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Expert feedback
November 25, 2022

Hi Bryan,

I read your submission on your resume describing your professional experience. Below is a
brief critique of the assignment.

Nice work,
Your Chegg Expert

Overall Score: 3.4/5

Format/Appearance 5/5

Organization 4/5

Content 5/5

Grammar and spelling 3/5

Please note that the score provided above only represents the Expert’s judgment of your writing and in
no way makes any promises or assurances concerning your actual grade.
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Format/Appearance
The content follows a proper resume format as you have started with your personal
information and moved on to present your qualifications and work experience. You've
put the white space to good use. You have also pointed out your skills and qualities in
bullet points which makes the resume well-structured. Well done! The details correctly
populate the pages of your CV without being overloaded. As a whole, the design
elements are adequate. The document starts with your personal information from the
outset, including your name, contact information, email address, and other relevant
information. Good luck!

Organization
You did a great job of organizing your curriculum vitae. It is good to see that you have
included sub-heads to present individual details. The name and contact information
has been indicated at the top, are well organized, and are clear and coherent.
Professional experience was listed in reverse chronological order and the most recent
professional experience was listed first. However, it would be preferable to list some of
the major projects you worked on and how you managed them, as that would add
more detail about you. Good luck!

Content
There's a lot of detail in your curriculum vitae. The education section is pretty
extensive. You provided pertinent details about your academic qualifications, work
experience, the languages you speak, your skills, and the qualities that made for a
strong and crisp CV. Well done!
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Grammar and spelling

Your paper reads well. However, avoid grammatical mistakes like “Proficient in Microsoft word,
Excel, spreadsheet [,] and PowerPoint…”, avoid the repetitive use of ‘the’ in “Pre-op work
vehicle at the beginning of shift and post-op at the the end of shift…”, change the preposition in
“Administer appropriate corrective action documentations as needed to ensure
compliance with department policies…”. You can also run a grammar check by reviewing your
grammar cards in the writing editor.
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Next Steps
Fix what you agree with, ignore what you don't, and then resubmit to get another expert
check! The best way to improve your paper is to keep writing, revising, and considering
outside feedback.

Resubmit my paper

After you’ve got your paper reading just right, submit it for a Plagiarism and Grammar
check to add that final polish and catch any remaining issues!

Check Plagiarism and Grammar

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Your paper

Bryan A Troncoso

Troncoso_b@yahoo.com

323-420-8016

Statement of Qualifications

- Operational Management Graduate for California State

University of Los Angeles

- Great attention to detail, ability to multitask and stay

focused under pressure - More than 10 years' supervisory
and administrative experience.

- Strong leadership skills for managing more than 20-50

employees at a time.

- Very strong organizational skills, special events, project

management and staffing.

- Works well with others and is able to follow directions,

delegate specific tasks or any necessary responsibilities to
provide optimum productivity.

- Capable to work independently; forward thinker, and

problem solver.
- Good communication skills and customer service
orientation.

- Proficient in Microsoft word, Excel, spreadsheets and

PowerPoint.
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Work Experience

Caltrans 2021- Present

-Traffic Guidance/Special Crews (05/01/2022-Present)

- Raised markers, placement

- Road stencils' replacement

- Repair of highway structures, cleaning of ditches and

culverts, concrete-asphalt repair, sealing of cracks.

- Guardrail installation and maintenance, erosion control -

Installation of rain protection measures - Traffic control
duties to perform maintenance tasks - Setting up and
execution of lane closures on two-lane and multi-lane
highways, flagging operations, moving closures, and manned
chain control.

- Set up signs, cones, barricades, message boards, and

operate 2-way radios

-Service Assistant Maintenance (09/01/2021- 05/01/2022)

- Moving Operations

- Facing Traffic operations

- Warning System - Lookout - Shoulder Lane Debris

Clearance.

- Trash, rubbish and debris removal.

- Landscaping and Maintenance.

- Pre-op work vehicle at the beginning of shift and post-

op at the the end of shift.
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- Disinfection of workstations and facilities.

L.A Live/AEG 2014-2021

-Security Supervisor/Special Events Coordinator -

Administer appropriate corrective action documentations as
needed to ensure compliance of department policies.

- Deploy staff for events. Allocate appropriate breaks and

necessary equipment

- Perform a variety of duties, often changing from one

task to another of a different nature without the loss of
efficiency or composure.

- Demonstrate the ability to take responsibility for the

performance and behavior of the entire team assigned to the
deployment.

- Provide leadership and guidance to staff. Serve as a

mentor/coach to all employees.

- Coordinate events, set-up, egress

- Create and distribute production instructions -

Supervision and production/activities

Little Super Market 2005-2013

-Assistant Manager of Operations

- Inventory logistics

- Assistant Manager
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- Administrative distribution of funds

- Interpersonal Communication/Written and Verbal

Communication

- Dispute resolution

- Cashier Balancing/ Accounting

Education

California State University, Los Angeles 2017-2019

College of Business and Economics/ Bachelor in Business

Administration option in Operations and Supply Chain
Management

East Los Angeles College 2012-2017

Associate of Arts/General Studies Social and Behavioral

Sciences

Skills

- 45 wpm typing speed

- Adaptability

- Attention to detail

- Cloud-based storage systems

- Customer service
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- Data entry

- Diary management

- Multitasking

- Time management

- Sociable, Active

- Multitasking,

- Time Management, Telephone Etiquette

- Dependability

- Efficiency, Flexibility, Attention to detail

- Punctuality

- Customer satisfaction orientated

Languages

- Bilingual- Fluent in English and Spanish,