Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you in the matter of an article published in your newspaper comprising

inauthentic information concerning Oldtree College activity. Since times have altered, the
college is managed newly as well. In order to avoid candidates’ disaffection, we would like you
to reformulate the article.
Firstly, the campus of the university has extended significantly which allowed the
authorities to modify pavilions and gyms. At present it is offering various sports such as
soccer, basketball, volleyball, tennis and much more. Due to the fact that our college has
become known ubiquitously, we were inspired to create an accommodation for those from
abroad in order to facilitate the comfort of our students. Having provided the hall of residence,
now it is available to study and inhabit the university’s campus which turned out to be a greatly
convinient possibility. When it comes to our cultural life, we propound cultural events on
numerous occasions as well as invigorating plays and competitions to diversify and improve
students’ lives. The outcome is visible immediately for nowadays the majority of students get
top grades compared to the situation twenty years ago.
Having elaborated the issue I am positive, as the representative on the executive
committee, that the article be restated. For any further inquiries, I am open to answer.

Yours faithfully,
Susan Marks