IELTS Writing Task 2

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IELTS Writing Task 2 – Assessing elements
You are assessed based on the following four criteria:
 Task response
 Lexical resource
 Coherence and Cohesion
 Grammatical range and accuracy
Task Response
This criterion checks the relevance of your answer. For example, if the essay topic is: Question: Everyone
should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you
agree or disagree? If the answer is about health problems caused because of leading a sedentary lifestyle, then
task response goes for a toss.For task response, your answer should revolve around the health problems
caused because of eating meat ( if you are agreeing) .
Lexical Resource
This criterion checks your vocabulary For example, if the essay topic is: Question: Everyone should adopt a
vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or
disagree? For example, Your answer should use complex words in the right context.
There are a number of reasons why we should turn vegan

Rated as Normal
and stop eating meat.
There are several reasons why we should turn vegan and

Average
stop eating meat
There are a plethora of reasons why we should turn Good in terms of Lexical
vegan and stop eating meat Resource
Coherence and Cohesion

This criterion checks how well the essay is organised using a range of linking words. For
example, Question: In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between
finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young
people who decided to do this. The advantages must be explained in one paragraph and the disadvantages in
the other. If mixed up, there is no coherence.For Coherence,
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First para ...advantages and disadvantages Second para ….
No coherence
advantages and disadvantages
Coherence
First para ...advantages Second para …. disadvantages
achieved
For Cohesion, The ideas must be linked logically,....
If you are elaborating on the advantages but using on the other hand, Cohesion is
as in, A is an advantage. On the other hand, B is also an advantage very poor
Cohesion is
A is an advantage. On the other hand, B is a disadvantage
good
Grammatical range and accuracy

This criterion checks your grammar.
For example, simple subject verb agreement Education is good - Correct Education

are good - Incorrect
Simple prepositions In 10:AM - Incorrect At 10:00 AM - Correct
Simple tenses: If the government had resolved this problem, we are not in trouble
now - Incorrect If the government had resolved this problem, we would not have been
in trouble now - Correct
Difference between IELTS General Writing Task 2 and Academic Writing Task 2
 Essays in IELTS Academic will be slightly tougher than in IELTS General.

 The choice of topics will vary between the two. IELTS Academic will have complex topics whereas IELTS
General will have comparatively simpler ones.
IELTS Writing Task 2 Tips (or) IELTS Essay Writing Tips

IELTS writing task 2 is the second part of the two writing tasks and is one of the most challenging parts of the
IELTS test. Most students also find it to be more difficult compared to Writing task 1.
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What should you know about Writing Task 2?
 You will be allotted 40 minutes to complete this task.

 The essay should comprise of 4-5 paragraphs including the introduction and conclusion.
 DO NOT compose too many body paragraphs. Around 2-3 body paragraphs would be sufficient.
 Use proper grammar/vocab to convey your ideas or points. (e.g.) Words used to give reasons – because, due
to. (or) words used to contradict points – however, but, although.
Plan your essay

1. Identify what is asked in the question.
 Do you have to write for both sides or do you have to choose a side?
 Do you have to provide answers to all the questions?
 Do you have to convey only the advantages and disadvantages or do you have to give an opinion?
2. Brainstorm the main points. 3. Construct your paragraphs.
 Gather your supporting points for your central idea of each paragraph with examples.
4. Check your Task Response
 Check on the number of questions asked. Did you answer it all?

 Were you told to choose a side? Did you choose a side?
 Do all your paragraphs focus on one central topic/idea?
 Do these ideas have supporting points and answers?
 Remember that you aren’t being assessed for your knowledge but your ability to put your thoughts through in
an essay using the English Language. Although relevancy is one of the factors you’re assessed upon, it isn’t
the only factor. Do not spend too much time on making the content perfect!
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IELTS Essay Types
The common types of essays may be based on direct questions, discussions, advantages or disadvantages,
solutions, opinions and so on. It may vary from one teacher to another based on how comfortable they are in
transferring the knowledge that they have. Each essay type in IELTS Writing task 2 has a dedicated structure.
Opinion Essay
An opinion essay is an essay in which you have to explain the given topic based on the opinion that you have
regarding that topic. How to plan your opinion essay:
 Read the question properly and pick a side/opinion.

 Figure out why you have that opinion.
 Know the reasons behind your opinion and use them as main points.
 List out your supporting reasons + examples.
Example question for an opinion essay: Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to
complete a course in university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and
gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views? Give a
reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least
250 words.
Discussion Essay
In the discussion essay, the topic along with two opposing statements are given. You are asked to discuss both
the opposing statements and give supporting points for both the statements. Do not give your opinion unless
it's been asked. How to plan your discussion essay:
 Read the question properly and understand if you've got to give an opinion.
o If you don't, think about the main ideas revolving around both the statements.
o If you do, think about the opinion and the main ideas linking to that opinion.
 Ponder on the supporting points and examples related to the main idea.
Example question for a discussion essay: Some people prefer to directly help or support people who need
it in the local community, however, others prefer to give money to national or international charities.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.
Advantage or Disadvantage Essays
In this type of essay, a topic is given and you'll be asked to write for and against that particular topic. Discuss
the positive and negative points of the essay topic. However, sometimes you may be asked to state your
opinion too. In such cases, you should use another body paragraph to explain your opinion. How to plan
your advantages/disadvantages essay:
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 Read the question properly and understand if you've got to give an opinion.
 Make a list of the advantages and disadvantages that you want to write about in your essay.
 Make a list of points supporting each advantage or disadvantage.
 If you're supposed to give an opinion, make sure you have reasons to support your opinions.
Example of an advantages/disadvantages question: Some people think that youngsters should be required

to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Are disadvantages of this requirement greater
than the benefits for the community and individuals? Write at least 250 words.
Solution Essays
In solution essays, the topic will be given regarding normal problems or issues people face and you'll be asked
to give the solution. Sometimes the question may also be why this particular issue happened and you may be
asked to give your opinions based on the issues. How to plan a problem solution essay:
 Make a list of the problems related to the topic given. 2-3 problems can be taken up.
 The solutions to these problems should be addressed.
 Construct your paragraphs in such a way that the problems are in one paragraph and solutions in the other (or)
paragraphs consisting of a problem and solution.
Example of a cause-solution essay: People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out.
What are the causes? What are the solutions? Write at least 250 words.
Direct Question Essays
These essays are slightly difficult when compared to other type of essays, as you won't be given a direct task
but some general questions and based on these questions you'll have to answer the essay. You can give
different paragraphs for all the general questions. How to plan a direct question essay:
 Read the questions given.

 Focus on each question separately.
 Figure out an answer for each question separately.
 These answers should have a main point, supporting points to your main point and examples.
 Recheck if all the questions are answered before you begin writing the answer.
Example of a direct question essay: The world natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate.
What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do? Write at least 250 words. Now that you have
got an idea of how to score well in IELTS Task 2, go ahead and practice the following elements which help
you to score the high band in the test.
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1. Agree or disagree?
1. Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or
disagree with this opinion?
2. Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To
what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.
3. In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what
extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
4. Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the
qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
5. Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what
extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
6. Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To
what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
7. Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations.
However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer
nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?
8. Advances in health and biology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the
way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what
extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
9. The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore, it is important
that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying more up-
to-date or fashionable products. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
10. Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise, they are a
complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any
relevant examples from your experience.
11. Many governments in the world spend large amounts of money on art, which helps to improve the
quality of people’s lives. However, governments should spend money on other things rather than art.
Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
2. Discuss both views and give your point of view?
1. NEW SEPTEMBER 2022: Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers
should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be
free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
2. Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing
countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they
are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
3. Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they
should be punished for bad behaviour. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.
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4. Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and
unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
5. Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school
subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. What do you think? Give reasons
for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
6. Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other items take a long time to be made by hand. As
a buyer, which do you prefer and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer.
7. Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others
believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion
do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.
8. Most schools are planning to replace sports and exercise classes with more academic sessions. How will
this change affect children’s lives in your view?
9. Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose
is to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
10. Some people think that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human
beings, while other people argue that it is wrong.
11. Should humans adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us
intellectually weaker or more intelligent?
12. Do copyright laws limit creativity or reward it? Would society function better without such rules and
regulations?
13. Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the
responsibility of the people to pay for these services? Discuss the above and give your opinion using
examples.
3. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages
1. Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them?
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
2. Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going
directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. Give
reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
4. Two questions, for example: Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?
1. These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or events. Do you think this is
a positive or negative development?
2. Some people like to travel outside their country. Others would rather travel to tourist spots in their own
country first, before travelling abroad. Which do you prefer to do and why? Include specific details and
examples to support your choice.
3. Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that
men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to
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sacrifice a lot for their family and career… It is said: “A woman’s place is in the home.” What do you
think?
5. Discuss the problems and possible solutions OR discuss the causes and what problems it causes?
1. People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do the benefits of this outweigh the
disadvantages?
2. Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the
problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
3. Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
4. Research shows that global warming is caused by human activity. What are the possible effects of
climate change and what can governments and individuals do to reduce these?
5. In many countries, recently young single people have been living far from their parents, from the time
they began studies or work and until they married. Do you think there are more advantages or
disadvantages to this trend?
6. Traditional schooling is out of date, boring and stifles a child’s natural talents, various professionals
have pushed for an education revolution. Are there alternatives in the education system? Is traditional
education doing more harm than good?
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Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or
disagree with this opinion?
Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the advent
of sophisticated modern technology such as mobile phones, laptops and iPad have helped to enhance and
improve people's social lives or whether the opposite has become the case.
Personally, I strongly advocate the former view. This essay will discuss both sides using examples from the
UK government and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
On the one hand there is ample, powerful, almost daily evidence that such technology can be
detrimental especially to the younger generation who are more easily affected by it’s addictive nature and
which can result in people feeling more isolated from the society.
The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, the invention of online social media sites and apps, such as
Twitter and Facebook have reduced crucial face-to-face interactions dramatically. Through use of these
appealing and attractive mediums, people feel in touch and connected yet lack key social skills and the ability
to communicate.
Secondly, dependence on such devices is built up frighteningly easily which may have a damaging effect on
mental health and encourage a sedentary lifestyle. For example, recent scientific research by the UK
government demonstrated that 90% of people in their 30s spend over 20 hours per week on Messenger and
similar applications to chat with their friends instead of meeting up and spending quality time together or
doing sport. As a result, it is conclusively clear that these technology advancements have decreased and
diminished our real life interactions.
On the other hand, although there are significant downsides to technological developments, its’ multifold
advantages cannot be denied. This is largely because the popularity of technology such as cellphones allows
people to connect freely and easily with no geographical barriers.
People are able to share any type of news, information, photos and opinions with their loved ones whenever
and wherever they want therefore keeping a feeling of proximity and closeness. For example, an extensive
study by Oxford University illustrated that people who work, or study abroad and use applications like
Facetime and WhatsApp to chat with their families, are less likely to experience loneliness and feel out of
the loop than those who do not.
Consistent with this line of thinking is that businessmen are also undoubtedly able to benefit from these
advances by holding virtual real -time meetings using Skype which may increase the chance of
closing business deals without the need to fly.
From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that overall communication and mans’ sociability
has been advanced enormously due to huge the huge technological progress of the past twenty years and
despite some potentially serious health implications which governments should not fail to address, it is
predicted that its popularity will continue to flourish in the future.
Here are some of the collocations used in this essay which you may find useful to!
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 sophisticated modern technology
 enhance and improve people's social lives
 addictive nature
 feel out of the loop
 isolated from society
 reduce crucial face-to-face interactions dramatically
 a damaging effect on mental health
 encourage a sedentary lifestyle
 spend quality time together
 connect freely and easily with no geographical barriers
 proximity and closeness
 its less likely to experience loneliness
 popularity will continue to flourish
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Band 9 sample essays – Intellectual skills
Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To
what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.
In recent decades, many researchers have studied the importance of group-level cognition. Indeed, to my
mind, there is now convincing evidence that group activities improve the intelligence of individuals. In this
essay, I shall examine how research in team-games and study-groups supports this view.
To begin with, team-games clearly require individuals to perform a diverse range of rapid mental calculations.
This is because, in a sporting context, players must predict and anticipate possible actions within tight time
constraints.
For example, a recent Cambridge study showed that soccer players can – within the span of seconds –
calculate over a dozen different permutations that could result from a single soccer related action. Such
predictive powers clearly improve players' mental abilities and result from activities performed in a group
context.
Secondly, study-groups enable individuals to obtain information that they could not acquire in isolation. This
is because peer feedback allows individuals to refine their understanding of concepts and to also learn new
information from other members in the study-group.
For example, a study by The British Institute for Learning found that, if individuals participated in study-
groups, they had a far more objective and sophisticated understanding of a topic than learners who were not
part of study-groups. Therefore, it is certainly the case that learning in a group improves an individual’s
mental abilities.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the notion that group activities improve intellectual abilities. In the future,
we will certainly see schools take greater measures to ensure that more group-level cognition occurs in the
classroom.
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Band 9 sample essays about shooting
In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what
extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Across the globe, many individuals own guns for self-defence and recreational purposes. Gun related
mortalities in households – in particular – throw the ethics of such forms of private gun ownership into sharp
relief. In this essay, I shall appeal to crime statistics to argue that a person is at a far greater risk being shot if
there is a gun in a household.
Firstly, it is intuitively obvious that having a gun in a household endangers children and teenagers. This is
because minors do not have the requisite knowledge or maturity to handle guns safely. For example, the US
Department of Justice recently revealed statistics showing that 150 American children and teenagers die each
year because of accidents relating to household guns. Therefore it is incontrovertible that household guns lead
to additional shootings.
Secondly, household guns became especially dangerous when spouses have violent arguments. This is
because male sexual rage, in particular, often results in deadly aggression. For example, The International
Crime Bureau recently produced statistical evidence that – if there is a household gun – a man is twice as
likely (if he discovers his wife having an affair) to kill her in a fit of jealous rage. Therefore, once again,
household guns correlate positively with additional shootings.
In conclusion, there is undeniable evidence that having a gun in a house leads to further shootings. Given the
strength of this evidence, in the future, more legislature needs to be put in place to limit private gun
ownership.
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Band 9 sample essay about international sporting events
Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the
qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Global athletic events such as the Olympics, the World Cup, the Extreme Games, and even the American
Super Bowl are incredible opportunities for countries. These iconic spectacles can provide a country with an
economic avalanche of benefits or expose it to a public relations disaster. This essay will look at both points,
using Russia and the United Kingdom as examples.
Firstly, it is important to bear in mind that simply hosting the event and having the world’s media attention
cannot guarantee a positive promotion. This is because although the country is receiving enormous amounts
of publicity, the media will often report controversial news as well as.
Take the Winter Olympics in Sochi, Russia, for example. The media spotlight is shining bright on the athletes
but also highlighting the polemic legislation regarding homosexuality. Therefore, despite the international
recognition to be gained, the country can also face a possible backlash.
Secondly, the expense of building large infrastructures necessary to hold these events can dwarf the benefits,
unless they are fully amortized afterwards. This is largely due to the fact that stadiums, Olympic parks, ski
runs etc. are expensive to construct and undertake large capital expenditure, often by the public sector.
In the Commonwealth Games in Manchester in 2002, the council commissioned a stadium for athletic events
which was later adapted and sold to the local preeminent football club, Manchester City. Therefore with
proper, fair, economic management of such buildings and facilities the cost can be recuperated.
To conclude, a host city or nation has a lot to gain from these events but only if they are economically
administered correctly and the country has no controversial issues for the media to pull out of the closet.
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Band 9 sample essay about crime
Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what
extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
Crime is unquestionably one of the most prevailing and worrying aspects in any society, and its prevention
should be taken seriously. Crime prevention can be executed in various ways, firstly through a sustained
honest presence in the community and secondly through international cooperation.
A local presence by incorruptible law enforcement authorities may be costly, however, the long-term
investment would pay dividends in the future. A safer region would encourage trade, investment and set an
invaluable example for younger generations.
For example, crime has dramatically been reduced in the Favelas around Rio de Janiero in Brazil. This was
achieved largely through the government committing large funds of money to stationing police headquarters
in and around the slums. These financial expenditures greatly benefited the community.
Secondly, due to the large-scale severity and the global impact that crime has in some areas of the world,
global cooperation is critical. Operating in a different way would incur significant financial losses and render
any expenditure futile.
For example, Somalian pirates in Africa have reigned terror amongst many ocean transport companies in the
area. Only through large-scale international cooperation was policing the area possible. Therefore, crime
reduction can be attributed to a joint effort between countries.
To conclude, illegal activities are a costly and dangerous fact in the present global economy; however,
through large-scale government investment prevention is an attainable goal. Also, spreading the expense
through international cooperation the resources invested can be significantly more effective in reducing
criminals’ effectiveness abroad.
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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To
what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
Parents throughout the world spend time reading with their offspring to prepare them for school where their
literacy skills are further developed; however, recent research suggests that focusing on reading at an early
age can be detrimental, and participating in fun activities would be far more beneficial. I am a strong advocate
of this approach, and the benefits of it will be covered in this essay.
A fundamental reason for this is that there is no biological age for reading, and pushing infants to acquire this
skill before they are ready could have repercussions. For example, in the UK, many boys are reluctant readers,
possibly because of being forced to read, and this turned them off reading. By focusing on other activities and
developing other skills such as creativity and imagination, when they are ready to read, they usually acquire
this skill rapidly.
In addition, the importance of encouraging creativity and developing a child’s imagination must be
acknowledged. Through play, youngsters develop social and cognitive skills, for example, they are more
likely to learn vocabulary through context rather than learning it from a book. Furthermore, play allows
youngsters to mature emotionally, and gain self-confidence.
There is no scientific research which suggests reading at a young age is essential for a child’s development,
moreover, evidence suggests the reverse is true. In Finland, early years’ education focuses on playing.
Reading is only encouraged if a child shows an interest in developing this skill.
This self-directed approach certainly does not result in Finnish school leavers falling behind their foreign
counterparts. In fact, Finland was ranked the sixth best in the world in terms of reading.
Despite being a supporter of this non-reading approach, I am not vehemently opposed to it and I strongly
recommend incorporating bedtime stories into a child’s daily routine. However, reading as a regular day time
activity should be swapped for something which allows a child to develop other skills.
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Sample essay about improvement in health, trade and education
Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations.
However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer
nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?
Undoubtedly governments of developed nations should share the responsibility of helping less fortunate
nations. Different measures exist, ranging from market access to direct financial payments or even medical
assistance. This essay will explain why certain measures are inherently better than other methods.
Firstly, the most adequate manner to assist the lesser developed countries is not through health or education
‘hand-outs’. This method is flawed and only offers temporary relief from long-term challenges; also this
assistance can be cut at any moment, leaving the country stranded.
For example, economical help from the UK to disadvantaged regions in Africa has gradually been reduced
since the onset of the financial crisis. Although some parts of the continent may be better educated or in better
health, the benefit was short lived, thus leaving the countries of Africa to look for other donors.
Commerce is without doubt the most essential type of assistance that can be given. If the lesser developed
country has the opportunity to develop trade, then it will build strong capabilities to serve it for the long term.
These strengths can develop the local economy and are more reliable than education or health.
For example, while trading with the richer country the government can search for other foreign markets to
trade with. This would offer more stability and diversification for the nation.
To conclude, assistance is definitely necessary for the poorer regions; however, ‘hand-outs’ are short-term
solutions. The optimum solution is to offer market access so the region can produce products and generate
regular income.
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IELTS sample essay about health and biology
Advances in health and biology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the
way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what
extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Any student that needs a Band 7 or higher can listen and memorize this three step system, today.
Biology is one of the most important areas of science due to its direct relationship to survival and health.
Observing the rapid advances made, it has been suggested that it is presently the optimum time to be alive. I
strongly agree with this affirmation for two reasons, firstly lives have been improved, and secondly risks have
been reduced.
First, comparing life with a century ago it is possible to list new benefits available such as hospitals, doctors,
medicines, diagnoses, donors, and transplants, all of which were extremely rare previously. Advances in the
sciences have improved lives across society considerably.
For example, consider an operation in France several years ago whereby a woman received a complete face
transplant. This would be unthinkable in 1910, therefore, due to science her life has undoubtedly improved.
Secondly, health risks have fallen incredibly, so much so that it is possible to visit tropical countries which
previously carried considerable dangers. This is because traditionally preventative measures such as
vaccinations, immunisation and prescription tablets did not exist.
In addition over the last thirty years their cost has fallen rendering exotic travel available to almost anyone
with the funds. Therefore modern science has increased the opportunities and reduced the risks related to
travel, there has been no parallel in history.
To conclude, I strongly agree that biology and improvements in science have increased people's well being
and their opportunities to explore the world. This is undoubtedly the first time in history such situations have
existed.
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The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore, it is important
that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying more up
to date or fashionable products. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Any student that needs a Band 7 or higher can listen and memorize this 3 step system, today.
Over the last 30 years the West has witnessed the East strive for a larger 'piece of the economic pie', aiming
for similar living standards to the EU and US. This has increased pressure on natural resources and prompted
suggestions for governments to limit consumption. This idea is severely flawed because it reduces product
safety and building products to last would harm the poor.
Firstly, the suggestion that governments should discourage consumers from purchasing 'up to date products'
would eliminate the opportunity to improve their safety. This is because as technology improves, new
discoveries can be used to increase their utility.
Take for example the car industry, here technology such as ABS brakes, air-bags, seat belts have all been
derived from a constant flow of improvements. Therefore if the authorities were permitted to limit purchases,
car companies would be reluctant to invest in new features, and safety would never improve.
Secondly, it is true we are consuming more, through ever increasing populations, nevertheless, the argument
that 'products should be made to last' is redundant. If products were built stronger they would be more
expensive. This would harm the less wealthy consumer, furthermore with modern technology these products
can often be recycled at a later date anyway.
Glass, plastic, paper, batteries, and even mobile phones are now collected to be re-purposed, reused and
recycled. Therefore durable products are unnecessary and would harm lower income demographics.
To conclude it is clear that if the public sector were allowed to discourage consumption it would harm product
improvements and ultimately consumer safety. Meddling with product durability would most likely harm the
poor. Therefore I am strongly opposed to both of these notions.
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Band 9 sample essay about leisure activities
Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete
waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
examples from your experience.
To derive a double benefit from anything is considered a bonus, and this is especially the case when
discussing leisure activities for children. The idea to fuse both education and entertainment into one activity is
a goal of many educators; some would even believe that failure to do this makes the activity pointless.
Drawing from examples in Sweden and reviewing games, such as Pokemon, I firmly believe that all activities
should have an educational value.
Leisure activities are a perfect time to take advantage of the receptiveness in a child’s mind, and some
countries are adamant about this. Take Sweden, for example. For many years they have legally stipulated that
all children’s toys sold in the country should have some educational value. In addition, for such a rule to be
passed it must be upheld by scientific research. Therefore, the advantage of incorporating an education
element into toys is scientifically proven.
On the other hand, across the UK, children were wasting their time collecting and learning the statistics of
each creature on each Pokemon card. If, however, these cards had been intertwined with more educational
data the child could have simultaneously gained a more practical education. Due to the child learning large
swathes of irrelevant and useless information it can be argued that the time would have been better spent with
real facts and figures on the cards.
To conclude, scientific evidence from Sweden and fantasy games such as Pokemon with little educational
value are two clear reasons why children’s leisure activities should have an element of learning involved.
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Band 9 sample essay about art
Many governments in the world spend large amounts of money on art, which helps to improve the quality of
people’s lives. However, governments should spend money on other things rather than art. Do you agree or
disagree? Give your opinion.
Societies with a heritage in the ‘arts’ have long been considered culturally sophisticated and advanced.
However, with the recent financial crisis this lavishness and expense should be questioned. Tax-payers’
money has to be spent practically rather than on cultural endeavours. Firstly, not everyone in society
appreciates art, and, secondly, employment should take precedence.
Art can bring quality into one’s life if you are interested. In society art-lovers are typically in the minority, and
other activities, such as sports are more popular. Take football, for example. Across the globe it is obvious
that there are more people watching matches in stadiums than looking at sculptures or art. This fact makes it
impossible that art can bring quality into a community if the galleries hold little interest for the region.
Secondly, the resources diverted to such projects come from the public and should be spent in a way that
benefits them. Commissioning or purchasing art is an insult to taxpayers who endure high unemployment,
such as, those in Newcastle, UK. This city suffers from historically high unemployment, yet the council
commissioned a large sculpture called ‘The Angel of the North’. Financing a job creation project would
undoubtedly have been more practical for the local community.
To conclude, I believe that it is an unjust affirmation that art brings quality into one’s life, and I agree that the
money should be spent elsewhere. This is because art expenditures only benefit a small minority and secondly
the expense involved should benefit the majority. Ideally in the future, governments will recognise that quality
in a person’s life derives from a decent opportunity in life, not a sculpture.
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Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the
country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they
wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Should domestically trained specialists in areas such as medicine and engineering be obliged to pursue their
careers in their homeland or should they be given the choice of working abroad? In this essay, I shall discuss
both sides of this controversial issue before going on to state why I tend to agree with the need for them to
remain in their countries at least in the short-term.
Those in favour of making graduates from these highly skilled professions stay and work in the country where
they studied, often stress that the cost of higher education in many countries is subsidised by taxpayers and
that thanks to government funding, talented students from any background will be able to realise their
potential. The argument, therefore, is that these alumni owe a debt of gratitude to the society that helped them.
Furthermore, in many developing countries, the need to maximize all available resources, including the
human variety, is of the utmost importance. These countries cannot afford to lose such valuable talent,
especially after investing in it.
However, there are many who believe that it must be left to the individual to choose whether to stay or re-
locate in another country. After devoting years of their lives to study while perhaps neglecting personal
relationships and running up considerable debt, seeking opportunities elsewhere to enjoy a better lifestyle and
earn a higher salary as well as the chance to further their academic and professional careers, should not be
denied. Besides, if there are no restrictions on people from other walks of life, such as those in business or
even the arts such as music, dance and acting, from migrating, then why should doctors and engineers be
prevented?
However, there are many who believe that it must be left to the individual to choose whether to stay or re-
locate in another country. After devoting years of their lives to study while perhaps neglecting personal
relationships and running up considerable debt, seeking opportunities elsewhere to enjoy a better lifestyle and
earn a higher salary as well as the chance to further their academic and professional careers, should not be
denied. Besides, if there are no restrictions on people from other walks of life, such as those in business or
even the arts such as music, dance and acting, from migrating, then why should doctors and engineers be
prevented?
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Sample IELTS essay about green energy
Nowadays most green energy is becoming evermore prevalent in both developed and developing
countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they
are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The world today uses more renewable energy than ever before since it contributes to the preservation of the
environment and is economically sound; however, some argue that green energy could undermine the
reliability of the global supply as a result of its dependency on climatic and meteorological phenomena. This
essay will examine both views, but personally, I strongly advocate the adoption of renewable sources of
energy.
On the one hand, opponents of renewables claim that the world could face disruptions to the power supply
should they be fully adopted. This is largely due to the fact that many green energy technologies currently in
use depend on changeable and unpredictable phenomena such as wind, rain and cloud cover.
To take the fastest growing sector as an example, solar panels can only be used in the presence of strong and
direct sunlight, and although the problem of directness has already been somewhat solved with moving panel
arrays, a cloudy few days could still result in a blackout if we depended entirely on solar power; something
that is unlikely to occur today given current oil stockpiles.
However, fossil fuels are a larger threat to energy security since they are certainly finite in quantity, whereas
renewable energy is effectively infinite; once the Earth’s oil is depleted, there will be no energy security
without green energy technologies.
Furthermore, problems of unpredictability can be mitigated by improving battery technologies (to create a
larger buffer), building more renewable energy generators (to increase supply during ideal conditions) and
improving current technologies (to increase efficiency), such as in the moving solar panel example.
Proponents of renewables therefore claim that they are the most economically sound option.
To conclude, while many may believe that green energy technologies are a threat to energy security, the fossil
fuels they frequently promote are a greater threat, and renewables are in fact the only sound option, both
economically and environmentally.
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Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they
should be punished for bad behaviour. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.
The debate over a child's moral education is difficult due to the various view points each party holds. The
question of discipline is exceptionally important, moreover whether to treat good behaviour with a neutral
attitude or to just focus on correcting incorrect actions.
My personal opinion is that any positive actions ought to be immediately recognised by the parent and vice
versa for negative conduct. This balanced approach makes for a more positive outcome for both the child and
family.
Firstly rewarding a good act immediately signals a positive reaction in the child's brain which should
encourage the child to want to behave similar in the future. Failure to recognise such behaviour leaves the
child with the same emotional feeling as if they had done nothing. Therefore rewarding the child regularly for
good behaviour enforces the action making it more likely to repeat itself in the future.
Secondly punishing the son or daughter is also necessary, failure to discipline could have serious
consequences in the future. For example if a child has no clear concept of respect for elders or authority it is
quite possible to encounter more serious problems later in life.
This pattern is prevalent in marginal neighbourhoods throughout the world. Therefore it is essential to
immediately discipline the child whenever witnessing an unruly act so as to enforce the correct behaviour
from an early age.
To conclude both bad and good actions need to be recognised and dealt with immediately to correct or
encourage the future actions. Failure to do either of these could result in a less fortunate life or a youth who
rarely performs any good acts for anyone. Therefore it is critical that both types of behaviour are recognised
dealt with accordingly for the benefit of the child in the future.
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Band 9 sample essay about pets and children
Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and
unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
In recent times, pet related injuries and mortalities have sparked heated debates about whether it is healthy for
children to be around pets. In this essay I shall argue that such dangers are overemphasised and that children
receive substantive psychological benefits through having pets.
To begin with, although exotic pets (e.g. snakes, spiders, apes, etc.) have been known to occasionally hurt and
even kill children, such incidents are so statistically rare as to be negligible. This is because the overwhelming
majority of children have non-lethal cats, dogs, fish, rodents and rabbits for pets.
For example The Child Safety Institute found that over 90% of children owned the aforementioned pets, and
professed that they had never felt in the least bit endangered by them. Seen in this light, it is clearly
unfounded to claim that pets present any physical danger to children.
Secondly, pets can impact positively upon child psychology. This is because young pet owners frequently
empathise with their pets and perform a diverse range of actions to maintain their well being (e.g. feeding,
grooming, administering medicine, etc).
For example, the Cambridge Developmental Psychology Unit found that children who had grown up with pets
were 30% less likely to bully others and resolve conflicts through aggression. Consequently, it is undeniable
that a child’s pro-sociality and mental health can be improved through exposure to pets.
In conclusion, the cited evidence provides strong support for the view that children owning pets is a good
thing. In the future, as more laws are introduced to ban the ownership of illegally acquired exotic pets, this
viewpoint will no doubt surge in popularity.
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Band 9 IELTS essay sample about international news
Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school
subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. Give reasons for your answer and
include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The importance of global media appears to increase year after year, so much so there have been calls to
introduce news channels into the classroom. I believe this to be politically dangerous and potentially
damaging due to the nature of international media.
Firstly, considering the importance education has in a modern society, it is extremely worrying and dangerous
to even consider substituting school subjects with international news. This is because the danger lies in
choosing a correct, balanced, unbiased and neutral news source, if one even exists.
For example if a child spent their school days watching FOX NEWS, they would potentially have a skewed
opinion of the world due to its unabashed right-wing credentials. Therefore, changing a child's information
diet from traditional subjects such as music, PE, or geography to watching a potentially partisan news channel
is an extremely worrying and risky idea.
Secondly, if international news were to become a new subject it could have a detrimental emotional impact on
young minds. This is because in general the majority of news is of a negative nature, hence the expression, "If
it bleeds, it leads".
For example, studies by the EFE News Agency show that 85% of headlines are negative in nature, usually
referring to natural disasters, war, famine, etc. The logic of having these types of stories beamed into a school
to those of an impressionable age has to be challenged. Thus the obligation of watching news of a negative
nature makes for a convincing argument against such an innovation.
To conclude, due to the risk from political influences and the harsh reality of global news, I am strongly in
favor of maintaining the current curriculum.
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Band 9 sample essay about production

Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other items take a long time to be made by hand. As
a buyer, which do you prefer and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer.
Ever since the industrial revolution, mass produced goods have flooded the consumer market. Although such
goods have proved to be highly popular, it is now becoming increasingly clear that handmade goods are more
desirable for modern, informed consumers. In this essay, I shall look at some of the ethical and quality-based
reasons for this re-evaluation.
To begin with, handmade goods can be made with far more care and attention to detail than mass produced
goods. This is because machines lack a sensitivity that experienced craftsman evidently possess. For example,
a study by the International Consumerist Society found that handmade furniture, musical instruments and
jewellery were consistently rated as being more attractive (by consumers) than their mass made counterparts.
Therefore it is clear that buyers prefer handmade goods for reasons that relate to quality of workmanship.
Secondly, handmade production companies have far more ethical attitudes towards the environment. This is
because factories and chemical processes heavily underpin mass industrial production.
For example the British Green Party found that the levels of toxicity and environmental damage outside
handmade production centres were paltry compared to the levels found outside factories used for mass
production. Consequently, since modern consumers are more environmentally conscious than ever before,
these findings have clearly contributed to their preference for handmade goods.
In conclusion, there are compelling reasons for why modern consumers favour handmade goods. In the future,
as environmental issues worsen, this preference will no doubt grow more pronounced.
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Sample essay about gender equality

Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others
believe that a woman's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion
do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice
The question of women’s rights has always sparked heated controversy. While some traditionalists claim that
women should focus on the upkeep of their homes and children, more liberal minded people have claimed that
women should have the same rights as men. In this essay, I shall refer to sociological studies that vindicate the
correctness of the liberal view.
To begin with, it is false to believe that a woman cannot have a job and raise her children effectively. This is
because part-time and online work obviously gives women the time and space to care for their children. For
example, the Organisation for Child Care found that mothers who did part time or online work spent as much
time with their children (after school hours) as housewives. Therefore, it is incoherent to claim – as
traditionalists do – that having a career compromises a mother’s ability to care for her children.
Secondly, mothers who work also gain the means to invest more in their children’s education and personal
development. This is because an additional source of revenue enables parents to send their children to private
schools and extra-mural classes. For example, a Harvard study found that parents were 50% more likely to
invest in these goods if both parents had separate sources of financial income. It is therefore clear that being a
working mother can facilitate, rather than impede, good parenting.
In conclusion, there is strong evidence that women can have jobs and be good mothers. Seen in this light, it is
clear that the traditionalist view is largely baseless, and that it will continue to decline in popularity.
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Band 9 sample essay about replacing sport with academic sessions
Most schools are planning to replace sport and exercise classes with more academic sessions. How will
The debate between where to allocate valuable teaching resources probably started with the first educational
institutions. In present-day society the conflict continues and rightly so. In my opinion converting sports
classes to more traditional subjects has two significant advantages. Firstly, it is a more effective use of a
student’s time. Secondly, in the future, academic skills are more useful.
Switching time spent on sport in a school to time spent on more academic activities is a wise and cost-
effective solution. Firstly, academic studies are inherently less expensive to perform when compared to
physical education.
For example, to play almost any sport one has to invest in the appropriate equipment, ranging from shorts, t-
shirts to rackets and balls. Furthermore, excess time is spent in the changing rooms or washing afterwards. In
more traditional subjects, students merely enter the classroom and are learning within minutes.
Secondly, sport can be argued as an activity practised naturally by children, especially boys. In every school
at break time many children engage in energetic activities, whereas hardly any are studying algebra, biology
or physics. Because these subjects are less popular more resources should be allocated to teaching them.
In addition, academic skills could be argued as more important due to the small number of people in society
currently using sport skills in a work environment. Thus, focussing on skills demanded by the labour market
would benefit students’ lives dramatically in the future.
To conclude, young learners going through school would finish much better prepared for life avoiding sport
tuition. Furthermore, they would have taken full advantage of their school years through more time spent
learning.
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Band 9 sample essay about replacing sport with academic sessions
Most schools are planning to replace sport and exercise classes with more academic sessions. How will
The debate between where to allocate valuable teaching resources probably started with the first educational
institutions. In present-day society the conflict continues and rightly so. In my opinion converting sports
classes to more traditional subjects has two significant advantages. Firstly, it is a more effective use of a
student’s time. Secondly, in the future, academic skills are more useful.
Switching time spent on sport in a school to time spent on more academic activities is a wise and cost-
effective solution. Firstly, academic studies are inherently less expensive to perform when compared to
physical education.
For example, to play almost any sport one has to invest in the appropriate equipment, ranging from shorts, t-
shirts to rackets and balls. Furthermore, excess time is spent in the changing rooms or washing afterwards. In
more traditional subjects, students merely enter the classroom and are learning within minutes.
Secondly, sport can be argued as an activity practised naturally by children, especially boys. In every school
at break time many children engage in energetic activities, whereas hardly any are studying algebra, biology
or physics. Because these subjects are less popular more resources should be allocated to teaching them.
In addition, academic skills could be argued as more important due to the small number of people in society
currently using sport skills in a work environment. Thus, focussing on skills demanded by the labour market
would benefit students’ lives dramatically in the future.
To conclude, young learners going through school would finish much better prepared for life avoiding sport
tuition. Furthermore, they would have taken full advantage of their school years through more time spent
learning.
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Sample essay about school being more entertaining
Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose
is to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Educational reform is a contentious issue with various trends coming and going over the last few decades.
While many people believe that schools should focus on more enjoyable activities in order to maintain student
engagement, I strongly advocate to maintain a traditional approach so as to maintain order. This essay will
review both sides and use examples from a survey performed in the UK and an academic report from a
prominent university.
Learners who are required to absorb information via conventional academic methods often experience
problems with focus and attention. More specifically, repeatedly performing the same memory-based task
throughout one’s school career is likely to cause boredom and ultimately result in student disengagement.
In several schools in the UK, to take an example, it has been shown via survey that a considerable number of
young people fail to remember crucial information simply because it was uninteresting. Adhering strictly to
rote learning is therefore harmful to those students who require further assistance to remember key details.
Although there is a case for more entertainment in schools, and even interactive media, the appearance of such
possible distractions in the classroom, cannot be overstated. This is largely because of two reasons, firstly
teachers would have to be re-trained to use such media and this could lead to considerably increasing
education expenses.
Secondly, for a more fun class to happen the teacher has to be firmly in control of the classroom or
disobedience and unruly behaviour could ensue. This was proven in a recent study by Oxford University that
showed that over 91% of teachers who implemented an entertainment oriented curriculum stated that they
quickly lost control of the students. Thus it is possible to state beyond doubt that more entertainment in the
classroom will not only increase costs but even augment poor behaviour.
To conclude, from the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that although more entertaining
education can lead to fully inclusive classes, the risk for a teacher losing control of the class is too high a price
to pay. Discipline must be maintained or zero education will happen. It is predicted that traditional teaching
methods that incorporate total classroom control will continue to grow in importance.
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Sample essay about humans adapting to technology
Should humans adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us
intellectually weaker or more intelligent?
Whether the development of modern technology should be permitted to advance unhindered, or improved
only with specific regard to human need, is a contentious issue. Since learning to use new technologies
strengthens intellect, I believe that new devices should be developed without limits in order to challenge
people.
The achievements of humanity over the last century have only been made possible by the development of
modern technology. Driven by the need to discover, people have created countless innovations in fields such
as electronics, medicine and engineering which have improved the lives of billions.
Additionally, many key discoveries throughout history were made while investigating something else entirely,
such as with penicillin or the microwave oven. Establishing controls over what may or may not be
investigated could therefore severely limit new discoveries.
This style of innovation also provides intellectual benefits for both the inventor and the consumer, since both
must work hard in order to either create or use the new device. A constant flow of new discoveries maintains
mental stimulation amongst those who choose to make use of them.
The computer, for example, has enabled humans to achieve remarkable things, but only after we adapted our
behaviour and learned to use it fully. Also, those people who have maintained a good degree of computer
literacy are now able to seek the best professional opportunities, which is further known to be intellectually
beneficial.
In conclusion, I believe that technology should be allowed to develop freely and that humans should adapt
their behaviour to emerging discoveries. This will keep us intellectually strong and ensure that the maximum
good can come from scientific endeavour.
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Sample essay about copyright laws
Do copyright laws limit creativity or reward it? Would society function better without such rules and
regulations?
It is supposed by many that copyright laws may be counterproductive and could hinder creative endeavour;
however, personally, I disagree with this idea and opine strongly that the protection of intellectual property is
crucial to a well-functioning society, and, in fact, encourages the production of further works by providing a
framework within which innovators may be adequately rewarded for their efforts.
Copyright regulations may prevent people from expanding on existing ideas, but a key purpose of such rules
is to ensure that new ideas are sufficiently original to warrant financial reward. It is unlikely that members of
the public could discern an original piece from a fraud, and so the support of the courts is necessary in order
to uphold standards of originality.
The US federal government states, for instance, that such laws exist to stimulate artistic creativity for the
general public good, and to ensure reasonable return to authors and inventors. Through this process, the law
establishes incentives for producing new works, which in turn encourages learning, progress, and
development.
Without such regulations, individuals would be free to copy another’s work. As mentioned above, the general
public cannot reasonably be expected to defend authenticity, and so would-be fraudsters may receive a
financial reward comparable to that of the originator.
Resultantly, in countries with substandard protections for artists, for example, creative output is consistently
and considerably lower than that of nations with strong intellectual property regulations since the genuine
owner of the work is afforded little protection or reward. If we accept that more creative output is good for
society, then copyright law can be taken as the same.
To conclude, copyright regulations are an essential tool for the promotion of creativity, and society tends to
function better with their enforcement.
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Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the
examples.
A healthy and educated society is the backbone of any successful society; however, deciding who is to
provide this is a sensitive topic. I strongly believe the government should be held responsible to provide these
services for two reasons. Firstly, the entire society benefits, and secondly the whole population is currently
paying for the services. However, if one prefers extra services they should be prepared to pay for it
themselves.
Firstly, education is largely considered a basic right. A population unable to calculate, read, write or even
learn would be doomed in such a competitive global economy. Globalisation has increased competition and
shifted the emphasis to knowledge, information and science. A state education should, therefore, be freely
available to everybody. However, if people wish to purchase private education, this should also be allowed or
even encouraged. Private education reduces the strain on public services and provides a source of tax revenue
for the government, in effect, subsidising state education.
Secondly, health services must undoubtedly be available to all because the entire nation is paying taxes and,
therefore, should not be excluded from any service. Take the NHS in the UK, for example; this organisation
caters for the entire population, and no private medical insurance is needed. Unfortunately waiting lists can be
long and service is occasionally slow; therefore, some purchase private medical insurance for a faster service.
This reduces the workload of the public sector.
To conclude, I believe both healthcare and education are basic fundamental rights, necessary for any advanced
society, and, therefore, the responsibility should lie with the government. Nevertheless, if individuals require
more than the standard level, then they should be prepared to pay for it.
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Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the
examples.
A healthy and educated society is the backbone of any successful society; however, deciding who is to
provide this is a sensitive topic. I strongly believe the government should be held responsible to provide these
services for two reasons. Firstly, the entire society benefits, and secondly the whole population is currently
paying for the services. However, if one prefers extra services they should be prepared to pay for it
themselves.
Firstly, education is largely considered a basic right. A population unable to calculate, read, write or even
learn would be doomed in such a competitive global economy. Globalisation has increased competition and
shifted the emphasis to knowledge, information and science. A state education should, therefore, be freely
available to everybody. However, if people wish to purchase private education, this should also be allowed or
even encouraged. Private education reduces the strain on public services and provides a source of tax revenue
for the government, in effect, subsidising state education.
Secondly, health services must undoubtedly be available to all because the entire nation is paying taxes and,
therefore, should not be excluded from any service. Take the NHS in the UK, for example; this organisation
caters for the entire population, and no private medical insurance is needed. Unfortunately waiting lists can be
long and service is occasionally slow; therefore, some purchase private medical insurance for a faster service.
This reduces the workload of the public sector.
To conclude, I believe both healthcare and education are basic fundamental rights, necessary for any advanced
society, and, therefore, the responsibility should lie with the government. Nevertheless, if individuals require
more than the standard level, then they should be prepared to pay for it.
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IELTS sample essay about the use of computers
Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them?
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
In recent years, children, like adults, have become increasingly exposed to computers. While some child
psychologists have claimed that this is a good thing, others have claimed that it has an overwhelmingly
detrimental impact on children. In this essay, I shall draw upon a number of studies in cognitive science and
industrial psychology that reveal the positive and negative aspects of this phenomenon.
To begin with, there are clearly reasons why computers do not allow children to develop long attention spans.
This is because computers are packed with many supposedly child-friendly games that require minimal levels
of concentration in order to be enjoyed.
For example, a study by the New York Child Learning Association found that children who read from picture
books were 50% less likely to get distracted than children who played educational computer games. Therefore
computers almost certainly have a negative impact on young children.
However, since the world has become heavily reliant on computers, there are also clearly advantages to
exposing children to computers. This is because children with such exposure will stand a better chance of
finding employment.
For example, after being interviewed by Yale psychologists, over 70% of young office workers admitted that
they had spent long hours on computers in their middle and late childhood years. Therefore it is clear that
computer exposure can be beneficial to children.
In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages to early computer exposure. However, if, in the future,
the quality of educational gaming is increased, there is good reason to believe that these negative
consequences will fall entirely away.
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Sample task 2 essay about high school graduates travelling
Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going
directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. Give
reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is common for a student to take a gap-year in a foreign country or even work for a year prior to university.
Whether a student should engage in travelling or working before embarking on a formal qualification has
been a topic of debate for various years. Firstly the advantages of such activities will be discussed, followed
by all the economical disadvantages one encounters on such endeavours.
The benefits of resisting university for a year to travel or work open the students mind to new worlds, such as
having responsibility at work or learning a new language abroad. Having spent a year in Australia prior to
university I learnt how to look for work, become responsible with finances and other essential life skills such
as cooking.
Upon starting university various tasks such as money management and employment were second nature thus
allowing more time for studies. Without having gone abroad university life would undoubtedly be more
challenging.
The disadvantages are mainly cost related, the airfare, travel insurance, national insurance and personal living
costs are large sums. However finding another opportunity to go abroad is difficult once the pattern of normal
life is resumed.
In addition it also an opportunity to experiment with different jobs before choosing a career at university.
Therefore there is a considerable advantage of taking a year out before higher education.
To conclude, the main disadvantages are the costs involved, however the benefits dramatically outweigh the
disadvantages. Time should be spent wisely as it can never be recuperated unlike money which can be spent
and earned.
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Band 9 sample essay – sports
These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or events. Do you think this is
a positive or negative development?
The issue of whether to spend one’s hard earned wages on attending expensive football, rugby or baseball
matches or other exclusive diversions as opposed using it more wisely and prudently has become a matter of
concern for many.
Critics argue that such frivolity is a misuse of precious funds however, I personally believe the opposite.
This essay will discuss why the benefits of attending sport or cultural occasions are worth more than the
actual ticket price by using examples taken from the Harvard Business Review and the Woodstock Festival.
On the one hand those festival goers and sports fans who attend concerts, gigs, matches or athletic
competitions happily extol the virtues of these on their overall well-being, both physical and mental. The
main reason for this is twofold, firstly by watching, participating and enjoying a game people’s overactive
stress levels can be radically reduced.
Secondly, many such important and well-respected events have become a noteworthy opportunity for
socializing or networking. For example, a recent article published by the Harvard Business Review showed
that key, ambitious top executives in the 500 Fortune companies had invested in tickets for basketball games
not only for themselves but for their clients aiming to seek distraction and amusement while entertaining
and nurturing future business contacts.
Therefore, although it could be suggested that the high price of ticket sales has been exacerbated by powerful
Corporates or event organizers with sky high budgets, there is no doubt of the positive spin- offs to health
and business.
On the other hand, if money is no object, then there is overwhelming evidence that going to festivals,
attending concerts or investing in experiences is a growing trend which is appreciated because of its ability
to build fond and durable memories which last a lifetime and become part of a family’s history.
An example of this was the mythical Woodstock music festival in 1969, which was a peaceful milestone
witnessed by thousands of people who have afforded it legendary status. Thus, the emotional value of such
events cannot be overstated.
To conclude from the aforementioned arguments, I firmly believe that despite the frequently prohibitively
high prices of attending sport and cultural events, doing so can be enormously positive and justifiable for the
benefits it brings to those who are there.
From the significant growth in richly diverse Festivals worldwide, it could be predicted that in the future this
kind of events will continue to grow in popularity as people elect to spend their earnings on experiences rather
than in material goods.
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 one’s hard earned wages
 investing in experiences
 misuse of precious funds
 sky high budgets
 positive spin-offs
 seek distraction and amusement
 entertaining and nurturing future business contacts
 ambitious top executives
 noteworthy opportunity for socializing or networking
 extol the virtues of
 festival goers and sports fans
 prohibitively high
 part of a family’s history
 build fond and durable memories
 last a lifetime
 if money is no object
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Band 9 sample essay about travelling
Some people like to travel outside their country. Others would rather travel to tourist spots in their own
country first, before travelling abroad. Which do you prefer to do and why? Include specific details and
examples to support your choice.
Over the past few decades the international tourism industry has gone through a boom period. Cheap air
travel, in particular, has allowed ordinary working class people to travel to more international destinations
than ever before. In this essay, I shall refer to number of sociological studies to show why – contrary to
popular opinion – domestic travel should initially take precedence over international travel.
To begin with, people’s knowledge of their own countries and culture has grown increasingly sketchy. This is
largely because foreign brands, television shows and cultural objects flood local markets.
For example, The Asian Cultural Society found that Japanese teenagers knew more about American television
series than 19th Century Japanese woodcuts. It should therefore be clear that citizens need to know much
more about their own countries, and that visits to local cultural centres should occur before visits to remote
countries.
Secondly, people reap high economic benefits if they are well-travelled in their country of birth. This is
because local travel, in particular, opens up business opportunities.
For example, the Korean Society for Entrepreneurship found that 40% of successful start-up companies were
run by individuals who had travelled extensively in Korea and sniffed out small openings in developmentally
neglected areas. Seen in this light, local travel can also be of vital economic significance
To conclude, although few would argue outright against foreign travel, there are certainly reasons why
domestic travel is initially preferable. In the future, as some of the hype surrounding foreign travel dies down,
these reasons will no doubt appear more attractive and conspicuous.
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Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that
men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men's, although they have to
sacrifice a lot for their family and career. It is said: "A woman's place is in the home." What do you
think?
Women and men have had different roles in the community since the beginning. Under modern pretexts these
differences are slowly converging. However, due to the genetic inheritance and socio-demographic
components, these differences do exist.
Firstly, men are undoubtedly better adapted genetically to perform physical tasks. Therefore, the assumption
that women can match men in everything is clearly flawed. The difference between their physical abilities is
clearly demonstrated in the sporting arena. Take, for example, the Olympics or any international sporting
event. It can be clearly seen that in these competitions the genders are separated due to inherent differences
between the sexes.
Secondly, it has been argued that women are less appreciated in society due to their traditional roles in the
home. This statement is true to a certain extent because it largely depends on the society. In certain traditional
societies in Africa, females working is frowned upon and is seen as neglecting the family, whereas in
Afghanistan, in general, females are allowed to do little else but stay at home, being a housewife.
Consequently, a woman’s value is largely dictated by the society, culture and history. Nevertheless, to state
that her place is in the home is widely considered sexist in modern western societies.
To conclude, differences do certainly exist; however, these are largely through nature. Also, the role women
may have is usually dictated by other factors, such as, religion or society, not ability.
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Band 9 sample task 2 essay
People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do the benefits of this outweigh the
disadvantages?
The importance and popularity of web-based language translation applications has grown over the past
few years due to globalization. People from vastly different geographical zones, educational backgrounds
and cultural beliefs are more inclined to use such mobile applications to learn and understand a foreign
language.
I strongly agree that its positives of this development outweigh the negatives, and, in this essay, I will discuss
this using examples of current apps and The Times newspaper.
On the one hand, there is ample evidence that constant access to mobile phones has been immeasurably
beneficial to both our social life and business careers. Nowadays, citizens are migrating to different countries
in order to build a new future and dealing with overseas companies for business purposes, so learning a
second language has become their necessity. Such mobile applications are facilitating them by providing a
handy solution to their language barriers.
For example, Play store and Apple app store advertise multiple paid and free to use apps such as Duolingo,
Dictionary, Grammarly and Ginger which instantly translate one language into another allowing crucial
communication, be it social or commercial to happen seamlessly. Therefore, it is apparent that many key
aspects of people’s lives are is being made easy through these handy and ready to use solutions.
On the other hand, whether language conversion apps benefit the public or cause potential losses to a key
section of the education establishment is also a controversial topic for discussion. A recent study published in
The Times newspaper has shown that there has been a significant reduction in demand for bilingual teachers
or native language tutors as more people have started using such apps instead of spending money on the
specialist tuition required to learn a new tongue.
For an instance, free apps simply require basic registration details and email verification to register then
begin, compared to the many hours or even years needed to master an additional language to a proficient level
of fluency. As a result, despite the indisputable benefits of learning face to face, talented and experienced
professors, translators and interpreters are having to fight to justify their relevance in this new world.
To conclude, I believe that if the situation favours the relatively accurate, easily accessible use of online
translation applications, which offer instant and quick solutions they can be hugely beneficial for the
community at large and in the future their flexibility and sophistication will continue to be improved.
 constant access to mobile phones

 immeasurably beneficial
 a handy solution to their language barriers
 instant and quick solutions
 flexibility and sophistication
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 permits crucial communication
 learn a new tongue
 learning face to face
 language training professionals
 native language tutors
 educational backgrounds and cultural beliefs
 web- based translation application tools
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Band 9 IELTS sample essay about obesity
Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the
problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the advent of urbanisation and the rise in popularity of fast food, there have been accompanying issues
with rising obesity rates – especially in developed countries like England and the USA. After providing a
careful analysis of why obesity has risen so sharply in these countries, I shall suggest a number of ways in
which the obesity epidemic can be ameliorated.
To begin with, it should be unsurprising that fast food is incredibly popular in wealthy countries (like England
and the USA). Due to the high levels of development in these countries, consumers possess more money and
can therefore consume vast amounts of fast food without seriously diminishing their income.
For example, the American Dietary Association found that (compared to the average Indian household), the
average American household has a six times larger budget for food per month. Consequently, it is to be
expected that obesity rates are much higher in countries with larger amounts of wealth.
However, despite the severity of the obesity problem, there are a number of ways in which developed
countries could battle it more effectively. Firstly, developed governments could put far more pressure on fast
food outlets to provide healthy alternatives to hamburgers, french fries and soft drinks.
Secondly, public exercise initiatives could be advertised and promoted far more vigorously. Lastly, modules
that inform teenagers about healthy dietary requirements could be taught at schools.
In conclusion, although obesity is a serious issue in the developed world, if the above steps are taken, the
situation will surely improve in the coming years.
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Band 9 sample essay about quality of life
Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
The global phenomenon of urbanisation from the beginning of industrialisation to the present day has brought
opportunity and prosperity, albeit at a cost in the quality of life. With an increasing city population, the
complexity of the challenges also increases. The causes and solutions for this are outlined below.
The causes for the decrease in the quality of life are paradoxically the prosperity endowed on such
metropolitan centres. Their growth is largely due to the increase of opportunities on offer, which in turn
increases their attractiveness; essentially they are trapped in a positive self-reinforcing cycle.
However, this eventually leads to a decrease in the quality of life as the city can experience overcrowding,
exorbitant property prices, and increased vulnerability to terrorist attacks. For example, the density of London
makes it a more efficient place to attack, when compared to a smaller city, such as Bradford. Therefore, due to
continuous growth and prosperity, urban citizens, especially the less well off, often experience a lower
standard of living.
Considering the solutions, greater investment in public transport would ease traffic congestion, as would bike
lanes. In theory this would reduce air pollution and possibly improve the wellbeing of the population if they
did adopt a more active lifestyle and cycle to work.
To counter violent terrorist attacks, cities could embark on CCTV installations, so as to closely monitor for
threats. For example, it is said, the CCTV in London has foiled many potential attacks, and therefore greatly
increased the security of its citizens.
To conclude, a wealthy city attracts large population inflows, which then cause pressure on existing
infrastructure and security. Various solutions exist to mitigate such drawbacks, but nevertheless a definite
solution has yet to be found.
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It is the job of governments and companies to deal with the huge environmental problems which we
face. Individuals on their own can do little or nothing’. What is your opinion about this statement?

It cannot be disputed that the world is experiencing an environmental crisis. According to recent research, if
nothing is done to tackle climate change in the near future, our planet will face the devastating consequences
of global warming. Undoubtedly, it is the role of governments and corporate organisations to take action,
however I strongly feel that individuals need to make a contribution to deal with this pressing problem as
well.
Politicians could certainly invest public finances in order to research the issues connected with climate
change and, furthermore, could pass laws in relation to industrial pollution, which is making a major
contribution to the greenhouse effect. Nevertheless, it requires constant pressure from citizens, either alone or
in environmental pressure groups, on our leaders to make this happen. The general public can protest, lobby
their politicians or vote for a political party who proposes introducing green policies if elected.
Similarly, corporate businesses should be adopting more sustainable working practices, for instance, by
switching to more environmentally-friendly ways of manufacturing using renewable energy such as solar
panels. Likewise, the individual as consumer can play a role here too, by refusing to purchase products which
have been manufactured in a way that damages the environment.
It must also be acknowledged that individuals have a moral responsibility to care for our planet. For example,
reducing consumption of fossil fuels whenever possible, becoming self-sufficient by growing their own
vegetables and switching off lights when they are not needed. Although some of these actions may seem
minor, the cumulative effect of everyone taking such actions would be enormous.
It is probably certainly the case that governments and international companies are the key players with
responsibility for protecting our planet. Nonetheless, I am still convinced that ordinary people, either
individually or cooperatively, can help to make the changes necessary to have a significant impact on our
future.
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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

The global phenomenon of urbanisation from the beginning of industrialisation to the present day has brought
opportunity and prosperity, albeit at a cost in the quality of life. With an increasing city population, the
complexity of the challenges also increases for the globe as well as the local community. Therefore, the
causes and effects of these on the current generation, as well as possible solutions are outlined below.
The causes for the decrease in the quality of life are paradoxically the prosperity endowed on such
metropolitan centres. Their growth is largely due to the increase of opportunities on offer, which in turn
increases their attractiveness, essentially they are trapped in a positive self-reinforcing cycle. While such
developments have a positive impact on immediate economic objectives, it perpetuates behaviours that can
have a negative impact in the long term.
However, this eventually leads to a decrease in the quality of life as the city can experience overcrowding,
exorbitant property prices, and increased vulnerability to terrorist attacks. For example, the density of London
makes it a more efficient place to attack, when compared to a smaller city such as Bradford.
Therefore, due to continuous growth and prosperity, urban citizens, especially the less well off, often
experience a lower standard of living. Even greater than this, are the relevant examples of natural disasters
such as recent fires in Australia, which brought about unprecedented weather patterns resulting in the
destruction of wild and rare animals. These effects are far from uniform, as they affect different countries in
ways unseen by previous generations.
Considering the solutions, greater investment in public transport would ease traffic congestion, as would bike
lanes. In theory, this would reduce air pollution, and possibly improve the well-being of the population if they
did adopt a more active lifestyle and cycle to work. While these solutions are local, if adopted globally, would
affect individuals and many countries alike. A collective effort is needed to use social networks and other
media to highlight the negative effect of urbanisation as well as the negative sides of the wider ramifications
on the population.
To conclude, while it could be argued that urbanisation advantages outweigh the disadvantages, a wealthy city
attracts a large population inflow, which then causes pressure on existing infrastructure and security. Various
solutions exist to mitigate such drawbacks, such as social networks being used to raise awareness of such
negative impacts on many countries, nevertheless an indefinite solution has yet to be found.
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Sample IELTS writing task 2 question (3)
Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent
do you agree?
Since the introduction of social media applications in the early 2000's the world has become a much smaller
place. Social media applications such as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter have become information sources
for a majority of the global market.
As such, it could be argued that marketing, which happens to be a source of information accessible on these
platforms can influence the consumers who use them. This notion is further aided by the rise in online retail
stores that conduct the bulk of their transactions online. This makes it easier for the consumer to purchase
from anywhere in the world.
As a consumer on social media, you are constantly bombarded with advertisements of various products that
are specifically designed to catch your attention. This means that most of the adverts on your news feeds aren't
random and will almost always feature something you have previously searched online or something currently
popular or trending. Given the fact that most social media users are young consumers who are influenced by
current trends and happenings, these adverts will almost always catch their eye.
The habit of sharing, retweeting and liking also ensure that these adverts get around, quite fast. As such, when
an advert does reach your news feed you have already probably seen it on your friend's news feed. The truth
is, adverts are a form of information and with the age of the internet, information spreads faster than a
wildfire.
Therefore, it only makes sense that in the era and age of technology, globalization and the need to be trendy,
social media marketing can influence what consumers buy.
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Sample essay about traditional schooling
Traditional schooling is out of date, boring and stifles a child’s natural talents, various professionals
have pushed for an education revolution. Are there alternatives in the education system? Is traditional
education doing more harm than good?
The conventional rote method of learning is often considered to be so dull as to discourage full development
of young people’s innate abilities. This essay agrees with the view that the current pedagogy is outdated, and
will consider an alternative to traditional education.
While ordinarily, children are expected to retain pre approved information dictated by a teacher, a self-
directed approach can be more beneficial. Holding all children to the same standard will necessarily have a
divisive result, with some children believing themselves to be intellectually superior, and others feeling
inadequate, perhaps for life.
In systems in which achievement is relative, such as in Finland for example, young people graduate from
education each feeling as if they have completed their own unique path, and knowing deeply and without
prejudice their own capabilities, reducing or even eliminating the feelings of inequality that conventional
education creates.
Furthermore, under the current system, students who lack aptitude in core subjects such as mathematics and
the sciences are seen as having less intrinsic value to society. These children spend their lives believing that
they are inadequate, but many may have valuable talents that were never explored.
It is in this way that conventional education does the most harm, by ignoring niche abilities in favour of skills
with more mass appeal. Comparing traditional education with the Finnish system of self-direction, we can see
that the former is certainly causing harm to a significant number of pupils.
To conclude, changes are urgently required in education systems around the world. We should focus more on
a child’s interests and innate abilities in order to maintain their engagement, and allow them to direct their
own learning to achieve the best outcomes.
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