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Alvarez, Andrea M. BACOMM 1-A

Technical Article

https://oese.ed.gov/2013/04/feature-writing-and-learning-in-the-digital-age-digital-is/

1 What is author’s aim?

The author’s aim is to tell the readers the effects of digital ate to the students and teachers

2 To what extent has this aim been achieved?

This aim has been achieved by putting all the knowledge and information needed to educate the
readers

3 What does this text add to the body of knowledge?

It helps the readers to understand the topic more

4. What relationship does it bear to other works in the field?

The digital age is very relatable to every work in the field, because almost everyone In this world
are using digital gadgets

5. What is missing/not stated?

The article didn’t state or enumerate the advantages and disadvantages of the digital age

6. How does this information fit into what you already know, use examples?
 I already know that most people nowadays are using digital gadget and upon reading the article
in made me understand its effect to people even more. For example, I already know that we also
use digitalization for school purposes, but after reading the article, it made me realize that there
are effects in using it.

7. How does the writer convince you that the information is valid?

With the surveys and other information they gathered from other people’s perspective I am
convinced that the article has enough information that I can rely on

8. Does the text present an argument?

Yes it does.

9. What changes would you make to the text?

I wouldn’t wanna change a thing in the text, it is enough for me to gather the information I need

10. What do you like about the text?

I like how it indicates the effect to both teachers and students

Technical text 2

https://medium.com/@niyajohn9495/short-article-about-technology-bebdea8736e1
1 What is author’s aim?

The text aim to give knowledge about the advance technology

2 To what extent has this aim been achieved?

Throughout the article from the beginning to end, the aim has been achieved and well
proposed.

3 What does this text add to the body of knowledge?

The text give an important role to the body of knowledge, because the exact thought are there.

4. What relationship does it bear to other works in the field?

Efficiency and quality have also been improved by technology in the manufacturing sector.

5. What is missing/not stated?

There are some information that hasn’t been stated in the article.

6. How does this information fit into what you already know, use examples?

it fits to what I already know because I only have little common knowledge about the technology
but this article helps me broadening my knowledge.

7. How does the writer convince you that the information is valid?

The writer convinced me that the information is valid because I can somehow relate to the
content of the article

8. Does the text present an argument?

No it doesn’t

9. What changes would you make to the text?

I would not change but I’d love to add some more information since it is a short article.

10. What do you like about the text?

A like how all the important information are included in the text.

Creative Text

Source: https://www.vedantu.com/english/speech-on-life

Life is a precious gift. It is the sum of one's work, journey, dreams, joys, sorrows, successes, and battles
for change. Life is more of a journey than a destination. It must be lived peacefully and happily. Seeking
the meaning and purpose of life is the biggest search in the life of a man, and the questions about the
meaning of human life are age-old. Life, however, still has some attractive elements, offering one a ray
of hope and positivity, each passing day.We have individuals, families, relatives, and friends who make
our lives unique, worth living, and make us feel that our lives are special. Our lives are challenging, but
those challenges are what make it worth living.
 1. What is the author’s aim?
The author’s aim is to give the reader a perspective about live, and what makes the life
worth living.
2. To what extent has this aim been achieved?

This aim has been achieved throughout the speech

3. What does this text add to the body of knowledge?

This text enlighten me to know more about life and how life become unique.

4. What relationship does it bear to other works in the field?

It makes people unite in every type of way and even in other field u can still find life
interesting
5. What is missing/not stated?
The downside of living life is not well stated and emphasized
6. How does this information fit into what you already know, use examples?
I have been very unmotivated lately and starting to think that there is no reason for me
to exist in this world enymore, but after reading the speech, I realized that even the
smallest thing in my life are what makes my life worth living.
7. How does the writer convince you that the information is valid?
I was enlightened by the speech made me convinced that the information is valid
8. Does the text present an argument?
Yes, it represents an argument of how good life was .
9. What changes would you make to the text?
I wouldn’t want to change anything.
10. What do you like about the text?
I like how it is convincing and encouraging.

Creative Text 2

Source: https://www.toppr.com/guides/speech-for-students/speech-about-friendship/#:~:text=True
%20friends%20always%20support%20each,and%20guide%20the%20right%20path.

Friendship is a divine relationship, which is beyond the definition of blood relations. It is the only relation
that is truly priceless. We may acquire all kinds of pleasures by putting our efforts. But even then life may
remain dull, without having someone to share our life with some true friends. It’s natural that human being
always tends to find emotional support and social life. In spite of having everything in life, we may remain in
a vacuum. It happens only when we have no such good friend to share our small and small happiness in life.
Friends are always there to listen to us unconditionally.

1. What is the author’s aim?

The author’s aim to let the readers know the true value of having a friend
2. To what extent has this aim been achieved?

The aim was achieved in the whole text and gave the best words to explain it vividly

3. What does this text add to the body of knowledge?

The text give an information of how valuable friendships are and also gave knowledge of
what a true friend should do.

4. What relationship does it bear to other works in the field?

In our lives we always need company and in any fields that we are in, this text is very
relatable to everyone.

5. What is missing/not stated?

The text is missing some other possible topics about friendship.

6. How does this information fit into what you already know, use examples?

I have always been careless when it comes to choosing the right friend for me, and this text
helped my knowledge and made me realize that I should be more cautious.

7. How does the writer convince you that the information is valid?

I am convinced by the text because it is relatable and the topic like this Is very broad and
everyone can really give an opinion about this.

8. Does the text present an argument?

Yes, its presents an argue about the true value of friendship

9. What changes would you make to the text?

None

10. What do you like about the text?

I like that this text explain more further the real meaning and the importance of having a
friend.