Shulraaksham : The Power Of Love, God And Devil

UPDATE - 1

Bahut samay pahle ki baat h jb bhagwaan prakat hue the to bahut

jyada matraa mai urja utpaan Hui thi .
Us samay aisa lag rha tha ki hajaaro sury Uday or ast ho rhe ho
chaaron taraf itna ujala fail gya tha ki use dekhna to door uske
paas khade rahna bhi kisi k bas ki baat nhi thi .
kaafi samay tak vo ujala lagataar badta rha achanak usne ek
aakiriti ka roop le liya par use dekh paana kisi k bas ki baat nhi thi
kyonki us mai se lagataar prakash utpaan ho rha tha .
Dhire dhire vo prakaash thoda thoda kam hota gya or vo aakiriti
thodi thodi samajh aane lagi .
kuch samay pashchat vo prakash itna kam ho gya ki us aakiriti ko
pahchana jaa sake halanki usme se prakaash nikalna abhi bhi band
nahi hua thaa par us aakiriti ko aasani se dekha or pahchana jaa
sakta tha .
vo aakiriti or kisi ki nhi OM shabd ki thi Jo ki prakat Hui thi .
ye shabd ek aisi chij thi Jo ki is brahmaand mai sabse pahle
uttpaan hui thi yahi shabd ham sab k hone ka karan h isi shabd se
saari srishty ka nirmaan juda hua h .

Kafi samay pashchat OM shabd mai halchul honi shuru ho gyi usme
se itni matra mai tarange or prakash nikalne laga ki us roshni se
pura brahmand prakashit hone laga .
brahmand ka aisa koi bhi hissa nhi tha Jo ki is roshani ke prabhav
se achuta rha ho puri srishty prakashmay ho gyi thi har taraf ajib
si takat failne lagi thi .
ek taraf jha us shabd se nikalne vaale prakash ne sb kuch
prakashmay kiya hua tha vahi dusari taraf usse nikalne vaali
tarango ne har taraf halchul machayi huyi thi .
Dhire dhire vo shabd aapna aakar badalne laga or uski aakiriti mai
changes aane lage .
vo aakiriti kisi ka roop dharan karne lagi us doran vo tarange or vo
prakash badane lage .
kafi samay take vo prakiriya chalti rahi or kuch samay pashchat us
 aakiriti me kisi ka roop le liya .
ye koi or nahi ye................

UPDATE - 2

ye chehra tha aadhe purush or aadhi naari ka. Ye koi or nahi

bhagwaan ARDHNARISHWER hi the .
Vo aankhe band kiye hue dhayan me magn the. Unke sharir se
bahut jyada matra mai prakash nikal rha tha .

Kahte h jaha achai panapti h vaha burai panapne mai samay nhi
lagta .
jaaha ek taraf eshwer prakat hue the vhi dusri taraf kahi ghor
andhera chaya hua tha vha jaise hi eshwer k prakat karne waali
pahuchati h vo us ghane andhere mai kuch samay ujaala kar deti h
parantu vo andhera us urja or rashni ko nigal jaata h .
kuch samay pashchaat vha kaala dhua nikalne lagta h vo dhua itna
gahra hota h ki us mai kisi bhi prakar ki roshni ka vajood hi khatam
ho jaaye .
vo dhua dhire dhire gol gol ghumne lagta h aise ghumte hua vo dhua
black hole ki tarah dikh raha tha aisa lag raha tha ki jaise ye black
hole sab kuch nigal jaayega. Kaafi samay tak vo dhua aise hi
ghumta rha phir ghumte ghumte vo aapna aakar or aakiriti badalne
lagta h or kifi samay tak aisa hi hota h fir kuch samay paschat vo
ek bahut hi khatarnaak aakiriti ka roop le leta h .
ye aakiriti sir se lekr kamar tak insaan ki tarah dikhti thi or baaki
kisi keede ki tarah dikhane lagi .
vo manjaar itna bhayavah tha ki koi bhi dar k maare vahi bahosh ho
jaaye .
uska rang ekdum kaala hota h bilkul us dhue ki tarah aisa isliye tha
kyo ki vo Abhi bhi purntaya dhue k baadlo se hi ghira hua tha. Uski
bhi aankhe band hoti h or jaise hi vo apni aankhe kholta h vo pahle
bilkul kaali hoti h parantu eshwaria shakti nigalne ki vajah se vo ek
dum laal ho jaati h .
aap khud imagine kijiye ki jab ghor andhere mai kaaale ghane
baaadlo k bich sirf do laal aankhe dikhayi de to kaise lagta hoga.
 Ye koi or nahi balki SHAITAAN tha Jo ki eshwaria urja KO nigal
kar prakat hua tha .
shaitaan ne kaafi samay take apne aas paas har taraf dekha to use
dur kahi se roshani aati najar aane lagi uske chahre par halki halki
shaitaani hasi aa jaati h. fir vo rroshani aani band ho jaati h. Ab
shaitaan shaitaani hasi hasne lagta h or jis taraf se roshani aa rhi
thi us taraf badne lagta h.........

UPDATE - 3

Jahaan ek taraf shaitaan aage bad rha tha vhi dusri taraf aardh
narishwar se nikalne vaali roshani ab bahut kam ho gayi thi .
unka ek sharir ab do aalag aalag shariro mai bat chuka tha .
ek sharir purush ka tha or ek sharir atyant sundar strii ka tha .
ek shiv ka sharir tha to dusra shakti ka tha .
vo dono aaps mai baate kar the.
Shakti : swami mere man main ek ichcha umadi h
Shiv : kahe priye kya ichcha paida huyi h aapke man main
Shakti : swami kyon na ham mil k srishti kaa nirmaan ka nirmaan
kare aapni rachnatmak shaktiyon ko mila kar
Shiv : priye aap ka vichar to aati uttam h parantu isme ek samasya
h
Shakti : vo kya h swami
Shiv : priye hum apni rachnatmak shaktiyo se srishti kaa nirmaan to
kar denge parantu uska santulan banay rakhane k liye hame dusre
devtaon ki jaroorat hogi or saath hi Saath

Iske aage shiv kuch kahte unhe kuch ajib sa mahsoos hone lagta h .
unhe door kahi se kaafi matra mai andhera or kaale baadal unki
taraf aate hue dikhai Dene lagte h .
ye andhera or baadal apne saamne aane vaali har chij ko nigalne
lagta h .
ye koi or nahi shaitaan hi tha jo jaha bhi jaata tabahi machata sab
kuch tahas nahas kar deta .
Jab vo shiv shakti k pass pahuchata h to uski najar shakti pe padti
h or uske man mai kaam bhavna jaag jaati h un ka yovaan or
 sondarya dekh kar .
vo puri tarah se un par mohit ho jaata h .
uske sochane samajhne ki taakat khatam ho jaati h or yahi vo
sabse badi galti kar baithta h .
vo unhe kisi bhi keemat par paana chahta h or vo apni isi chahta ko
pura karne k liye kuch bhi karne KO taiyaar ho jaata h .
vahi dusri taraf shiv or shakti jab use dekte h to pahle to unhe vo
bada ajib or bahut hi vahiyaat laga par unhe use dekhkar acha laga
.
undone be socha chalo acha hua srishti k nirmaan mai madad karne
k liye koi to mila .
Shiv : manyvr aap kon ho or yha kya kar rhe ho
Shaitan( ST) : main shaitan hu andhere se paida hua hu ab tum
btao kon ho tum Dino
Shiv : mai shiv hu or ye h meri bharya shakti hum dono mil k
srishti ka nirmaan karna chahte h yadi aap ko ruchi ho to aap bhi
hamara saath de
ST: haan mai bhi srishti ka nirmaan chahta hu
Shiv : to fir aao mil k srishti ka nirmaan kare .
ST : main srishti ka nirmaan chahta hu par tumhare saath mil k
nahi balki is sundari ka saath mil k main tumhe smapt karke ise
aapna bnaunga

Shaitan k itna kahne matr se hi shakti ko itna krodh aa jaata h ki

vo aav dekhti h na taav sidha ek roshani ka tej gola shaitan k uper
phenk k maarti h .
Ye sab itni jaldi ho jaata h ko shaitan KO sambhalne ka samay hi
nahi milta or jaise hi gola use takraata h uske sharir mai ek bahut
bad a ched ban jaata h parantu kyoki vo kaafi matra mai roshani
nigal k andhera failaa chuka tha isliye uska ghav jaldi bhar jaata h
or Jo urja uske sharir se roshani takraane se paida Hui thi vo unse
thodi upr uth kar antriksh mai ikkathi honi shuru ho gayi

UPDATE - 4

Vo roshani safeed se laal ho jaati h or antriksh mai ek gol gol

 ghumta hua chakra bnaati h .
Abhi shaitan kuch samajh paata tb tk shiv or shakti apne
ardhnarishwar roop mai aa jaate h jis k kaaran shaitan bhi ek baar
chonk jaata h lakin vo jaldi hi sambhal bhi jaata h or apni puri
taakat or shaktiyo kaa istemaal karne lag jaata h jis ki vajah se
ladai bahut hi bhayankar roop dharan kr leti h .
jaise jaise un dono ki shaktiyaan aapas mai takarati h vaise vaise
kaafi maatraa mai power release hoti h jis kaaran urja k us laal
gole kaa aakaar badalne lagta h or vo golaa kaafi bada ban jaata h
har taraf bus laal roshani failne lagti h puraa brahamand laal ho
jaata h vahi shaitan or bhagvaan ki ladai bahut hi ugr roop le leti h
unhe apne aas paas ho rhe in badalaon k baare mai kuch ptaa bhi
nahi chalta h vo to bus ek dusre ko haraane mai lage hua the .
parantu unki ladai kaa koi ant najaar hi nahi aa rha tha ek taraf
jahaan shaitan mai jhoot fareb or andhere ki taakat thi to vahi
bhagwaan k paas sachai vishwaas or sabse badi roshani ki taakat
thi .
ye ladai kaafi Yugo tak chalti rahi parantu iskaa koi ant najaar hi
nahi aa rha tha .
shaitan aapni puri koshish kr rha tha bhagwaan ko haraane ki
parantu vo safal nahi ho paa rha tha dhire dhire shaitan apna
sayam kho baithta h jis kaaran vo aapni shaktiyon kaa sahi se
istemaal nahi kar paata or vo haar jaata h jab shakti kaa ek bahut
bada punj usse takartaa h or vo achet Awastha mai aa jaata h jis
ka fayadaa utha kr bhagwaan uske liye ek alag duniyaa ka nirmaan
kr dete h or shaitan ko vha band kar dete h or us duniyaa ko ek
power barial se band kar dete h .
is barial se aap ander to jaa sakte h parantu vapas nahi aa sakte .
is barial ko sirf ek praani hi tod sakta h jiske paas achai or burai
Dono ki taakat ek saath ho or jo bahut hi jayada powerful ho ek
acha or nek dil hone k saath buraa or krur swabhav vaala prani .
ek taraf jaha shaitan kaid ho jaata h vahi dusari or vo laal gola
itna bada ho jaata h jaise sury se karado arbo gunaa bada .
jb shiv or shakti ka dhayaan us gole pe padta h tb unhe uski
shaktiyo kaa pta chalta h vo shaktiyaan lagbhag bhagwaan or
shaitan dono k barabar rhi parantu vo shaktiya vinash se utpaan
 Hui thi jis kaaran vo saari shaktiyaan vinashkaari thi jis vajah se
unko srishti k nirmaan mai istemaal nahi kar sakte the or in
shaktiyon k antriksh mai hone ki vajah se vha jivaan possible nahi
tha

UPDATE - 5

Bhale hi in shaktiyon mai shaitaan or bhagwaan dono ka ansh tha

parantu is par andhere ka prabhav jyada tha is kaaran ham inhe
nirmaan ka kaam mai istemaal tabhi kar sakte the jb inhe koi
majboot aadhar mil jaata h .
Bhagwaan shiv ko is baat kaa aabhas ho jaata h isliye vo bhi chintit
ho jaate h .
vahi dusri duniya mai jb shaitaan ko hosh aata h to vo khud ko alag
jagah paata h to vo samajh jaata h ki vo yudh haar chuka h or use
kisi dusari jagah bhej diya gya h .
vo vha se bahar nikalne ka raasta khojne lagta h parantu jaise hi vo
us barial k paas pahuchta h to koi aadrishya deewar uska raasta
rok leti h vo chah kar bhi use paar nahi kar paata .
isse shaitaan aag babula ho jaata h or vo aapne hat taraf tabahi
macha deta h har chij KO jala deta vo aapni shaktiyon ka prayog us
deewar par bhi karta h parantu koi farak nahi padta .
aant mai pareshaan ho kar vo ye dekhne ki koshish karta h ki shiv
or shakti kya kar rhe h jha use bhi vo gola dhikhta h or vo uski
taakat ko mahsoos kar leta h .
ab vo sochta h ki kis tarah se vo in shaktiyon ko prapt kare
achanak uske dimaag mai ek plan soojhta h or uske chahre pe evil
smile aa jaati h .
Ab shaitaan apni aankhe band karke kuch mantra padta h or jaise
hi uske mantra khatam hote h vha bhut jyada matra mai dhua
uthta h or uski sabse khatarnaak shaktiyaan prakat hoti h jo ki ek
saanp k roop mai hoti h vo us saanp ko aagya deta h ki vo us gole
ko apne aander sama le or shaitaan k paas le aaye vo uska order
maan leta h parantu isme ek rukavat thi or vo thi vo adrishya
deewar jise koi shataini shakti paar nahi kar sakti thi .
ab shaitaan pareshaan ho jaata h or sochne lagta h ki us deewar ko
kaise paar kiya jaaye .
achanak use ek idea soojhta h or vo aapni samast bachi hui
shaktiyaan bhi ikkathaa karta h or us deewar pe maar deta h jisse
deewar pe koi khaas farak nahi padta parantu usme ek crack aa
jaata h or vo saanp bhi mokaa dekh k us crack se hote hua bahar
chala jaata h .
or vahi dusri taraf........

UPDATE – 6 (MEGA UPDATE)

Or vahi dusari taraf bhagwaan shiv is chinta mai dube hue the ki
kaise is shakti ko kaabu mai kiya jaye .
Jiske liye vo saadhana mai leen ho jaate h or is problem ka solution
dhundhne lagte h .
vahi vo prakaash badta hi jaa rha or aapne raaste mai aane vaali
har ek chij ko tabah kar rha tha jise dekh k shakti ko chintta
satane lagti h ki yadi is prakaash ko naa roka gya or kisi chij se
naa baandha gya to srishti kaa nirmaan karya kabhi poora nahi ho
payega .
Ek taraf vo shaktiyon kaa gola baadta hi jaa rha tha vahi dusari
taraf shaitaan ki bheji hui shaatani shaktiya bhi saanp k roop mai
raingte hue usi gole ki taraf bad rahi thi jiska andaaja bhagwaan
shiv ko ho jaata h or vo yog saadhana se bahar aa jaate h unke
chahre par muskaan aa jaati h jise dekh kr shakti achanbhit ho
jaati h or vo bhgwaan shiv swe puchti h
Shakti - Swaaami kya baat h aap muskura kyo rhe h jabki yaha ye
shaktiya bekaabu hoti jaa rahi h .
Shiv - priye tumhe shaitaan to taad hi hoga jise hamne dusri
duniya bmai band kiya tha .
Shaitaan kaa naam sun k shakti ko krodh aane lagta h or hairaani k
bhav unke chahre par aa jaate h
Shakti - haan swami yaad h kyo kya hua aap us dusht kaa jikr kyo
kr rhe h .
Shiv - ( Muskuraate hue ) priye use is aseem taakat kaa andaaja
ho gya h or usne is taakat ko paane k liye aapni saabse khatarnaak
or prabhav shaali shaktiyo ko bhejaa h jo ki bahut hi shaktishaali h
 .
Shakti - (Thoda krodhit hote hue) vo dushat us duniyaa se vo
aadrishay diwaar tod k vaapis aa gya koi baat nahi is baar use puri
tarah se khatam kar denge ab use koi nahi bacha sakta .
Shiv - shaant priye shant pahle poori baat to sun lo vo abhi us
deewar se bahaar nahi aaya h balki usne aapni shaktiyo ko yaha
bhejaa h us gole ki shaktiyon ko paane k liye .
Shakti - par bina us deewaar ko tode uski shaktiyaan bahaar kaise
aa gayi .
Shiv - priye usne aapni saari shaktiyaan laga kar us deewaar mai
draar daal di h jis kaaraan uski shaktiyaan saanp kaa roop dharan
kar k bahaar aayi h parantu ek aachi baat ye bhi h ki aab vo
shaitaan itna kamjoor ho gya h ki vo us deeewaar ko tod kar vaapas
nahi aa sakta h ab use aapni shaktiyaan badane k liye in aasim
taakto ki jaarurat h isiliye usne aapni sabse shatir or khatarnaak
shaktiyo ka istemaal kiya h inhe uske paas le jaane k liye .
Shakti - (Thoda chintit hote hue) ye chintaa kaa vishay h aap is
tarah muskura kyo rahe h .
Shiv - vo tumhe thodi der baad pata chal jaayega chodo in baato
ko or jaldi se ek chumbaan de do aab intejaar nahi hota .
Shakti - (thoda sharmaate hue ) aap ko to har wakt masti hi sujhti
rahti h
Shiv - ab tum is srishati ki ek matr aurat ho or mai ek maatr mard
to mai tumse masti nahi karungaa to kis se karungaa or vaise bhi
tum meri aardhangini ho ‘
Or ye kah kar shiv shakti k nikat aapne hont le jaate h vahi shakti
ka chahraa ek dum surkh laal pad jaata h or dhire -2 unki aankhe
band ho jaati h or vo dona gahre chumbaan mai doob jaate h .
jaise hi unke hont aapas mai milte h unke sharir se ek bahut hi tej
rooshani nikalne lagti h jise vo gole ki shaktiyaan aapne aander
khichne lagti h .
vahi shiv or shakti aapni prem krida me magn ho jaate h .
(Dosto prem kridaa se aap matlab samajh hi gye hoonge ye vo
sambandh h jo ek pati or patni k bich hota h )

Vahi dusari taraf shaitaan dwara bhejaa gya saanp us gole k kaafi
 najdeek aa jaata jiska ahsaas bhagwaan shiv ko ho jaata h or vo
shakti se kuch kahte h jiske baad vo dono ardhnarishwar roop mai
aa jaate h .
Jaise hi vo saanp us gole k paas pahuchta h uska aakaar bad jaata
h or vo samast shakti k gole ko aapne ander samahit kr leta h .
pahle to vo normal rahta h par dhire dhire usme parivartan aana
shuru ho jaata h .
Uska aakar normal ho jaata or uska colour bhi black se red ho
jaata or un shaktiyon k karan vo chamkane lagta h .
kuch hi der mai shaktiyan uske aander activate ho jaati h lakin vo
itni jyada hoti h ki vo unhe sambhal nahi paata or vo out of control
ho jaata vo aapna is duniya mai aane ka maksad bhi bhool jaata h
or out of control hokar har taraf tabaahi machaane lagta h .

Bhagwaan shiv ko is baat ka aandaaja pahle se hi ho gya tha isiliye

unhone ye baat shakti ko batayi or unhe aardhnarishwar roop mai
aane ko kaha .
aardhnaarishwar roop mai aate bhagwaan shiv shakti ko apna plan
btate h or vo donao aapni shaktiya ek jagah par kandrit karne lagte
h .
Jab unki shaktiyan ek jagah par kandrit ho jaati h to vo vo dono
aapni aankhe kholte h or unki shaktiyon ka gola ban k unke sharer
se bahar nikalta h or unke saamne prakat ho jaata h .
Parantu ab samasya ye thi ki in shaktiyon ko kisi chij k aander
daalna jaroori tha nahi to vo saanp is gole ko bhi nigal jaata .
Parantu shiv ne is samasya ka bhi hal dhund rakha tha vo aapna
trishul aage karte h or apni teesari aankh khol dete h usme se kuch
kirne nikalti h jo ki us shakti k gole or trishul mai chali jaati h ji k
kaaran vo dono ek dusre ki taraf khichte chale jaate or dekhte hi
dekhte vo shaktiyon kaa gola trishul k aander chala jaata h or vo
trishul poora safed ho jaata h or usme se safed roshani nikalne
lagti h .
Vahi dusri taraf vo saaanp tabaahi machaate hue aardhnarishwar k
paas pahuch jaata h or vo unhe samapt karne k iraade se un par
vaar karne lagta h parantu uske sab vaar khali chale jaate h kyoki
vo baar baar har jagah se gayab ho rhe the isi tarah ye ladayi
 chalti rahti h kyoki us saanp ko khatam karna ab namumkin tha un
shaktiyon ki vajah se to shiv vo trishul achanak saanp k saamne
prakat hokar us par chala dete h .
Vo trishul hawa mai udta hua us saanp k dimag mai jaa lagta h jisse
uska dimag nasht ho jaata h or vo tadpne lagta h .
Ant mai saanp tadpte tadpte us trishul se lipat jaata h or shant ho
jaata h .
Uske shant hote hi trishul se chamakdaar roshani nikalti h or vo
saanp k aander chali jaati h jisse us k ander ka shaitaan shant ho
jaata h or vo puri tarah se trishul se jud jaata h dono ki shaktiyan
aapas mai mil jaati h .
Jis k kaaran trishul kaa rang bhi laal hone lagta h or vo dono saath
saath jude hue chamakne lagte h .
Is tarah se brahmand k sabse shaktishaali hathiyaar ka nirmaan
hota h .
Bhagwaan shiv or shakti dur khade ye najara dekh rahe the or
jaise hi us hathiyaar ka nirmaan hota h to shakti unhe ise srishti
nirmaan mai istemaal karne ko kahti h .
parantu bhagwaan shiv unhe mana kar dete h or kahte h
Shiv - ye aastre ham na to ham istemaal kar sakte h or naa hi
shaitaan ye sirf vahi istemaal kar sakega jo is par kaabu paayega
or aisa sirf vo hi kar sakega jo paapi bhi ho punyatma bhi matlab
jiske dil mai daya shama prarthna k saath saath kaam krodh lobh
moh ityadi jaisi bhavnaaye ho .
Jisne paap or punya saman matraa mai kiye ho .
Shakti - parantu swami ham kisi ko itni aasani se is tak nahi
pahuchane de sakte h
Shiv - tum thik kahti ho priye hame is jagah ko kisi portal k
aander rakhna hoga or is ki suraksha k liye pahredaar banana hoga
jise shaktiya is aastre se mile .
Or dekhte hi dekhte shiv or shakti dono apni shaktiyon ka prayog
karke ek bhul bhulaiya taiyaar karte h or us aastre ko uuske bicho
bich rakh dete h .Is bhul bhulaiya k alag alag charan hote h or har
ek charan mai alag alag khatra hota h .
or sabse aakhri charan mai ek pahredaar ko banaya jaata jo kaafi
saari shaktiyan us aastre se grahan karta h .
 Aant mai is sampurn jagah or is bhul bhulaiya ko ek portal dwara
band kiya jaata h or shiv shakti nishchint hokar srishti kaa nirmaan
karte h .

CHARACTER INTRODUCTION

Hero - Vishal Chauhan

Ye dikhne mai to kisi Hollywood hero se kam nahi tha parantu isne
apni personality ko normal Indian person ki tarah banay rakha tha .
ye apni life mai true love ka intejaar kr rha tha .
ye dil khol k jine vaala insaan tha .
iske saath saath iski ek baat ye bhi thi ki ye bahut hi moody insaan
tha iske sab kaam iske mood pe depend karte the .
ise chahe koi bhi kaam bol do lakin ye time pe naa kar ke apne
mood k hisaab se karta tha .
ye apni life ko serious na le k apne hisaab se karta tha .
iski height 5’11” age 21 yr (study - engg last year) body kaafi
bhari hui ek gaon k ladke ki tarah .
ye basically SIRMOUR (Himachal Pradessh) me ek chote se gaon ka
rahne vaala tha jo ki apne chote bhai k saath shahar mai aaya tha
apni study puri karne k liye .

Hero’s Brother - Robin Chauhan

Inki age 18 year height 6 feet tall and handsome personality with
six pack ye apne bhai se bilkul alag h .
ek taraf jha inke bhai sahab apni body ki bilkul care nahi karte h
dusari taraf ye apni body kaa pura dhyan rakhte h .
flirting k maamle mai to ye pure ustaad h kisi bhi ladki se flirt
karke ye use convence karna achi tarah se jaanta h .
ye apni life mai maje lene k saath saath use seriously bhi leta h jis
vajah vajah se ye sabhi ka favourite bana hota h .
sabhi ise pasand karte h iske majakia nature ki vajah se .
ye lagataar apne bhai se ladta jhagdata rahta h kyonki iska bhai
kabhi serious nahi hota na apni life k liye na hi parents k liye na hi
study k liye.
 Mosera bhai - Hitesh chandana (shanu)
Ye usi shahar mai rahta h apni family k saath .
inka apna makaan hota h or apna hero inke makaan mai rent pe
rahta h ye bhi like happy go lucky person ki tarah h jiske pass
paisa bhi h or vo use dhang se udata bhi rahta h .
iske dimaag mai khurafaati ideas jyada aate h .
ise ladkiyon k saath flirting ka itna chaska h ki is bande ne shahar
ki 100 mai se 80 ladkiyon ko propose kiya h halanki un sabne ise
reject kiya h fir bhi is insaan ne 3 – 3 girlfriends ko maintain kiya
hua h .
Age 20 year par 3 baar fail hone ki vajah se ye mahapurush 11th
class mai pad rhe h .
Inki body kisi hero se kam nahi h like mascular body but inki hight
just 5’7” h jis vajah se mostly girls inhe reject kr deti h.

So frnds ye h story k main characters from hero side now ab aate

h heroin ki taraf but heroin kaa naam mai aapko baad mai bataunga
jb heroin ki story mai entry hogi .
tb tak in short heroin ki family ka description ye rha

YAMRAAJ - God of Death

Father of heroin

Suchitra - Wife of Mr. Yamraaj

Mother of heroin

GOD Shani - heroin k mama

Other characters from heroin side or Devlok side

Brahm Dev
Vishnu dev
Maha Dev
Devraaj Indra
Chitragupta – Yamraaj accountant

UPDATE– 1 (MEGA UPDATE)

 (AT YAMLOK)
Aaj yamlok mai kafi tension vaala maahol bana hua tha .
har ek devta pareshan tha sab devi devta yamlok mai upasthit
the .
Devraaj Indra se lekar Agni dev varun dev shani dev surya dev or
to yaha tak ki svayam yamlok k swami yamraaj bhi tension mai
idhar udhar tahal rhe the .In sab ki chinta ka karan tha yam
dharmraaj ki patni jo ki garbhvati thi or kabhi bhi santaan ko janm
de sakti thi .
Surya dev yamraaj k pita hone k kaaran unhe dhiraaj rakhne ki
salah de rhe the or vaha khade sabhi devtaa unka samarthan kar
rhe the .
Parantu ek pita ki pareshani ko to aap sab jaante hi honge vo
chaahe insaan ho ya Devta pita ka santaan k janm k samay
pareshan hona lajmi hi h .

Yaha jaha ektaraf sab devta yamraaj ka dhiraj bada rahe the vahi
sabhi deviyaa yamraaj ki patni k saath unke kaksh mai thi or vo
unhe dhiraj bandha rahi thi devlok k special doctor dhanvanrari ki
patni unki dilivary kar rahi thi, jaise jaise bachche k janam ka
samay najdeek aa rha tha vaise vaise unka dard badta jaa rha tha
or vo dard k maare or jyada chilla rahi thi unki chillane ki aawaj se
sabhi deviyaa baichain ho rhi thi unhe kuch anisht hone ka dar sata
rha tha .
devlok or yamlok dona taraf pareshani ka maahol bana hua tha .
(AT EARTH OR PRITHVILOK)
Jaha ek taraf devlok or yamlok mai maahol serious bna hua tha
vahi dusari taraf prithvilok Himachal Pradesh k Sirmour distic k ek
village k kisi ghar mai same aisa hi mahol bana hua tha .
us ghar k bahar bhi gaon k logo ki bhid lagi hui thi. Gaon ki kuch
aurte us ghar k ek kamre mai baar baar ander bahar jaa rhi thi .
har taraf pareshani ka aalam tha sab k chehre pe pareshani saaf
jhalak rahi thi khas taur pe us ghar k mukhiya k chehre par .
vo baar baar us kamre ki taraf dekh rha tha yadi koi mahila bahar
aati to vo unse baar aander ka haal puchte the .
 Mr. Kalyaan Singh - Hero’s father
(inke baare mai ek baat bta du ye bahut hi khushmijaaj kism k
insaan h or dil k bahut hi ache h ye bhole bhale insaan h jo sabka
acha hi sochte h haalanki ye uneducated person h parantu fir bhi
aapni ek bahut badi parchun ki shop chalaate h or inki shop bahut
achi chal rhi h gaon mai kaafi ijjat h sabhi log inka aadar karte h )
Ye gaon ek aisa gaon h jaha k log har dukh sukh mai ek dusre ka
saath nibhaate h chahe kissi k ghar mai shaadi ho chahe koi
function ya fir koi maatam sab k sab gaon vaale us insaan k ghar
pe khushi k moke pe madad karne or dukh mai usko dhiraj
bandhaane jaroor jaate the .
Tabhi to kalyaan singh k ghar pe bhi itni bhid jama thi kyonki uski
patni bhi garbhvati thi use kabhi bhi bachcha paida ho sakta tha
vaha us samay koi doctor uplabdh nahi tha isliye gaon ki bujurg
aurte dilivary karvaa rahi thi .
( Ab aapko ghar k baare mai bhi bta du or gharvaalo k baare mai
bhi .

Ghar kaafi bada h do manjila ghar h or do taraf bana h ek taraf

jaha lakadi kaa pushtaini makaan h vahi dusari taraf cement se bna
makaan dono makaano ki side jo ki dono ko milaati h us mai bahut
hi kam space choda gya h bahar ek bahut bada aangan h .
lakadi k makaan mai 6 kamre 1st storey pe or 6 kamre 2nd storey
pe h jabki cement k makaan mai 1st floor pe 3 kamre or ek bada
sa hall tha or 2nd floor mai 3 kamre ek chota hall or ek kitchen
h .
Chaliye ye to hua makaan ka introduction ab aapko thoda family
members k baare mai bhi bta dete h
Mrs. Sunita devi - hero’s mother
Thakur pradeep chauhan - Mama (chote vaale)
Thakur rajender chauhan - Mama (bade vaale)
Thakur raghuveer singh chauhan - chachaji
Thakur Sunder singh chauhan - tauji
Vipin chauhan - tauji ka beta or bada bhai Hero se just 2 – 3
mahine bada
Inke paas paiso ki kami nahi h khetibaadi se achi kamai ho jaati h
 iske alava tauji contractor h
Ye log jamindaar family se belong karte h
Ye tha family intro ab aate h story pe)

(LOCATION CHANGE - AT YAMLOK)

Udhar yamlok mai pareshani ka maahol badta jaa rha tha .
jaise jaise dilivary ka samay najdeek aa rha tha maharani ka dard
badta jaa rha tha vo or jyada chilla rahi thi .
Achanak hi unke muh se ek chikh nikal padi or vo shant ho gyi jaise
hi vo shant hui vaise hi ek bachche ki rone ki aawaj sunai padi or
bachche k rone k saath hi ek tej roshani charo or bikhar gyi jis
vajah se sab kuch palo k liye aandhe ho gye kisi ko kuch dikhai nahi
de rha tha .
Prakash itna jyada tej tha jisse samast brahamand prakashit ho
rha tha sab taraf sirf roshani hi roshani de rahi thi sab k sab
pareshan the ki itani roshani kaha se aayi .
(LOCATION CHANGE – AT EARTH)
Jis samay yamlok main ek bachche ka janam hua thik usi samay
prithvilok mai bhi ek bachche ka janam hua or achanak hi bachche k
rone k saath hi ek tej roshani chamki jisne samast brahmand ko
prakashit kar diya sabhi ek pal k liye aandhe ho gye kisi ko kuch
samajh nahi aa rha tha ki ye kya ho rha h khud Thakur Kalyaan
singh chauhan ji bhi pareshaan the ki vo sab aandhe kaise ho gye .
Door kahi kisi or brahamand mai kisi or galaxy mai jaha har taraf
hariyaali hi hariyaali thi achanak hi bachcho k rone ki aawaj sunai
di jis vajah se har taraf roshani hi roshani failane lagi .
vo roshani us galaxy k bicho bich se nikal rahi thi or is samay
samast brahamaand ko prakashit kiye hue thi vaha usi brahamand k
bicho bich kisi jeev ne aankhe kholi jis vajah se puri galaxy mai
bhukamp aa gaya .
koi bhi chij un bhukamp k jhatko se achuti naa rahi chahe prithvilok
ho ya brahamlok chahe patallok ho ya yamlok har taraf bhukamp k
jhatke lagne lage. Har ek jeev vo chahe manushya ho jaanvar chahe
dev ho yaa danav sab k sab dar k maare thar thar kaampne lage vo
bhukamp k jhatke itne khatarnaak the ki unki vajah se us galaxy
mai bhi kafi graho ka vinaash hua .
 Udhar jaise hi bhukamp se samast duniya ghabraane lagi tridev jo
ki saadhna mai leen the unke netra aapne aap hi khul gye or vo
vaha se gayab ho gye .
udhar yamlok mai samast devta pareshaan the ki ye sab kya ho rha
h, kaise ho rha h or kyo ho rha h .
bhukamp ab shant ho chuka tha or vo prakash bhi jaa chuka tha
sabhi devta pareshaan the yaha tak ki sawaym yam dhamraaj bhi
pareshaan the .
Tabhi vaha tridev prakat hote h sabhi unhe pranam karte h .
Or is bhukamp ka or tej roshani ka karan puchte h .
Tridev k chahre pe ek muskaan aa jaati h or vo sabse pahle yam
dharmraaj ko baap banne ki badhai dete h .
tabhi sab devtao or yamraaj ko yaad aata h ki bachche kaa janam
ho chuka h sabhi devta yam dharmraaj ko badhai dete h tabhi
deviyaa bahar aati h or yamdharmraaj ko ladki k paida hone ki
suchna deti h or unhe baap banne ki badhai deti h .
jo mahol pahle hairaani or pareshaani ka tha vo ab khushi mai badal
gya tha .
sabhi bahut khush the .
yamraaj jaldi se ander jaate or unke piche piche tridev or baaki
devta bhi ander aa jaate h yamraaj sabse pahle aapni patni ko
milte h or fir aapni beti ko goad mai utha lete h or pyar se
puchkarne lagte h .
uske baad vo aapni beti ko aapne pita surya dev ki goad mai de
dete h or uske baad shani dev ki goad mai sabhi bahut khush the .
shani dev se brahmadev bachchi ko apni goad mai le lete h or uska
bhavishya dekhne ki koshish karte h parantu vo dekh nahi paate h .
jis vajah se unke chahre k bhav badalne lagte h to yamraaj iska
kaaran puchte h to vo kahte h ki vo is ladki ka bhavishya nahi dekh
paa rhe h to sabhi devtao ka muh khula ka khula rah jaata h vo sab
iska karan puchte h to bhagwaan shiv unhe batate h jise sun k
sabke chahre pahle khil uthte h parantu baad mai sab soch mai pad
jaate h .
Bahgwaan shiv unhe btate h ki ye koi mamuli dev kanya nahi h iska
sambandh duniya k sabse khatarnaak hathiyaar h .
to devta puchte h aisa kon saa hathiyaar h to bhagwaan shiv kahte
 h SHULSARPAM .Ye shabd sun k sab k sab hairaan ho jaate h or
uns puchte h ki kya ye hi SHULSARPAM ki dharak
SHULRAAKSHAM h , to bhagwaan shiv unhe btate h ki ye dharak
nahi h parantu ye usse judi hui h uski kuch shaktiyaan iske adhin
rahegi .
Sabhi devtao k chahre is bat se khil uthte h parantu bhagwaan shiv
aisa kuch kahte h jise sunkar sab devtao ki khushi pal bhar mai
khatam ho jaati h or vha pareshaani janam le leti h .

Bhagwaan Shiv - Shulsarpam ki shaktiyaan jaag chuki h jis vajah se

ye bhukamp aaya h or roshani nikali h , bahut hi jald vo bhi jaag
jaayega jiska naam lena bhi dar ko davat dena h , ek mahayudh
jald hi hone ko h or is baar yadi hame SHULRAAKSHAM nahi mila
to is srishti ka vinaash tay h acai har taraf se haar jayegi kyonki
vo samay k saath or jyada shaktishali hota jaa rha shulsarpam se
shaktiyaan le k .
Devta - to prabhu SHULRAAKSHAM kha h or vo kb SHULSARPAM
ko dharan karega .
Shiv - ye to mai bhi nahi jaanta parantu vo jaha bhi h uska kuch
na kuch connection is kanya se h .
Khair aap sab in baato ko chodiye or is bachchi k janm ki
khushiyaan manaiye kyonki iska janm brahm muhurt mai hua h to
iska naamkaran bhi brahmdev k haatho hi hona h.
Yamdev - Haa prabhu aap sahi kah rhe h meri putrid ka naamkaran
brahmdev k haatho hi hona chahiye .
Sabhi devta brahmdev se kanya k naamkaran ka aagrah karne lagte
h jise vo saharsh swikaar kar lete h .
Brahmdev - Thik h jab aap sab yahi chahte h or bhagwaan shiv ki
bhi yahi ichcha h to mai is kanya kaa naamkaran karne k liye
taiyaar hu. Ye kanya atyant sunder , sushil , or gunwati hogi iska
sondarya itna adhik hoga ki har koi ise pane ki khwahish karega
jaise sabhi amrit ko paana chahte h , Isliye mai iskaa naam
AMRITA rakhta hu

(LOCATION CHANGE - AT EARTH )

Jaha ek taraf yamlok mai khushi kaa mahol tha vahi dusari taraf
 prithvilok mai bhi ek bachche ka janam hua thik usi samay pe jab
AMRITA kaa janm hua tha .
vo kahi or nahi Kalyaan singh k ghar pe hua tha .
ek aurat bhagte hue bahar aati h or Kalyaan singh ko badhai deti h
or unhe ladka hone ki suchna deti h .
Is khabar ko sun k sabhi bahut khush hote h or unhe badhaiyan
dete h .
Raat ko gaon mai jashn ki ghoshna kar di jaati h .
Kyonki vo log thakur the to sabhi gaon vale unka kahna maante the
or ijjat bhi karte the .
Sunder singh gaon mai niche jaat vaaalo ko bula kr unme paise
bantate h .
sabhi bahut khush the or kalyaan singh ko bachche k paida hone ki
badhaiyaan dene lagte h .
sham ko pandit ko bula k ghar mai puja rakhi jaati h or raat ko
pure gaon mai jashn manaya jaata h gaon mai sabhi bahut khush
the.
Aagle din pandit ko bula k namkaran ki taiyaariyaan ki jaati h .
namkaran k samay inke pushtaini pandit bachche ka naamkaran
karte h or uska naam VISHAL rakha jaata h .
or iske baad pure gaon mai jashn 7 se 8 din tak chalta h ......

UPDATE – 2

SO FRNDS , ab tak aapne pada ki kaise hamare hero ka janm hua

or kaise uska naamkaran hua .
so ye story ab tak past mai chal rahi thi ab ise present mai lane
kaa samay aa gya h , so ab iske aage present tak sirf yahi h ki
kaise hero bada hua vo sab bata kar mai aap logo ko bor nahi karna
chahunga .
now ab story ko fast forward karte h and aate h 20 years k
baad .

(LOCATION - AT EARTH )

Dharti pe sab log normal jindagi ji rhe the .

Par insaano k man mai shaitaan ka asar ho rha tha shaitaan dhire
 dhire sab par apna asar dikha rha tha har kisi k man kaam krodh
lobh ityaadi bhavnaaye paida ho chuki thi sab paap ki chapet mai aa
gye the .
Samay - subah
Jagah - guru nagri paonta sahib
( Aaj apne hero ki age h 21 year )
Yaha par aapna hero subah subah so rha tha or ek sunahara sapna
dekh rha tha jis mai vo kisi alag hi duniya mai kisi ladki k saath
ghum rha tha thodi dur jaane k vo ladki se I LOVE YOU kahta h jis
pe ladki bhi use kuch kahne hi vaali hoti h ki achanak hi vha sab
kuch thanda ho jaata or Vishal ki nind khul jaati h vo apne aas paas
dekhta h ki uske bed pe uski mossi ka ladka Hitesh bhi soya hota h
.
jab vo apne aap ko dekhta h to use khayal aata h ki kisi ne uske
upper se kambal khich liya h .
ye shaks jisne kambal khicha hota h vo or koi nahi uska chota bhai
Robin hota h vo baar baar use utha rha tha jab baat nahi bani to
robin ne apne bhai k upper se kambal khich liya or majburan vishal
ko jaagna pada jis par vishal bhadak uthta h or robin se gussse se
puchta h
Vishal - robin ye kya batamiji h aise koi uthata h kya
Robin - bhai mai kab se aap ko utha rha tha par aap uth hi nahi
rhe the so mujhe majburan aapka kambal khichna pada kyonki mossi
aap ko naashte pe bula rahi h or Hitesh ko bhi .
Vishal - acha thik h tu chal mai fresh ho k aata hu
Robin - jaldi aana or haan mom ka phone aaya tha
Vishal - acha kya kaha unhone
Robin - jyada kuch nahi bas haal chal pucha or aapko apni aadte
sudharne ko kaha h
Vishal - yr jaise sher kabhi ghass ni kha sakta vaise hi mai kabhi
aapni aadte ni sudhar sakta
Robin - vah bhai vah kafi ghatiya dialoge tha jaldi naha dho k niche
aayo varna mossi upper aa jayengi or fir subah subah aap dono
bhaiyon ki class lag jayegi college jaane ki jarurat hi nahi padegi
Vishal - vah bhai ho to tere jaisa kamine kuch acha ni bol sakta to
kuch bura bhi mat bol
 Robin - pahle acha bolne layak kaam to karo ab jaldi naha lo or
niche aa jao or is namune ko bhi utha do varna bevajah hi mossi se
galiyaan khayega
Or ye bol k robin chala jaata h .
vishal Hitesh ko utha kar nahane chala jaata h or fir niche jaa kar
mossi ko nashta lagaane ko kahta h or fir nashta kar k college k
liye nikal jaata h vo nakalte hue apne best frnd pankaj ko phone
lagaata h or chowk se use pic karne ko kahta h .
thodi der baad pankaj (panku) use chowk se pic karta h or dono
dost college k liye nikal padte h .
raaste mai Vishal ki najar aashi ki scooty pe padti h jo ki ek ghar k
saamne ruki hoti h vo ye baat pankaj ko btata h or dono foran
aashi k paas pahuch jaate h .
Aashi - pankaj ki girlfriend
Aashi k paas pahuch kar panku k kuch puchne se pahle hi
Vishal - hiii aashi
Aashi - hiii vishal
Vishal - kya hua kuch problem h kya
Aashi - nahi to
Vishal - to fir college ki bajaay yaha kyo khadi ho
Aashi - kuch nahi yr bus aapni new frnd ka wait kar rahi thi
Vishal - yr new frnd sexy h kya baat karwa fir
Aashi - Lo gaon basa ni bhikhari pahle aa gye
Aashi ki is baat par pankaj ko hasi aa jaati h to vishal use maja
chakhaane k liye
Vishal - vaise aashi tumhe pata h kal ham dono park gye the vaha
ye bandaa baar baar ladkiyon ko taad rha tha or comment bhi kar
rha tha
(vishal ki is baat par panku ki hawa tight ho jaati h kyonki use pata
tha ki vishal kitna kamina h )
Panku - nahi aashi ye jhut bol rha h ye coment kar rha tha mai
nahi
Vishal - jhut bol rha h ye or jaanti ho ek ladki ko to ye bhi kah
rha tha ki tum bahut khubsurat ho jab maine kaha ki aashi se bhi
jyada to ye kahta h ki aashi to iske aage kuch nahi h vo to bus
aapna hokum hi chalati rahti h
 vishal ki baat sun kar aashi ka chahra gusse se laal ho jaata h or
vo panku ko ghurne lagti h .
panku aapni safai dene ki koshish karta h par aashi uski ek baat
bhi nahi sunti or use college jaane ka kah kar aapni frnd kaa wait
karne lagti ab bechaara panku majburan college chala jaata h use
vishal par gussa bahut aa rha tha .
college pahuch kar Vishal jaldi se jaldi bike se utarta h or aapne
baaki frnds k pass chala jaata h kyoki use pta tha ki panku uski
bajane vaala h udhar panku bhi jaldi se bike park karke vishal piche
bhagta h vo bhi ground pe pahuch jaata h jaha unke sab dost khade
the.
( Vishal k dost - vijay , rohit , rahul, raman, kapil, rakesh,
Megha (vijay ki gf) , dalvinder (rohit ki gf) , ravina (rahul ki gf) ,
Diksha (raman ki gf) , piya (kapil ki gf) , Guddi (rakesh ki gf)
Sab ladke engineering kar rhe hote h or ladkiyaan kuch nursing and
kuch pharmessy kar rahi hoti h )
Update – 3

To dosto aap sab ne ab tak pada ki kaise vishal panku ko gussa

dilate h or fir apne dosto k pass bhag jaata h or panku uske piche
bhagta h .
ab aage ………

Vishal - dosto bchao is saand se mujhe lagta h ki ye saand pagal ho

gya h .
Panku - ruk saale mujhe saand bolta h beta ab to tu gya
(in dono ko dekh kar baaki dost hasne lagte h )
Rohit - lo yr ye kamine subah subah fir se shuru ho gye (panku ko
rok kar) bhai ab kya kar diya is kamine ne
Fir panku un sab ko saari baat btata h jise sun k sabke chahre
pahle to serious ho jaate h fir baad mai sab hasne lagte h
Vijay - bhai ye sab to ab common h ye to iska roj ka kaam h
kamine ki apni setting to hoti ni hamari todne mai laga rahta h
Vishal - dekh bhai ye time pass vaali setting apne ko nahi chahiye
mujhe to permanent setting chahiye jis k saath mai puri life bita
saku
 Rahul - to bhai koi fasa le yar apne college mai bahut si ladkiyaan
h
Vishal - yar saari achi ladkiyaan to tum kamino ne fasa li or maine
bhi dost samajh k secrifise kar diya varna tum sab ki bandiyan ab
tak mai fasa leta
Vishal ne itna hi bola tha ki piche se aavaj aati h
Ravina - hamaare itne bhi bure din nahi aaye ki ham tumhe apna
boyfriend bnaaye or kamine kya kah rha tha tu ham sab ko fasa
leta
Vishal - are yar tu to gussa ho gyi mai to majak kar rha tha chill
yr chod in baato ko
Or fir sab normal college ki baato mai lag jaate h itne mai aashi
bhi aa jaati h par ye kya uske saath ek or ladki hoti h
Aashi - (sab k pass aakar ) hey guys
Sabhi - hey aashi
Aashi - guys meet my new friend komal is k father ka yaha new
transfer hua h and isne abhi abhi yaha new admission liya h nursing
mai
Fir ek ek karke sab komal se haath milate h or apna intro dete h
par jaise hi vishal aage badta h bell baj jaati h or sab student apni
apni class mai chale jaate h
Raaste mai komal aashi se
Komal - aashi vo kon tha jo last mai rah gya tha
Aashi - komal us bande ka naam vishal h hamaare group ka sabse
kamina insaan ye insaan bahut bahaane bnata h par dil ka bahut
saaf insaan h hamesha dosto ki madad k liye taiyaar rahta h .
iski bas ek hi problem h ye kabhi bhi kisi chij ko seriously nahi leta
varna is jaisa genious koi nahi h vaise agar tujhe pasand aa gya h
to mai baat kara sakti hu vo abhi vaise bhi single h
Komal - are nahi yr aisi koi baat nahi h mai to bas aise hi puch
rahi thi vaise banda kuch intresting lag rha h
Aashi - tu us mai bus intrest le baaki mujh pe chod de mai sab
sambhal lungi vaise bhi jis tarah se vo tujhe ghoor rha tha use to
yahi lagta h ki vo tumhe khud hi offer maarega tum bus taiyaar
rahna use jawab dene k liye
Itne mai class room aa jata h or vo dono ander chali jaati h
 Vahi dusari or vishal and friends sab class mai chale jaate h fir
vahi padai chalti rahti h sab k sab busy ho jaate h or fir sab
friends recess time mai milte h sab k sabbatchit karne lagte h or
vishal or pankaj pahuchte h aashi k pass vishal komal ko hi kahta h
or apna intro deta h ab komal bhi thoda thoda vishal mai intrest
dikha rahi thi par sab friends k pass hone ki vajah se vo vishal k
sath open nahi ho pa rahi thi .
Rohit - mai kya bolta hu kal Sunday h kyo na kahi ghumne chale
Raman - bhai idea to acha h par pahle sab se puch lo ki sab
taiyaar h ki nahi
Iske baad rohit sab se puchta h to sab haan kah dete h sivay
komal k
Komal - friends shayad mai naa aa paau vaise bhi mere ghar mai
bahut kaam h or mummy akele nahi kar payengi so sorry friends
Komal ne itna hi kaha tha ki vishal bhi bich mai hi bol deta h
Vishal - friends meri taraf se bhi sorry shayad mai bhi naa aa
paau kyonki kal mujhe bhai k saath uska project bnane mai help
karni h (jhut)
Pankaj - tu to naa chup hi rah mujhe ta h ki tujhe apne bhai ki
kitni madad karni h apne project kabhi bnaye ni chala h apne bhai
ki madad karne mera muh mat khulwa
Vishal - (pankaj k kaan mai ) bbeta chup ho jaa itni baijaatti mat
kar varna aashi ab bhi meri kisi bhi baat par jaldi bharosa kar leti
h abhi tere fb vaale kaand ki khabar us ko mil jayegi or fir kal trip
pe tu akela hi jayega
Panku - are bhai main to majak kar rha that u to serious hi ho gya
Vishal - (dhire se) cha lab bakwaas chod or komal ko mana trip k
liye or haan use aisa feel hona chahiye ki maine usi ki vajah se kal
k liye mna kiya h ab tu sab ko bol ki mujhe or komal ko alag alag
samjhay tabhi tu mera kaam kar sakta h
Pankaj - thik h bro
Fir pankaj baaki sab dosto se kuch kahta h or vo sab do groups mai
divide ho k vishal or komal ko samjhane lagte h fir pankaj and
group komal ko samjhane mai lag jaata h or dusra group vishal ko
samjhane mai vishal apnni acting jaari rakhte hue
Vishal - dekho yaar tum sab ki apni apni gf h or mai single isiliye
 mai kabab mai haddi nahi banna chahta
Rakesh - nahi yaar aisi koi baat nahi h or tu kab se kabab mai
haddi banne laga or rahi baat teri gf ki to tu hamesha hi hamare
saath bina gf k saath ghumne gya h ab kya problem h
Vishal - bhai yaar mai nahi aa sakta tu to samajh bhai ka project
bhi bnana h
Kapil - thik h bhai jaisi teri marji jab nahi aana chahta to naa sahi
chalo friends komal ko mnate h
Fir sabhi komal ki taraf jaane lagte h par vishal bich mai aakar
kapil or rakesh ko side mai le jaata h
Vishal - kamino kya kah rhe the agar nahi jaana to mat ja jaisi
teri marji haan mere bagar jaa k to dikhaao tumhaare pichwaade
mai danda na daala to naam badal dena
Rakesh - (has kar) par bhai tu hi to nahi jaana chahta h
VISHAL - kamino mai komal pe thoda impression jamaane ki koshish
kar rha hu or tum log meri hi lene pe tule hue ho yar samjha karo
use kisi bhi tarah is trip k liye manna h taaki vaha meri bhi kuch
setting ho jaye
Rakesh - chal koi ni tu bhi kya yaad karega us ko mnate h
Fir sab komal se request karte h or ant mai vo maan jaati h or fir
sab shahar se 30 km dur ek sunder se jharne k pass jaane ka plan
bnaate h fir rohit sab ko chowk pe aane ko kah deta h
Sab haan kahte h siway vishal k kyonki usne to naa kah diya tha or
koi ab use chalne ko kah bhi nahi rha tha .
use panku pe bahut gussa aa rha tha or vo uske pass jaane hi vaala
tha ki recess time khatam ho gya or sab k sab friends class mai
chale gye .
uske baad vahi padai or fir sham ko jaise hi college over hua pankaj
aashi k pass chala gya or vishal ko rohit k sath ghar jaana pada vo
use baat nahi kar paya .
vahi dusari taraf se komal aashi ko
Komal - aashi yar hame vishal se puchna chahiya tha jaane k liye
ab unhe kitna bura lag rha hoga
Aashi - oye hoy tumhe uski badi chinta ho rahi h
Komal - nahi yaar aisi koi baat nahi h mai to bas aise hi vo saath
hota to trip pe mujhe bor nahi hona padega vaise bhi tum to pankaj
 k saath busy ho jaogi
Aashi - bus kar mai sab samajhti hu or tu chinta mat kar use koi
bura nahi laga kyonki vo kisi ki baaat ko dil se nahi lagata or rahi
baat uske aane ki to vo tu kal khud hi dekh lena
Iske baad vo sab ghar nikal jaate h....

Update - 4

Vishal bhi ghar pahuch kar sidha apne room mai chala jaata or fir
bed par gir kar so jaata h .
sham ko der tak sone k baad uski mossi use utha deti h or fresh
hokar vo tv dekhne lagta h .
thodi der tv dekhta h fir uske dono bhai use bahar ghumne k liye
bulate h or vo sab bike le k park ki taraf chal padte h vaha pahuch
kar uske dono bhai apne dosto k saath mil k masti karne lagte h
jabki vishal vahi park mai ghumne lagta h thodi der park mai
ghumne k baad vo bore hone lagta h or chal padta h masti karne vo
sabse pahle park k kone mai jaata h jaha bahut sari jhadiyaa thi
vha kuch couples ki kissing chal rahi thi vo sabse pahle unhe gour se
dekhta h fir jor se chillata h police police bhaggo yaha se jaldi
police aa rahi h ye shor sun k vo saare couples jaldi jaldi jhadiyo se
bhar aa jaate h par vha koi nahi tha siway vishal k jo ki un sab se
kafi dur chala gya tha vo use bura bhala kahte h or fir vapas apne
kaam pe chale jaate h .
itne se bhi vishal ka man nahi bhara tha to vo vha ghum rahe
paaltu kutto ko ek kapda sunghata h or fir us kapde ko un jhadiyo
mai chupke se un couples k pass rakh deta h uske baad vapas aa k
un kutto ki rassiyaa dhilli kar deta h jis vajah se vo kutte aajad ho
jaate h or un jhadiyo ki taraf bhonkte hue bhagte h h jab un sab
couples ko itne saare kutte apni taraf bhagte hue dikhai dete h to
vo dar k maare vaha se bhag jaate h .
Isi tarah masti karte hue sham gujar jaaati h vishal or uske dono
bhai ghar aa jaate h uske baad vo sab kuch der padai karte h or
fir dinner .
Dinner k baad vo tino bhai vishal k room mai chale jaate vh kuch
 der apas mai baate karte h or fir so jaate h .
agli subah Sunday tha to sab der se uthte h vishal bhi der se uthta
h or jab vo time dekhta h to use trip ka time yaad aata h vo jaldi
se taiyaar hota h or chowk k liye nikal jaata h .
Vahi dusri taraf chowk pe sab pahle hi pahuch the .
is trip k liye ek to rohit apni car laya tha or dusra raman or ek car
kapil laya tha baaki sab ko car lane se mana kiya hua tha
Komal - so ab jab sab aa gye h to fir chale
Aashi - abhi sab nahi aaye h
Komal - sab to aa gye h ab kon rah gya h
Aashi - vo tumhe jald hi pta chal jaayega
Aashi ki baat pe sab muskuraane lagte h thodi der mai vishal bhi
teji se bhagta hua pahuch jaata h
Vishal - (haanfte hue) sorry friends late ho gya vo subah nind der
se khuli
Aashi - (komal ki taraf dekhte hue ) yahi h vo jis ka sab intejaar
kar rhe the
Vijay - (vishal ki taang khichte hue ) kyo bhai tu to aaj nahi aane
vaala tha
Vishal - acha vaise jab tujhe pta tha ki mai nahi aane vala hu to
fir tu yaha mera intejaar kyo kar rha h nikle kyo nahi ab tak
Is jawab ki vijay ko ummid nahi thi vo bechara chup ho jaata h itne
mai komal bich mai bol padti h
Komal - vishal aapne to apne bhai ka project banwana tha na uska
kya hua
Vishal - komal ji vo vo… haan usne kaha h ki vo or mera dusra bhai
mil k project khatam kar denge or maine bhi raat bhar socha ki jab
mere dost itna kah hi rhe h to mai kyo unka dil todu isiliye mai
chala aaya or vaise bhi komal ji in sab couples k bich aap akeli pad
jayengi isiliye aapko company dene k liye koi to chahiye hi na
Kapil - chalo chalo baate baad mai kar lena abhi late ho rha h
Fir sabhi cars mai baith jaate h or chal padte h jharne ki taraf .
Shahar se 25 km dur ek gaon padta h or use 5 km dur jharna h jo
ki jangal k ander h .
sabhi jharne k pass pahuch jaate h or fir apni apni gaadiyo se niche
utar jaate h .
sabhi ladkiya jharne ko dekh k bahut khush ho jaati h or uske paas
jaa k photo khichwaane lagti h ladke sabse pahle jharne k pass sab
saman set kar dete h fir sab ladke apne kapde utar k jharne k
upper chad k jump marne lagte h or fir sabhi nahaane lagte h sabhi
apni apni gf ko nahaane k liye kahte h par sabhi ladkiyaan mna kar
deti h karib 1 ghanta nahaane k baad sabhi ladke bahaar aa jaate
h or sabhi ladkiyaan towel se apne apne bf k sir pochne lagti h ye
dekh k aashi komal ko towel pakda deti h or use vishal ka sir
pochne ko kahti h komal use towel le k vishal k pass jaati h or use
towel pakda deti h or fir vapas aa k apni jagah pe baith jaati h .
vishal bhi komal ko thanks kah k towel se apna sir poch leta h or
fir sab ladke kapde pahan lete h uske baad sab dost lunch karte h
or fir sab couples alag alag ho jaate h or ant mai vishal or komal hi
vha rah jaate h .
Ab vo dono bhi jungal mai tahalne k liye nikal padte h.....

Update - 5

Ab tak aapne pada ki vishal or uske friends jungle mai ghumne k

liye nikal padte h or vha jaakar sab masti karte h or ant mai sab
couples alag alag ghumne k liye nikal padte h last mai komal or
vishal rah jaate h to vo dono bhi jungle mai tahlane k liye nikal
padte h .

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Dono jungle mai ghum rhe the par ek dusre se baat nahi kar rhe
the .
vishal baat to karna chah rha tha par use kuch samajh nahi aa rha
tha ki baat shuru kaise kare .
ant mai usne chuppi todte hue komal se puch hi liya
Vishal - so komal kaisa laga hamara group
Komal - awesome yaar tum sab kamala k ho ek dusre k sath rahte
rahte tum sab ek dusre ko achi tarah samjhte ho
Vishal - or tumhe mai kaisa laga
 Komal - (chowkte hue ) what…………….
Vishal - I mean tumhe meri company kaisi lagi
Komal - oh ho that way haan bahut badiya
Vishal - yaa that way tumhe kya laga
Komal - kuch nahi bus aise hi tum btao tumhe meri company kaisi
lagi
Vishal - bahut hi achi tum to silent killer ho
Komal - silent killer matlab
Vishal - matlab yar tum to chup chap chali hi jaa rhi ho kuch bol
bhi liya karo taaki dusaro ko tumhaari madhur aawaj sunne ko mil
sake
Komal - bol to rahi hu yaar
Vishal - vaise komal tumhaara naam tumhaari personality ko suite
karta h tum apne naam ki hi tarah komal or khubsurat ho
(komal apni taarif sun k khush ho jaati h )
Komal - thanks
Aise hi dono ki apas mai baate hoti rahti h or dono aapas mai
baate karte rahte h thodi dur jaane k baad vishal ko bandaro ki ek
toli pedo par idhar se udher kudte hue dikhai deti h bandaro ko
dekh k komal dar jaati h or jor se vishal ki baaju pakad leti h
vishal bandaro ko taraf aankh marke unhe thanks kahta h or komal
se puchta h
Vishal - kya hua komal
Komal - vo vha dher saare bandar h mujhe dar lag rha h chalo
vapas chalte h
Vishal - are ye to hanuman ji ki prajaati h inse kaisa dar or vaise
bhi ye kisi ko tab tak koi nuksaan nahi pahuchate jab tak ki inhe
khatra mahsus na ho or ham kon sa inhe maar rhe h
Komal - fir bhi mujhe dar lag rha h chalo chalte h
Vishal - are dar kaisa mai hu na tumhaare saath trust me chalo
inke thoda or najdeek chalte h
Komal - nahi nahi pls mujhe dar lagta h
Komal baar mna karti h par vishal use khich kar us ped k paas le hi
aata jha vo bandaro ki toli thi .
Unhe dek kar sab bander ped pe or unchain pe chad jaate h or ped
pe baith jaate .
 thodi der baithne k baad ek Bandar niche aata h to komal dar k
mare vishal k gale lag jaati h or apni aankhe band kar leti h vishal
use apni baho mai kas k pakad leta h or saath hi ek haath upper us
bander ki taraf utha k thumbs up karta h or use dil hi dil mai
thanks kahta h .
Uske haath uthate hi vo Bandar dar k mare vapas bhag jaata h .
vishal or komal thodi der aise hi khade rahte h fir vishal komal ko
aankhe kholne k liye kahta h komal apni aankhe kholti h or dekhti h
ki vo Bandar vapas chala gya h or vo vishal ko sorry bolti h fir
vishal time dekhta h or komal ko vapas chalne k liye kahta h vo
dono vapas chal padte h vishal ek najar piche un bandaro ki toil ki
taraf dekhta h to teji se un ki taraf bhagne lagta h .

Vo hua yu hota h ki jaise hi vishal or komal vapas jaane k liye

mudte h to do chote chote bander ek dusre se ladne lagte h or
alag daaliyo ko pakad k idhar udhar latkane lagte h jaise hi vishal
piche mudta h to vo dekhta h ki jis daali par pahla bander kaa
bacha latak rha h vo bahut patli h or uske thik niche kaanto vaali
jhadiyaa h or vo dusra bacha bhi usi daali ki taraf jump marta h us
pahle bache ko pakadne k liye jis vajah se vo daali un ka vajan
sambhal nahi paati or vo tut jaati h vo jhadiyo pe girne hi vaale
hote h ki vishal bich mai jhadiyo k upper se jump maar k unhe dur
fenk deta h is chakkar mai vo khud chati k bal jamin pe girta h or
uski chati or kohini mai halki kharoche aa jaati h vo bachche
bhagte hue vapas ped pe chad jaate h .
Komal jor se vishal chillati h or bhag k uske pass aa jaati h or use
uthne mai madad karti h vishal uthte hi apne kapdo se mitti jhadta
h use kohini mai dard ho rha tha par vo komal k saamne jaahir nahi
karta parantu komal kin ajar uski kohini se nikalte hhue blood pe
chali hi jaati h or vo vishal ko daantne lagti h fir vo dono gadi k
paas chale jaate h or komal gadi se first aid box nikal k uski baaju
mai patti baandh deti h or fir dono chal padte h baaki dosto ko
dhundne k liye thodi hi dur unhe unke dost dikhai de jaate h par
jab vo dhayan se dekhte h to vishal k chahre pe chintaa dikhai
dene lagti h or vo jitni tej ho sake utni teji se apne dosto ki taraf
bhagne lagta h.....
 Update - 6

Ab tak aapne pada ki vishal or komal jungle ki taraf jaate h vha

Bandar k bachcho ko bchaate bchaate vishal ko chot lag jaati h fir
komal uski marahmpatti karti h fir vo apne dosto ko dhundne k liye
nikal padte h or jaise hi vishal kin ajar apne dosto ki taraf padti h
vo teji se unki taraf bhagne lagta h

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Komal ka dhyan vishal ki taraf jaata h to vo use bhagte hue dekhti

h jab uski najar uske dosto pe padti h to usko dar lagne lagta h
kyonki vha 10 – 12 ladko ne vishal k dosto ko gher rakha tha sab
ladko k haath mai mote mote dande the .
Or jaise hi ladai shuru hone jaa rhi thi thik usi time par vishal vha
aa jaata h or sab ko alag kar deta h fir vishal apne dosto se ladai
kaa kaaran puchta h to rakesh bolna start karta h
Darasal hua ye hota h ki rohit or dalvinder jungle mai ek paid k
niche khade hokar kissing kar rhe the to dusre group ka ek ladka
unhe dekh rha tha thodi der kissing karne k bad dono alag hote h
to vo ladka siti bjane lagta h or fir dalvinder ko dekh kar gande
gande comment karne lagta h jis baat par rohit ko gussa aa jaata h
or vo us ladke ko pakad k use thappad maarne lagta h vo ladka kisi
tarah vha se bhag jaata h or sidha apne group k pass chala jaata h
or fir vo sab ladke dande utha kar rohit ki taraf chal padte h par
unke aane se pahle baaki couples bhi rohit k pass pahuch jaate h to
dalvinder unhe sab baat btati h abhi dalvinder ki baat puri bhi nahi
hui hoti ki unke saamne 10 -12 ladke dande le k pahuch jaate h to
vo sab ladkiyo ko ek taraf karke unse ladai k liye taiyaar hote h
par ladai shuru hone se pahle hi vishal vha aa jaata h or ladai rok
deta h
Vishal oh to ye baat thi fir vishal sidha unke group mai sabse pahle
khade ladke jo ki unka leader lag rha tha usse baat karne lagta

Vishal - dekho bhai jo ho gya so ho gya vaise bhi galti aapke dost
ki thi kyonki usne hamari friend ko dekh k gande comment pass kiye
the to uska pitna to laajmi hi tha ab jab sab clear ho gya h to
bekar mai panga karne ki koi jarurat nahi h
(mai yha leader ko L1 likhunga or bakhi ladko ko L2 L3 L4 likhunga)
L2 - tum log jaante nahi ho kit um logo ne kis par haath daala h ab
iska khamiyaaja to tum sab ko bhugtna hi padega
Rohit - bhai tu side ho jaa inhe ham dekh lenge inki himmat kaise
hue dalvinder ko ulta sidha kahne ki
Par vishal use kisi tarah samjha bujha kar shant karta h or apni
kasam de kar sab ko bich mai bolne se rok deta h
Vahi dusre group k ladke bhi bhi aapas mai khusur fusur karne
lagte h
L2 - (L1 se ) bhai mujhe to lagta h ki inka ye leader 1 no kaa
fattu h saala tabhi to bakiyo ko ladne se rok rha h
L3 - haan bhai ye sahi kah rha h
L1 - haan ye ladai to karega nahi to fir ise ab ham job hi kahenge
manna padega vaise bhi inke saath ki ladkiyaa bada hi khatarnaak
maal h chusne mai mja aayega agar naa mana to sab ki haddiyaa
tod k in sab ka ras chusenge
Itne mai vishal uske pass aake usse kahta h
Vishal - bhai iski taraf se mai aapse maafi mangta hu ham koi ladai
nahi chahte h aap log shanty se yaha se chale jaaye
L1 - dekh tu itne pyaar se kah hi rha h to ham tum sab ko ek
offer dete h or vo tumsab k manna hi padega
Usne abhi itna hi kaha tha ki vishal k chahre pe sab expression
gayab ho jaate h uska chehra sunn ho jaata h or uspe kathorta aa
jaati h
L1 - (apni baat aage badate hue or vishal ko ungli dikha kar )
dekho tumhaare dost ne mere dost ko thappad mara h par fir bhi
mai tum sab ko chod rha hu badle mai tumhe mujhe or mere dosto
ko insab ladkiyo ko kiss karne dena hoga
varna…………………..aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……………
Isse pahle ki vo aage kuch bolta vishal uski ungli ko pakad k tod
deta h jisse use bahut hi bhayankar pida hoti h or uski chikh pure
jungle mai gunj uthti h or dard k mare apne ghutno par baith jaata
h to vishal uska danda uske haath se chin kar pure jor k saath uske
sar pe de maarta h par vo apna sir side kar leta h jisse danda uske
kandhe pe lagta h or vo buri tarah se jamin par gir kar tadapne
lagta h uske sab dost or vishal k sab dost sunn khade ho kar vishal
ko dekhne lagte h uske chahre par is vakt haivaaniyat jhalak rahi
thi vo itne pe bhi nahi rukta h or L1 ko baalo se pakad kar khada
karta h or uski ek baaju marodkar use pahle to garden se pakadta
h fir jor se use ped pe de maarta h uski pith pure jor se ped se
takra jaati h or vo dard k mare bahosh ho jaata h or niche gir
jaata h uske niche girne k saath hi uske dosto k haatho se dande
girne lagte h or vo sab dar k maare vahi jam jaate h idhar vishal
L1 k bahosh ho jaane k baad bhi nahi rukta vo ek kick khich k L1 k
chahre pe de maarta h fir lagataar maarte rahta h is vakt uski
haivaaniyat dek k uske dosto ko bhi dar lagne lagta h kyonki vo kisi
shaitaan ki tarah binaa ruke L1 ko mare jaa rha par use rokne ki
kisi ki bhio himmat nahi ho rahi thi sabhi dare hue the .
isse pahle ki vo uski sabhi haddiyaan todta vishal k dost kisi tarah
bich mai aakar use shant karte h shant hone k baad vishal ko
ehsaas hota h ki usne L1 ki kya haalat kar di h vo use sorry kahta
h or uske dosto ko use hospital le jaane ko kahta h .
Iske baad sab dost gaadi k paas aa jaate h or shahar ki taraf chal
padte h pure raaste sab khamosh rahte h koi kuch nahi bolta h
sabhi is baat se hairaan the ki jo insaan kabhi ladai nahi karta h vo
itna khatarnaak kaise ho sakta h .
fir rohit raman or kapil sab ko ghar chod k apne apne ghar chale
jaate h .
Idhar vishal ghar pahuch kar sidha bistar pe let jaata h or fir kuch
der so k apni thakaan mitaata h uske baad uth k tv dekhta h fir
dinner or fir sab bhai apne pure din k bare mai discuss karte h or
fir sab so jaate h par vishal sone se pahle apne sab friends ko call
karke aaj ki ghatna ko kisi ko bhi btane k liye mna karta h……
Update - 7 (mega update)

So friends jaisa ki aapne ab tak k update mai pada kaise vishal un

ladko k leader ko maar k apne dosto k saath ghar chala jaata h
uske sab dost hairaan the ant mai sab apne apne ghar pahuchte h
or vishal raat ko sone se pahle sab ko aaj ki ghatna k bare mai kisi
 ko bhi btane se mna karta h

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Now location change - at yamlok

Yamlok ek aisi jagah h jaha se swarg or nark dono k darwaje khulte

h jahaa par achai or burai dono ka hisaab hota h yaha par ache or
bure dono logo k karmo ka hisaab kitaab hota h yaha par ek acha
insaan bhi jaa sakta tha or bura insaan bhi
Yamlok pe yamraaj ka shashan tha yamlok ka mukhya dwar sidha
yamraaj ki sabha mai khulta tha. Yamraaj ki sabha ek bahut bade
haal ki tarah thi jaha par baithne k liye bahut se aasan rakhe hue
the pr un baithne k aasno ko kram vise rakha hua tha or sabse
unchaai par yamraaj ka singhasaan rakha hua
tha jo ki sone ka bna hua tha or usme bahut se hire jade hue the
jisse uski bhavyataa or bhi jyada badi hui thi sabha k dono kono
mai do darwaaje bne hue the jinme se ek swarg ki or jaata tha or
ek narak ki or thik yamraaj k singhasan k piche vaali deewar mai
bhi ek darwaaja tha jo ki yamlok ki asli dunia ki taraf jaata tha ye
dunia swarg k ek dum paas thi or yaha bhi swarg k saman sukh
suvidhaye thi yaha kip raja apne raja yani ki yamraaj se bahut
khush thi kisi ko koi kami nahi thi is nagar ka naam yamnagar tha
or isme ander ghusne ka ek hi raasta th vo tha nagar kaa mukhya
dwaar baaki nagar k charo or maha shunya tha jisme koi gravity
nahi thi yadi koi isme chala jaaye to vo vahi fas jaata tha fir vo
vha se bina yamraaj ki icha k vaapas nahi aa sakta tha haan par
nagar k mukhya dwar se pahle ek raasta swarg ki or jaata tha
yamnagar kisi maaine mai swarg se kam nahi tha yaha par sabhi
sukh suvidhaye thi yaha par sabhi sadke pakki thi or sab kaam
jaadu se hote the even ki swari karne ki gadiyaa bhi magic se chalti
thin agar k bicho bich yamraaj ka mahal upasthit tha jha par
yamraaj ka parivaar rahta tha yamraaj ka ek beta or ek beti thi
yamraaj k mahal kaa nirmaan dev shilpi vishwakarma ne kiya tha is
mahal ki sundarta dekhte hi banti thi iski nakkashi bahut hi sunder
 thi yaha par sabke alag alag rooms the or guests k liye bhi bahut
saare rooms uplabdh the or is mahal ki ek khaas baat ye thi ki ye
yamraaj ki ichcha se ghatta or badta tha matlab ki yadi guests
jyada hote to yamraaj is mahal mai apni ichcha se or rooms bna
sakte the mahal k piche ek bahut hi bda baag tha jha par bahut
saare jaanvar tahlte rahte the iss baag ya upvan mai alag alag
tarah k faalo k ped the or isme tarah tarah k full age hue the ye
upvan itna bada tha ki isme ghumne k liye aapko gaadi se jaana
padta tha isss bag main agar ka koi bhi prani jaa sakta tha ye
upvan itna sundar tha ki swarg se devta or unke bachche bhi
jyadatar yaha tahalne k liye or ghumne k liye aate rahte the fir
bhi yaha kabhi bhid nahi hoti thi over all kahe to yaha k log kabhi
bhi swarg jaa sakte the or swarg se koi bhi yaha aa sakta tha.
Yamraaj ka jo beta tha uska naam parikshit tha vo bhi apne pita
yamraaj ki hi tarah balisht tha usme mai bhi apne pita ki hi tarah
shaktiyaan thi vo bhi apne hi pita ki hi tarah nyaay priy tha
parantu usme ek kami thi vo ye thi ki vo insaano ko devtaao k
saamne kuch nahi samajhta tha vo apni bahan se bahut pyar karta
tha vo dikhne mai bahut hi smart tha uski 8 packs body thi jisme
se cuts saaf saaf dikhai dete the.
Ab aate h is kahaani ki main heroin ki taraf ji haan amrita ki taraf
.
Amrita pure devlok ki shaan thi or yamraaj ka abhimaan thi vo uska
rang ekdum gora tha uske chehre se masoomiyat ki jhalak saaf saaf
dikhayi deti thi vo jab muskuraati thi to badi pyaari lagti thi uski
muskuraahat kisi kaa bhi dil pighla deti thi vo apne bhai se 2 saal
badi thi or vo usse bahut hi pyaar karti thi or uska bahut hi jyada
khyaal rakhti thi vo padne k liye dev guru brahspati k pass rojaana
jaati thi jaha usse bahut se devtao k beto ne dosti kar li thi uske
sabhi dost use paana chahte the parantu yamraaj k dar k kaaran
koi kuch nahi kah paata tha .
Amrita ko jab gussa aata tha to uske gaal laal ho jaate the jo ki
uski khubsurati ko or bhi jyada bda dete the uska vyahaar bilkul
vishal k viprit tha jha vishal carefree tha vahi vo hamesha sabki
care karti thi jha vishal har ek chij ast vyast kar deta tha vahi vo
har ek ast vyast chij ko vapas sahi jagah pe rakhti thi vo bahut
simple or suljhi hui ladki thi jha vishal ko kaam karne kaa aalas tha
vahi vo har ek kaam ko pure man se karti thi uske sapno mai ek
ladke ki tasvir hamesha dikhai deti thi par jab vo so k uthti to vo
tasvir use dhundhli dhundhli si hi yaad rahti thi use yakeen tha ki
jab vo us ladke ko dekhegi to uski vo dhundhli yaade chat jaayengi
or use vo tasvir saaf saaf dikhai dene lagegi or vo usi din kaa
intejaar kar rhi thi isi vajah se use koi bhi dev putra pasand nahi
aata tha vo sab ko apna acha dost maanti thi vo sab se pyar se
baat karti thi

Now again location change - at shaitaanlok

Jha ek taraf dev lok mai hasi khushi ka mahol tha vahi dusri taraf
ek lok aisa bhi tha jha par shaitaan ka raaj tha vo jagah dekhne
mai hi bahut bhayaanak thi vha har taraf aag hi aag thi jo ki laave
ki shakal mai idhar udhar bah rahi thi us aag mai kai darindo ki
aatmaaye bhi tair rahi thi sab k chahre ek se bad k ek khofnaak
the vo aag hawa mai bhi idhar udhat bah rahi thi ye lok aisa tha
jha har taraf nirasha jalan dukih ka raaj tha yaha par bahut si
chattane hawa mai ud rahi thi jaise ki avatar movie mai ud rhi thi
par in chattano ki ek baat khass tho ki inme se garma garam lava
nikal rahi tha or in chattano k upper kuch khandar bne hue the jis
mai pishacho ki sena rahti thi jo ki sirf soti rahti thi unhe jyadatar
bhukha hi rakha jaata tha taaki jung k samay vo apne shikaar par
tut pade or use mar kar kha jaaye jisse vo or bhi jyada khunkhaar
ho jaati h sab se upper ek bahut hi badi chattan jo ki ek upgrah ki
tarah dikh rahi thi isi se vo saara lava nikal raha tha ye koi aam
lava nahi tha ye shaitaan k fouj ki aatmaaye thi jo ki lava ki shakal
mai idhar udhar bah rahi thi us chattan k upper bicho bich ek
bahut hi bhayaanak mahal bna hua tha ye mahal sone chaandi yaaa
hire jwahraato se nahi balki insaani haddiyoon se bna hua tha isme
alag alag kamre the jha par shaitaan uski biwiyoon k saath rahta
tha yaha par jagah jagah haddiyoon se shaitan ki murtiyaan bani
hui thi jin k madhyaam se shaitaan har jagah ko dekh sakta tha
mahal mai kisi ek kone mai ek kamraa bna hua tha jha shaitaan k
alawa shaitaan ki sabse khass raani hi jaa sakti thi vha se shaitaan
 dharti par har jagah najar rakh sakta tha vo sirf us jagah ko nahi
dekh paata tha jha par koi suraksha kawach le k upasthit ho kyonki
vo suraksha kawach bahut hi powerfull hota h or shaitaan barrial ki
vajah se us kawach ko tod nahi paata h kyoki us barrial mai choti si
draar hui thi jis vajah se shaitaaan ne dharti k logo par apna
prabhav daala tha or unke man mai paap daalna shuru kia tha or
rahi sahi kasar kalyug ne puri kar di is yug mai insaan bahut hi
jyaada paapi ho gye the jis vajah se shaitaan ki shaktiyaan bahut
hi jyaada bad gyi thi par vo apni shaktiyaan itni jyada badana
chahta tha ki vo barrial tod sake isi liye vo sahi samay ka intejaar
kar rha tha or saath hi saath dharti par paap bada rha tha

Again location change - unknown place

Dur kisi or brahmaand mai ek jagah aisi bhi thi jha par ghor
andhera tha or vha par hare k chij jami hui thi parantu jamne se
pahle hare k chi pathar ki bani hui thi yaha par jivaan ka koi namo
nishan nahi tha par yaha ki ek baat khaas thi jaise shaitaan lok mai
lava bah rha tha vaisa hi lava yaha par bhi upasthit tha par vo bhi
jama hua tha yaha par bhi ek pathar ki murti thi jo ki is
brahmaand k bicho bich thi or vo pathar ki murti bhi baraf se
dhaki hui thi aisa lag rha tha ki ye sab kisi ko rokne k liye kiya gya
ho job hi us murti k ander tha vo bahut hi shaktishali hoga isiliye
use pahle pathar k bna diya hoga or fir is pure brahmaand ko jama
diyaa gya hoga taaki yaha koi aisa naa bache jo uski madad kar
sake or use bahar nikaal sake

Now location change - aaiye ab ham vha chalte h jha is brahmaand

ka sabse khatarnaak astra rakha hua h ji haa mai shulsarpam ki
baat kar rha hu .
is lok mai pravesh karne k liye kisi ko bhi saat darwaaje paar karne
padte h jisme us shaks ki achai or buraai ki pariksha hoti h is lok
ki rachna swam shiv shakti ne ki h parantu bich mai shaitaan ne
apni shaktiyaan daal k isme burai k dwar bhi bna liye the jisse in
dwaro ko isliye bnaya gya tha taaki koi bhi us astra tak naa pahuch
sake or jo us astra ko dharan kare vo uska galat istemaal naa
kare .
 is lok k bicho bich yaani ki in saaato dwaro yaa aap inhe saat
chakra bhi kah sakte h (kyonki upper se dekhne par ye chakr ki
tarah ghumte rahte h) shulsarpam hawa mai latak rha tha
shulsarpam kaa upper vaala bhag trishul k aakar kaa h or niche
vaala bhag saanp k aakar ka h niche vaale bhag mai kai saare saanp
trishul ki nail se jude hue h isiliye ye bhag saanp k aakar ka h or
vo sab saanp hawa mai lahraa rhe h or bahut hi buri tarah se
funkaar rhe h unki funkaar pure lok mai sunai de rahi h koi bhi unki
funkaar sun sakta tha is lok mai aa k

Now again location change - at earth

Aaiye ab chalte h dharti par jha apna hero so rha h or ek ladki ka

haseen sapna dekh rha h jisme vo ek ladki k saath ghum rha h or
jaise hi vo ladki kuch bolne hi vaali thi vha baad aa jaati h or
hamare hero ki nind khul jaati h use vo sapna to yaad rahta h par
us ladki ka chahra use dhundhla dhundhla saa hi yaad rahta h ant
mai vo apna sir jhatak k paani daalne vaale ko dekhta h to vo koi or
nahi uske dono bhai hi the jo ki paani daal k bhag jaate h par
vishal unhe gate se bhar jaate hue dekh leta h or gusse se unhe do
char galiyaan deta h

Update - 8 (mega update)

Ab tak aapne pada ki kaise vishal k sapne mai uske bhai paani dal k
khalal paida kar dete h jisse vo nind se jag jaata h or apne bhaiyo
ko gaaliyaa deta hua uth jaata h

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Kuch der gaaliyaa dene k baad vishal uth kar bathroom mai ghus
kar nahaane lagta h or nahaate nahaate us ladki k baare mai
sochne lagta h ki kon h vo ladki or use jyadatar usi k hi sapne kyo
aate h or fir jab uski nind khulti h to uska chehra use dhang se
yaad kyo nahi rahta h aakhir kon ho sakti h vo komal (fir vishal
komal ka chahra us dhundhli tasvir se milaane lagta h par vo usme
fit nahi baithta h )
Nahi nahi vo komal nahi h varna vo tasvir ab tak dhundhli nahi hoti
to fir kon………khair chodo
Fir vishal thodi der nahata h or fir bahar ja k kapde pahnta h or
taiyaar ho k niche chala jaata h jha uski mossi or uske bhai sab usi
ka naashte pe intejaar kar rhe the .
vishal ek najar ghur k apne bhaiyo ko dekhta h jo ki muh pe haath
rakh k dhire dhire has rhe the uske baad vo bhi has padta h or un
sab k saath mil k khana khane lagte h uske baad vishal apne collage
or robin or Hitesh apne apne collage chale jaate h robin or Hitesh
dono bhai hone k saath saath ek dusre k jigri yaar the dono ne ek
hi collage mai admission liya tha or dono saath saath college jaate
the ek hi bike se halanki vishal k pass apni gaadi or apni bike bhi
thi par vo sab unke dusre ghar mai thi jo ki shahar k thode bahari
illake mai tha vishal ki family se jo bhi kabhi shahar aata vo usi
ghar mai rukta tha parantu vishal ki mossi ne unhe unki mummy ko
bol k apne sath bula liya taaki unke bete ko bhi koi saathi mil jaaye
or vo kisi buri sangat mai naa fase vishal or robin k aane k baad
Hitesh ne lagbhag apne sabhi bure dosto k saath faltu ghumna band
kar diya tha vo or robin bahut hi jald jigri yaar ban gye the
parantu vishal k sath free hone mai use time lag jaata h .
Vishal k ache vyavhaar k chalte vo bhi jaldi hi uske saath free ho
jaata h par ek limit tak kyonki use pta tha ki vo uskaa bada bhai h
or agar usne apni limit cross ki to vishal ko gussa aa sakta tha fir
use jhelna kisi k bas ki baat nahi h vishal ki family hafte mai ek
baar use phon jaroor karte the or sab usse baat karte the vishal
kaa bada bhai yaani ki uske tauji ka ladka vipin vo is vakt
dehradoon mai rah kar hotel management ka course kar rha tha
kyonki uski family ab bahut hi jald hotels kaa business shuru karne
vaale the jise vipin or uske chachu thakur raghuveer singh dekhne
vaale the or vishal civil engg. Kar rha tha taaki vo apne tauji ka
contractor ka business sambhal sake
Fir vishal chowk ki taraf chal deta h jha pankaj apni bike le k uska
wait kar rha tha fir dono college k liye chal padte h college se ek
kilometer piche unhe aashi ki scooty dikhai deti h pankaj uski taraf
bike ghumaane hi vaala hota h ki aashi k pass komal aa jaati h or
dono collage ki taraf chal deti h pankaj apni bike unke barabar
chalaane lagta h or fir vo dono baate karne lagte h vishal bhi komal
or aashi ko hii kahta h jiske jawab mai dono hii kahti h itne mai
inke barabar ek or bike aa jaati h jiske upper vijay or megha dono
chipak k baithe the jaise hi un sab kin ajar vijay pe padti h sab
use ek smile dete h or hii kahte h itne mai college aa jaata h or
sab dost ground mai ikkaththe ho jaate h fir thodi der sab baate
karte h or fir uske baad sab apni apni classes mai chale jaate h
uske baad kuch khaas nahi hota h recess time mai sab dost milte h
fir vahi classes and then sab apne apne gharo ki or nikal jaate h
uske baad kuch dino tak koi khass baat nahi nhi hoti h bus vishal or
komal dhire dhire ek dusre k najdeej aa rhe the dono collage k
baad bhi ek dusre se milne lage the vishal apne dusre ghar jaakar
ek bike le aaya tha jisse sham ko vo komal se milne park mai jaa
sake vo dono ab ek dusre se kabhi park mai kabhi coffee shop
kabhi multiplex mai lagataar milne lage the jisse unme najdikiyaan
aane lagi jise sab k sab dost notice kar rhe par abhi vo un dono ko
pareshaan nahi karna chahte the kyonki abhi vishal ne komal ko naa
to I love you kha tha naa hi komal ne abhi baat aage badai thi
sabhi vishal ko komal ko propose karne k liye uksa rhe the par
vishal k dimaag mai to abhi bhi vo ladki hi chayi hui thi jo ki uske
sapne mai aati thi vahi komal class mai kisi k khayalo mai khoyi
rahti thi uska man kisi kaam mai nahi lagta tha ek din sham ko
vishal or uske sabhi dost park mai baithe hue the unme se kuch ne
bear ki cane pakdi hui thi to baaki coldrink haath mai pakde hue
the or sab aapas mai baate kar rhe the ki tabhi kapil ko halka
halka bear kaa surur chadne laga tha to usne vishal or komal ki
baat ched di
Kapil - dosto bahut hi jald ham eek bahut hi tagdi party milne vaali
h
Sabhi kapil ki is baat par hairaan ho jaate h
Rakesh - kaisi party bhai
Kapil - bhai ham sab dosto mai ab ek or couple banne vaala h or vo
couple sab ko ek jabardast party dega kyonki vo ham sab dosto mai
se sab se last couple hoga
Kapil ki baat samajh mai aate hi sab vishal ki or dekhne lagte h
jisse vishal hadbadda jaata h or coldrink ki bottle side mai rakh
 deta h
Vishal - kya hua yaar tum sab mujhe aise kyo dekh rhe ho
Rahul - haan to bhai bta kit u komal ko kab prapose kar rha h or
hame party kab de rha h
Vishal - yaar kyo meri lene pe tule hue ho yaar ham just friend hai
iske alawa hamaare bich kuch khaas nahi h
Rohit - bhai ham se chupaane ki jarurat nahi h ham tum dono ko
park mai coffee house mai or multiplex mai bhi dekh chuke h ek
couple ki tarah
Vishal - yaar vo to bas aise hi ham dono normal friend h so kabhi
kabhi bahar mil lete h
Vijay - bhai friend to ham bhi h par ham se to kabhi iss tarah
bahar mila nahi jab bhi ghumne bulao to bhaana maar deta h
Vijay ki is baat par vishal bhi chup ho jaata h kyonki uski baat kahi
naa kahi sahi thi vo or komal normal friend se kahi jyada paas aa
gye the
Rohit - dekh bhai dost hone k naate ek salaah deta hiu ki jitni
jaldi ho sake komal ko propose kar de isse pahle ki vo kisi or ko
pasand karne lage or vo use propose kare to tu sirf baad mai dil
tutne vaale songs hi suntaa rah jaayega or devdaas ki tarah paro ki
yaad mai jindagi bhar yahi sochta rah jayega ki kaash maine komal
ko propose kiya hota to aaj vo mere saath hoti
Vishal uski baat chup chap sunne lagta h or fir kuch soch kar
Vishal - yaar naa to maine kabhi uske bare mai aisaa kuch socha h
or naahi usne mere bare mai abhi to mai khud sure nahi hu ki mai
use as a friend like karta hu ki as a lover love karta hu kuch to h
jo ki mujhe uske jyada karib jaane se rok rha h
Pankaj - bhai ye sab faltu ki baate h tu sab chod or tujhe hamaari
dosti ki kasam tu aaj komal ko propose karega or haan ab baat yahi
khatam mai kuch or nahi sunna chahta
Vishal - par bhai meri baat to sun
Pankaj - (use bich mai tokte hue) bas maine kaha naa mai kuch
nahisunna chahta tu use propose karega or that’s final kyo dosto
Sabhi ek saath haan that’s final tujhe hamaare dosti ki kasam is
tarah to tu tadapta hi rahega
Vishal - par………
 Sabhi - bas chup
Vishal - thik h mai karungaa par agar usne naa kaha to koi use
kuch nahi bolegaa (or man mai sochne lagta h ki yaar ye mai kha
fas gya )
Ab pankaj komal ko call karke park mai aane ko kahta h komal jab
kaaran puchti h to vo use kahta h ki uske liye surprise h or fir call
kaat dete h to vijay kahta h ki jaldi se gulab k ful ko arrange karo
to raman gulab kaa ful lene chala jaata h or baaki sab vahi par
idhar udhar ghumne lagte h or komal ko propose karne k liye sahi
jagah dhundne lagte h jha par ye dono akele ho or vo log bhi chup k
komal or vishal ko dekh sake or unki baate sun sake ant mai unhe
ek jagah dikhai de jaati h jha par aas paas thodi bahut jhadiyaa
rakhi hui thi fir rohit raper vaala bomb le aata h jise niche se
ghumaane par ek dhamaaka nikalta h or rang birange raper ki
varsha hone lagti h bilkul fulo ki bearish ki tarah fir vo bomb sab k
haath mai pakda dete h or fir sab un jhadiyo mai chup jaate h jo
ki vishal k bilkul najdeek thi or pankaj ko gate pe bhej k komal ko
iss taraf bhejne k liye kahte h
Thodi der mai komal aashi k saath park mai enter karti h to pankaj
unhe gate pe hi mil jaata h fir pankaj komal ko vishal ki taraf
bhejta h or khud aashi ko le k jhadiyoo mai chup jaata h jab komal
pankaj ki btayi hui jagah pe pahuchti h to vha pahuch kar vishal ko
dekhti h to vo thodi hairaan ho jaati h fir vishal k paas pahuch kar
usse apne surprise k bare mai puchti h to vishal use aankhe band
karne ko kahta h komal excitement mai aankhe band kar leti h fir
kuch der baad vishal use aankhe kholne ko kahta h or jab vo
aankhe kholti h to vo dekhti h ki vishal ghutno k bal baitha hua h
or uske haath mai ek khubsurat gulab h or vo komal ki taraf dekhta
h or vo jo uske dosto ne use kahne k liye kaha tha vo kahna shuru
karta h
Vishal - komal jab maine tumhe pahli baar dekha tha to mai
tumhaari in sundar aankho mai kho sa gya tha mujhe kuch bhi acha
nahi lagta h mai bus tumhaare saath rahna chahta hu mujhe
tumhaare siwa kuch nahi sujhta h jab maine gaur kiya to mujhe pta
chala ki mujhe tum se pyar ho gya h ab mai apni saari jindagi
tumhaare saath gujaarna chahta hu tumhe jindagi ki sab khushiyaa
 dena chahta hu so kyat um jindagi ki raaho mai mere saath chalna
pasand karogi kya tum meri hamsafar banna pasand karogi komal I
just want to say that I love you in difficult situation of life I want
to be with you I want spend my whole life with you so tell me do
you love me ?

Update - 9
Pichle update mai aapne dekha ki kaise vishal komal ko apne dosto k
kahne par propose karta h or uska jawab maangta h
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Komal vishal k is tarah se propose karne par ekdum shoked ho jaati
h or vo kuch der sochti h uske fir vishal ko jawab deti h
Komal - vishal pichle kuch dino se ham kaafi close rhe h or mai
kahna chahungi kit um ek bahut hi ache insaan ho or ek bahut hi
ache friend ho or mujhe pura vishwaas h ki tum ek bahut hi ache
lover bhi banoge jis ladki ko tumhaara saath milega vo bahut hi
khushnasib ladki hogi so mera jawab h (komal ne jaise hi ye kaha to
sab k sab taiyaar ho gye raper bomb fodne k liye )…………………….
No………………………… or isi k saath kapil ne bomb fod diya jis vajah ser
baaki koi komal ka answer nahi sun sake or sabko laga ki komal ne
haan kah diya h isiliye kapil ne bomb foda h or fir sabne bhi apne
apne bomb fod diye or isi k saath vishal or komal pe rapers ki
barish hone lagi fir sabhi bahar aa gye or vishal or komal se gale
mil ke unhe congrats karne lage jisse komal or khud vishal bhi
hairaan ho gya vishal kjuch bolne k liye muh kholta to koi na koi
uska muh band karwa hi deta jis vajah se sabko ngalatfahmi hi bani
hui thi vishal pahle to sab ko enjoy karne deta h fir sabse puchta h

Vishal - ho gya tum sab ka yaa or bhi kuch baaki h

Vijay - kya hua bhai itna serious face kyo bnaya hua h aaj to
 tujhe khush hona chahiye

Vishal - or vo kyo bhai kis khushi mai

Rahul - komal ne haan jo kah di h or ab to tum dono bhi lovers ho

gye ho

Vishal - or komal ne haan kab kaha kyo komal tumne mujhe haan
kaha

Komal ko laga ki vishal ko uske naa kahne ka bahut bura laga h or

vo usse bahut hi gussa h isisliye itna serious hua h uisiliye vo chup
rahna hi bather samjhati h or apni garden naaa mai hila deti h

Vishal - Lo ab btao ki komal ne mujhe haan kaha tha ki naa

Vishal ki is baat pe sabhi hairaan ho jaate h or kapil ko gusse se
dekhne lagte h jisse kapil apni garden idghar udhar ghumaane lagta
h

Fir sabhi vishal ko sorry kahte h or komal bhi vishal se kahti h

Komal - vishal dekho pls naaraj mat hona tum bahut hi ache insaan
ho koi bhi ladki tumhe naa nahi kah sakti shayad mai bhi nahi kahti
agar mai ajay se pyar nahi karti ajay or mai ek dusre se bahut hi
jyada pyar karte h vo mere pichle college mai meri hi class mai
padta h abhi kuch din pahle ham dono k bich kuch misunderstanding
ho gayi thi jis vajah se vo mujhse naaraj ho gya tha jab tak mai
use manati tab tak mere papa ka transfer yaha ho gya or mai yaha
aa gayi kuch dino tak mai uska no. dial karti rahi par vo switch off
hi aa rha tha fir mujhe laga ki vo mujhse pyar hi nahi karta h isi
vajah se mai tumhaare kaafi close aa gyi thi par abhi kal hi vo
mujhse milne yaha aaya tha or usne mujhe btaya ki uska mobile kho
gya tha jis vajah se uska phone switch off aa rha h or mera no usi
phone mai saved tha fir jab use pta chala ki mere papa ka transfer
ho gya h to usne hamare yaha k pta malum kiya fir mujhse milne
yaha aa gya jis vjah se mujhe pta chala ki vo mujhse kitna pyar
karta h isiliye I am really really sorry ki meri vajah se tumhaara
dil dukha mera aisa koi intention nahi tha
Komal ki bat sun kar sab ki narajgi dur ho jaati h par vo sab ab bhi
vishal k liye dukhi the par tabhi vishal jor jor se hasne lagta h or
sabhi hairaan ho jaate h ki vishal itna has kyo rha h or fir rohit
vishal se puch hi leta h
Rohit - bhai tu pagal to ni ho gya has kyo rha h
Vishal - bhai mai has isiliye rha hu kyonki tum sab mere liye dukhi
ho rhe ho jabki mai bahut khush hu iski do vajah h ek to ye ki
komal ko uska pyar mil gya or dusri ye h ki mai komal se pyar hi
nahi karta hu vo to tum sab ne mujhe apni kasam de k komal ko
propose karne ko kaha or mai tum sab ki kasam kaise taal sakta hu
isi vajah se maine komal ko propose kiya agar ye haan kahti to mai
bhi isse pyar karne lag jaata shayad thoda late hi sahi or agar ye
naa kahti to bhi koi problem nahi thi kyonki mai iske liye koi serious
nahi tha jisse ki mera dil tute yaa mai iski yaad mai devdas ban jau
vagerah vagerah (sabhi vishal ka jawab sun k hairaan ho jaate h )
so chill yaar kisi ko dukhi hone ki jarurat nahi h balki hame to
komal k liye khush hona chahiye ki use fanally apna pyar mil gya h
Komal - thanks vishal tumne mere dil ka bojh halka kar diya nahi to
mai saari jindagi yahi sochti rahti ki meri vajah se tum jaise dost
kaa dil tut gya or shayad mai apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar
paati tum bahut hi ache ho bhagwaan kare ki tumhe tumhaare sapno
ki raani jaldi hi mil jaaye
Vishal - thanks komal and congrats
Komal - thanks
Fir sabhi komal ko congrats karte h or apne apne ghar chale jaate
h

Update - 10

Location change - at yamlok

Aaj subah subah hi amrita taiyaar hokar devlok k liye guru
brahspati k pas shiksha graham karne jaa rahi h jaha vo sabhi
devtao k bachcho ki shaktiyo ko jagaate h or unko un shaktiyo pe
control karna sikhate h amrita taiyaar ho jaati h or bahar khadi
gaadi mai baith jaati h jo apne aap hi chalti h or fir devlok k liye
nikal padti h aaj vo bahut hi khush thi kyonki uski aaj uski ek saheli
 prithvilok ghum k vaapas aayi thi to vo usse prithvilok k bare mai
jaanna chahti thi usne apne bhai or pita se ye hi suna tha ki prithvi
pe insaan rahte h jo ki kaliyug mai paapi hote jaa rhe the un pe
shaitaan ka prabhav bad rha tha isiliye yaha narak mai paapiyo ki
sankhya lagataar bad rahi thi vo apni dost se insaano k bare mai
jaanna chahti thi or isi k saath vo apni bua yaani ki Yamuna ji k
bare mai bhi jaanna chahti thi jaise hi amrita devlok mai apne
collage pahuchi vha par uske sabhi dost pahle se hi mojud the vo
sabhi uska hi intejaar kar rhe the vo sabse gale milti h fir vo sabse
pahle apni dost jo ki pawan dev ki beti thi usse uski yatra k bare
mai puchti h uska naam urmila tha
Amrita - hiii urmila kaisi h
Urmila - bahut badiya yaar
Amrita - or bta fir kaisi rahi prithvilok ki yatra
Urmila - ekdum badiya bahut maja aaya yaar
Amrita - acha fir apni yatra k bare mai kuch suna yaar ki kyaa kya
dekha kha kha gyi
Urmila - acha sun mai sabse pahle vha goro k desh mai gyi jaha par
sab log bahut hi jyada gore the sab k sab English bolte vha par
maine dekha ki b ahut hi unchi unchi imaarte insaano ne bnai h vha
par sab chije bijli pe chalti h un unchi unchi buildings pe upper
niche jane k liye lifts ka intejaam kiya gya h (iss tarah se urmila
amrita ko prithvi k bare mai btaati h )
Amrita - acha vha k insaano k bare mai bta naa yaar kuch
Urmila - vha par alag alag tarah insaan h jinme se kuch bahut hi
ache h kuch bahut hi bure ache inssan vha par mera paala kuch
bure insaano se bhi pada par par vo mujhe chu bhi nahi paaye or
haan insaan tumhaare pitaji k naam se bahut hi jyada darte h mai
jitney logo se bhi mili vo sab k sab tumhaare pita k naam se hi
darte the
Amrita ka seena ye sun k garv se choda ho jaata h
Amrita - haan vo to darenge hi naa vaise bhi mera bhai kahta h ki
sab insaan marne se darte h
Urmila - haan ye to tumne sahi kaha aajkal kaliyug mai sab insaan
paapi hote jaa rhe h or isiliye maut se darte h sirf himalyaa mai
tapasya karne vaale saadhu hi aise hote h jo maut se nahi darte
 kyonki unko jindagi se koi moh nahi hota
Amrita - vaise y bta kyat um meri buaji se bhi mili
Urmila - haan yaar par mai tumhe kya btaau in insaano ne unke
pavitra jal ko bahut hi jyada mailaa kar diya h unhone usme bahut
hi jyada kachra faila diya h tum khud hi dekh lo
Iske baad urmila apne mind se apni yatra ki saari yaade amrita k
dimaag mai bhejti h or fir amrita ko sab kuch vo sab kuch job hi
prathvi par urmila ne dekha saaf saaf dikhayi dene lagta h aapni
bua ki aisi haalat dekh k uski aankho mai aansu aa jaate h uska
man udas ho jaata h uske baad vo sab class mai chale jaate h jha
par amrita ka class mai man nahi lag rha tha jis vajah se vo jaldi
ghar aa jaati h or sidha apne room mai jaa chali jaati h fir uski
maa vha par aa jaati h or jab vo amrita ko pareshan dekhti h to
usse uski pareshani kaa kaaran puchti h fir amrita apni maa ko jo
bhi collage mai hua vo sab kuch bta deti h use sunne k baad uski
maa use samjhati h ki job hi insaan karta h uska dand use bhugtna
hi padta h or Yamuna ji to bhagwaan Vishnu ki priyaa h or insaan
unhe ganda karke bhagwaan Vishnu ko krodh dila rhe h jab gandagi
bahut hi jyada bad jayegi to vo is dharti par pralay laa denge jisse
Yamuna ji fir se saaf ho jayengi or insaano ko unke kiye ki saja bhi
mil jaayegi
Iss jawab ko sun kar amrita ko thodi tassali milti h or vo fir dhire
dhire nind ki aagosh mai chali jaati h

Location change - at earth

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Vahi dharti pe komal ko uska pyar milne par vishal bahut hi jyada
khush tha vo park se ghar aa jaata h or fir raat ko sab dinner
karte h or uske bhai use apne pure din kaa haal btate h or fir usse
pure din kaa haal puchte h to vo komal vaali ghatna unhe btata h
Vishal - vaise to pure din bhar kuch khass nahi hua par haan aaj
ham sab dost park mai baithe the ki tabhi kapil ne meri or komal ki
baatchit ched di or fir pankaj ne mujhe apni dosti ki kasam de k
komal ko propose karne k liye bol diya fir majburan mujhe use
propose karna pada
 Hitesh - yaar komal to aapki vahi frnd h naa jiske liye aap apne
dusre ghar se bike laaye the or jiske saath aap din bhar park
complex vagarah mai ghumte rahte ho
Vishal - haan vahi h
Robin - or aapne usko propose kar diya vah bhai aap to chaa gye
Vishal - haan yaar ab dosti ki kasam di thi panku ne to karna hi
pada
Hitesh - fir kya hua jab aapne use propose kiya tab to usne haan
kar diya hoga or aapne usko kiss kiya yaa nahi
Vishal - imraan hashmi samjha h kya jo kiss karne lag jaau vo jaise
hi maine use kiss kiya to usne no kah diya
Robin - oh ho bhai sahab fir to aapka dil tut gya hoga
Vishal - nahi yaar dil to tab tutta na yaar jab mai uske liye serious
hota par mai uske liye serious kaha tha ham to just frnds the or
tumhe pta h jab maine use propose kiya to ek mast incident hua
Hitesh - aisa kya hua jo aapko itni hasi aa rahi h
Vishal - vo yaar jaise hi komal ne naa kaha vaise hi kapil ne raper
bomb fod diya to kisi ko bhi ye pta ni chala ki komal ne naa kaha h
or sab aa gye mujhe or komal ko congrats karne fir jab maine
btaya ki komal ne naa kaha h to sab ne jis tarah se kapil ko ghur k
dekha uski fat k chaar ho gyi thi tum sab ko bhi dekhna chahiye
tha
Fir sab bhai ek saath hasne lagte h or ek dusre k saath aapne pure
din bhar ki baate share karte h or fir so jaate h

update - 11

ab tak aapne pada ki kaise vishal apne bhaiyo ko apne pure din bhar
kaa haal sunaata h or fir ant mai sab so jaate h
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aaj ki subah vishal k liye kuch jyada achi nahi rahi subah subah hi
uski shuruvaat robin ne thande paani se ki or fir uske baad fir se
vahi roj kaa ladai jhagda vishal robin ko fir se daantne lagta h aaj
uska collage off tha isiliye vo apne dosto ko phone karke unhe aaj
ka plan btane hi vaala tha ki uska phone bajne lagta h
phone komal kaa tha to vo komal se baat karne lagta h
vishal - hii komal kaisi ho
komal - badiya tum btaao
vishal - mai bhi ek dum badiya hu or aaj hamaari yaad kaise aa gyi
komal - kyo mai kya tumse baat ni karti hu kabhi
vishal - sweetheart agar hame hi yaad karti rahogi to bechaare
ajay ka kya hoga by the chodo in sab baato ko ye btao ki itni
subah subah phone kyo kiya
komal - vishal kya tum aaj free ho
vishal - haan yaar aaj chutti h isiliye koi kaam nahi h bilkul free hu
komal - yaar vo kya h na ki aaj ajay paonta aa rha h or mai use
tum sab se milwaana chahti hu
vishal - kyo use mujhse milwa k mujhe jalaana chahti ho
komal - (thodi sad ho kar) nahi yaar mera aisa koi intention nahi h
pa agar tumhe bura lag rha h to mai ajay ko mana kar deti hu
vishal - (jor se hasta hua) hey tum to dukhi ho gyi don't worry
yaar mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahi laga so you don't need to be feel
guilty mai to bus just majak kar rha tha or kuch nahi
komal - (khush hokar) thanks or haa aaj 10 bje chowk pe milne aa
jaana mai sab ko vahi bula lungi
vishal - thik h sab ko chowk pe hi milta hu

location change - at yamlok

vhi yamlok mai amrita bhi subah subah so kar uthti h or fir nha
dhokar taiyaar hoti h aaj bhi use aapni bua ki yaad aa rhi thi uska
mood aaj bhi kuch acha nahin tha vo apni bua ko ek baar dekhna
 chahti thi unse ek baar milna chahti thi .
fir amrita apnifamily k saath bhojan karne lagi to uska kharab
mood dekhkar uske pita ne usse pucha
yamraaj - meri laadli beti ko aaj kya hua h aaj uska mood kyo
kharab h
amrita - kuch nahi pitaji bus aise hi
yamraaj - nahi putri kuch to hua h apne pita ko nahi btaaogi
amrita - kuch khaas nahi pitaaji bus bua ki badi yaad aa rahi h mai
unse milna chahti hu maine bus unke baare mai sirf suna h kabhi
unko dekha nahi h mai unse rubaroo hona chahti hu
yamraaj - putri par vo to prithvilok mai h or tum yamlok mai to
tum unse kaise milogi
amrita - pitaaji mai unse milne dharti par jaana chahti hu is tarah
se mai unse mil bhi lungi or thod prithvilok bhi ghum lungi
yamraaj - par putri aaj is tarah achaanak prithvilok par jaane ka
kya kaaran h
amrita - pitaaji meri dost bhi abhi kuch din pahle dhari par ghumne
gyi thi vo kal hi vapus loti h mere sab dost lagbhag dharti par ghum
aaye h ab mai bhi jaana chahti hu aap mna nahi karenge pls pls pls
pls.................
is tarah amrita k baar baar kahne par aakhir kaar yamraaj aakhir
kaar maan hi jaate h or amrita ko prithvi par jaane ki aagya de
dete h par jaane se pahle vo uske bahar ek kawach bna dete h
jisse vo bure logo se surakshit rhe or shaitaan use trace naa kar
paaye fir amrita vo sab yaad karti h jo uski dost urmila ne use
transfer kiya tha
use dekhne k baad vo sabse pahle apni bua se milne kaa prograam
bnati h par vo koi khaas jagah chun nahi paati h vo fir se dhayaan
lagaati h to use guru ki nagri paonta sahib dikhai deti h jo use
aakarshit karti h to vo vahi sabse pahle jaane ka faislaa karti h
kyonki vaha se yamuna ji bahti h fir vo apna huliya jaadu se prithvi
ki aam ladki jaisa bna leti h or apne bhai maa pita or dosto se vida
le k dharti ki or chal deti h vo yamlok k sabse aakhir mai jaati h or
fir kone pe khade ho k apni aankhe band karke paonta ko yaad
karti h or vha se kud jaati h or dhireee dhiree dharti ki taraf
badne lagti h......
 Update - 12 (mega update)

To dosto ab tak aapne pada ki kaise amrita apne pitajii yaani ki

mr. yamraaaj ko manaati h prithvilok par jaane k liye or vo maan
bhi jaate h or fir vo apni jaane ki taiyaariyaa karne lagti h or agli
subah yamlok k kone mai pahuch kar paonta ko apne mind mai yaad
karti h or vha se kood jaati h

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Amrita k niche koodne k baad yamraaj kuch mantra padte h or
amrita k ird gird ek adrishay kawach saa ban jaata h vo dhire
dhire raaste mai alag alag loko ka aanand uthate hue prithvi ki or
badne lagti h raaste mai alag alag lok padte the inhi mai se ek tha
paristaan vha ki pariyo ne jab unhe dekha to vo sab uski sundarta
se bahut prabhavit hue unhone use kuch der vahi aaram karne or
apna aathithya graham karne ki peshkash ki jise amrita ne saharsh
swikaar kar liya vha kaa raja bahut hi sunder or prabhavshaali
vyaktitvya kaa dhani tha vha ki bahut saari pariyaa use pasand
karti thi par vo kisi ko bhav tak nahi deta tha uski sirf ek hi raani
thi or vo use bahut hi jyaada pyar karta tha .
us raja ne jab amrita ko dekha to vo uske sunder roop ka kayal ho
gya or usne use apni raani bnane ka soch liya tha isi liye vo khud
uske swagat k liye aage aane laga amrita bhi un sab ki mehmaan
nawaaji se bahut khush hui or un sab kaa dil se shukriyaa kaha
uske baad jab usne raja se prithvilok jaane ki aagya maangi to raja
ne apne dil ki baat amrita se kah di jise sun k amrita soch mai pad
jaati h or fir vo apni aankhe band karti h or us raja ka chehra us
dhundhli shakal vaale shaks se milaane ki koshish karti h udhar raja
ko uske chehre pe smile dikhti h to vo bada khush ho jaata h use
lagne lagta h ki shayad amrita use haan kah degi or uske chehre pe
bhi smile aa jaati h yaha amrita us raja ka chehra us frame mai fit
baithaane ki koshish kar rhi thi par vo usme fit nahi baith rha tha
or vo aakriti abhi bhi dhundhli thi .
haalanki amrita usse bahut prabhavit thi parantu vo uske frame mai
fit nahi baithta tha jis vajah se vo use naa kah deti h .
uske mana karne par raja ko bahut krodh aata h kyonki use aaj tak
kisi ne mna nahi kiya tha chahe vo dev kanya ho yaa pari uske
ander aakarshan hi kuch aisa tha .
par vo apne krodh ko thoda kaabu mai rakhta h or vo usse bade hi
pyar se pachuta h ki vo use kyo pasand nahi karti to amrita bhi
pyar se jawab deti h ki vo usse bahut hi prabhavit h isiliye vo uska
bahut samman karti h parantu vo usse pyar nahi karti h kyonki vo
kisi or ko pasand karti h to vo raja uske bare mai puchta h par vo
nahi btana chahti thi par vo baar baar uske bare mai puchta h to
vo gusse mai vha se uth kar jaane lagti h par raja uska raasta rok
leta h or kahta h ki vo uske sawal ka jawab diye bina yaha se nahi
ja sakti .
Is par amrita ko bahut gussa aa jaata h or vo use gusse mai kahti
h kit um yamraaj putri kaa raasta rokege tum mai itni himmat h to
thik h mujhe rok k dikhaao .
yamraaj kaa naam sunte hi us raja ke chehre kaa rang fikaa pad
jaata or vo vapas pyar se baat karne lagta h uski baato mai narmi
aa jaati h or vo amrita ko kahta h ki devi mai to bas sirf us
khushnasib ke bare mai jaanna chahta tha kripya aap krodhit naa
ho agar aap jaana chahe to aap jaa sakti h is poar amrita gusse
mai kahti h ki jis se vo pyar karti h vo nahi jaanti ki vo acha h yaa
bura dev hai yaa daanav vo chahe koi bhi ho maine use kabhi
saamne se nahi dekha vo sirf mere sapne mai aata h or vahi mera
hamsafar hoga or koi nahi uske aise tevar dekh k vo raja bhi soch
mai pad jaata h or fir amrita se maanfi mangta h jisse amrita
shant ho jaati h or use maaf kar deti h fir vo usse jaane ki aagya
leti h or prithvi ki taraf chal padti h

Location - at earth

Jaha ek taraf amrita prithvi ki taraf bad rahi thi vahi dusri taraf
vishal bhi apne dosto se milne k liye taiyaar ho rha tha aaj uska dil
bahut hi khush tha jiski vajah vo khud bhi nahi jaanta tha par use
aaj komal k boyfriend se milna tha to vo bahut khush tha isi liye vo
is anjaani si khushi ki taraf dhayaan nahi deta h or chowk ki taraf
chal padta h fir vo apne sab dosto ko vha par dekhta h or sab ko
hello kahta h vo sab uska or komal ka intejaar kar rhe the thodi
der baad un sab k paas ek shandaar car rukti h or usme se komal
or ek handsome sa ladka nikalta h vo ladka six feet height tall and
mascular tha or rey one glasses pahne hue tha komal sab se gale
milti h or fir sab ko ajay ka intro deti h sab dost ajay ki gaadi
dekh k usse kaafi prabhavit hote h or ajay ki personality bhi un
sab se jabardust thi par uski baato se lag rha tha ki use apne
status par bahut hi jyada ghamand h vishal us par jyada dhayaan
nahi deta or fir sab dost mil k Yamuna ghaat ki taraf chal dete h
or sab dost vahi par baith jaate h or ajay se uske baare mai
puchne lagte h
Pankaj - so ajay tum kya kar rhe ho
Ajay - mai hotel management ka course kar rha hu vo bhi
dehradoon k best institute se
Ajay ke aise ghamand bhare jawab sun kar vishal excuse me bol k
vha se thodi dur chala jaata h or kisi ko call karke puchta h ki vo
kaha par h to vo btata h ki apne friend k saath paonta aaya h to
vishal use Yamuna ghaat aane ko kahta h to vo kahta h ki vo bhi
pass mai hi h abhi aa rha h fir vishal apna call cut kar deta h or
ajay k pass chala jaata h jaha uske baaki dost ajay se sawaal kar
rhe the
Rahul - vaise ajay tumhaare pitaaji kya kaam karte h
Ajay - vo chauhan construction company mai as a chief engineer k
tour pe kaam karte h or jaante ho chauhan industry k maalik ka
beta mera bahut hi acha dost h or vo aaj yaha bhi aaya h par use
kuch kaam tha to vo chala gya
Itne mai piche se awaj aati h chala gya tha par ab aa gya hu vha
sab k sab vha dekhte h to vha par ek bahut hi smart ladka khda
tha uska rang gora tha vo kaafi fit body ka maalik tha vo bhi ajay
ki hi tarah tall and mascular tha usme ek alag hi baat thi vo un sab
se umar mai kuch hi mahine bada tha .
fir vo ladka un sab k pass aata h vo sab ko hello kahta h fir vo sab
ko excuse me kah k thoda aage badta h or ajay ko kahta h ki vo
abhi aa rha h or aaage bad jaata h or kisi ko dhundhne lagta h .
 vo un sab k upper jyada dhayaan nah deta kyonki vo kisi ko dhund
rha tha
Rohit - ajay ye kon tha or kha chala gya
Ajay - ye hi h mera dost jiske baare mai maine tum sab se kaha
tha
Raman - are vah yaar tumhaari to life set h itne bade aadmi se
tumhaari jaan pahchaan jo h
Ajay - haan bhai vo to hai ye course khatam hone k baad india mai
kuch jagah hotels kholna chahta h or ye chahta h ki dehradoon ka
hotel mai main iska partner banu
Vishal - sahi h yaar congratulation fir komal ki taraf dekh kar ab
to tumhaare maje h
Vishal ki baat par komal muskuraa deti h fir ajay vishal se puchta
h
Ajay - vaise vishal komal ne sab k parents k bare mai btaya par
tumhaare parents k bare mai nahi btaya vaise tumhaare papa kya
kaam karte h
Vishal - kuch khass nahi vo bas dukaaan chalaate h
iske aage vishal kuch bolta ajay bich mai hi bol padta h
Ajay - oh ho tumhaare papa ek mamuli se shopkeeper h tabhi tum
itne simple rahte ho koi ni yaar kabhi kisi help ki jarurat ho to
bejhijhak bol dena mai hamesha tumhaari help karne k liye taiyaar
hu (fir ajay komal ki taraf dekh kar yaar tumhaare dost to middle
class family se hi belong karte h to tumne in sab k saath adjust
kaise kiyaor ye jiski tum itni taarif kar rhi thi us bachaare ki to
mere ghar mai kaam karne vaalo jitni aamdani h balki unki bhi isse
jyada kamayi hogi
Is baat pe sab ko gussa aa jaata h or vo ajay ko kuch bolne vaale
hi the ki vishal sab ko chup kara deta h par komal ko ajay ki baat
kaa bahut bura lagta h or vo vishal k mana karne k bavjood bhi
ajay ko bol hi deti h
Komal - ajay tumhe is tarah mere dosto ki insult karne kaa koi hak
nahi h or rahi baat vishal ki to vo dil kaa bahut acha h apne dosto
ki har sambhav madad karta h
Ajay - jaanu mai to bas sachchaai bta rha humara status isse kaafi
jyada high h mera kafi bade logo k saath uthna baithna h meri
 parties bhi bade bade hotles mai hoti h jabki ye to kabhi 5 star
hotel k ander bhi nahi gya hoga inki to party bhi dhabe pe hoti hogi
baaaki sab ki family to fir bhi thik h par vishal ki family………………….
Vishal - Mr. ajay hold your tounge mai tumhe ab tak komal ki
vajah se bardast kar rha hu par agr meri family peg ye to meri
garenty h tum kuch bhi karne k layak nahi rahoge
Vishal ki baat par ajay bhadak jaata h or vo vishal ko se kahta h ki
Ajay - mai bhi tujhe komal ki vajah se bardasht kar rha hu varna
tujh jaise do kodi k insaan ko mai apne jute ki nok pe rakhta hu or
kya kaha tha tune teri family ko kuch kaha to mai kuch karne layak
nahi rahungaa to sun tu or teri family………………
Ajay ne abhi itna hi kaha tha ki koi use piche ki ghumaata h or
uske muh pe ek khich k tamacha padta h jisse ajay kaa sar
chakraane lagta h ye par vo jaldi hi sambhal jaata h or thapad
maarne vaale ki taraf dekhta h to vo hairaan ho jaata h vishal k
sab dost bhi use dekh k hairaan ho jaate h or komal ko bhi shock
lag jaata h .
ajay ko thapad maarne vaala koi or nahi…………

Update - 13

Ab tak aapne pada ki ajay vishal ki family k bare me ulta sidha

bolne lagta h to to vishal use warn karta h par vo nahi manta or fir
jaise hi vo vishal ki family ko kuch kahne hi vaala tha ki koi use
piche ghuma leta h or uske gaalo par ek khich k thappad maarta h
jise dekh k sab shock ho jaate h

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Jaise hi sab ki najar us thappad maarne waale insaan ki or jaati h
sab shock ho jaate h kyonki vo koi or nahi vahi ladka tha jo ki ajay
k saath aaya tha ajay ka muh to aisa ho gya tha ki jaise ki
singhaade kaa fool ho vo muh khole ektak apne dost ko dekh rha
tha sabhi hairaan the or yesoch rhe the ki ajay ko usi k best
friend ne kyo maara vahi vishal k chehre pe us shaks ko dekh k ek
smile aa jaati h tabhi chuppi todte hue us shaks ne bolna start kiya
Ladka - ajay teri himmat kaise huyi iski family k bare me ulta
sidha bolne ki ye to shukar mna ki tune kuch bola nahi varna agar
kuch bol diya hota to mai tujhe utha k yamuna mai fenk deta
Ajay - vipin yaar tune is do kodi k insaan k liye mujhe kyo maara
Vipin - ajay khabardaar agar tune iske bare mai kuch bhi ulta
sidha kaha to mai teri jaan le lunga or jise tu do kodi kaa insaan
kah rha h vo kon h tu jaanta h
Ajay - kon h vo bas ek mamuli se shop keeper kaa beta h
Vipin - nahi acha ye bta ki mera pura naam kya h
Ajay - ab in sab mai tera naam kaha se aa gya
Vipin - tu vo sab chod bas mera puraa naam bta
Ajay - thakur vipin singh chauhan
Vipin - thik h ab kyat u iska pura naam jaanta h
Ajay - nahi
Vipin - (vishal k dosto se) kyat um log iska pura naam jaante ho
Rakesh - haan vishal chauhan
Vipin - nahi ye iska pura naam nahi h
Rakesh - to iska pura naam kya h or aap ise kaise jaante ho
Vipin - iska pura naam h thakur vishal singh chauhan or ye mere
chachaji kaa beta h
Sabhi ek saath - whattttttttttttt…………….
Vipin ne jaise hi ye baat kahi sab k muh khule k khule rah gye kisi
ko is baat pe yakin nahi ho rha tha
Vipin - haa yahi sach h ye chauhan khandaan se h (fir ajay ki taraf
dekh kar) tu iski okaat jaanna chahta tha naa to sun ye chauhan
construction company ka maalik h jaha pe tere papa ek mamuli se
engg. h
Vipin ki baat se sabhi shock the par sab se jyada shock mai to ajay
tha use abhi bhi yakin nahi ho rha tha ki vishal chauhan khandaan
se h or vipin kaa bhai h
Ajay - par isne to kaha tha ki iske papa ek shop chalaate h
Vipin vishal ki taraf ghoor kar dekh kar
Vipin - jise tum ek mamuli si shop samajh rhe ho vo ek bahut bada
super market h or aise kai super market mere chachaji dekhte h
Rahul - (taali bjaate hue) vah bhai bhai vah tu to hame apna best
 friend samajhta tha na to fir tune apni asliyat hamse kyo chupai
Raman - haan bhai hame tujhse ye ummid nahi thi
Vishal - bhai I am sorry ki maine tum sab se ye baat chupaai par
iske piche bhi ek bada kaaran tha
Raman - kon sa kaaran
Vishal - agar mai tumhe btaata ki mai itne raaes ghar se hu to tum
log kya mere itne ache dost bante bilkul nahi balki mere tum jaise
best friends nahi bante jo mere liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar h
balki jo dost bante vo sirf mere paiso par aish karne vaale hote jo
ki kisi k sage nahi hote or chalo fir bhi agar ham sab dost ban
jaate to bhi tum sab mere itne close nahi hote jitne ki ab ho sab
ek tarah se formal hote or hamaare bich status kaa farak pad
jaata
Vipin - bhai sahi kaha tune
Sabhi vipin ki baat se agree karte h or komal jo itni der se
khamosh thi vo bol hi padti h
Komal - ajay main tumse pyaar tumhaari humbleness dekh k karti
thi naa ki tumhaaare paiso ko dekh k jin pe tumhe itna ghamand h
jaante ho maine tumhaare liye vishal jaise ache dost ka proposal
bhi thukraa diya or is bhale insaan ne khushi khushi ise swikaar kar
liya ye kah kar ki mere liye tumhaari khushi se bad kar koi or koi
chij maayne nahi rakhti or jis insaan ko tum pasand karti ho vo
mujhse kahi jyada acha hoga par aaj tumne ye saabit kar diya kit
um bas ek ghamandi insaan ho isiliye aaj k baad mujhe apni shakal
mat dikhaana chale jaao meri life se mai tum jaise ghatiya insaan k
saath koi sambhandh nahi rakhna chahti
Ajay - (rote hue) komal mujhe maanf kar do mai apne paiso k
ghamand mai andha ho gya tha or insaaniyat bhul gya tha par ab
meri aankhe khul chuki h mai apne kiye par bahut sharminda hu tum
chaaho to mujhe koi bhi saja de do par mujhe chod k mat jaao mai
tumse bahut pyaar karta hu mai tumhaare bina mar jaaunga please
mujhe bas ek mokaa de do mai aaj k baad kabhi aisi galti nahi
karung
Vishal - haaan komal ajay ko maanf kar do ye bas apne ghamand
mai aisa kar rha tha par ab vo ghamand tut chukaa h ab ye bhi ek
acha insaan h or fir tum bhi to isse bahut pyaar karti ho isse
 bichadne k baad tum bhi khush nahi rah paaogi jo ki mai nahi
chahta isiliye tum ise maanf kar do ab aage mai kuch or nahi
sununga or vaise bhi agar ye acha insaan naa hota to vipin bhai ka
best friend nahi banta
Komal - par vishal
Vishal - par var kuch nahi tumhe meri kasam tum ise maanf kar do
or hamesha khush raho
Komal - thik h vishal agar tum yahi chahte ho to yahi sahi (fir ajay
ki taraf dekh kar) dekha ajay ise kahte h sachcha dost tumne ise
kitna bhala bura kaha lakin isne fir bhi apni dosti nibhaai
Ajay - haan vishal mujhe maanf kar do tum sach mai ek ache
insaan ho darasal maine tumhaari itni baijaati jalan k kaaran ki h
kyonki jab bhi mai komal se baat karta tha to vo bas tumhaari hi
baate le k baith jaati thi jisse mujhe tumse jalan hone lagi thi
isiliye mai tumhe niche dikhaana chahta tha par aaj mujhe ehsaas
hua ki mai kitna galat tha pls mujhe maanf kar do
Vishal - koi baat nahi dost mai samajh sakta hu agar apni girlfriend
hamesha kisi or k bare mai baate kare to bahut dukh hota h
Isi tarah fir ajay sab se maafi maangta h or sab use maaf kar
dete h or fir lag jaate h masti karne
Jaha ek taraf vishal or uske dost masti kar rhe the vahi dusri
taraf amrita bhi paonta sahib pahuch chuki thi vo normal logo ki
tarah idhar udhar ghum rhi thi or paonta sahib ki khubsurti ko dekh
rhi thi .
vo jaldi se jaldi apni bua Yamunaji se milna chahti thi isiliye vo teji
se yamna ghat ki taraf bad rhi thi……………

Update - 14

Ab tak aapne pada ki kaise vipin ajay ko uski galti kaa ehsaas
karwata h fir ajay sab se maanfi maangta h or sab dost Yamuna
ghaat mai ghumne lagte h fir amrita dharti pe pahuch kar shahar ik
khubsurati mai kho jaati h or fir apni bua se milne chali jaati h

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Amrita ghumte ghumte Yamuna ghaat ki taraf bad rhi thi or ant
mai vo Yamuna ghaat pe pahuch jaati h par jab vo aas paas dekhti
h to use bahut se couples dikhte or kuch log bhi ghumte hue dikhte
h vo aage jaa k sbse pahle apni bua ko pranaam karti h fir vo kuch
sochne lagti h uske chehre pe pareshaani k bhav ubhar aate h
kyonki itne saare logo k bich vo apni bua se nahi mil sakti thi isiliye
vo koi aisi jagah dhundhne lagti h jaha par vo apni bua se baat kar
sake par aas paas koi aisi koi jagah nahi thi to vo nadi ka ek
kinaara pakad leti h or jungle kaa raasta pakad leti h jo ki Yamuna
ghaat se thodi duri pe tha or ittefaak ki baat dekho dosto ki vishal
use us taraf jaate hue dekh leta h to vo apne dosto ko btata h ki
koi ladki jungle ki taraf gyi h or vo use thodi ajeeb bhi lagi .
haalanki vishal ne us ladki kaa chehra nahi dekha tha par use uski
thodi chintaa ho rhi thi kyonki yaha jungle ki taraf bahut se
nashedi jaate the jo ki kisi ladki k liye bahut hi khatarnaak ho
sakta tha isiliye vo apne dosto k saath jungle ki taraf chal padta
h .
Udhar amrita teji se jungle k ander kaafi aage bad jaati h fir ek
jagah aisi aati h jaha har taraf jhaadiyaa hi jhaadiyaa thi unhi
jhaadiyo k bich ek rassi padi hui thi aisa lag rha tha ki kisi ne ye
rassi jaan bhuj k chupaai h par amrita un sab chijo ko ki taraf
dhayaaan naa dete hue apni bua ko pukaarti h jisse ki Yamuna ji
prakat hoti h fir vo dono ek dusre kaa haal chaal puchti h amrita
ko dekh kar Yamuna ji ki aankho mai paani aa jaata h or vahi
Yamuna ji ko dekh kar amrita ki aankho mai paani aa jaata h dono
ek dusre se baat karne lagti h .
Vahi dusri taraf vishal or uske dost us ladki ko dhundhte hue jungle
mai kaafi ander aa jaate h par unhe vo ladki kahi nahi milti h to
rakesh sab ko alag alag groups main usko dhundhne ki salah deta h
par kyoki jungle bahut dangerous tha to vishal use mna kar deta h
kyonki unke saath ladkiyaa bhi thi aise hi vo sab ek saath aage
badne lagte h thodi dur jaane k baad unhe jhaadiyo k dusari taraf
se kisi k baat karne ki aawaj aane lagti h to sab usi disha mai
chalne lagte h vahi dusari taraf amrita apni bua se baate kar rhi
thi fir amrita apni bua se gle milne ki khwahish unhe btaati h to vo
use nadi k bich mai paani k ander aane ko kahti h or gayab ho jaati
h amrita ander jaane k liye taiyaar hoti h or fir dhire dhire aage
badne lagti h uska pura sharer paani mai dub jaata h sir ko chod k
itne mai vishal jhaadiyo mai se hote hue us taraf aa jaata h or
dekhta h ki ek ladki paani k ander jaa rhi h uska kewal sir hi paani
k upper bacha hua h or fir vo bhi paani k ander chala jaaata h or
vo ladki puri tarah paani k ander chali jaati h jissse vishal ko
chintaa hone lagti h or vo bina kuch soche samjhe apne kapde
utaarne lagta h .
Udhar paani k ander amrita ko Yamuna ji dikhaayi dene lagti h vo
unhe apne gale se laga leti h fir un dono ki aankho se fir se aansu
bahne lagte h or paani mai milne lagte h fir amrita apne sapne or
apne dreamboy k bare mai apni bua ko btaati h to uski bua use
aashirwaad deti h ki use uske sapno kaa raajkumaar bahut hi jaldi
hi milega fir vo use vaapas jaane ko kahti h kyonki use bahut si
jagaho mai ghumnaa tha vahi paani k bahaar vishal apne kapde
utaar chukaa tha tabhi raman ki najar paas mai padi rassi pe padti
h vo use utha leta h or uska ek sira vishal k pet mai baandh deta h
or dusra sira khud pakad leta h fir vishal paani mai chalang maar
deta h or fir paani k ander amrita ki taraf badne lagta h vahi
amrita bhi tairte hue upper ki taraf aa rhi ti ki vishal use pakad
leta h or fir use saath mai upper ki taraf le chalta h fir dono k sir
paani se bahaar aate h or vo dono jor se saans lete h fir vishal k
dost un dono ko rassi se paani k bahaar khinchte h bahar aate hi
vishal apne kapde pahan leta h vahi amrita apne kapde nichodne
lagti h vo chahti to apne kapde jaadu se sukha sakti thi par vo
insaano k saamne jaadu nahi dikha sakti thi isse uski asliyat saamne
aa jaati fir vishal use bina dekhe hi use daatne lagta h vahi amrita
bhi vishal ki taraf pith kiye hue thi jaise hi vo vishal ki daant sunti
h to vo excuse me bol k vishal ki taraf mudti h vahi vishal jaise hi
uski aawaj sunta h to vo bhi uski taraf mudta h dono ek saath ek
dusre ki taraf mudte h or jaise hi ek dusre ko dekhte h dono ki
bolti band ho jaati h or dono ek dusre ki aankho mai dekhte hue
kho jaate h vahi vipin kin ajar jaise hi vishal ki taraf jaati h to vo
use ektak us ladki ko ghurte hue dekhta h to vo shock ho jaata h
vo hi nahi vishal k sab dost shock ho jaate h kyonki vishal ne
aajtak kisi ladki ko is tarah nahi ghura tha par jab sabne amrita ko
dhayaan se dekha to uski cuteness or uski khubsurati ko dekh kar
unhe vishal ka use is tarah se ghurna laajmi laga or fir un sab k
chehre pe ek pyaari si smile aa jaati h or vo vishal ko aaawaj dete
h par vo janaab abhi koi awaaj kaise sun paate vo to kisi or hi
duniyaa mai khoye hue the fir vo sab un dono ko jhanjhorte h tab
unhe hosh aata h or fir dono sabse najre churaane lagte h uske
baad vishal jaldi se un sab ko jungle se baahar chalne k liye kahta
h or fir sab Yamuna ghaat aa jaate h fir sab ek dusre ko apna
intro dete h or fir amrita sab ko kal milne kaa bol k chaali jaati
h………………

Update - 15

Ab tak aapne pada ki kaise vishal amrita ko dubne se bchata h or

fir jab use bahaar laata h to bina uski taraf dekhe hi use daantne
lagta h par jaise hi vo or amrita ek dusre ki aankho mai dekhte h
to vo dono kisi or hi dunia mai kho jaate h fir vishal k dost use us
dunia se bahaar late h or fir vo sab jungle se bahaar chale jaate h
or fir amrita un sab se vida leti h or kal milne kaa bol k hotel ki
taraf chali jaati h

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Location change - shaitaan lok
Jaha amrita vishal k karee baa rhi thi vahi shaitaan lok mai
shaitaan ko ye pta chal gya tha ki yamraaj ki beti amrita dharti lok
pe aayi h or ye vahi ladki h jiska sambandh Shulsarpam se h to vo
sabse pahle apni shaktiyo se amrita ki shaktiyo ko baandh deta h
jisse amrita ek aam insaan ban k rah jaati h fir vo aapne ek khass
mohre ko dharti lok bhejta h taaki vo use apne pyaar k jaal mai
fasa kar usse shaadi kar le or fir shulsarpam ki shaktiyaa paa kar
us barial ko tod de jisse shaitaan sidhe dhartilok pe aa sake or
bhagwaan se apna badla le sake
 Again location change - dhartilok
Idhar dhartilok pe amrita subah so k uthti h aaj us efir vahi sapna
aaya tha par is baar use vo sapna achi tarah yaad tha or aaj use
us ladke ka chehra dhundhla nahi saaf dikhaayi diya tha ji haan ye
koi or nahi vishal kaa hi chehra tha amrita uske bare mai sochne
lagti h use abhi bhi vishwaas nahi ho rha tha ki uske sapno kaa
rajkumar ek maamuli insaan hoga uske liye is baat pe vishwaas
karna bahut hi mushkil ho rha tha kyonki vo ek devkanya thi vo yahi
soch rahi thi ki unka Milan kaise sambhav h agar vo vishal ko apna
bhi leti h to bhi uske pita or bhain un dono k rishte ko kabhi nahi
maanege vo isi soch mai dubi thi fir kuch der sochne k baad uska
dimaag fatne lagta h to vo apna sir jhatak deti h or fir jaadu se
vishal ki location dekhne ki koshish karti h par uska jaadu to
shaitaan ne baandh rakha tha jis vajah se vo jaadu nahi kar paayi
fir usne dusra jaadu karne ki koshish ki par vo fir se asafal rahi
fir iska kaaran jaanne k liye vo yog saadhna mai baith gayi or apne
anterman mai jhaankne lagi to use apni shaktiya dikhaayi dene lagi
jinhe kisi anjaan shakti ne baandh rakha tha jo ki usse bhi jyada
powerful thi uska dhyaan tut jaata h or vo pareshaan hone lagti h
kyonki use dunia bhi ghumni thi or usse bhi jyada use vaapas ghar
bhi jaana tha jaha par vo bina apni shaktiyo k nahi jaa sakti thi ye
to acvha tha ki usne apni shaktiyo se pahle hi dher saare paise
apne paas rakh liye the varna use yaha rahne mai bhi bahut
problem hoti ab use kuch samajh nahi aa rha tha achanak use apni
bua ki yaad aayi to usne apni bua se is pareshaani ka hal puchne ka
soch liya or vo nahaane chal padi
Dusari taraf vishal ki nind as usual thande paani se khuli to usne
gusse mai again apne bhaiyo ko gaaliyaa deni shuru kar di fir vo
apna sapna yaad karne laga or aaj to kamaal hi ho gya aaj use pura
kaa pura sapna yaad tha or to or aaj use us ladki kaa chehra bhi
saaf saaf dikhaayi de rha tha jo ki use hamesha hi dhundhla
dhikaayi deta tha vo ladki or koi nahi amrita hi thi .
Us sapne k baare mai soch soch kar vishal k chehre pe smile aa
jaati h vo to pahli mulakaat mai hi amrita ki cuteness or sundarta
or uski aankho ki gahraai mai dub chukaa tha vo to use pahli najar
mai hi pasand kar baitha tha fir uske bhai use uske khyaalo se
 bhaar late h or use collage k liye taiyaar hone ko bol dete h fir
vishal naha do k kapde pahan leta h or fir nashta kar k chowk ki
taraf chal padta h jaha uska dost panku uska wait kar rha tha
vishal uske paas pahuch k usse haath milaata h or fir haalchaal
puchne k baad
Vishal - yaar panku aaj collage jaane kaa man nahi h tu sabhi dosto
ko bol de ki vo sab aaj collage naa jaaye or chowk pe aa jaaye
Panku - bhai kya hua ghar mai kisi se jhagda hua kya
Vishal - nahi to
Panku - fir tera aaj collage jaane kaa mood kyo nahi h jabki teri
branch waalo ka to aaj test bhi h
Vishal - are chod naa yaar bus vaise hi aaj subah se kuch acha
nahi lag rha h aisa lag rha h ki koi apna problem mai h
Panku - tune apne pariwaar waalo se baat ki kahi unme se to koi
problem mai nahi h
Vishal - haan bhai ki thi sab kuch thik h par aaj kuch anjaani si
feeling aa rhi h jo ki baaki dino se bilkul alag h
Panku - are chod naa yaar agar koi problem hui to ham sab dekh
lenge tu chinta mat kar
Itne mai sab dost aa jaate h or fir vishal se collage naa jaane kaa
kaaran puchte h to vishal unhe bhi vhi btata h jo usne panku ko
btaya tha fir sab vishal se aage kaa plan puchte h to vishal unhe
sabse pahle yamunaghaat chalne k liye kahta h or fir sab
Yamunaghaat ki taraf chal padte h
Vahi amrita bhi nahaa dho kar sidha yamuna ghaat ki taraf chal
deti h Yamuna ji se milne or fir vahaa se hote hue jungle mai usi
jagah chali jaati h jahaa par vo kal gayi thi fir vo Yamunaji kaa
aawaahan karti h or fir vha par tej roshani chaa jaati h or
Yamunaji prakat hoti h amrita unhe pranaam karti h or fir yamunaji
amrita se itni subah unke paas aane kaa kaaran puchti h to vo unhe
apni pareshaani btaati h jiske baad Yamunaji sabse pahle uske sir
pe haath rakh k aankhe band karti h jisse unhe uski problem kaa
pta chal jaata h or fir vo apni aankhe khol deti h or amrita ko
btaati h ki uski shaktiyoo ko kisi bahut hi takatwar buri shakti ne
baandh k rakha h or voc hah kar bhi uski koi help nahi kar sakti
kyoki srishti k niyaamo k tahad vo apni shaktiyo ka yadi prayog
 karti h to nadi mai bhayankar baad aa jaayegi or vo sab jagah
tabah ho jaayegi jha jha se vo gujarti h
Amrita - buaji to kya meri shaktiyo ko us bandhan se chudaane kaa
koi raasta nahi h
Yamunaji - ek raasta h beti par kyat um us raaste ko apna paayogi
Amrita - aap bas raasta btaao baaki mai dekh lungi
Yamunaji - thik h to suno…………

Update - 17

Previous update
Vishal - mai to thik hu par tu kyo bimaar ho rahi h

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Isse pahle ki aashi kuch kahti megha bich mai
Megha - tum dono chup raho kahi bhi ek dusre ki bjaane mai lag
jaate ho (fir amrita ki taraf dekh kar) to amrita tum jungle mai
kya kar rhi thi vo bhi itni subah subah
Amrita - kuch nahi yaar vo kal mera phone jungle mai choot gya
tha to vahi lene gyi thi
Vishal - par tum is tarah akeli jungle mai mat jaaya karo vo jungle
bahut danger h vha par bahut se log nasha karne jaate h
Amrita - thanks aage se dhyaan rakhungi
Komal - chalo chodo is baat ko or ye btaao ki tum yaha kitne din
or ho
Amrita - vo vo vo…… bus kuch dino k liye
Vishal - tum itna hadbadaa kyo rhi ho kya hua kuch problem h
Amrita - (thoda pareshaan hokar) kuch nahi bas aise hi
Vishal - iska matlab tum hame apna dost nahi maanti ho varna
hame apni pareshaani ki vajah btaati
Amrita - vo kuch khaas nahi bus kal paani mai girne ki vajah se
mera mobile kho gya tha jo abhi tak nahi mila tha usi mai mere
guide kaa no. tha jo aaj mujhe paonta or uske aas paas ka ilaaka
 ghumaane vaala tha par ab mai usse contact nahi kar sakti to ab
mujhe koi ghumaane vaala nahi h
Vishal - bus itni si baat ham log hai naa ham tumhe paonta to kya
dehradun bhi ghumaa laayenge
Sabhi dost - haan sahi kaha tune vishal
Amrita - thanks dosto tum sab bahut ache ho
Vishal - its my pleasure madam to dosto kya kahte ho chale
ghumne fir
Sabhi ek saath - haan
Iske baad sabhi dost ghumne nikal padte h sabse pahle vo sab
paonta mai ghumte h fir vo sab paonta se bhaar gaon ki taraf chal
padte h gaon se hote hue vo log jungle k ander chale jaate h us
jungle k bicho bich ek sunder si jheel thi amrita us jheel ko
dekhkar bahut hi khush ho jaati h fir sabhi couple alag alag ho
jaate h last mai panku aashi komal amrita vishal vijay megha bach
jaate h to panku sab k kaan mai kuch kahta h or vo sab amrita or
vishal ko akele chod kar jheel k dusri taraf chale jaate h ab vishal
or amrita akele the vishal amrita se kuch kahna chahta tha par vo
shuruwaat nahi kar paa rha tha thodi der chup rahne k baad vishal
aakhir kaar amrita se baat karna shuru kar deta h
Vishal - to amrita kaisa laga tumhe yaha aa kar
Amrita - bahut acha aisa lag rha h ki mai jannat mai pahuch gyi hu
yaha par najaara bahut hi sunder h dil karta h ki bas yahi par
parmanet shift ho jaau
Vishal - haan ye jagah h bahut hi sunder or kuch apne baare mai
btaao
Amrita - mai ek sidhi saadhi ladki hu meri family bahut badi h mai
yaha par apni bua se milne aayi hu or saath mai ghumne bhi baaki
kuch khaas nahi
Vishal - tumhaara koi boyfriend h
Amrita - nahi
Vishal - kyo kisi ne offer nahi maara kya
Amrita - offer to kaiyo ne maara par maine mna kar diya
Vishal - kyo
Amrita - bus aise hi koi pasand hi nahi aaya mai sahi ladke k offer
kaa wait kar rhi hu
 Ye baat amrita ne vishal ki aankho mai aankhe daal k kahi jisse
vishal kaa dil naachne ko ho gya vo samajh gya tha ki ladki open
offer de rhi h par abhi bhi vo use propose karne ki himmat nahi
juta paa rha tha
Vishal - ummid karta hu ki tumhe tumhaare sapno kaa rajkumaar
jaldi mil jaaye
Amrita - (man mai) sapno k raajkumar to tum ho tumhaare liye hi
to maine sab k offers thukraa diye h or tum ho ki sidha sidha
signal dene par bhi nahi samajh rhe budhu kahi k
Iske baad dono k bich mai shaanti chaa jaati h tabhi vishal ko kuch
masti sujhti h vo amrita k kaan mai kuch kahta h jisse amrita ki
aankhe chodi ho jaati h
Amrita - nahi nahi ye thik nahi hoga
Vishal - mai hu naa kuch nahi hoga
Amrita - par………………
Vishal - par var kuch nahi tum bas vo suno jo mai kah rha hu
baaki8 sab mai dekh lungaa
Amrita - thik h chalo
Uske baad amrita or vishal dono jheel k dusri taraf chale jaate h
jha par panku komal aashi vijay megha ek saath jheel k paas khade
baate kar rhe the vishal or amrita chupke se un sab k piche jaate
h or fir sab ko ek saath paani mai dhakka de dete h jisse sab ek
saath paani mai gir jaate h or bhig jaate h or fir jab sab paani se
bhaar dekhte h to vha par vishal or amrita dono khade khade has
rhe the pahle to sab gussa hote h par unhe kuch aisa dikhaayi deta
h jissse sab hasne lagte h unhe hasta hua dekh kar vishal or amrita
ko kuch gadbad hone kaa aabhas ho jaata h par isse pahle ki vo
kuch samajh paate koi piche se unhe bhi dhakka de deta h
chapakkkkkkk isi aawaj k saath vo dono bhi paani mai gir jaate h or
jab piche dekhte h to vha par rahul or ravina khade muskuraa rhe
the ki tabhi rahul or ravina ko bhi koi piche se dhakka de deta h or
vo bhi paani mai gir jaate h unhe dhakka raman or diksha ne diya
tha itne mai raman or diksha ko rakesh or guddi dhakka de dete h
or rakesh or guddi ko rohit or dalvinder itne mai vishal or amrita
bhi bhaar aa gye the vo dono bhi piche se rohit or dalvinder ko
dhakka de dete h or fir panku or komal vishal or amrita ko bhi apne
 saath paani mai khich lete h firsab log aise hi ek dusre k saath
masti karne lagte h ek dusre k upper paani fenkne lagte h girls
boys ko gher kar unke upper paani fenk rahi thi fir sabhi boys aage
jaakar unke upper paani fenkne vaali girls ko pakad lete h vishal
jaakar amrita ko pakad leta h pahle amrita chtne ki koshish karti h
fir vo komal se help maangti h to komal vishal k upper paani fenkne
lagti h vishal amrita ko aage le aata h fir apni baaho mai utha kar
komal k upar fenk deta h komal or amrita dono `niche gir jaaati h
fir vaapas khadi ho kar dekhti h ki vishal jor jor se has rha h
amrita komal ko kuch kahti h or fir komal or amrita dono vishal ko
dono taraf se gher k uske upper paani fenkne lagti h jisse vishal ki
aankhe band ho jaati h isi moke kaa fayda utha k dono vishal ki
tango ko pakad k use piche ki taraf fenk deti h or fir
chapakkkkkkk………. Vishal jor se paani mai girta h sab dost unhe
dekhne lagte h or fir sab jor jor se hasne lagte h fir vishal bhi
unke saath jor jor se hasne lagta h fir vo sab kuch der isi tarah
paani mai masti karte h or fir sab k sab paani se bhaar aate h or
ek bade se pathar k upper let k apne aap ko sukhaane lagte h
Vahi vo shaitaan ka gulaam amrita ko lagataar follow kar rha tha vo
amrita ko impress karne kaa mokaa dhund rha tha usne ek plan
bnayaa tha usne kareeb 25 se 30 gundo ko paise de k amrita or
uske dosto ko gher k maar pit karne ko kha or fir vo bich mai
aakar sab ko bcha lega or fir amrita or sab ki najar mai hero ban
jaayega jab vishal or uske dost pathar par dhoop sek rhe the to vo
gulaam un sabhi logo ko attack karne or ladkiyo k saath ched chaad
karne ko kahne lagta h uske baad vo sab gunde vishal or uske dosto
ko gher lete h or fir do do gunde sab ladko ko pakad lete h or or
un gundo kaa leader ladkiyo se ched chaad karne lagta h jisse
vishal ko gussa aa jaata h or vo apni muthiya kas leta h uski aankhe
gusse se laal ho jaati h jisse uske doston k chehre pe khonf paida
ho jaata h yaha tak ki vishal ko pakadne vaale gunde bhi jab uski
aankho mai dekhte h to vo bhi dar k maare uske haath chod dete h
or side mai ho jaate h un gundo kaa leader bina piche dekhe hi
amrita ko kiss karne k liye aage bad rha tha tabhi vishal k bardast
k bahaar ho jaata h or vo sidha aage jaakar us leader ko pakad kar
apni taraf ghumaata h or uske gale ko pakad k uske khaane ki nali
 ko khich k ukhaad deta h jisse vo leader tadpane lagta h or vahi
dam tod deta h ladkiyaa jab ye najaara dekhti h to sab bahosh ho
jaati h siwaay amrita k vo to bas hairaan ho k vishal ko dekh rhi
thi use abhi bhi samajh mai nahi aa rha tha ki jo ladka itnaa shant
baitha tha vo itna khatarnaak kaise ho gya itna krur to koi
raakshas bhi nahi hota .
udhar baaki sabhi gunde jab apne leader ki laash or vishal kaa aisa
roop dekhte h to vo sab vishal k dosto ko chod dete h tabhi unme
se ek gundaa himmat karke aage aata h to vishal ek laat khich k
uske pet mai maarta h vo pet pakad k jhuk jaata h to vishal kohini
se uski peeth pe vaar karta h vo niche gir jaata h to vishal khich
ke uske face pe laat maarta h jisse uski naak tut jaati h vo saans
nahi le paata or dard ki vajah se uski bhi maut ho jaati h apne
saathi ki aisi haalat dekh k 4 -5 gunde lakdiyaa utha k vishal ki
taraf badte h ki tabhi vishal bhi ek patli par majboot lakdi utha
leta h jiskaa aage kaa siraa thoda nukilaa tha vo us lakdi ko piche
se pakadta h or nikile sire ko aage ki taraf kar deta h jaise hi un
sab mai se pahla gunda vishal k sir k upar lakdi se hamla karta h
vishal thoda jhuk jaata h or fir us nukile sire ko sidhe us gunde k
gale k aar paar kar deta h or upper niche karne lagta h jisse baaki
gunde jo vishal k upper hamla karne vaale the unke haath se
lakdiyaa apne aap chut jaati h vo sabhi dar k mare thar thar
kaapne lagte h fir bhi sabhi gunde kisi tarah himmat juta k fir se
lakdiyaa utha lete h or vishal k chaaro or ghera bna k hamla karne
ki koshish karte h to vishal kisi ek gunde ko focus karke uski taraf
dodta h isse pale ki koi kuch samajh paata vishal us gunde ki
garden pakad leta h fir uske baal or fir use dodaate hue ped ki
taraf lee jaata h jha par ek choti tahni tuti hue thi vo gunda ped
pe haath lagaane ki sochta h par jaise hi vishal ped k najdeek
pahuchta h vo uski taantaango k bich taanng fsa leta h oe uske
baal chod deta h jisse vo gunda uchalta hua ped se takraa jaata h
or vo tuti hui tahni uski aankh ko fodte hue uske dimaag ko chir
kar uske sir k dusri taraf se bahar nikal jaati h or vo vahi dam tod
deta h ye sab dekh kar vaha par khade sabhi logo ki chikh nikal
jaati h or vo sab dar k mare thar thar kaampne lagte h
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ye sab dekh kar vaha par khade sabhi logo ki chikh nikal jaati h or
vo sab dar k mare thar thar kaampne lagte h

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Amrita lagataar vishal k chehre ko dekh rhi thi par uske chehre
par use gehre shunya k alawa kuch nahi dikh rha tha vo is samay
use koi aam ladka nahi lag rha tha kyonki koi aam insaan itni
bedardi se kisi ko nahi maarta is samay uske ander ka insaan kisi
andhere kone mai chup gya tha or uski jagah kisi haiwaan ne le lit
hi kisi ko ummid nahi thi ki vishal un sab ki aisi haalat kar dega ab
un gundo mai itni himmat nahi bachi thi ki vo vishal kaa saamna kar
sake vahi vo shaitaan ka gulaam bhi is drishya ko dekh rha tha usne
bhi kisi aam insaan mai aisi haiwaaniyat nahi dekhi thi vo bhi kuch
samay k likye kaafi dar gya tha par baad mai usne socha ki vo bas
ek aam insaan h jabki uske paas to shaitaani shaktiyaa h fir vo vha
se chala jaata h vahi dusri taraf vishal un gundo se
Vishal - kya kisi or ko marne ki jaldi h agar hai to saamne aaye
Sabhi - ( ek saath ) hame maanf kar dijiye hame mat maaro ham
ainda se kabhi aisa kaam nahi karenge kabhi kisi ladki ki taraf
gandi najar se nahi dekhenge bas hame jaane do
Vishal - tum sab ne mere dosato ko pareshaan kiya h or to or meri
amrita par buri najar daali h aaj tum sab ko marna hoga koi nahi
bachega
Is samay vishal bahut gusse mai tha gusse se uski saanse ful rahi
thi uska chehra tamaatar ki tarah laal ho gya tha tabhi vo jaa kar
ek gunde ko pakad leta h or use maarne lagta h ye dekh kar sabhi
gunde uske dosto k pairo mai gir padte h or use bachaane k liye
kahte h to vishal k dost use rookne ko kahte h par vo nahi rukta
tabhi panku ko vishal ki kahi baat yaad aa jaati h ki tumne meri
amrita haan meri amrita or vo amrita k paas jaata h or usse kahta
 h ki ab sirf vo hi vishal ko rok sakti h jis par amrita kahti h ki vo
kaise to panku usse kahta h ki vo sab use baad mai pta chal
jaayega abhi vishal ko rokna jaruri h to amrita bhag kar vishal k
paas jaati h or use rukne ko kahti h par vo nahi rukta or us gunde
ko khich kar laat maarta h vo gunda dard k mare bas chilla rha tha
or laat padte hi vo dur jaa k girta h amrita ko vishal ko rokne kaa
koi tarika samajh nahi aa rha tha to vo vishal ko pakad k sidha
apne gale laga leti h vishal pahle use apne aap se alag karne ki
koshish karta h par alag nahi kar paata h kyonki amrita ne use kas
k pakda hua tha fir dhire dhire uska gussa kam hone lagta h thodi
der mai vo shant ho jaata h or vo bhi amrita ko kas k gle laga leta
h use shant dekhkar un gundo ki jaan mai jaan aati h vo vishal k
dosto ko thanks kahte h vishal k dost un dono ko aise gale laga hua
dekh kar bahut khush ho rhe the unhe lag rha tha ki dono ek dusre
se pyaar karne lage h udhar amrita bhi vishal k gale lagakar kisi
alag hi dunia mai khoi hui thi use vishal se is tarah gale milna bahut
acha lag rha tha vo bas isi tarah rahna chahti thi yahi haal vishal
kaa bhi tha vo bhi amrita ko apne se alag nahi karna chahta tha vo
dono ye bhi bhul gye the ki vo dono is vakt kaha h or kya kar rhe h
vo to bas ek dusre k dil ko mahsoos kar rhe the jaha amrita vishal
k sapno ki raani thi vahi vishal bhi amrita k sapno kaa rajkumaar
tha vo vishal se mil k ye bhi bhul gyi thi ki vo ek dev kanya h or
vishal ek maamuli insaan vaha khade sabhi log khush the gunde
khush the kyonki vo log vishal k gusse se bach gye the or vishal k
dost vishal or amrita k liye khush the par in sab k piche ek praani
khada tha jo ki vishal or amrita ko aise dekh k khush nahi tha ye
or koi nahi tha yamlok se aaya hua yamdut tha jiski duty aaj mare
hue insaano ki aaatmaao ko yamlok le jaane ki thi jab vo apni
raajkumaari ko dekhta h to vo unhe pranaam karta h par vo use koi
reaction nahi deti kyonki vo to abhi vishal k pyaar ko mahsoos kar
rhi thi amrita ko kisi insaan ko is tarah gale lagaate dekh vo
yamdut chownk jaata h or fir vha se gayab ho jaata h or chal
padta h apni duty puri karne usne ye thaan liya tha ki vo ye baat
yamlok pahuch kar yamraaj ko jaroor btaayega
Vahi dusri taraf sab dekhte h ki vishal or amrita alag hi nahi ho
rhe h tabhi panku ko ek sharaarat sujhti h vo sab dosto k kaan mai
 kuch bolta h or fir komal ko apna phone de video recording karne
ko kahta h uske baad sab dost jaake vishal or amrita ko gher lete
h vahi komal ye sab record kar rhi thi uske baad sab dost ungliyo
pe one two three count karte h or fir sabhi ek saathjor se chillate
h unka chillana sun k vishal or amrita dono ko hosh aata h or fi vo
dono ek jhatke mai ek dusre se alag ho jaate h sabhi dost dono ki
aisi haalat dekh k muskuraane lagtee h or dono ko chedne lagte h
jisse dono sharmaane lagte h itne mai komal panku ko uska mobile
de deti h jisme vo video save ho gya tha panku vo video sab ko
dikhaata h jis ki vajah se amrita or jyaada sharmaane lag jaati h
jabki vishal panku kaa mobile chinne ki koshish karne lagta h thodi
der pahle jaha dar kaa maahol tha vahi ab sab khush the vishal un
bache hue sabhi gundo ko mare hue gundo ki laasho ko thikaane
lagane ko kahta h or khud vapas jheel k ander jaak nahaane lagta h
kyonki uske sharir pa khun laga hua tha amrita bhi uske sharir pe
lage hue khun ko saaf karti h fir sab dost vapas ghar ki taraf chal
padte h is baar vishal panku ki bike le leta h or amrita ko apne
piche bitha leta h or sab vapas shahar ki taraf chal padte h vahi
un gundo ne ek gadda khod kar usme un sabhi gundo ki laasho ko us
gadde mai daal kar unme aag laga di or fir vapas us gadde ko bhar
diya or fir sab chal pade apne apne raasteek naiyi jindagi jeene is
tarah vishal ne ek buraa kaam karke ek acha kaam bhi kiya .

Sabhi dost ghar jaa chuke the or vishal ne panku ki bike apne paas
rakh lit hi or vo amrita ko paonta mai ghuma rha tha fir vo amrita
ko le k ek moll pahucha jaha par unhone dher saari shopping ki fir
vishal amrita ko le k moll k side mai bne coffee shop pe le gya vha
par baith k dono baate karne lage amrita k liye aaj ka din bada
acha gujar rha tha kyonki usne aaj dil khol k jindagi ji thi usne to
kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki aise bhi jindagi ji jaa sakti h kyonki
uske dost sharaarte to karte the par itne open hokar masti nahi
karte the naa hi vo sab saath mai kabhi kahi ghumne jaate the vo
sab jyaada se jyaada saath mai yaa to yamlok mai bne upvan mai
jaate the yaa fir swarg lok mai baaki vahi boaring jindagi jabki
vishal or uske dost yaha par kaafi masti karte the naa koi tension
naa kisi problem ki fikar bas apne dil ki sunte h amrita vishal se mil
k bahut khush thi use vishal k saath rahte rahte ye pta lag gya tha
ki vishal dil kaa ek bahut hi acha insaan h jo ki apno ki bahut
parwah karta h uske dil mai achaayi bhari hui thi or to or vo vishal
ko pyaar bhi karne lagi thi apne isi pyaar k chakkar mai vo ye bhi
bhul gyi thi ki uske pita is pyaar ko kabhi nahi apnaayenge
Fir vishal amrita ko le k apne dusre ghar pahuchta h or vha pe bike
rakh k car utha k le aata h par car mai baithne se pahle usne kisi
ko phone kar diya tha amrita se chup k fir vo dono ghumne k liye
nikal padte h vishal use park mai le jaata h jha par unhe bahut se
couples dikhaayi dete h unme se kuch couples kiss bhi kar rhe the
amrita un couples ko dekh k thodi uncomfortable ho jaati h yahi
vishal k saath bhi hota h vo amrita ko kahi or baithne k liye bolta
h fir vo dono vha se uth kar thodi dur chale jaate h fir vishal
amrita ko vaha par ek bench pe bitha deta h or khud vapas us
couple k paas aata h or ladke se puchta h
Vishal - hello bro time kya hua h
Vishal ki aawaj sun kar vo couple kissing rok dete h lor vishal ko
khaa jaane vaaali najro se dekhte h
Ladka - (thoda rudely) 7 bje h
Vishal - thanks bro
Ladka - thik h cha lab jaa yaha se disturb mat kar
Vishal - bhai ek favour karoge
Ladka - abe jaa naa yaha se kyo dimaag kharab kar rha h
Vishal - bhai ye sab aap yaar un jhadiyo k ander jaa k karo pls
meri friend uncomfortable ho rhi h
Ladka - agar vo uncomfortable ho rhi h to use kahi or le k jaa par
mera dimaag mat khaa
Vishal - bhai just request kar rha hu yaar maan jaao pls
Ladka - abe nikal yaha se nahi to maar khaayega
Vishal - abe jab tak bhai bhai kar ke baat karo tab tak tum jaise
ghochu samajhte nahi h ab lagta h tujhe police station le jaana hio
padega chal police station tujhe thodi jail ki hawa khilaata hu
Ladka - abe tu hota kon h mujhe police station le jaane vaala
Vishal - head constable shinde cha lab tujhe jail ki hawa khilaaunga
or teri is item k saath police vaale maje karenge
Ladka - (ghabra kar ) sir please mujhe maanf kar do mujhe nahi
pta tha ki aap police mai ho please mujhe maanf kar do ham aainda
public place mai aisa nahi karenge please hame maanf kar do
Vishal - abe tu sidhe chalta h ki nahi varna maar maar k le jaaunga
Ladka - sir please meri gf ko chod dijiye mai aapke saath chalunga
Ladki - sir please hame chod dijiye please ham aainda se aisa kabhi
nahi karenge
Or ye kahte hue uski rone vaali shakal ho rahi thi ab vishal ko laga
ki ye sab kuch bahut jyaada ho rha h ab ise yahi rok dena chahiye
Vishal - thik h abhi to mai tumhe jaane de rha hu par ainda se
dhyaan rakhna
Ladka - thankyou sir
Vishal - dekho dost mai ye nahi kahta kit um apni gf ko kiss naa
karo par agar koi request karta h or p[yaar se baat karta h to uski
baat maan leni chaahiye
Ladka - thanks sir mai aage se is chij kaa dhyaan rakhunga
Vishal - or haan mai koi head constable shinde nahi hu mera naam
vishal h
Ladka - to tumne mera ullu bnaya par sach kahu to puri faad k
rakh di thi
Vishal - uske liye sorry yaar par meri friend thoda uncomfortable
feel kar rhi thi isi liye aisa karna pada aap log continue karo par
thoda jhadiyo k ander jaa kar
Ladka - thik h bhai
Vishal - thank you bro
Fir uske baad vishal vapas amritav k paas vapas aa jaata h jo ki
vahi khadi muskuraa rahi thi or vishal ko dekh rhi thi
Amrita - tumne to uski sach mai haalat kharaab kar di thi
bechaara ronr vaala ho gya tha
Vishal - kya kare yaar pyaar se baat maan nahi rha tha to ye sab
kuch karna pada
Amrita - acha tum ne un dono ko disturb kyo kiya
Vishal - kyonki vo dono publically ye sab kar rhe the or tum bhi
uncomfortable feel kar rhi thi
Amrita - to tumne ye sab mere liye kiya
Vishal - haan bilkul mai tumhe pareshaan nahi dekh sakta
Amrita - kyo
Vishal - pta nahi par jab bhi tum udaas hoti ho to mujhe kuch bhi
acha nahi lagta h mera dil rone lagta h
Amrita - or ais kyo bhala
Vishal - pta nahi yaar
Amrita - tumhaara dil or tumhe hi pta nahi
Vishal - chodo yaar ye sab or tum btaao vaapas kab jaaogi
Amrita - abhi nahi abhi kuch din yahi hu mai tum sab k saath kuch
din or masti karna chahti hu
Vishal - chalo thik h
Fir vo dono kuch der or baate karte h fir vishal use dinner karne
ka bol k gaadi hotel ki taraf le leta h .
Hotel mai pahuch k vishal vallet ko gaadi parking k liye de deta h
fir vo or amrita hotel k ander chale jaate h jaise hi ander jaate h
to dekhte h ki hotel k ander andhera h saari lites close ki huyi thi
amrita jaise hi vishal ki taraf mudti h to vishal vha nahi tha vo
jaise hi vishal ko dhundhti huyi aage jaati h to achanak uske upper
ek spot light padti h vo jha jha bhi jaa rhi thi vo spot light bhi
uske saath aage bad rhi thi vo ek jagah pe aa k ruk jaati h fir
vishal ki aawaj aati h
Vishal - tere saath muskuraane ko ji chahta h
Tere har dard mai udas hone ko jee chahta h
Teri muskurahat hi itni pyaari h ki
Tujhe muskuraate hue dekhte rahne ko ji chahta h

Aankho se rishta bnaya in aankho ne

Mujhe dil tak pahuchaya in aankho ne
Yaad aate h ab vo sapne mujhe
Jinhe sach kar dikhaya in aankho ne

Vishal ye kahne k saath hi achanak light aa jaati h jab amrita apne

aas paas dekhti h to vha par pura hall sajaayaa hua tha pure farsh
par ful bichaaye hue the or hall k bicho bich ek table rakhi hui thi
jiske upar dono k liye pine k liye soft drinks rakhi huyi thi fir vishal
amrita k paas jaata h or uska haath pakad k use table k paas le
jaata h fir vo dono chair k upper baithte h or ek waiter unke paas
aa k unhe soft drink serve karta h fir dono drink pine lagte h tabhi
 vishal apni jeb se ek anguthi nikaalta h or amrita k paas jaa kar
uskaa haath pakad leta h or fir kahta h
Vishal - amrita jab bhi mai tumhaari aankho mai dekhta hu to naa
jaane mujhe kya ho jaata h mai kisi alag hi dunia mai pahuch jaata
hut um shayad yakin nahi karogi mai hamesha se tumhaare sapne
dekhta aaya hu par jaise hi subah uthta tha vo yaade dhundhali
pad jaati thi par jab maine tumhe pahli baar dekha to mujhe vo sab
yaade vapas mil gyi mere dimaag mai sab kuch clear ho gya mai
tumhaari ye saadgi or cuteness ka mai hamesha se diwaana tha jab
bhi mai tumhe dekhta hu to mera dil chikh chikh k kahta h ki yahi
h vo jiske liye mai dhadkta hu yahi h vo jiske saath mai puri jindagi
bitaa sakta hu
Teri aankhe jab jhuki to hya ban gyi
Teri aankhe jab jhuk k uthi to nasha ban gyi
Hame to pta hi nhi chala E dost
kab is dil mai tumhaare liye jagah ban gyi………
amrita mai tumhe bahut pyaar karta hu itna ki koi labjo mai byaa
nahi kar sakta mere dil ki har dhadkan har saans tumhaara hi naam
leti h mai tumhe apne dil ki hi tarah apni jindagi mai bhi laana
chahta hu .
I love you alote do you love me
Amrita kuch der sochti h fir sad saa face bna leti h jisse vishal k
chehre pe udaasi aa jaati h or aati bhi kyo nahi ek to itni badi
speech boli or upar se agar ladki aise sad face bnaaye to uska
udaas hona lajmi h
Amrita - jaante ho mujhe bhi tumhaari hi tarah aise hi sapne aate
the par jab so k uthti thi to mujhe sab kuch dhundhla dhundhla
yaad rahta tha par maine usi ladke ko apna jivaan saathi chunne ka
faisla kiya par koi usse male nahi khaata tha (fir uske chehre pe
smile aa jaati h) fir mai tumse mili jab maine tumhe dekha to tum
vahi ladke nikle mai to tumse pahli mulaakaat se hi pyaar karne lagi
thi
Vishal I love you too
Mai bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hu tumse mil k mera dil bahut
khush hota h or aaj kaa din to tumne mere liye bahut hi special bna
diya
 Amrita kaa jawab sun k vishal bahut khush ho jaata h vo use vo
hire ki anguthi pahna deta h or fir apni baho mai uk gol gol
ghumaane lagta h fir unpe fulo ki baarish hone lagti h uske baad
vha music start hota h or vo dono dance karne lagte h pahle to
amrita ko dance karne mai thodi problem huyi par fir vo bhi vishal
k saath taal se taal milaane lagi vo dono kaafi der tak dance karne
lage or fir dono dinner karne k liye table par aa k baith gye fir
waiter unke paas aa k dinner serve karta h or fir vo dono dinner
karte h fir dinner karne k baad vo dono bhaar aa jaate h or apni
gaadi mai baith k ghar k liye nikal jaate h vishal amrita ko uske
ghar pe chodta h or fir kal milne kaa bol k ghar k liye nikal jaata h

Update - 19

Dosto ab tak aapne pada ki kaise vishal amrita ko propose karta h

to amrita bhi uska proposal accept kar leti h fir dono kuch der
dance karte h or fir dinner karke vishal amrita ko uske hotel chod
k apne ghar k liye nikal padta h

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Location change - at yamlok
Yamlok mai is samay yam darbaar laga hua tha yamraaj sabhi
doshiyo ko saja de rhe the jinhe yamdut prithvi se laaye hue the
jisne jo jo paap kiye hue the use uss hisaab se saja mil rahi thi
dusari taraf kuch paharedaar naraklok se kuch logo ko swarg ki
taraf bhej rhe the ye vo log the jo apni saja puri kar chuke the
Tabhi vo yamdut jisne amrita ko dekha tha vo yamlok mai sabha
mai aata h or fir yamraaj ko pranaam karta h or fir apne kaam ka
byoraa deta h fir vo yamraaj se kahta h
Yamdut - yam prabhu aaj maine rajkumaari amrita ko dekha
Yamraaj - (khush hote hue) hey yamdut abhi tum vishraam karo or
jab sabha khatam ho jaaye to aa jaana fir mai tumse milunga
Uske baad vo yamdut chala jaata h uske baad yamraaj bhi sabha
continue karte h kuch der baad sabha kaa kaam jab khatam ho
jaata h to vo yamdut yamraaj se milne aata h yamraaj use baithne
ko kahte h
Yamraaj - haan ab bolo yamdut
Yamdut - prabhu mai kah rha tha ki maine aaj prithvi lok pe
rajkumari amrita ko dekha
Yamraaj - kaisi h hamaari putri kyat um unse mile
Yamdut - nahi prabhu maine unhe pranaam bhi kiya par unhone
mujhe dekha tak bhi nahi
Yamraaj - or aisa kyo bhala aisa kon sa jaruri kaam kar rhi thi vo
jo usne tumhe dekha tak bhi nahi
Yamdut - prabhu ye mai aapse kaise kahu mujjhe samajh hi nahi aa
rha
Yamraaj - daro mat yamdut bejhijhak kaho
Yamdut - nahi prabhu mai aapse ye nahi kah sakta mai ek kaam
karta hu mai apne dimaag se apni aankho dekhi aapke dimaag mai
bhejta hu aap khud hi dekh lijiye
Yamraaj - (thoda pareshaan hote hue) thik h bhej do
Uske baad vo yamdut apne dimaag se apne thoughts yamraaj ko
bhejta h jise dekhne k baad yamraaj thoda pareshaan ho jaata h
vo us yamdut ko vha se jaane ko kahta h or fir amrita k baare mai
sochne lagte h or fir sone chale jaate h

Location change - at earth

Vishal ki aaj ki shuruwaat bahut hi achi hoti h vo pne bhaiyo se
pahle uth jaata h kyonki use bhi amrita se milne ki jaldi thi vo aaj
jyada se jyada samay amrita k saath bitaana chahta tha .
Ye pyaar hota hi aisa h dosto kabhi kabhi aalsi insaan ko bhi
furtilaa bna deta h to kabhi kabhi furtilee insaan ko bhi aalsi bna
deta h .
Fir vishal ki najar so rhe apne dono bhaiyo ki taraf jaati h to uske
chehre pe ek khatarnaak smile aa jaati h vo uth k apne kapde or
towel nikaalta h unhe bathroom mai rakh deta h or bathroom se ek
balti paani ki utha k laata h or fir chapaaaakkkkkkk……… dono
bhaiyo k upar paani daal deta h jisse ek sunaami bolte hue uthta h
to dusra baadh aa gyi ye bolte hue uthta h .
vishal kaa to has has k buraa haal tha jab vo dono vishal ko dekhte
 h to vo has rha tha or uske haath mai baalti thi vo dono jaise hi
vishal ki taraf gusse se badte h to vishal jaldi se bathroom k ander
bhaag jaata h or ander se lock kar deta h to thodi der tak vo dono
darwaaja kholne ki koshish karte h par jab koi asar nahi hota to
dono usse kahte h ki use towel or kapde lene bahaar aana hi padega
to vishal un dono se kahte h ki vo towel or kapde already bathroom
mai pahucha chukaa h to vo dono apne pair patakte hue vha se
chale jaate h fresh hone kyonki unhe bhi taiyaar jo hona tha
college k liye
Naha dho k vishal naashta karne dinning table par pahuch jaata h
to vha par use sabse pahle dekhkar uski mossi ko bahut hi hairaani
hoti h kyonki vo hamesha late uthta tha to mossi or mossa ko shock
to lagna hi tha fir vishal naashta karta h or sabko collage jaane
kaa bol k ghar se nikaal jaata h or fir car le k chowk pe pahuch
jaata h jha par abhi tak koi nahi pahucha tha thodi der mai sab
pahuch jaate h aaj vishal ko car mai dekh kar sabko hairaani hoti h
fir vishal sab ko kal k baare mai btaataa h ki kaise usne or amrita
kal kafi saari shopping ki fir usne panku ki bike ko apne dusre ghar
mai chod k vha se car utha li fir vo un sab ko ye bhi btaata h ki
kaise usne amrita ko propose kiya or kaise usne haan kha vishal ki
iss baat pe pahle sabhi bahut naaraj hote h ki usne ye propose
vaala plan unhe kyo nahi btaya par fir uske liye sab khush hote h
kyonki aaj usko bhi uska pyaar mil gya tha fir sab usko congrats
karte h or fir uske baad vo sab usse party ki demand karte h to vo
unhe collage jaane ko bolta h or party sham ko postpone kar deta h
pahle to koi maan nahi rha tha par vishal k jor dene par sab maan
jaate h or collage chale jaate h uske baad vishal amrita ko lene
uske hotel ki taraf chala jaata h vo gaadi park karke hotel k
reception se amrita k room no. puchta h or chal padta h amrita k
room ki taraf vo darvaaje k bhaar pahuch darvaaja khatkhatata h
fir thodi der baad amrita darwaaja kholti h to vishal ko dekh k
muskuraane lagti h vishal uski muskuraahat mai is kadar kho jaata h
ki darwaaje par hi murti ban k khada ho jaata h use is tarah khud
ko ghurta dekh k amrita sharmaane lagti h or vishal se kahti h ki
vo isi tarah se murti ban k use dekhta rahega ya ander bhi aayega
vishal ander aata h or fir darwaaja lock kar deta h or amrita ko
 apni baaho mai bhar k ek tite hug deta h thodi der amrita bhi uski
baho mai kho jaati h fir khud ko sambhaal k usse kahti h
Amrita - kya baat h janab aaj to bada pyaar aa rha h subah subah
Vishal use apni baho se aajad karke use maathe ko chum leta h or
kahta h
Vishal - kya karu yaar tum ho hi itni pyaari ki tumhe jab bhi dekho
bas pyaar karne ko dil chahta h
Or itna bol k amrita ko kas k khud se sata leta h jisse dono k
chehre kaafi paas aa jaate h dono ki saanse kaafi tej ho jaati h fir
dono ki aankhe apne aap band ho jaati h or fir dhire dhire vishal k
hont amrita k honto ki taraf badte h amrita ki dhadkne tej hone
lagti h haalanki use in sab k baare mai pta nahi tha par kal usne
park mai us ladka or ladki ko kiss karte hue dekh liya tha jisse vo
bhi aaj vishal k itne karib aane par kaafi exited ho gyi or apna
control khone lagi thi kuch hi palo mai vishal k hont amrita k
mulyam honto ko chu gye vishal to jaise kisi or hi dunia mai chala
gya tha amrita k hont use makhaan se bhi jyada mulayam lag rhe
the vo bade hi pyaar se amrita ko kiss kar rha tha kabhi vo amrita
ka upper honth chusta to kabhi nichla dono hi apne pahle kiss mai
buri tarah dub gye the isi tarah kareeb 20 minat tak dono kiss
karte rahe or finaaly jab dono ki saanse tutne lagi to unhone kiss
toda amrita bed par baith kar sharam k mare apna chehra apne
haatho se chupaane lagi ye dekh kar vishal ko uspe bahut pyaar aa
rha tha vo bed pe amrita k bagal mai jaa k baith gya fir dhire se
uske chehre se uske haath hataane lagta h uska chehra sharam se
laal ho gya tha haath hataate hi amrita vishal k gale lag jaati h or
fir kahti h
Amrita - mujhe tumse ek bahut hi jaruri baat karni h
Vishal - haan bolo sweetheart
Amrita - mujhe tumhe apne baare mai kuch btaana h or tum he
meri kasam tum tab tak kuch nahi bologe jab tak meri baat khatam
nahi ho jaati
Vishal - thik h bolo ab se mai tab tak kuch nahi bolunga jab tak
tumhaari baat puri nahi ho jaati
Amrita - to suno mai koi aam kanya nahi hu mai swyam mout k
devta yam dharamraaj ki putri or yamlok ki raajkumaari amrita hu
 Vishal amrita ki baat sun k hairaan ho jaata h pahle use ye sab
majaak laga par amrita ka serious chehra dekh k vo sochne par
majboor ho jaata h par vo kuch bol bhi to nahi sakta tha kyonki
amrita ne use apni kasam di thi to vo chup chaap amrita ki baate
suntan rha fir amrita ne use apne yamlok se aane se lekar Yamuna
ji k solution tak ki saari detail suna di……………

Update - 20

To dosto ab tak aapne pada ki kaise amrita vishal ko pahli apni

kasam dekar uski baat puri hone tak chup rahne ko kahti h fir use
apni sachchai btati h jise sun kar vishal hairaan ho jaata h

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Jaise jaise amrita vishal ko apne baare mai btaati jaa rhi thi vishal
ki aankhe hairaani se badi ho rhi thi vo ab bhi amrita dwara diye
gye is shock se bahar nahi aa pa rha tha use ab bhi yakin nahi ho
rha tha ki vo jis ladki se itna pyaar karta h vo ek dev kanya h vahi
amrita jab use khamosh dekhti h to vo sochti h ki vo usse naaraj h
Amrita - vishal dekho mai maanti hu ki maine tumse apni sachchai
chupaayi parantu tum khud hi socho ki mai kaise sidhe hi kisi pe
vishwaas karke apni sachchai btaati par tumse mai apne dilo jaan se
pyaar karti hu isiliye tumhe sachchai bta rhi hu taaki bhavishya mai
ham dono k bich koi galatfahmi naa ho baaki sab tumhaare faisle
par depend karta h agar tumhaari haan h to thik h agar naa h to
mai kabhi tumhe apna chehra nahi dikhaaungi or yaha se kahi door
chali jaaungi
Vishal ne jaise hi amrita k door jaane ki baat suni to uske dil mai
bahut hi bhayankar dard uthta h or vo amrita k dono haath pakad
leta h or uski dono aankho mai dekhte hue kahta h
Vishal - dekho amrita mujhe is baat se koi farak nahi padta kit um
insaan ho yaa devkanya mujhe bas itna pata h ki mai tumse pyaar
karta hu or tum mujhse to aainda se kabhi bhi mujhse door jaane ki
baat mat karna mai tumse door nahi rah sakta hu tumhaare door
 jaane ki baat se hi mere dil mai bahut dard ho rha h mera dil
bahut ro rha h amrita I love you so much and I cann’t livw without
you
Amrita - (khush hote hue) I love you too vishal
Or fir amrita khush hokar vishal k hoto par ek chota sa kiss kar
deti h par jab use hosh aata h to vo apne kiye par sharmaane lagti
h vahi vishal k chehre pe ek pyaari si smile aa jaati h
Vishal - to amrita ab tum mujhe btao ki tum apni shaktiyaa mujhme
kab or kaise transfer kar rhi ho
Amrita - shaktiyo ko transfer karne k liye hamaare dil or dimaag
kaa ek hona jaroori h kyonki ham dono ek dusre ko bahut jyada
pyaar karte h to ham dono k dil ek ho chuke h par hamaari dimaagi
shaktiyaa abhi tak ek nahi hui vo hame apni yog shaktiyo se ek
karni hogi
Vishal - yog shakti se hamaare dimaag kaise judenge
Amrita - tumne kundilini shakti k baare mai suna h
Vishal - haan mai uske baare mai jaanta hu par vo to sirf sidhdh
purusho ki hi jagrit hoti h jo ki kai saalo tak tapasya karte h
Amrita - haan aam insaano k liye kundilini jagrit karna bahut
mushkil h par devi devtaao k liye ye koi mushkil kaam nahi h ham
apni kundilini shakti ko jagrit kar sakte h or usi shakti se kisi or ki
bhi jagrit kar sakte h
Vishal - oh ab samjha yaani ki tum apni kundilini shakti se meri
kundilini ko jagrit karogi jiske jagrit hone k baad ham dono k dil or
dimaag ek ho jaayenge or fir tum apni shaktiyaan mujhme transfer
karogi par ek baat samajh mai nahi aati ham dono k dimaag to tum
apni kundilini shaktio se bhi ek kar sakti thi to tumhe meri kundilini
ko jagrit karne ki kya jarurat h
Amrita - tumhaari kundilini ko jagrit karna bahut hi jyaada jaruri h
kyonki meri shaktiyaan yamlok mai yamraaj k baad sabse jyada h or
koi bhi aam insaani sharir in shaktiyo ko bardaasht nahi kar sakta
vo in shaktiyo ki vajah se jal k raakh ho jaayega kundilini shakti ki
madad se tumhaara sharir meri shaktiyo ko sambhaalne k saath
saath control bhi kar paayega
Vishal - thik h mai ab sab samajh gya hu ab btaao kab jagrit karni
h apni shaktiyaa
 Amrita - abhi jagrit karni h kyonki koi buri shakti hamaare aas
paas h jo ki kabhi bhi ham pe hamla kar sakti h uske hamla karne
se pahle mujhe apni shaktiyo ko bandish se chudaana h par iske liye
koi aisi jagah chahiye jaha par hame koi disturb na kare
Vishal - to fir chalo yaha par thodi duri par mera ek bangla h uske
tahkhaane mai chalte h vha par hame koi disturb nahi karega
Amrita - thik h chalo
Fir vo dono vishal k bangle ki taraf chal padte h vha pahuch kar
vishal sabhi nokaro ko kahta h ki koi bhi unhe disturb nahi karega
fir vishal or amrita tahkhaane mai chale jaate h or fir vishal
tahkhaane ko ander se lock kar deta h vahi dusari taraf shaitaan
kaa bheja hua gulaam vishal or amrita ka picha karta hua vishal k
bangle k bhaar pahuch jaata h or vahi par khade hokar vishal or
amrita k bahaar aane ka wait karne lag jaata h

Location change - At yamlok

Vahi dusari taraf yamraaj sabha mai yamraaj thode pareshaan

baithe the unhe rah rah kar apni beti ki chinta sata rahi thi vo
uske or us insaan k baare mai jaanne k baad bade pareshaan the isi
pareshaani k chalte unhone aaj ki sabha sthagit kar di thi kaafi der
tak sochne k baad vo apne man mai ek faisla lete h or apne putra
ko bulaate h thodi der mai unka putra aa jaata h
Yamputra - pranaam pitaji aapne hame yaad kiya
Yamraaj - yashasvi bhav putra hame tumse tumhaari bahan k baare
mai bahut hi jaroori baat karni h
Yamputra - kya hua pitaji sab thik to hai na
Yamraaj - kuch thik nahi h putra tumhaari didi prithvi ghumne gyi
thi par vha par use kisi aam insaan se pyaar ho gya h or uske pyaar
mai vo itni jyada kho gyi h ki vo ye bhi bhul gyi h ki vo ek dev
kanya h or uska Milan kisi bhi insaan se sambhav nahi h balki uska
Milan to kisi aam devta se bhi nahi ho sakta
Yamputra - kya pitaji didi ko kisi tuchch insaan se pyaar ho gya h
nahi ye nahi ho sakta insaan to hamaari charno ki dhul k barabar
bhi nahi h fir didi kisi insaan se kaise pyaar kar sakti h pitaaji
mujhe aagya dijiye mai abhi jaa kar us insaan ko khatam karke didi
 ko vapaas le aata hu
Yamraaj - nahi putra tum nahi jaaoge tum bahut gusse vaale ho
hame srishti k niyamo ka ulanghan nahi karna h abhi us insaan ki
aayu samaapt nahi hui isiliye abhi ham use nahi maar sakte or ho
sakta h ki yadi ham us insaan ko khatam kar de to amrita bhi apni
jaan de de isiliye abhi hame use jinda rakhna h or amrita ko vapaas
yaha par yamlok mai laana h vo to aam insaan h kabhi bhi bina
mare yamlok nahi aa paayega or uske marne k baad ham use uske
bure karmo ki saja dene k liye narak lok bhej denge jisse vo kabhi
bhi amrita k najdeek nahi aa paayega or kuch samay k baad amrita
bhi us insaan ko bhul jaayegi
Yamraaj ki baat uske putra ko sahi lagi or vo maan jaata h fir
yamraaj use apna raaj path ek din k liye sambhaalne ko kahte h or
khud amrita ko vapas yamlok lane k liye apne yaan mai nikal padte
h jisme baaki yamdoot aatmaao ko yamlok late h

Update - 21 (mega update)

Ab tak aapne pada ki yamraaj apna raaj paath ek din k liye apne
putra ko sonp kar khud amrita ko lene dharti lok chale jaate h

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Ek taraf jaha yamraaj apni beti ko lene dharti lok chale jaate h
vahi dusari taraf is baat se anjaan dono premi tahkhaane mai
pahuchte h vha par pahuch kar amrita jameen par ek chaddar bicha
deti h fir vo dono padmaasan mai baith jaate h fir amrita vishal ko
dhyaan lagaane ko kahti h or khud bhi dhyaan mudra mai chali jaati
h .
Thodi der baad amrita ki kundlini shakti jaag jaati h or uske sharir
k saato chakra dikhayi dene lagte h fir vo apna ek haath vishal k
sir pe rakhti h or vishal ko bhi apna haath uske sir pe rakhne ko
kahti h vishal jaise hi uske sir pe apna haath rakhta h vo dono
hawa mai udne lagte h fir dhire dhire vishal k sharir k bhi saato
 chakra dikhaayi dene lagte h ab vo dono hi yog ki dunia k aakhri
charan pe pahuch chuke the dono ki kundlini shaktiyaa jaag chuki
thi .
Ab dono k dil or dimag ek ho chuke the ab jo kuch bhi amrita feel
kar rhi thi vo sab kuch vishal bhi feel kar rha tha dono do jism ek
jaan ho chuke the fir amrita k sharir se uski shaktiyaa ek roshani k
roop mai bahaar nikalti h or vishal k sharir mai samaa jaati h iske
baad vishal or amrita dono jamin par aa jaate h or apni apni aankhe
kholte h amrita ki deviya shaktiyo ki vajah se vishal k sharir mai
kaafi badlav aa gya tha uska jo pet bahaar aaya hua tha vo ab
ander chala gya tha uske eight pack abs nikal aaye the uske
muscles bhi kaafi strong ho gye the over all ab uski personality
commando 2 k vidyut jamvaal ki tarah ho gyi thi uska sharir ab
kaafi majboot ho gya tha vahi dusari taraf amrita k ander se uski
saari shaktiya chale jaane ki vajah se kaafi kamjori aa gyi thi
shaitaan ki buri shaktiyaa use dhire dhire kamjor kar rhi thi aske
sharir ki saari deviy chamak un buri shaktiyo ki vajah se smapt ho
chuki thi jab vishal amrita ko aisi haalat mai dekhta h to vo bahut
ghabra jaata h vo jaldi se amrita ko uthata h or use bhaar le aata
h fir amrita use jaldi se Yamuna ji k paas le jaane ko kahti h to
vishal use gaadi mai daalta h or Yamuna ghaat k paas vaale jungle
ki taraf le chalta h jha par vo pahli baar mile the jab vo shaitaan
ka gulaam un dono ko kahi jaate hue dekhta h to vo un dono kaa
picha karta h par thodi duri bnaa kar .
Idhar vishal jaise hi amrita ko le k jungle k paas pahuchta h vo
gaadi rok deta h or fir amrita ko gaadi mai se utaarta h or use
jungle k ander us jagah pe le chalta h jha par vo dono pahli baar
mile the vha par pahuch kar vishal sabse pahle aas paas dekhta h
or fir amrita ko jo ki is samay bahosh ho chuki thi uske bahosh
hone ki vajah se vishal bahut pareshaan ho jaata h or vo Yamuna ji
k paas jaakar unhe pukaarta h uski aawaj sunkar Yamuna ji prakat
ho jaati h fir vishal unhe rote hue amrita ko thik karne ko kahta h
fir Yamuna ji vishal ko shant rahne ko kahti h or use btaati h ki
buri shaktiyo ki vajah se uska sharir kamjor ho gya h jis vajah se
uski chamak chali gyi h or vo bahosh ho gyi h vo vishal ko use utha
kar paani mai lane ko kahti h jisse vo uske sharir se sabhi buri
 shaktiyo ko bhaar nikaal sake jisse uski kamjori khatam ho jaayegi
or uski chamak bhi lot aayegi fir vishal amrita ko god mai utha kar
paani mai le jaata h jaise hi amrita paani k ander jaati h Yamuna ji
apni shaktiyo se uske ander ki kaali shaktiyo ko bhaar khich leti h
jaise hi vo kaali shaktiyaa Yamuna ji k pavitra jal ko chute h vo sab
nasht ho jaati h unke nasht hote hi shaitaan ko ek halka sa jhatka
lagta h use pta chal jaata h ki amrita uske bandhan se aajaad ho
gyi h to vo apne gulaam ko aadesh deta h ki vo vishal ko maar de
or amrita ko shaitaan lok le aaye .
Vahi dusari taraf buri shaktiyo k alag hote hi amrita mai fir se
jaan aa jaati h or uski deviy chamak lot aati h or vo pahle se bhi
jyada khubsurat ho jaati h uska rang roop dudh ki tarah safed ho
jaata h vishal to use dekh buri tarah se kho jaata h uska apne
upper control khatam ho jaata h or vo paani k ander hi aage bad
kar amrita ko kiss karne lag jaata h uske kiss karne ki vajah se
amrita bhi usi kiss mai kho jaati h or is baat pe dhyaan nahi deti ki
vo is samay kha par h dono is samay kiss karne mai khoye hue the
jabki Yamuna ji unhe kiss karte hue dek kar mand mand muskura
rahi thi jab kaafi der tak dono alag nahi hote h to Yamuna ji un
dono k upper ek paani ki ek tej lahar chala deti h jisse dono ki kiss
tut jaati h jab dono kin ajar Yamuna jip e padti h to dono Sharm
se sir jhuka lete h to Yamuna ji aage bad kar unhe gale laga leti h
or fir unhe achi jindagi ka aashirvaad deti h or fir gayab ho jaati h
apni bua se aashirvaad lene k baad amrita or bhi jyada sharmaane
lagti h fir vo dono paani mai se bhaar aa jaate h fir ek baar or
amrita vishal ko gale lagaati h or vo dono vaapas tahkhaane ki
taraf jaane lagte h abhi vo us jagah se thodi dur hi aaye the ki
achanak hi piche se ek kaali roshani ka gola aa kar vishal ko lagta h
or vo udte hue door jaa girta h uski pith pe ek bahut hi bada ghaav
ban jaata h jab amrita piche mud k dekhti h to vha par use ek
aadmi dikhaayi deta h jiska aadha sharir safed tha or aadha sharir
sada hua tha usne jaise hi apna muh khola uske vampire ki tarah do
bade or nukile daant nikale hue the or uske sade hue sharir se uski
haddiya bhi dikh rahi thi jab amrita usse puchti h ki vo kon h tovo
use btata h ki vo aadha vampire or aadha aadamkhor murda h jise
shaitaan se shaktiyaa prapt h or vo use apne saath shaitaan lok le
 jaane aaya h or itna kahte hi vo bahut hi teji k saath amrita k
paas aata h uski speed vampire ki tarah thi par jaise hi vo amrita
ko pakadne k liye haath aage badaata h uske jabde pe ek mukka
bajta h jisse vo udta hua door jaa girta h or amrita jab mukka
maarne vaale ki taraf dekhti h to vo bahut hi jyada khush ho jaati
h kyonki ye mukka vishal ne maara tha uska ghaaw bhi bhar gya tha
jaise hi us gulam kin ajar vishal pe padti h to vo hairaan ho jaata h

Gulaam - tum jinda kaise bach gye koi bhi aam insaan mere vaar se
jinda nahi bach sakta
Amrita - tumne inhe aam insaan samajh k bahut badi galti kar di
ab ye koi aam insaan nahi h inki kundlini jaagrit ho chuki h or iske
alawa inke paas meri shaktiyaa bhi h
Amrita ki baat sunne k baad vo gulaam thoda soch mai pad jaata h
or fir muskuraa kar kahta h
Gulaam - to kya hua agar iske paas tumhaari shaktiyaa h mujhe bhi
shaitaan ki shaktiyaa prapt h iske aage tumhaari shaktiyaa kuch bhi
nahi h ab to mai is insaan ko maar kar tumhe shaitaanlok le jaaunga
ab tumhe ise mujhse koi bhi nahi bacha sakta
Or isi k saath hi vo hamla karne k liye aage badta h par jaise hi vo
vishal k paas pahuchta h vishal uske sine pe ek laat khich k maar
deta h jisse vo udta hua door ja k ek ped se takraata h vo ped tut
jaata h vo fir se khada hota h or vishal k upper ek kaali roshani
kaa gola fenkta h jaise hi vo gola vishal k paas pahuchta h vishal
haath se use rok deta h or muthi band kar deta h jisse vo gola
khatam ho jaata h isse vo gulaam or jyada gusse mai aa jaata h vo
teji se ek k baad ek lagaatar kaali roshani k gole vishal k upper
feenkne lagta h par vishal un golo ko machis ki tili ki tarah pakad k
bujha rha tha fir vo ek gola amrita ki taraf chodta h jise vishal
rok deta h ab vishal ko gussa aa jaata h vo roshani kaa ek gola
bnaata h or uss gulaam k upper fenkta h vo gola sidha jaa k gulaam
ko lagta h or uske sharir pe ek gahra ghaaw ban jaata h par jaldi
hi vo ghaaw bhar jaata h fir vishal ek chaandi ki keel us shaitaan ki
taraf feenkta h jo ki usne apni shakti se bnayi thi vo keel sidhe
jaakar us gulaam k sine k aar paar chali jaati h par vo ghaaw bhi
bhar jaata h to vo gulaam has k vishal ko kahta h ki vo aadha
aadamkhor murda or aadha vampire h isiliye vo chaandi se nahi mar
sakta h or itna kah kar vo jor jor se hasne lagta h or fir teji se
amrita ki taraf badne lagta h par isse pahle ki vo amrita k paas
pahuchta vishal uske pet pe ek roshani kaa gola maarta h vha par
ghav ho jaata h or vishal teji se uske paas pahuchta h vo ghav teji
se bhar jaata h par roshani lagne se use thoda dard hota h or uska
muh khul jaata h or jaise hi vo apna muh kholta h vishal uske muh k
ander ek roshani kaa gola fenk deta h jo ki uske muh se hota hua
uske pet k ander chala jaata h or use ander se jalaane lagta h ab
us gulaam ko apna ant najar aane lagta h to vo teji se amrita ki
taraf badne lagta h vishal jab use amrita ki taraf badta hua
dekhta h to vo apni shaktiyo se amrita k aas paas ek kawach
bnaane ki koshish karta h par vo kawach ban nahi paata h kyonki
amrita k aas paas pahle se hi vo kawach tha jo ki uske pita
yamraaj ne uske yamlok se nikalte hi uske aas paas bnaaya tha .
Jaise hi vo shaitaan amrita k paas pahuchta h vo apni shaktiyo ka
ek gola bna k vishal k gole se mila deta h jisse ek bahut bada
dhamaak hota h or us gulaam k chithde chithde udd jaate h amrita
k chaaro taraf dhua dhua hi uthta h thodi der k baad jab vo dhua
saaf hota h to vishal dekhta h ki amrita ko kisi kawach ne ghera h
use ek kharoch tak nahi aayi thi vo jaldi se amrita k paas jaa kar
use gale se laga leta h .
Vahi dusari taraf yamraaj dharti pe aa chuke the jaise hi amrita
kaa kawach activate hota h unhe amrita ka pta chal jaata h or vo
turant gayab ho kar sidhe vishal or amrita k saamne prakat ho
jaate h dono unhe dekh k chonk jaate h……………

Update - 22

Ab tak aapne pada ki kaise vishal shaitaan dwara bheje gye gulaam
k ander ek roshani kaa gola chod deta h jisse vo amrita ki taraf
bhagta h fir vo fat jaata h amrita ko uske kawach ki vajah se koi
haani nahi pahuchti h fir vo vishal k gale lag jaati h par tabhi vha
par yamraaj pahuch jaate h

Ab aage
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Amrita or vishal gale lage hue the ki achanak hi vha par yamraaj
pahuch jaate h or jab vo apni beti ko vishal k gale lage hue dekhte
h to unhe gussa aa jaata h (apni beti ko koi bhi baap kisi ladke ki
baaho mai dekhtaa h to use gussa aata hi h par vo apni beti se
bahut pyaar karte the jis vajah se vo gussa apne ander daba dete
h or pyaar se amrita ko pukaarte h)
Yamraaj - putri amrita
Amrita jab yamraaj ki aawaj sunti h to vo vishal se alag ho jaati h
or aas paas dekhti h to use uske piche yamraaj dikhaayi dete h vo
bahut khush ho jaati h or pitaaji bolkar unke gale lag jaati h
Yamraaj - beta tum thik to ho naa tumhaara kawach activate hua
to mujhe pta laga kit um musibat mai ho or mai yaha chala aaya
btao tum par hamlaa kisne kiya tha aaj usko dunia ki koi bhi taakat
mere kahar se nahi bacha sakti
Amrita - pitaaji mai thik hu mujh par shaitaan k gulaam ne hamlaa
kiya tha par inhone (vishal ki taraf ishaara karte hue) use khatam
kar diya h
Yamraaj - tumhaara bahut bahut shukriya insaan jo tumne aaj
hamaari putri ki madad ki ham tumhaare shukragujaar rahenge
Vishal - (haath jodkar) prabhu ye to mera farj tha aaj aapke
darshan se mera jivaan dhanya ho gya
Yamraaj - vaise to mera darshan karne vaala kabhi bhi dharti par
nahi paata par tum ne meri putrid ki madad ki h to mai tumhe kuch
dena chahta hu btaao tumhe kya chahiye
Vishal - hai prabhu ishawar ki daya se mere paas pahle se hi sab
kuch h ab mujhe or kuch nahi chahiye
Yamraaj - fir bhi mai tumhe kuch dena chahta hu chalo koi ek
vardaan mang lo
Vishal - nahi prabhu mujhe kuch nahi chahiye
Amrita - jab pitaaji kah rahe h to maang lo naa
Yamraaj - lo ab to amrita ne bhi kah diya ab to tumhe maangna hi
padega or mai bhi tumhe vachan deta hu kit um job hi magoge
 tumhe milega chahe vo kuch bhi ho siway amratav k
Ye baat yamraaj ne kah to diya tha flow flow mai par ab vo dar
bhi rahe the ki kahi vishal amrita ko hi naa maang le vahi dusri
taraf amrita chah rahi thi ki vishal uske pitaaji se uskaa haath
maange
Yamraaj ki baat sunkar vishal kuch der sochta h ab uske man mai
dwand chal rha tha ek taraf to uska dil ye kah rha tha ki vo
yamraaj se amrita kaa haath maang le par dusari taraf uski
antaraatma use kah rhi thi ki ye galat h kyonki yamraaj ko uske
pyaar k baare mai pta nahi h unhone use acha insaan samajh k
vardaan dene kaa faislaa liya h isiliye use bhi unse koi aisa vardaan
maangna chahiye jise vo dil se de aashirvaad ki tarah naa ki
majburi mai or rahi baat amrita ki to usse vo shaadi uske pita ko
manaa k karegaa naa ki unhe majboor karke inhi dono dwand main
vishal kaafi der tak sochta h use apni antaraatma ki aawaj sahi lagi
or vo yamraaj se amrita k alaawa kuch or maangne kaa sochta h
Vishal - (apne man mai) kya maangui kya maangu kya maangu ……….
Haa………… aaj nahi to kal yamraaj ji ko mere or amrita k pyaar k
baare mai pta chal jaana h (haalanki vo pahle se hi sab kuch jaante
the) to vo mujh pe gussa bhi honge ho sakta h ki marwa bhi de or
fir marne k baad mujhe yamlok se yaa to swarg bhej denge yaa fir
naraklok taaki mai amrita k najdeek naa aa saku to kyo naa kuch
aisa maang liya jaaye jiski vajah se mai yamlok naraklok swarglok
ya kisi bhi anya lok jha jha amrita jaa sakti h vha jaa saku par vo
punya aatma h or maine bahut saare paap kiye h gusse mai aa kar
or ho sakta h ki mai aage bhi isi gusse k kaaran or bhi koi paap kar
baithu to kyo naa isi kaa koi parmaanent ilaaj dhund liya jaaye jisse
vo mujhe marne k baad naa to swarglok bhej sake or naa hi
naraklok mai amrita k saath hi rahu
Vishal ko iss tarah se sochta hua dekh kar
Yamraaj - kya hue putra tum job hi maangoge tumhe milega tum
bina kisi sankoch k mango
Vishal - (kuch soch kar) thik h prabhu jasa aap thik samjhe aap
paap punya kaa hisaab se nyaay karte h naa
Yamraaj - haan mai paapiyo ko narak mai bhejta hu or
punyaatmaao ko swarg
Vishal - to mai chahta hu ki mere paap or punya hamesha hamesha
k liye ek samaan rahe naa to mere paap kabhi punya se jyada ho
naa hi mere punya kabhi paap se jyada
Vishal k iss vardaan ko sun kar amrita kaa chehra latak gya use to
lag rha tha ki vishal uska haath maagega vahi dusari taraf yamraaj
ko bhi haaraani huyi kyonki vo bhi yahi soch rhe the ki vishal
amrita kaa haath maagega fir vo khush hote hue kahte h
Yamraaj - kya tum yahi chahte ho yadi tum chaaho to mai
tumhaare saare paapo ko maanf kar ke tumhe devtaao ki tarah
pawitra kar sakta hu
Vishal - prabhu mujhe aage bhi isi dharti par hi rahna h jab tak
mout nahi hoti abhi to aap mujhe pawitra kar doge par insaani
dimaag kaa koi bharosa nahi h kabhi bhi koi bhi paap kar sakta h
yaa kahi bhi kuch galat hota hua dekh mujhse kuch bhi ashubh ho
sakta h jisse mere paap kaa ghada dhire dhire hi sahi par fir se
bharne lagegaa isiliye mai chahta hu ki mere paap or punya ek
samaan rahe
Yamraaj - thik h jaisi tumhaari ichcha tathaastu ab se hamesha
hamesha k liye tumhaare paap or punyaa ek samaan rahenge halanki
dono tumhaari pravirti par nirbhar rahenge
Vishal - dhanyavaad prabhu
Is samay yamraaj dimaag se nahi dil se soch rhe the jis vajah se
unhone bina bhavishya k baare mai soche vishal ko vardaan de diya
jiska khamiyaaja unhe bhavishaya chukaana pad sakta tha yamraaj
is baat se kaafi khush the ki vishal ne unse amrita ko nahi maanga
par unhe kya pta yha ki amrita ki saari shaktiya ab vishal k paas h
fir vo amrita ki taraf dekhkar kahte h
Yamraaj - putri chalo ab vaapas yamlok jaane ka samay aa gya h
tumhaari maa or bhai tumhaare liye pareshaan ho rhe h
Amrita - pitaaji mai chalne k liye taiyaar hu par chalne se pahle
mai aapko ek jaruri baat btaana chahti hu
Yamraaj - putri baate to yamlok mai bhi ho sakti h
Amrita - nahi pitaaji baat hi kuch aisi h jo ki aapko yahi btaani
jaruri h
Yamraaj baat taalne ki puri koshish karte h par unhe amrita ki jid
k aage jhukna hi padta h kyonki aaj vo apne pita se apne pyaar ki
 baat karne ki than chuki thi
Yamraaj - thik h kaho
Amrita - pitaaji mai jab pahli baar dharti pe pahuchi to sidhe
jungle k ander bua se milne chali gyi vishal ne jab mujhe dekha to
vo mere piche piche jungle k ander aa gye kyonki jungle bahut hi
khatarnaak tha fir jab mai paani k ander chali gyi to inhone bhi ye
soch k ki mai paani k ander doob jaaungi paani mai mujhe bachaane
k liye chalaang lagaa di us samay ham dono pahli baar aamne
saamne aaye tab mujhe pta chala ki ye hi mere dreamboy h mai
inke saath rahte rahte inse bahut pyaar karne lagi hu or ye bhi
mujhse bahut pyaar karte h ham dono ek dusre se shaadi karna
chahte h jis k liye mujhe aapki permission chahiye…………

Update - 23

Ab tak aapne pada ki amrita apne pitaaji ko apne dharti pe aane

tak se vishal se pyaar hone tak ki saari kahaani bta deti h

Ab aage
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Yamraaj ne jab apni beti ki baat suni to unhe gussa to bahut aaya
par apni beti k moh k kaaran gussa dabaa diya or amrita ko pyaar
se samjhaane ki koshish karne lage
Yamraaj - nahi putri ye sambhav nahi h tum ek dev kanya ho or ye
ek sadharan insaan h iska or tumhaara Milan nahi ho sakta or vaise
bhi mai ek sadharan insaan ko kabhi bhi apna damad nahi bna sakta
or agar tum is insaan se shadi karti ho tumhe devlok chod k
dhartilok pe rahna padega
Amrita - inke saath to mai narak mai bhi jalne ko taiyaar hu kyonki
mai inhe dil se apna pati swikaar kar chuki hu kripya karke aap
hame shadi karne ki anumati de de
Iske baad yamraaj amrita ko alag alag tarike se samjhaane ki
koshish karte h par vo nahi maanti ant mai yamraaj ko gussa aa
jaata h or vo amrita se yamlok chalne ko kahte h jis pe amrita
unhe mna kar deti h jis vajah se unka gussa or bad jaata h yamraaj
ka gussa badte dekhkar vishal bich mai bolta h
Vishal - sir mai or amrita ek dusre se dilo jaan se pyaar karte h
badi mushkil se mujhe kisi se pyaar hua h please ab hame alag mat
kijiye
Yamraaj - hai manushya ye devi h or saath saath yamlok ki
raajkumari h or tum ek tuchch se manushya tum log to hamaari
pairo ki dhool k baraabar bhi nahi ho tumhaara hamaara kya mel
bhikhaariyo ko kabhi bhi mahlo k sapne nahi dekhne chahiye kyonki
kuch sapne kabhi pure nahi hote or tumhaare liye amrita bhi aisa hi
sapna h jo mere hote hue kabhi bhi pura nahi ho sakta
Yamraaj ki baat par vishal ko bhi gussa aa jaata h fir vo bhi palat
kar kahta h
Vishal - mere hone vaale sasurji aap k paas shaktiyaa jyaada hone
ki vajah se aap k ander ghamand paida ho gya h jis vajah se aap
ham insaano ko kam aank rhe ho aap ko shayad ye nahi pta ki ham
insaan jab kuch karne ki than lete h to use kar k hyi chodte h ham
insaan kabhi bhi haar nahi maante chaahe musibat kitni hi badi kyo
naa ho or sabse badi baat ham insaan kabhi bhi ummid nahi chodte
h jis vajah se bhagwaan bhi hamaara saath dete h or rahi baat
amrita ki to vo to meri h aap chahe use kahi bhi le jaao mai vha
par use lene jaroor aaunga vo meri biwi banegi hi banegi
Yamraaj - achaa to thik h mai aaj hi tumhaari aankho k saamne
amrita ko yamlok le jaaungaa tum pahle yamlok aayo to sahi baaki
baad mai dekhenge
Vishal - sasur ji aaunga to mai jarur or vo bhi jaldi hi aap bas
mere swaagat ki taiyaari karna
Yamraaj - thik h agar tum aa gye to tumhaara shahi swaagat hoga
or tumhaara rahne kaa prabandh bhi mahal mai karungaa
Amrita - (vishal se) mujhe aap pe or apne pyaar pe pura bharosa h
mai aapka intejaar karungi jaldi aana
Vishal - mai tumhaara bharosa kabhi nahi tutne nahi dungaa mai
jaldi hi vha aaunga or sasurji ko manaa k tum se shaadi karungaa
Yamraaj - hahaha………… mujhe manaa k amrita se shadi karoge ye
to bevkoofi ki intehaa ho gyi maan lo agar tum yamlok aa bhi gye to
bhi tum mujhe kabhi bhi nahi manaa paaoge ab to samajh lo ki tum
 dono ki shaadi kabhi nahi ho sakti
Vishal - vo to aane vala vakt hi btayegaa
Ye bol k vishal amrita ko le k yamraaj se thodi dur chala jaata h or
uske honto pe ek chota sa kiss kar deta h uske baad dono ek dusre
k gale lagte h vahi dusri taraf yamraaj kuch mantra padte h jisse
amrita vishal ko baaho mai hi ek roshani k gole mai badal jaati h or
sidhe yamraaj k haatho mai aa jaati h or dekhte hi dekhte yamraaj
amrita ko le k gayaab ho jaate h or chal padte h yamlok ki taraf
vahi dusari taraf amrita k chalejaane k kaaran vishal ki aankho mai
halke halke aansu aa jaate h uskaa dil bahut hi dukhi tha is dukh
mai vo ye bhi bhul gya ki amrita ki saari shaktiyaa abhi bhi uske
ander h vo dukhi man se ghar ki taraf chal padta h vahi dusari
taraf yamraaj yamlok pahuch jaate h or vo amrita k kaksh mai
pahuch jaate h unke piche piche amrita kaa bhai YAMA or amrita ki
maa SUCHITRA bhi uske kaksh mai pravesh karte h fir yamraaj
kuch mantra padte h or fir vo roshani ka gola vaapas amrita mai
badal jaata h jaise hi amrita k kadam yamlok mai mahal k farsh pe
padte h usne jo shaktiyaa vishal ko di thi vaisi hi shaktiyaa uske
ander paida ho jaati h uske sharir kaa tej or jyaada bad jaata h
fir yamraaj use dharti pe naa jaane kaa bol k darbaar k liye nikal
jaate h amrita vahi par bed pe baith k apni maa ko apni dharti ki
yatra k baare mai sunaane lagti h vo apni maa ko apne or vishal k
baare mai bhi bta deti h vahi dusri taraf vishal dukhi man se apni
mossi k ghar pe pahuchta h or sidha apne room mai chala jaata h is
samay uske dono bhai collage mai the uski mossi uska udaas chahra
dekh k uski udaasi kaa karan puchti h to vo baat taal deta h or use
disturb nahi karne ko kahtaa h vishal room mai lete lete yamlok
jaane k baare mai sochta h flow flow mai usne challenge to kar
diyaa par ab vo soch rha hota h ki vo yamlok jaaye kaise aise hi
sochte sochte use nind aa jaati h or vo so jaata h vahi dusri taraf
jab uske dono bhai ghar pahuchte h to vishal ki mossi unhe vishal ki
udaasi k baare mai btaati h or unse udaasi kaa kaaran jaanne k liye
kahti h uske baad dono bhai fresh ho k vishal k room mai pahuchte
h or use uthaate h vishal uth kar bina kuch kahe bathroom chala
jaata h or fresh hokar taiyaar hota h or gaadi le k park mai chala
jaata h vahi dono bhai vishal k is tarah k behavior ki vajah se
pareshaan ho jaate h or vishal k dosto ko phone karke sab kuch bta
dete h jise sun k vo log bhi pareshaan ho jaate h sab dost park mai
chale jaate h vha par unhe parking mai vishal ki car dikh jaati h vo
pure park mai vishal ko dhundhne lagte h ant mai park k last mai
jungle k paas vishal ek bade se paththar k upper baitha hua unhe
mil jaata h vo kahi khoya hua tha use dekhke koi bhi kah sakta tha
ki vo udaas h vishal apne khyaalo mai itna khoya hua tha ki kab
uske dost uske paas aaye use pta bhi nahi chala jab uske dosto ne
use hilaaya tab vo hosh mai aaya fir usne sab kaa haal chaal pucha
uske baad uske dosto ne uski pareshaani kaa kaaran pucha to pahle
to vo baat ko taalne ki koshish karta rha par jab uske dosto ne
apni dosti ki kasam di tab jaa k usne unhe btaana shuru kiyaa usne
unhe amrita ki sachchaai btaayi or apne or yamraaj k challenge k
baare mai btaya or apni asli pareshaani yaani ki yamlok jaane k
baare mai btaya to vo sab bhi soch mai pad gye fir vo sab ek dusre
se discuss karne lag jaate h jis pathar pe vo baithe the vo pathar
kaafi bada or uncha tha tabhi vha se gujarte ek aadmi ne un sab
se kaha ki pathar se niche utar jaaye agar koi niche gir gya to sir
pe chot lag sakti h or mout ho sakti h ye sunte hi sab dost pahle
to hastre h fir niche utarte h niche utarne k bad vishal ko ek idea
aata h……………