COMMENTS AND ACTION PLAN TAKEN IN OUR STUDY

STEM 12 Group 3: Determinants of Medical Supply SHortage in the Rural Health Unit of
Masinloc as Perceived by the Health Workers.

Researchers: Albert Dumawing, Princess Regodon,CIndy Bautista, Nadine Gacad, Jasmin

Tolentino

Panel Comment Action Plan

Abstract We improved our abstract by providing

a brief overview of our research paper.

Definition of Terms We arranged the Definition of Terms in

alphabetical order

Title We rephrase our title to more accurately

reflect the findings of our study.

Mr. Christopher Elico Statement of the To better align with the title of our
problem research, we also rephrase our SOP.

Significance of the
Study

Summary We include the number of respondents

in each summary to make our research
paper easier to understand.

Questionnaire We proofread our questionnaires and

change those errors.

COMMENTS AND ACTION PLAN TAKEN IN OUR STUDY

STEM 12 Group 3: Determinants of Medical Supply SHortage in the Rural Health Unit of
Masinloc as Perceived by the Health Workers.

Researchers: Albert Dumawing, Princess Regodon,CIndy Bautista, Nadine Gacad, Jasmin

Tolentino

Panel Comment Action Plan

Abstract We improved our abstract by providing

a brief overview of our research paper.

Definition of Terms We arranged the Definition of Terms in

alphabetical order

Acknowledgment We change our acknowledgment to a

third-person perspective.

Hypothesis As requested by our panel, we moved

our hypothesis to Chapter 1

Recommendation We proofread our recommendation and

changed those errors..

Mr. Fernando Diago Tables We double-checked our tables and

changed those errors..

Interpretations We arrange our interpretation from

highest to lowest.

Questionnaire We proofread our questionnaires and

change those errors.

Respondents We removed our respondents in chapter

3 since it is already in our scope and
limitations.

Background of the We proofread our background of the

Study study and change it to a third-person
point of view.

COMMENTS AND ACTION PLAN TAKEN IN OUR STUDY

STEM 12 Group 3: Determinants of Medical Supply SHortage in the Rural Health Unit of
Masinloc as Perceived by the Health Workers.

Researchers: Albert Dumawing, Princess Regodon,CIndy Bautista, Nadine Gacad, Jasmin

Tolentino

Panel Comment Action Plan

Table of contents We changed our table of contents to

better appropriately reflect a research
paper's format.

List of Tables and We separated the list of tables and list

Figures of figures

Statement of the We changed our SOP into question

Problem form.

Sampling Method Since we don't use any sample

techniques on our respondents, we
withdrew our purposive sampling
method.

Mr. Fernando Diago Title of Table We change our tables' titles to make
them easier to understand.

Likert scale interval We put the data interpretation or the

likert scale interval in every
interpretation of our study.

Hypothesis As requested by our panel, we moved

our hypothesis to Chapter 1

Definition of Terms We arranged the Definition of Terms in

alphabetical order