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Reflection Civil Disobedience
Reflection Civil Disobedience
adding evidence to the paper, but that evidence could be made stronger by writing them in my
own style and words. By rephrasing the evidence so that it matched with my analysis on the
quote, I was able to minimize the length of the paper and get key points across without breaking
away from the flow of my own words. I was able to take comments left on the original draft into
consideration when revising and truly shift toward more analysis than summarization, which has
been something that I often struggle with when writing pieces that include textual evidence. By
revising this piece of work, even though in length it is now shorter, I feel that I have improved on
my work and shown that I can draw connections between multiple sources, even if all ideas are
not the same. This revision was harder for me in being able to shift from quotes into paraphrased