students can create other online identities that the real world doesn't allow. Social networking
EEx1
gives students the freedom to meet like-minded people with the same interests. Students can have
a more mature treatment of certain topics. They can also gain new perspectives by viewing other
people's lives through social media. This helps to increase the confidence level of students and
increase their mental maturity. In addition, students not only meet new people through social media, E2
but they can also have a better understanding of global issues through mass media. For instance,
students can learn more about human rights, poverty, inflation, recession, or global warming issues Ex2
through newspapers or search engines like Google Chrome. Mass media spreads knowledge
EEx2
internationally, thereby making students better global citizens. As a result, it broadens students9
spectrum of knowledge and students become more knowledgeable. It also helps them with
Concluding
academic writing and academic excellence, which contributes to a brighter future. Hence, student9s
Sentence
life will be greatly influenced by the mass media.
In conclusion, students9 life is a period of confusion as they are in search of their personal Concluding
identity. I still disagree that peer pressure can help mould a student9s life. Students that are Line(s)
immature tend to be influenced by bad peers, which is detrimental to their future. It is the role of Restate
Stand/Opinion
parents, teachers and the mass media that affect a student's lives and help to shape the character & Summarise 3
of a student. Students need the support of parents and teachers in order to grow up with better Points
social skills and improved behaviour. Students with good support from home and school will grow Hope/Suggestion
up with higher self-esteem. Hopefully, every student will become a successful person and become
a future leader of tomorrow who can ensure a nation9s prosperity.

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-info- well-linked
-use a variety of cohesive devices
MUET Band 5
CEFR Level C1
Important Notes!!!

1.emulate
2.open-mindedess
3.cyberbullying
4.sheer determination
5.optimistically
6.constructive criticism
7.impartial
8.impetus
9.ubiquitous
10.search engines
11.spectrum of knowledge
12.detrimental to

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Task 2
You have watched a documentary about the growing concern on the reliability of online information to the society.
The following remark was made in the documentary:
<Online information is deceiving and unreliable.=
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
The advent of the digital era has revolutionised the way we communicate and Introduce the topic
disseminate information. The internet allows communication and information to be *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
transmitted easily and efficiently at a minimum cost with the fastest speed. However,
despite its many apparent benefits, there is a growing concern about its negative
influences on the public, especially those who are of gullible age. One of its critics9
main concerns is the reliability of online information for society. They argue that the
information posted online is deceptive and unreliable. These critics further strengthen
their argument with examples of reported cases of online fraud, scams, and misleading
news.
Nevertheless, I disagree with the statement because, in my opinion, not all information Stand (Compulsory)
posted online is deceptive and unreliable. It is one9s responsibility to discern through *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
the myriad of information found online and make a sound judgement on whether to
accept it as truth or not.
Online information can be reliable and trusted as long as it is from a trusted and Thesis statement
correct website address, supported by certified professionals, and has access to a *LAST SENTENCE of
wealth of information.
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.
NOTES:

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1. growing- increasing, emerging

1. revolutionised
2. disseminate
3. apparent
4. gullible
5. discern
6. myriad
*Change word forms

1. They argue that- their argument

First and foremost, trusted and correct website address is very important in Topic Sentence (T)
determining that the information one sees online is correct. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Knowing the source of information is crucial to ensure that the information one Elaboration 1 (E1)
receives is reliable. * Give the first
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For example, if one needs information on any related government projects and news, Example 1 (Ex1)
then you should go to the website that ends with.gov, like https://apdm.gov.edu.my.
Knowing the source of funding for the website is important so that you may have an Elaboration to
idea of what the website's goal is. example 1 (EEx1)
Very often, we see many websites end with.com, such as Elaboration 2 (E2)
https://www.nationalgeographic.com. This identifies the websites as commercial

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websites. Commercial websites are websites that are used for the sale of retail items, * Give the second
food, or beverages to the general public. They also offer services, including
TOPIC SENTENCE.
professional, trade, contracting, banking, and property management.
Amazon.com, Takeaway.com, and PizzaHut.com are just to name a few examples of Example 2 (Ex2)
food and beverage commerce sites available.
These websites are mushrooming based on popular demand by consumers. Although Elaboration to
it is widely available online, consumers must be aware of its reliability. example 2 (EEx2)
Next, due to the information and services that they offer, commercial websites are the Elaboration 3 (E3)
favourite pick for scammers. These scammers would create fake websites using the * Give the second
latest technology to make them look genuine. So, as long as one is vigilant while
TOPIC SENTENCE.
browsing for information, one can ascertain whether the information posted by these
websites is true or fake.
For instance, Maybank2U and CIMB are two commercial websites reported to have Example 3 (Ex3)
fake websites in 2021.
Countless reports are received from the consumers of the two banking systems. They Elaboration to
were lured into revealing their personal information once they clicked certain example 3 (EEx3)
links purporting to be from reputable companies that were sent via their email or
private messages.
By being prudent and cautious, the public could prevent themselves from being Elaboration 4 (E4)
deceived into thinking that they are browsing genuine websites and avoid being * Give the second
scammed by unscrupulous parties.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
Of course, we have heard of cases where victims of internet fraud were lured into Example 4 (Ex4)
divulging their personal details such as credit card numbers, bank card numbers,
addresses, and also their identification card numbers.
But all these criminal incidences do not mean that the information posted online is all Elaboration to
unreliable and deceiving, as people can easily avoid being scammed or tricked by just example 4 (EEx4)
exercising prudence and vigilance while online.

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Therefore, one needs to ensure the address of the website that one types in is correct Concluding Sentence
to prevent being scammed by unscrupulous people. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. crucial- vital, important, essential
2. reliable- trustworthy
3. mushrooming- rapidly growing
4. ascertain- verify, find out
5. via- through
6. revealing- divulging
7. prudent – cautious, vigilant
8. genuine- real

1. vigilant
2. purporting
3. reputable
4. prudent
5. unscrupulous
6. divulging
*Change word forms

1. one is prudent and vigilant- exercise prudence and vigilance

Furthermore, another reason is that the information is verified by certified Topic Sentence (T)
professionals or is supported by various government agencies. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.

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written there.
Government agencies, whether they are wholly-owned by the government, statutory Elaboration 1 (E1)
corporations or semi-government agencies, have their own official websites that share * Give the first
any programmes or activities conducted by them.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For example, information related to the government9s policies or laws can always be Example 1 (Ex1)
found on relevant government agencies9 websites.
This is to ensure that updated information is easily accessible to the public through the Elaboration to
online platform. example 1 (EEx1)
Besides, the same goes for any information related to medicine. It is advised to browse Elaboration 2 (E2)
any medical website supported by genuine medical practitioners and medical * Give the second
institutions, whether they are local or overseas.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, Malaysia9s Online Pharmacy, Gleneagles Hospitals, and Health.gov are Example 2 (Ex2)
examples of trusted digital healthcare platforms available.
These trusted websites share information about healthcare services and technologies Elaboration to
for outpatients and inpatients. Digital healthcare websites facilitate smooth example 2 (EEx2)
communication between healthcare providers and their patients.
However, it is worth noting that much of the misleading and unreliable information Elaboration 3 (E3)
found online is baseless and unsupported by facts. Most of the time, this misleading * Give the third
information is driven by greed, especially in the case of beauty products, so-called
TOPIC SENTENCE.
<healthcare= and slimming products.
To illustrate, skincare products that claim to be 8age-defying9 for all skin types. Example 3 (Ex3)
These promises sound too good to be true and are indeed unethical as they deceive the Elaboration to
consumers. example 3 (EEx3)
There are many instances where people are deceived by what they see or read about Elaboration 4 (E4)
certain beauty products from unreliable sources, such as from social media influencers * Give the second
on TikTok, Instagram, or YouTube. Truth be told, these influencers are paid a certain
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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amount of money to promote certain products or merchandise on their platform, so
whatever claims they make about those products are subject to scrutiny.
Social media sites such as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram are well known for Example 4 (Ex4)
posting false, paid reviews by influencers and misleading testimonials by individuals.
These platforms are popular among youngsters and adults, so it is easy to reach their Elaboration to
targets. Consumers need to be more informed and be accountable by doing extensive example 4 (EEx4)
fact-checking about certain services before purchasing an item. The onus is on one9s
willingness to go the extra mile in verifying the information he or she gets online. It is
worth noting that reliable websites will always provide an email address, phone
number, or mailing address. They would also cite the sources of the information they
posted at the bottom of every page.
Thus, to state that all information online is deceiving, unreliable and misleading is Concluding Sentence
incorrect as there are many reliable sources online supported by government agencies *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
or people of credible reputation in their respective fields of expertise.
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. responsible- accountable

1. statutory corporations
2. facilitate
3. unethical
4. scrutiny
5. paid reviews
6. onus
7. cite

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Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that a wealth of information is Topic Sentence (T)
available on the ubiquitous Internet through many media. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
It is true that the information found online comes from many sources, and a large part Elaboration 1 (E1)
of them are people9s personal views and experiences relating to certain issues, about * Give the first
certain products or even services. These people even sometimes provide witnesses9 explanation for your
TOPIC SENTENCE.
accounts or video coverage of certain events.
For example, there are youtubers who base the content of their videos wholly on the Example 1 (Ex1)
concept of debunking claims made by other influencers by showing their experiences
online.
This will eventually lead to hoaxes among the community. Elaboration to
example 1 (EEx1)
So, are all these deceiving and unreliable? Elaboration 2 (E2)

* Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
What about a doctor9s personal blog or YouTube channel that aims to educate the Example 2 (Ex2)
public by giving important information or messages based on his or her personal
experience? Are we going to deny his or her professional insight or view just because
it is posted online? What about health websites that offer information on everything
from types of diseases to treatment of diseases? Are they all untrustworthy?
If this is the case, then people are going to have a major problem working, studying, Elaboration to
and conducting businesses from home. This is especially true during the COVID-19 example 2 (EEx2)
pandemic, where many are forced to work from home and rely a lot on the internet to
work and study.

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Students, especially, need to complete assignments or thesis papers online. Where do Elaboration 3 (E3)
they access relevant and vital information for their work if not online? How can they * Give the third
complete their assignments if the information they get online is deemed unreliable?
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, is the information still untrustworthy if it is sourced from libraries or Example 3 (Ex3)
from e-books?
It should be noted that today, many libraries have offered free access to academic Elaboration to
materials to students and the public. Furthermore, many major reputable newspapers example 3 (EEx3)
around the world, like The Guardian and The Times, have also started their own
websites offering news to the masses.
Hence, since there is a voluminous amount of information on the Internet, one can Concluding Sentence
trust the information as long as it is from a reliable and trusted website. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. unreliable- untrustworthy

1. ubiquitous
2. debunking
3. hoaxes
4. insight
5. untrustworthy
6. deemed
7. masses
In conclusion, social media such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and TikTok Concluding Line(s)
are online communities where people connect with friends, family, and strangers. So, *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic

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sharing information among friends and families is normal. Some may be true, some
may be false.
Despite this, I still disagree that online information is deceiving or unreliable. This is Restate your stand /
because the information obtained is trustworthy as long as it comes from a trusted opinion
and correct website address, is supported by certified professionals, and has &
access to a voluminous amount 大量 of information. Summarise your 3
points
The onus is on the individual himself or herself to use sound judgement and common Hope / Suggestion
sense when browsing for the information that he or she is looking for.

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Task 2
You have watched a documentary about the growing concern on the reliability of online information to the society.
The following remark was made in the documentary:
<Online information is deceiving and unreliable.=
The advent of the digital era has revolutionised the way we communicate and disseminate
Introduce the
information. The internet allows communication and information to be transmitted easily and topic
efficiently at a minimum cost with the fastest speed. However, despite its many apparent benefits,
there is a growing concern about its negative influences on the public, especially those who are of
gullible age. One of its critics9 main concerns is the reliability of online information for society.
They argue that the information posted online is deceptive and unreliable. These critics further
strengthen their argument with examples of reported cases of online fraud, scams, and misleading
news. Nevertheless, I disagree with the statement because, in my opinion, not all information Stand
posted online is deceptive and unreliable. It is one9s responsibility to discern through the myriad
of information found online and make a sound judgement on whether to accept it as truth or not.
Online information can be reliable and trusted as long as it is from a trusted and correct website Thesis
address, supported by certified professionals, and has access to a wealth of information. Statement

First and foremost, trusted and correct website address is very important in determining Topic Sentence
that the information one sees online is correct. Knowing the source of information is crucial to E1
ensure that the information one receives is reliable. For example, if one needs information on any Ex1
related government projects and news, then you should go to the website that ends with.gov, like
https://apdm.gov.edu.my. Knowing the source of funding for the website is important so that you EEx1
may have an idea of what the website's goal is. Very often, we see many websites end with.com, E2
such as https://www.nationalgeographic.com. This identifies the websites as commercial websites.
Commercial websites are websites that are used for the sale of retail items, food, or beverages to
the general public. They also offer services, including professional, trade, contracting, banking,
Ex2
EEx2
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and property management. Amazon.com, Takeaway.com, and PizzaHut.com are just to name a
few examples of food and beverage commerce sites available. These websites are mushrooming E3
based on popular demand by consumers. Although it is widely available online, consumers must
be aware of its reliability. Next, due to the information and services that they offer, commercial
websites are the favourite pick for scammers. These scammers would create fake websites using
the latest technology to make them look genuine. So, as long as one is vigilant while browsing for Ex3
information, one can ascertain whether the information posted by these websites is true or fake. EEx3
For instance, Maybank2U and CIMB are two commercial websites reported to have fake websites
in 2021. Countless reports are received from the consumers of the two banking systems. They E4
were lured into revealing their personal information once they clicked certain links purporting to
be from reputable companies that were sent via their email or private messages. By being prudent
and cautious, the public could prevent themselves from being deceived into thinking that they are Ex3
browsing genuine websites and avoid being scammed by unscrupulous parties. Of course, we have
heard of cases where victims of internet fraud were lured into divulging their personal details such EEx3
as credit card numbers, bank card numbers, addresses, and also their identification card numbers.
But all these criminal incidences do not mean that the information posted online is all unreliable Concluding
Sentence
and deceiving, as people can easily avoid being scammed or tricked by just exercising prudence
and vigilance while online. Therefore, one needs to ensure the address of the website that one types
in is correct to prevent being scammed by unscrupulous people.

Furthermore, another reason is that the information is verified by certified professionals Topic Sentence
or is supported by various government agencies. Government agencies, whether they are
E1
wholly-owned by the government, statutory corporations or semi-government agencies, have their
own official websites that share any programmes or activities conducted by them. For example, Ex1
information related to the government9s policies or laws can always be found on relevant
government agencies9 websites. This is to ensure that updated information is easily accessible to EEx1
the public through the online platform. Besides, the same goes for any information related to E2
medicine. It is advised to browse any medical website supported by genuine medical practitioners
and medical institutions, whether they are local or overseas. For instance, Malaysia9s Online Ex2
Pharmacy, Gleneagles Hospitals, and Health.gov are examples of trusted digital healthcare
platforms available. These trusted websites share information about healthcare services and EEx2
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communication between healthcare providers and their patients. However, it is worth noting that E3
much of the misleading and unreliable information found online is baseless and unsupported by
facts. Most of the time, this misleading information is driven by greed, especially in the case of
beauty products, so-called <healthcare= and slimming products. To illustrate, skincare products Ex3
that claim to be 8age-defying9 for all skin types. These promises sound too good to be true and are
indeed unethical as they deceive the consumers. There are many instances where people are
deceived by what they see or read about certain beauty products from unreliable sources, such as E4
from social media influencers on TikTok, Instagram, or YouTube. Truth be told, these influencers
are paid a certain amount of money to promote certain products or merchandise on their platform,
so whatever claims they make about those products are subject to scrutiny. Social media sites such
as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram are well known for posting false, paid reviews by influencers Ex4
and misleading testimonials by individuals. These platforms are popular among youngsters and
adults, so it is easy to reach their targets. Consumers need to be more informed and be accountable
by doing extensive fact-checking about certain services before purchasing an item. The onus is on
one9s willingness to go the extra mile in verifying the information he or she gets online. It is worth EEx4
noting that reliable websites will always provide an email address, phone number, or mailing
address. They would also cite the sources of the information they posted at the bottom of every
page. Thus, to state that all information online is deceiving, unreliable and misleading is incorrect
as there are many reliable sources online supported by government agencies or people of credible Concluding
Sentence
reputation in their respective fields of expertise.

Last but not least, it is an undeniable fact that a wealth of information is available on the Topic Sentence
ubiquitous Internet through many media. It is true that the information found online comes from E1
many sources, and a large part of them are people9s personal views and experiences relating to
certain issues, about certain products or even services. These people even sometimes provide
witnesses9 accounts or video coverage of certain events. For example, there are youtubers who Ex1
base the content of their videos wholly on the concept of debunking claims made by other
influencers by showing their experiences online. This will eventually lead to hoaxes among the EEx1
community. So, are all these deceiving and unreliable? What about a doctor9s personal blog or E2
YouTube channel that aims to educate the public by giving important information or messages
based on his or her personal experience? Are we going to deny his or her professional insight or
view just because it is posted online? What about health websites that offer information on Ex2

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everything from types of diseases to treatment of diseases? Are they all untrustworthy? If this is
the case, then people are going to have a major problem working, studying, and conducting
businesses from home. This is especially true during the COVID-19 pandemic, where many are EEx2
forced to work from home and rely a lot on the internet to work and study. Students, especially,
need to complete assignments or thesis papers online. Where do they access relevant and vital E3
information for their work if not online? How can they complete their assignments if the
information they get online is deemed unreliable? For instance, is the information still Ex3
untrustworthy if it is sourced from libraries or from e-books? It should be noted that today, many
libraries have offered free access to academic materials to students and the public. Furthermore, EEx3
many major reputable newspapers around the world, like The Guardian and The Times, have also
started their own websites offering news to the masses. Hence, since there is a voluminous amount Concluding
of information on the Internet, one can trust the information as long as it is from a reliable website. Sentence
In conclusion, social media such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and TikTok are online
Concluding
communities where people connect with friends, family, and strangers. So, sharing information Line(s)
among friends and families is normal. Some may be true, some may be false. Despite this, I still Restate
disagree that online information is deceiving or unreliable. This is because the information Stand/Opinion
& Summarise 3
obtained is trustworthy as long as it comes from a trusted and correct website address, is Points
supported by certified professionals, and has access to a voluminous amount of information.
The onus is on the individual himself or herself to use sound judgement and common sense when Hope/Suggestion
browsing for the information that he or she is looking for.

-info- well-linked
-appropriate and varied vocabulary

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MUET Band 5
CEFR Level C1
Important Notes!!!

1. revolutionised 17. scrutiny
2. disseminate 18. paid reviews
3. apparent 19. onus
4. gullible 20. cite
5. discern 21. ubiquitous
6. myriad 22. debunking
7. vigilant 23. hoaxes
8. purporting 24. insight
9. reputable 25. untrustworthy
10. prudent 26. deemed
11. unscrupulous 27. masses
12. divulging 28. voluminous amount
13. statutory corporations
14. facilitate
15. unethical

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Task 2
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
Coronavirus Disease 2019 (Covid-19) was named by the World Health Introduce the topic
Organization (WHO) in February 2020. WHO has declared COVID-19 as a pandemic, *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
which means that the disease is affecting the entire world. Due to this contagious
COVID-19, new norms are emerging in various sectors, like the economic sector,
education sector, and healthcare sector. People are struggling in order to adapt to these
new norms. In terms of education, COVID-19 has forced education to be offered
online.
In my opinion, I agree with the statement that online education is effective. Stand
ONE SENTENCE.
(You will NOT BE
PENALISED if you
with the statement)
This is because online education increases both students’ and teachers’ efficiency, Thesis statement
as well as it is a more economical way of learning. *LAST SENTENCE of
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.
NOTES:

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1. emerging

First and foremost, online education is more effective because it increases Topic Sentence (T)
students’ efficiency in learning. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Most students are more digitally prepared and comfortable with online learning. This Elaboration 1 (E1)
is because students have digital proficiencies far surpassing their teachers and parents. * Give the first
This enables students to get acquainted with online learning easily. Digital learning is
TOPIC SENTENCE.
an alternative method of learning that enables students to learn digitally and aids
(Explain how online
students9 engagement. Digital learning includes the combination of recorded video education increases
and live streaming classes. students' learning
efficiency)
For example, students can preview and self-study recorded videos and online materials Example 1 (Ex1)
prepared by teachers through a mobile phone application like WhatsApp.
By doing so, students can join the live streaming classes by being better prepared with Elaboration to
questions regarding the online materials prepared by teachers. example 1 (EEx1)
Next, the real-time interaction offered by live streaming platforms allows online Elaboration 2 (E2)
interactions between teachers and students. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how online
education increases
students' learning
efficiency)
For instance, during online classes through Zoom, students are encouraged to Example 2 (Ex2)
participate, ask questions, engage and share their opinions with classmates more
comfortably.

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Students are actively involved in online learning rather than just absorbing the Elaboration to
information given to them. This gives students the impetus to learn actively. example 2 (EEx2)
As students are more engaged in the online lessons, this can also enable students to Elaboration 3 (E3)
have better retention of information. This is because students can see visuals and * Give the second
graphics provided by teachers through live streaming classes.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how online
education increases
students' learning
efficiency)
To illustrate, when students learn through Google Meet, the audio-visual aids used by Example 3 (Ex3)
teachers like Powerpoint slides and videos benefit students as they can better
understand the lessons.
This enables students to retain more information after classes as they are more engaged Elaboration to
in online classes. example 3 (EEx3)
Therefore, the shift from physical classrooms to online classes due to COVID-19 Concluding Sentence
benefits students, as online education enhances students9 efficiency. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. due to- because of, owing to
2. enhance- boost, improve

1. digital proficiencies
2. acquainted
3. live streaming
4. impetus

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Furthermore, the growing popularity of online education after COVID-19 can Topic Sentence (T)
benefit teachers because it can increase teachers’ efficiency in providing their *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
education.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Most teachers have embraced new challenges in implementing online learning because Elaboration 1 (E1)
they lack digital literacy skills. Teachers have to adapt quickly by using digital devices * Give the first
like laptop computers to prepare for online classes. Online teaching can increase
TOPIC SENTENCE.
teachers9 efficiency and productivity.
(Explain how online
education increases
teachers' efficiency)
For example, teachers are able to plan their lessons ahead by scheduling online tasks Example 1 (Ex1)
like marking assignments, teaching and recording lectures.
Teachers can do an online search to get endless materials and a voluminous amount Elaboration to
of information that can be used in lessons. example 1 (EEx1)
Besides, the use of digital education tools can save teachers9 time in preparing online Elaboration 2 (E2)
lessons. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how online
education increases
For instance, Projeqt allows teachers to create multimedia presentations with dynamic Example 2 (Ex2)
slides in which they can embed links, online quizzes, and videos. Kahoot, Quizizz and
Blooket are educational platforms that are based on questions and games.
Teachers can prepare online teaching materials by using slides, videos, graphics, Elaboration to
quizzes and questions through these educational tools to make their lessons more example 2 (EEx2)
effective.

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Moreover, teachers can conduct live streaming classes to live stream their lessons Elaboration 3 (E3)
through Youtube Live, Facebook Live, etc. As live streaming classes enable student- * Give the third
centred learning, teachers are able to reach out to different students. There are
TOPIC SENTENCE.
comprehensive capabilities with online education platforms that allow online
(Explain how online
interactions between teachers and students. education increases
To illustrate, through the Zoom application, teachers can schedule class sessions, share Example 3 (Ex3)
their screen and high-quality videos, as well as answer students9 questions faster and
more effectively.
Zoom meetings allow teachers to conduct online classes and record them to be Elaboration to
accessed later by students. This aids teachers9 effectiveness in delivering lectures. example 3 (EEx3)
Not only that, the use of Google Classroom also makes it easy for teachers to create Elaboration 4 (E4)
classes, distribute assignments and communicate with students. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how online
education increases
Teachers can quickly see who hasn9t completed the work and provide direct or real- Example 4 (Ex4)
time feedback and grades right in Google Classroom.
This enables teachers to assess students9 understanding of certain topics easily by Elaboration to
gathering data on students9 scores. example 4 (EEx4)
Thus, there is no doubt that teachers9 efficiency can be increased and they can provide Concluding Sentence
quality education through e-learning methods. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
2.comprehensive capabilities

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*Change word forms
1. aids teacher’s effectiveness- conduct lessons effectively

Last but not least, online education is a more economical way of learning Topic Sentence (T)
because it saves educational costs and time. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
It is an undeniable fact that the implementation of distance education or remote Elaboration 1 (E1)
learning can lower the cost of education. The ubiquitous internet allows schools or * Give the first
learning institutions to provide online courses as an alternative way of learning in
TOPIC SENTENCE.
response to COVID-19.
(Explain how online
education save costs and
time)
For example, schools can offer online classes through Youtube, Zoom and Facebook, Example 1 (Ex1)
which lowers the printing costs.
Learning materials are kept online and can be downloaded easily without having to Elaboration to
print out the materials. example 1 (EEx1)
In addition, online education also alleviates the cost of textbooks as schools are Elaboration 2 (E2)
resorting to the use of e-books or electronic textbooks to provide education. With the * Give the second
advent of the fast-paced technological era, we can access information on a specific
TOPIC SENTENCE.
topic by simply scanning a barcode.
(Explain how online
time)
For instance, E-books can be accessed through scanning barcodes without physical Example 2 (Ex2)
books.
The flexibility and accessibility of online education can also cut down on Elaboration to
transportation costs. Students do not have to pay for bus tickets or car fuel as they can example 2 (EEx2)
learn from home without having to attend classes at school.

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Not only can students reduce their education costs, they can also save lots of time Elaboration 3 (E3)
through online learning. * Give the third
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how online
time)
For instance, students can save time on travelling to and from school every day, and Example 3 (Ex3)
they do not have to waste time waiting for their parents to bring them home after
school.
Students can also learn in a suitable and comfortable environment at home, which can Elaboration to
aid students9 concentration and require less time to comprehend the learning materials. example 3 (EEx3)
Students may save time on browsing and obtaining learning materials via search
engines like Google Chrome at home too, as they may have a better internet connection
at home compared to at school.
Hence, online learning is effective because it reduces costs and time. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. lower- alleviate, reduce, cut down
2. via- through

1. ubiquitous
2. electronic textbooks
3. fast-paced
4. search engines

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In conclusion, the COVID-19 pandemic has changed the education sector Concluding Line(s)
dramatically. The pandemic has forced education to be offered online. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
In my opinion, I still strongly believe that online education is effective due to the fact Restate your stand /
that online education boosts students’ learning efficiency, improves teachers’ opinion
productivity, and can cut down on educational costs and time. &
Summarise your 3
points
Online education should be improved in order to provide a more comprehensive Hope / Suggestion
learning experience for students and teachers. Hopefully, all students can reap the
benefits of online learning to ensure that they have a wonderful learning experience
and can improve their academic performance.
NOTES:
2. cut down- reduce

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Task 2
DISCURSIVE ESSAY
[60 marks]
Coronavirus Disease 2019 (Covid-19) was named by the World Health Organization
Introduce the
(WHO) in February 2020. WHO has declared COVID-19 as a pandemic, which means that the topic
disease is affecting the entire world. Due to this contagious COVID-19, new norms are emerging
in various sectors, like the economic sector, education sector, and healthcare sector. People are
struggling in order to adapt to these new norms. In terms of education, COVID-19 has forced
education to be offered online. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement that online Stand
education is effective. This is because online education increases both students’ and teachers’
Thesis
efficiency, as well as it is a more economical way of learning. Statement

First and foremost, online education is more effective because it increases students’ Topic Sentence
efficiency in learning. Most students are more digitally prepared and comfortable with online
E1
learning. This is because students have digital proficiencies far surpassing their teachers and
parents. This enables students to get acquainted with online learning easily. Digital learning is an
alternative method of learning that enables students to learn digitally and aids students9
engagement. Digital learning includes the combination of recorded video and live streamin classes.
For example, students can preview and self-study recorded videos and online materials prepared Ex1
by teachers through a mobile phone application like WhatsApp. By doing so, students can join the
EEx1
live streaming classes by being better prepared with questions regarding the online materials
prepared by teachers. Next, the real-time interaction offered by live streaming platforms allows E2
online interactions between teachers and students. For instance, during online classes through Ex2
Zoom, students are encouraged to participate, ask questions, engage and share their opinions with EEx2
classmates more comfortably. Students are actively involved in online learning rather than just

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absorbing the information given to them. This gives students the impetus to learn actively. As
students are more engaged in the online lessons, this can also enable students to have better E3
retention of information. This is because students can see visuals and graphics provided by teachers
through live streaming classes. To illustrate, when students learn through Google Meet, the audio-
Ex3
visual aids used by teachers like Powerpoint slides and videos benefit students as they can better
EEx3
understand the lessons. This enables students to retain more information after classes as they are
more engaged in online classes. Therefore, the shift from physical classrooms to online classes Concluding
due to COVID-19 benefits students, as online education enhances students9 efficiency. Sentence
Furthermore, the growing popularity of online education after COVID-19 can benefit Topic Sentence
teachers because it can increase teachers’ efficiency in providing their education. Most teachers E1
have embraced new challenges in implementing online learning because they lack digital literacy
skills. Teachers have to adapt quickly by using digital devices like laptop computers to prepare for
online classes. Online teaching can increase teachers9 efficiency and productivity. For example,
Ex1
teachers are able to plan their lessons ahead by scheduling online tasks like marking assignments,
EEx1
teaching and recording lectures. Teachers can do an online search to get endless materials and a
voluminous amount of information that can be used in lessons. Besides, the use of digital education E2
tools can save teachers9 time in preparing online lessons. For instance, Projeqt allows teachers to Ex2
create multimedia presentations with dynamic slides in which they can embed links, online quizzes,
and videos. Kahoot, Quizizz and Blooket are educational platforms that are based on questions
and games. Teachers can prepare online teaching materials by using slides, videos, graphics, EEx2
quizzes and questions through these educational tools to make their lessons more effective.
Moreover, teachers can conduct live streaming classes to live stream their lessons through Youtube E3
Live, Facebook Live, etc. As live streaming classes enable student-centred learning, teachers are
able to reach out to different students. There are comprehensive capabilities with online education
platforms that allow online interactions between teachers and students. To illustrate, through the
Zoom application, teachers can schedule class sessions, share their screen and high-quality videos, Ex3
as well as answer students9 questions faster and more effectively. Zoom meetings allow teachers
EEx3
to conduct online classes and record them to be accessed later by students. This aids teachers9
effectiveness in delivering lectures. Not only that, the use of Google Classroom also makes it easy
E4
for teachers to create classes, distribute assignments and communicate with students. Teachers can
Ex4

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quickly see who hasn9t completed the work and provide direct or real-time feedback and grades
EEx4
right in Google Classroom. This enables teachers to assess students9 understanding of certain
topics easily by gathering data on students9 scores. Thus, there is no doubt that teachers9 efficiency Concluding
Sentence
can be increased and they can provide quality education through e-learning methods.

Last but not least, online education is a more economical way of learning because it Topic Sentence
saves educational costs and time. It is an undeniable fact that the implementation of distance
E1
education or remote learning can lower the cost of education. The ubiquitous internet allows
schools or learning institutions to provide online courses as an alternative way of learning in
response to COVID-19. For example, schools can offer online classes through Youtube, Zoom and Ex1
Facebook, which lowers the printing costs. Learning materials are kept online and can be EEx1
downloaded easily without having to print out the materials. In addition, online education also E2
alleviates the cost of textbooks as schools are resorting to the use of e-books or electronic textbooks
to provide education. With the advent of the fast-paced technological era, we can access
information on a specific topic by simply scanning a barcode. For instance, E-books can be Ex2
accessed through scanning barcodes without physical books. The flexibility and accessibility of EEx2
online education can also cut down on transportation costs. Students do not have to pay for bus
tickets or car fuel as they can learn from home without having to attend classes at school. Not only
can students reduce their education costs, they can also save lots of time through online learning. E3
For instance, students can save time on travelling to and from school every day, and they do not Ex3
have to waste time waiting for their parents to bring them home after school. Students can also
EEx3
learn in a suitable and comfortable environment at home, which can aid students9 concentration
and require less time to comprehend the learning materials. Students may save time on browsing
and obtaining learning materials via search engines like Google Chrome at home too, as they may
have a better internet connection at home compared to at school. Hence, online learning is effective Concluding
because it cut down on costs and time. Sentence
In conclusion, the COVID-19 pandemic has changed the education sector dramatically. Concluding
The pandemic has forced education to be offered online. In my opinion, I still strongly believe that Line(s)
online education is effective due to the fact that online education boosts students’ learning Restate
Stand/Opinion
efficiency, improves teachers’ productivity, and can cut down on educational costs and time. & Summarise 3
Online education should be improved in order to provide a more comprehensive learning Points

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experience for students and teachers. Hopefully, all students can reap the benefits of online
Hope/Suggestion
learning to ensure that they have a wonderful learning experience and can improve their academic
performance.

-info- well-linked
-use a variety of cohesive devices
MUET Band 5
CEFR Level C1

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Important Notes!!!
1. emerging
2. digital proficiencies
3. acquainted
4. live streaming
5. impetus
8. comprehensive abilities
9. ubiquitous
10. electronic textbooks
11. fast-paced
12. search engines

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Task 2
You attended a talk by a non-governmental organization, which was organized by Bintulu Development Authority
(BDA). The following statement was made by the guest speaker:
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
The word <elderly= refers to people who are 65 years of age or older. Those Introduce the topic
aged 65 to 74 are referred to as "early elderly" and those over 75 years old as "late *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
elderly". Caring for the elderly has become a challenge for many families in this
modern society as the number of children in a family is decreasing. Some children
tend to place their ageing parents in nursing homes as they are busy with their jobs or
due to materialism. The question is, should the elderly live in nursing homes?
I agree with the statement given that the elderly should be sent to nursing homes. Stand (Compulsory)
ONE SENTENCE.
This is because nursing homes have round-the-clock care24 小时护理, a suitable Thesis statement
*LAST SENTENCE of
environment, and the elderly can have interaction with others of the same
generation.
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

First of all, the elderly should live in nursing homes as nursing homes have Topic Sentence (T)
round-the-clock care and services. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.

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Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
At nursing homes, the elderly can receive better care because a number of services are Elaboration 1 (E1)
available. These services include help with daily tasks, food service, and * Give the first
housekeeping.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how nursing
homes provide round-
the-clock care)
For example, nursing home staff can help with daily tasks like bathing, dressing, Example 1 (Ex1)
eating, and drinking.
Daily tasks can become much more difficult as we age. Many seniors need extra care Elaboration to
to live well. example 1 (EEx1)
Catering services are also available. Elaboration 2 (E2)

* Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
the-clock care)
For instance, nursing homes provide meals and snacks throughout the day. Nursing Example 2 (Ex2)
homes can cater to different tastes and dietary supplements are requested.
Some nursing homes have a dietician or nutritionist that can consult with the elderly Elaboration to
to make sure that they are getting the nutrients they need. example 2 (EEx2)
Besides, healthcare services are also available in nursing homes. There are skilled Elaboration 3 (E3)
workers specialising in care of the elderly who are able to deal with medical * Give the third
emergencies better.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
the-clock care)

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To illustrate, if the elderly people have a serious health condition like chronic kidney Example 3 (Ex3)
disease, arthritis, heart failure or diabetes, trained staff or doctors can provide instant
medical care to the elderly.
The services and care offered by nursing homes can ensure the health of residents so Elaboration to
that they can live healthily. example 3 (EEx3)
Therefore, round-the-clock care and services are available in nursing homes, which Concluding Sentence
enables the elderly to receive better care. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. catering- food
2. deal with- handle

1. round-the-clock care
2. dietician or nutritionist

Furthermore, nursing homes have a suitable environment for the elderly. Topic Sentence (T)
*SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
The environment is specially designed for the aged. When living in a nursing home, Elaboration 1 (E1)
the elderly are protected from harm that could come their way. * Give the first
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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(Explain suitable
environment in nursing
homes)
For example, some senior citizens may suffer from serious diseases like Alzheimer's Example 1 (Ex1)
or dementia. If they are living in their home, they may forget to lock their door, and
they would not be safe in their home.
Nursing homes have a great level of security, and a safe environment is of the utmost Elaboration to
importance for the elderly. example 1 (EEx1)
Apart from that, some nursing homes may have access to the outdoors and natural Elaboration 2 (E2)
surroundings, which help in promoting well-being, reducing stress, improving * Give the second
cognitive functions, and activating good memories.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain suitable
homes)
For instance, nature and gardens in nursing homes provide a symbolic environment Example 2 (Ex2)
that can help to activate memories of the elderly.
A clean and healthy environment is especially vital for the health of the elderly. The Elaboration to
elderly's health is enhanced because the nursing home's natural environment protects example 2 (EEx2)
them from pollution, and they are less susceptible to diseases caused by gaseous and
particulate pollutants.
Moreover, the various indoor and outdoor facilities prepared in nursing homes are Elaboration 3 (E3)
disabled-friendly and suitable for those with physical disabilities. * Give the third
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain suitable
homes)
To illustrate, ramps, washrooms, and non-slip surfaces, wheelchair-accessible Example 3 (Ex3)
accommodations, such as a lift to the floor where the room is located are prepared in
nursing homes.

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This helps wheelchair users move around the nursing home. Elaboration to
example 3 (EEx3)
Thus, nursing homes have suitable surroundings, which are crucial for the elderly's Concluding Sentence
safety and health. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. suitable- proper
2. environment- surroundings
3. crucial- important, vital, essential
4. enhance- improve, boost

2. activating good memories
3. susceptible to
4. gaseous and particulate pollutants
*Change word forms

1. the elderly with disabilities- the disabled elderly

Last but not least, the elderly should live in nursing homes because they can Topic Sentence (T)
interact with other people of their generation. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.

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There are other senior citizens who live in the same nursing homes. This provides an Elaboration 1 (E1)
opportunity for the elderly to meet new people and broaden their social circle. * Give the first
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how elderly
interact with others of
their generation in
nursing homes)
For example, the elderly can have meals together and enjoy companionship when they Example 1 (Ex1)
eat.
They get to mingle with each other by sharing their stories and experiences. This can Elaboration to
give them a sense of community and also a sense of belonging. example 1 (EEx1)
Next, nursing homes offer a wide variety of creative, engaging, and fun activities for Elaboration 2 (E2)
residents. These activities include cooking therapy, art therapy, gardening, musical * Give the second
activities, robotic pets, and workouts.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
(Explain how elderly
interact with others of
their generation in
nursing homes)
For instance, culinary therapy is a therapeutic technique that can improve the elderly's Example 2 (Ex2)
mental health. When the elderly prepare food together, it strengthens their
bond. During the musical activities, the residents get to play instruments or sing their
hearts out. Residents can participate in musical programmes and perform their music
together, which can be satisfying.
Senior citizens can interact with each other and strengthen their relationships by taking Elaboration to
part in activities organised by nursing homes. This can also help them to break up the example 2 (EEx2)
monotony of life, and they will feel less lonely than if they were living alone in their
own home.
Hence, by living in nursing homes, the elderly can interact with others of their Concluding Sentence
generation, which provides them with mutual emotional support. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.

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NOTES:
1. interact with- mingle with
2. a wide variety of- various

1. companionship
2. therapeutic
3. monotony of life
In conclusion, today, nursing homes are well equipped with facilities and Concluding Line(s)
services that make life there comfortable and enjoyable. *Fresh rephrasing of the
topic
I still strongly believe that the elderly should live in nursing homes due to the fact that Restate your stand /
nursing homes offer 24/7 care, a beneficial environment, and the elderly can have opinion
interaction with others of their generation. &
Summarise your 3
points
The elderly should consider living in nursing homes instead of staying in their homes, Hope / Suggestion
as they may receive inadequate care from their busy children. The government should
also implement suitable policies and regulations that require each nursing home to
conduct care plans that meet the needs of residents. This enables the elderly to enjoy
their old age.
NOTES:
2. offer- provide

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Task 2
You attended a talk by a non-governmental organization, which was organized by Bintulu Development Authority
(BDA). The following statement was made by the guest speaker:
The word <elderly= refers to people who are 65 years of age or older. Those aged 65 to 74
Introduce the
are referred to as "early elderly" and those over 75 years old as "late elderly". Caring for the elderly topic
has become a challenge for many families in this modern society as the number of children in a
family is decreasing. Some children tend to place their ageing parents in nursing homes as they
are busy with their jobs or due to materialism. The question is, should the elderly live in nursing Stand
homes? I agree with the statement given that the elderly should be sent to nursing homes. This is Thesis
because nursing homes have round-the-clock care, a suitable environment, and the elderly can Statement
have interaction with others of the same generation.
First of all, the elderly should live in nursing homes as nursing homes have round-the- Topic Sentence
clock care and services. At nursing homes, the elderly can receive better care because a number E1
of services are available. These services include help with daily tasks, food service, and
housekeeping. For example, nursing home staff can help with daily tasks like bathing, dressing, Ex1
eating, and drinking. Daily tasks can become much more difficult as we age. Many seniors need EEx1
extra care to live well. Catering services are also available. For instance, nursing homes provide E2
meals and snacks throughout the day. Nursing homes can cater to different tastes and dietary Ex2
supplements are requested. Some nursing homes have a dietician or nutritionist that can consult EEx2
with the elderly to make sure that they are getting the nutrients they need. Besides, healthcare E3
services are also available in nursing homes. There are skilled workers specialising in care of the
elderly who are able to deal with medical emergencies better. To illustrate, if the elderly people Ex3
have a serious health condition like chronic kidney disease, arthritis, heart failure or diabetes,

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trained staff or doctors can provide instant medical care to the elderly. The services and care EEx3
offered by nursing homes can ensure the health of residents so that they can live healthily.
Therefore, round-the-clock care and services are available in nursing homes, which enables the
Concluding
elderly to receive better care. Sentence

Furthermore, nursing homes have a suitable environment for the elderly. The Topic Sentence
environment is specially designed for the aged. When living in a nursing home, the elderly are E1
protected from harm that could come their way. For example, some senior citizens may suffer from Ex1
serious diseases like Alzheimer's or dementia. If they are living in their home, they may forget to EEx1
lock their door, and they would not be safe in their home. Nursing homes have a great level of
security, and a safe environment is of the utmost importance for the elderly. Apart from that, some E2
nursing homes may have access to the outdoors and natural surroundings, which help in promoting
well-being, reducing stress, improving cognitive functions, and activating good memories. For Ex2
instance, nature and gardens in nursing homes provide a symbolic environment that can help to EEx2
activate memories of the elderly. A clean and healthy environment is especially vital for the health
of the elderly. The elderly's health is enhanced because the nursing home's natural environment
protects them from pollution, and they are less susceptible to diseases caused by gaseous and
particulate pollutants. Moreover, the various indoor and outdoor facilities prepared in nursing E3
homes are disabled-friendly and suitable for those with physical disabilities. To illustrate, ramps,
Ex3
washrooms, and non-slip surfaces, wheelchair-accessible accommodations, such as a lift to the
floor where the room is located are prepared in nursing homes. This helps wheelchair users move EEx3
around the nursing home. Thus, nursing homes have suitable surroundings, which are crucial for
Concluding
the elderly's safety and health. Sentence

Last but not least, the elderly should live in nursing homes because they can interact with Topic Sentence
other people of their generation. There are other senior citizens who live in the same nursing
E1
homes. This provides an opportunity for the elderly to meet new people and broaden their social
circle. For example, the elderly can have meals together and enjoy companionship when they eat. Ex1
They get to mingle with each other by sharing their stories and experiences. This can give them a EEx1
sense of community and also a sense of belonging. Next, nursing homes offer a wide variety of E2
creative, engaging, and fun activities for residents. These activities include cooking therapy, art

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therapy, gardening, musical activities, robotic pets, and workouts. For instance, culinary therapy
Ex2
is a therapeutic technique that can improve the elderly's mental health. When the elderly prepare
food together, it strengthens their bond. During the musical activities, the residents get to play
EEx2
instruments or sing their hearts out. Residents can participate in musical programmes and perform
their music together, which can be satisfying. Senior citizens can interact with each other and
strengthen their relationships by taking part in activities organised by nursing homes. This can also
help them to break up the monotony of life, and they will feel less lonely than if they were living
alone in their own home. Hence, by living in nursing homes, the elderly can interact with others Concluding
of their generation, which provides them with mutual emotional support. Sentence
Concluding
In conclusion, today, nursing homes are well equipped with facilities and services that
Line(s)
make life there comfortable and enjoyable. I still strongly believe that the elderly should live in
Restate
nursing homes due to the fact that nursing homes offer 24/7 care, a beneficial environment, and Stand/Opinion
the elderly can have interaction with others of their generation. The elderly should consider & Summarise 3
Points
living in nursing homes instead of staying in their homes, as they may receive inadequate care
Hope/Suggestion
from their busy children. The government should also implement suitable policies and regulations
that require each nursing home to conduct care plans that meet the needs of residents. This enables
the elderly to enjoy their old age.

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-info- well-linked
MUET Band 5
CEFR Level C1
Important Notes!!!
1. round-the-clock care
2. dietician or nutritionist
4. activating good memories
5. susceptible to
6. gaseous and particulate pollutants
8. companionship
9. therapeutic
10. monotony of life

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Task 2
You attended a talk by a non-governmental agency, which was organised by the local town council. The following
comment was made by the speaker:
<Public health is becoming a serious problem in our nation.=
Write an essay suggesting ways to improve public health. Write at least 250 words.
PROBLEM-SOLUTION ESSAY
[60 marks]
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
Health is very important to ensure a normal and happy life. As the saying goes, Introduce the topic
"health is better than wealth". Although we may have a lot of wealth, however, we *Refer to the question
and choose ANY WORD
will not be able to enjoy our wealth without a healthy body. Recently, people are more
aware of the topics related to public health.
In my opinion, I agree that public health is becoming a serious problem in our nation. Stand
The increasing number of people suffering from obesity and diabetes has become a *Write your stand in
ONE SENTENCE.
major concern in developing countries like Malaysia. Obesity and being overweight
(You will NOT BE
lead to other health problems, including coronary disease, diabetes, cancer, or even
PENALISED if you
mental illness. write- I agree / disagree
with the statement)
The ways to improve public health are through the role of education and the media Thesis statement
to raise public awareness as well as the role of the government to strengthen laws *LAST SENTENCE of
and regulations to improve public health.
statement in ONE
SENTENCE.

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First and foremost, educational institutions play a vital role in educating the Topic Sentence (T)
public about ways to improve public health. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
Physical education in schools that focuses on developing physical fitness among Elaboration 1 (E1)
students can benefit students. Juvenile diabetes and other obesity-related illnesses are * Give the first
becoming increasingly common among children and teenagers. Through physical
TOPIC SENTENCE.
education, teachers can impart knowledge to students about ways to keep fit and
healthy.
For example, during physical classes, students can engage in various physical Example 1 (Ex1)
activities like playing badminton and football.
This will help students burn deposited fat from their bodies and release the Elaboration to
accumulated stress due to study. example 1 (EEx1)
Next, health awareness campaign can be launched in schools and universities Elaboration 2 (E2)
nationwide that involves students, teachers, and parents. Many activities can be carried * Give the second
out during the campaign.
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, health educational materials or brochures can be distributed so that Example 2 (Ex2)
parents or students can gain health knowledge by reading those materials.
By doing so, health awareness among students and parents can be increased. Elaboration to
example 2 (EEx2)
Moreover, educational institutions can also launch several meetings that involve Elaboration 3 (E3)
teachers and parents to introduce the concept of a healthy lifestyle. During these * Give the second
meetings, teachers and parents will be exposed to the importance and ways of living a
TOPIC SENTENCE.
healthy life.

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To illustrate, parents and teachers can broaden their spectrum of knowledge of Example 3 (Ex3)
unhealthy foods to avoid, such as junk food and fast food, as these foods frequently
lead to a variety of health problems.
As a result, teachers and parents will be able to inculcate health awareness among their Elaboration to
students. This will eventually improve public health. example 3 (EEx3)
Therefore, educational institutions play an important role in improving public health. Concluding Sentence
*ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. juvenile diabetes
2. obesity-related illnesses
3. deposited fat
4. accumulated stress
5. spectrum of knowledge
6. inculcate

Furthermore, the media plays an important role in raising public awareness Topic Sentence (T)
about public health. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
The advent of the digital era and the ubiquitous internet enable the media to spread Elaboration 1 (E1)
information easily. People can use digital devices like mobile phones to assess various * Give the first
types of information through digital media, such as online newspapers. The media
TOPIC SENTENCE.
should be more concerned about public health by spreading information about health
as the media has become a main channel of information for people. The media has a

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big influence on shaping people9s positive attitude towards public health. The media
can broadcast suitable programmes about health in order to raise public awareness.
For example, media should launch health promotion campaigns through television, Example 1 (Ex1)
newspapers, and radio.
A health promotion campaign should cover a variety of topics, such as a balanced diet Elaboration to
and exercise. example 1 (EEx1)
Besides, articles on health should be published in newspapers or health magazines so Elaboration 2 (E2)
that readers can gain knowledge about health. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.
For instance, through newspapers, people can read articles on the importance of having Example 2 (Ex2)
adequate sleep.
This will raise people9s awareness of the consequences of sleep deprivation, which Elaboration to
causes them to be more prone to cardiovascular disease. Newspaper articles on the example 2 (EEx2)
effects of sedentary lifestyles can also raise public awareness so that people will realise
that physical inactivity is a silent killer.
Additionally, television can be an effective channel to spread information on health. Elaboration 3 (E3)
* Give the third
TOPIC SENTENCE.
To illustrate, since people like to watch TV shows, health and lifestyle TV shows can Example 3 (Ex3)
raise public awareness about ways to live a healthy life.
People will be more likely to adopt a healthy lifestyle, such as reducing their intake of Elaboration to
fast food, as they gain knowledge through watching related TV shows. example 3 (EEx3)
Thus, the media has a great influence in raising public awareness in terms of public Concluding Sentence
health. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.

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NOTES:
1. ubiquitous
2. sleep deprivation
3. prone to
4. cardiovascular disease
5. sedentary lifestyles

Last but not least, the government should strengthen laws and regulations to Topic Sentence (T)
improve public health. *SHORT &
STRAIGHTFORWARD.
Look at your THESIS
STATEMENT.
written there.
The government should implement stringent rules and regulations on the fast food Elaboration 1 (E1)
industry by imposing taxes on ultra-processed food and soft drinks to reduce the * Give the first
consumption of fast food, as it is considered to be the main cause of obesity. The
TOPIC SENTENCE.
government should also implement regulations related to alcohol and tobacco.
For example, the government can impose extra taxes on alcohol and tobacco products Example 1 (Ex1)
to increase their prices so that people will be less able to buy those products.
This is because overconsumption of alcohol and tobacco products can lead to serious Elaboration to
public health issues like cancer. example 1 (EEx1)
In addition, as environmental pollution is affecting public health, the government Elaboration 2 (E2)
should strengthen environmental laws to reduce pollution. * Give the second
TOPIC SENTENCE.

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For instance, forestry laws can slow down the deforestation process and reduce Example 2 (Ex2)
emissions of carbon dioxide. Carbon taxes should be implemented to reduce carbon
footprint and the emission of greenhouse gases.
This is because mass emissions of greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide have Elaboration to
exacerbated global warming and climate change, which are detrimental to public example 2 (EEx2)
health. The government should also strengthen regulations on proper disposal of waste
to reduce the irresponsible act of discharging waste into the river and prevent water
contamination. By strengthening environmental laws, pollution can be reduced and
this can ensure public health. If proper actions are not taken to reduce pollution, people
may be susceptible to diseases and illnesses like heart disease and lung cancer.
Hence, the government needs to strengthen laws and regulations to enhance public Concluding Sentence
health. *ONE SENTENCE.
Refer to your TOPIC
SENTENCE.
NOTES:
1. stringent rules
2. ultra-processed food
3. overconsumption
4. deforestation
5. emissions
6. exacerbated
7. detrimental
To conclude, various measures can be implemented to improve public health. Concluding Line(s)
topic

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I strongly agree that public health is becoming a serious issue in our country. Restate your stand /
Educational institutions, the media, and the government play significant roles in opinion
improving public health. &
Summarise your 3
points
Public health should be improved to reduce mortality and morbidity. This will ensure Hope / Suggestion
the sustainable development and prosperity of a nation.
NOTES:
1. mortality
2. morbidity

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Task 2
You attended a talk by a non-governmental agency, which was organised by the local town council. The following
comment was made by the speaker:
<Public health is becoming a serious problem in our nation.=
Write an essay suggesting ways to improve public health. Write at least 250 words.
PROBLEM-SOLUTION ESSAY
[60 marks]
Health is very important to ensure a normal and happy life. As the saying goes, "health is
Introduce the
better than wealth". Although we may have a lot of wealth, however, we will not be able to enjoy topic
our wealth without a healthy body. Recently, people are more aware of the topics related to public
health. In my opinion, I agree that public health is becoming a serious problem in our nation. The
Stand
increasing number of people suffering from obesity and diabetes has become a major concern in
developing countries like Malaysia. Obesity and being overweight lead to other health problems,
including coronary disease, diabetes, cancer, or even mental illness. The ways to improve public
health are through the role of education and the media to raise public awareness as well as the Thesis
role of the government to strengthen laws and regulations to improve public health. Statement
First and foremost, educational institutions play a vital role in educating the public about Topic Sentence
ways to improve public health. Physical education in schools that focuses on developing physical
E1
fitness among students can benefit students. Juvenile diabetes and other obesity-related illnesses
are becoming increasingly common among children and teenagers. Through physical education,
teachers can impart knowledge to students about ways to keep fit and healthy. For example, during Ex1
physical classes, students can engage in various physical activities like playing badminton and
football. This will help students burn deposited fat from their bodies and release the accumulated EEx1
stress due to study. Next, health awareness campaign can be launched in schools and universities
E2
nationwide that involves students, teachers, and parents. Many activities can be carried out during
the campaign. For instance, health educational materials or brochures can be distributed so that Ex2
parents or students can gain health knowledge by reading those materials. By doing so, health EEx2

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awareness among students and parents can be increased. Moreover, educational institutions can
E3
also launch several meetings that involve teachers and parents to introduce the concept of a healthy
lifestyle. During these meetings, teachers and parents will be exposed to the importance and ways
of living a healthy life. To illustrate, parents and teachers can broaden their spectrum of knowledge
Ex3
of unhealthy foods to avoid, such as junk food and fast food, as these foods frequently lead to a
EEx3
variety of health problems. As a result, teachers and parents will be able to inculcate health
awareness among their students. This will eventually improve public health. Therefore,
Concluding
educational institutions play an important role in improving public health. Sentence

Furthermore, the media plays an important role in raising public awareness about public Topic Sentence
health. The advent of the digital era and the ubiquitous internet enable the media to spread
E1
information easily. People can use digital devices like mobile phones to assess various types of
information through digital media, such as online newspapers. The media should be more
concerned about public health by spreading information about health as the media has become a
main channel of information for people. The media has a big influence on shaping people9s positive
attitude towards public health. The media can broadcast suitable programmes about health in order
to raise public awareness. For example, media should launch health promotion campaigns through Ex1
television, newspapers, and radio. A health promotion campaign should cover a variety of topics, EEx1
such as a balanced diet and exercise. Besides, articles on health should be published in newspapers E2
or health magazines so that readers can gain knowledge about health. For instance, through
Ex2
newspapers, people can read articles on the importance of having adequate sleep. This will raise
people9s awareness of the consequences of sleep deprivation, which causes them to be more prone EEx2
to cardiovascular disease. Newspaper articles on the effects of sedentary lifestyles can also raise
public awareness so that people will realise that physical inactivity is a silent killer. Additionally,
E3
television can be an effective channel to spread information on health. To illustrate, since people
Ex3
like to watch TV shows, health and lifestyle TV shows can raise public awareness about ways to
live a healthy life. People will be more likely to adopt a healthy lifestyle, such as reducing their EEx3
intake of fast food, as they gain knowledge through watching related TV shows. Thus, the media
Concluding
has a great influence in raising public awareness in terms of public health. Sentence

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Last but not least, the government should strengthen laws and regulations to improve
Topic Sentence
public health. The government should implement stringent rules and regulations on the fast-food
industry by imposing taxes on ultra-processed food and soft drinks to reduce the consumption of E1
fast food, as it is considered to be the main cause of obesity. The government should also
implement regulations related to alcohol and tobacco. For example, the government can impose
extra taxes on alcohol and tobacco products to increase their prices so that people will be less able Ex1
to buy those products. This is because overconsumption of alcohol and tobacco products can lead EEx1
to serious public health issues like cancer. In addition, as environmental pollution is affecting E2
public health, the government should strengthen environmental laws to reduce pollution. For
instance, forestry laws can slow down the deforestation process and reduce emissions of carbon Ex2
dioxide. Carbon taxes should be implemented to reduce carbon footprint and the emission of
greenhouse gases. This is because mass emissions of greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide have
exacerbated global warming and climate change, which are detrimental to public health. The
government should also strengthen regulations on proper disposal of waste to reduce the
irresponsible act of discharging waste into the river and prevent water contamination. By
EEx2
strengthening environmental laws, pollution can be reduced and this can ensure public health. If
proper actions are not taken to reduce pollution, people may be susceptible to diseases and illnesses
like heart disease and lung cancer. Hence, the government needs to strengthen laws and regulations Concluding
to enhance public health. Sentence
Concluding
To conclude, various measures can be implemented to improve public health. I strongly Line(s)
agree that public health is becoming a serious issue in our country. Educational institutions, the Restate
Stand/Opinion
media, and the government play significant roles in improving public health. Public health should
& Summarise 3
be improved to reduce mortality and morbidity. This will ensure the sustainable development and Points
prosperity of a nation. Hope/Suggestion

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-info- well-linked
Language & Organisation (L) -paragraphs have unity
MUET Band 5
CEFR Level C1
Important Notes!!!
1. juvenile diabetes 11. sedentary lifestyles

2. obesity-related illnesses 12. stringent rules
3. deposited fat 13. ultra-processed food
4. accumulated stress 14. overconsumption
5. spectrum of knowledge 15. deforestation
6. inculcate 16. emissions
7. ubiquitous 17. exacerbated
8. sleep deprivation 18. detrimental
9. prone to 19. mortality
10. cardiovascular disease 20. morbidity

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