To

The Director QEC

Qurtuba University of Science & Information Technology, Peshawar

SUBJECT: INTERNAL EVALUATION REPORT OF AHMAD JEHAN’S THESIS

I have evaluated the thesis entitled “CHANGEZ: A VICTIM OF COGNITIVE

DISSONANCE DEPICTED IN THE RELUCTANT FUNDAMENTALIST”. In the light of

below mentioned observations, he/she is told to change the following observations.

My evaluation report is as under.

i. In Abstract, topic introduction, objectives, methodology, findings, recommendations, and

conclusion are discussed but very concisely and within a single paragraph.

ii. Set page margin according to the university research pattern, and remove space between

paragraphs.

iii. Provide authentic sources to the original quotations.

iv. Use transitional words between the paragraphs, and follow indentation for each

paragraph.

v. Block quotations are formatted differently from general quotations.

vi. No need of quotation marks (“”) around the titles.

vii. Almost all the block quotations are formatted incorrectly. Correct them accordingly.

viii. Most of the citations found incorrect. Make them correct.

ix. Include Theoretical Framework in your thesis.

x. Provide authentic and proper references and in-text citations for the arguments.

Muhammad Riaz
Lecturer
Qurtuba University