SPEECH DRAFT

Name : Aisyah Fadiyah A W

Student Number : 20210340096

Class : English 4 KG IV

Write this speech draft based on an outline which you have submitted in the
previous meeting.

Introduction of the Speech

Greeting Asssalamualaikum wr.wb

Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen

Grabbing audience’s I know that every one of you must’ve go study right? and now
attention imagined this, you woke up late when you have to go to school,
the bell rings at 7.30 but you woke up at 7.15 and it tooks you
10 minutes to walk yourself there. What will you do? rushing
yourself to take a bath? Or just changing your clothes as fast as
you can? I think point number 2 will be you guys fastest choise
right?

Revealing the topic of the This afternoon i would like to tell you guys or inform about 3
speech and mentioning reasons why we have to take a bath before goin to school or if you
the thesis statement guys dont want to take a bath at least try to spray parfume all over
your body

Outlining the speech 1. to start with ill explain about why not taking a bath can
make your body felt and look filthy

2. the how disturbing it is to other

 3. explain how it would be a sign of disrespect

4. Summary: …….

Body of the Speech

Body Paragraph 1 A: The first reason why not taking a bath can make your body felt
and look filthy

R: natural oils on the skin can accumulate and cause acne-causing

bacteria to grow excessively so if theres some dirt or dead skin
stick to your body they can also accumulate and clog pores causing
acne. Apart from acne, another health effect of not bathing that you
can also experience is a recurrence of eczema.

E: According to Dr. Khetarpals, red, itchy and dry patches of

eczema are more likely to recur if the skin is not clean. So, for
those of you with eczema, it is important to take a shower every
day to remove allergens and bacteria

L: As a result, the health impact of rarely bathing that you can

feel is that you are susceptible to infection.
 A:

Now I’d like to move on to how disturbing it is to others if we did

not take a bath before going to school

R: , first of all disclamer everybody has their own body odor

especially from the armpits and its actually a normal thing and can
vary and there is no particular smell that is unique

E:

Apocrine skin glands: Scent-producing glands. Apocrine glands in

Body Paragraph 2
the armpits can be a source of odor, as can those around the groin.
Eccrine glands: These glands are all over the body but secrete in the
armpits where they produce fluid. When we sweat, bacteria and
other microorganisms become moist, giving rise to an unpleasant
odor. And the best way to reduce body odor is to keep your body
clean

L: Examples bathing every day Clean the armpits with antibacterial

soap to help minimize bacteria on the skin that react with sweat as a
trigger.

Body Paragraph 3 A: Next let me describe how it would be such a disrespectful thing
 to others

R: when you did not take a shower is because when the other
person looks neat and smells good, it's a sign that he respects us as
his interlocutor but when the other person looks rundown and
smelly it could be a sign that his looking down at us as his
interlocutor

E:

if we talk to our teacher and our body smells bad it could disturb
our teacher and make school work difficult.

L: so before talking to other people please pay attention to

our personal hygiene

Conclusion

Summarizing the speech In conclusion as a student we have to take a shower first before
going to school or at least spray perfume all over our bodies to
 avoid unwanted odor

Emphasizing the main Therefore let's think again for the sake of comfort together
point
and to avoid some unpleasant experience in our live.

Making a closing Don't forget cleanliness is part of faith

statement (choose one):

a. Ending with a
quotation

b. Making a dramatic
statement

c. Suggesting result or
consequence

Stating the closing remark Thank you for your attention

Wassalamualaikum wr.wb