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Gacusan Gagalang Critique Paper
Gacusan Gagalang Critique Paper
Gacusan Gagalang Critique Paper
COLLEGE OF SCIENCE
DEPARTMENT OF ENVIRONMENTAL SCIENCE
SCHOOL YEAR 2022-2023
Submitted by:
Gacusan, Maricar C.
Gagalang, Angeline D.
The title of the article is concise and informative. It has significant details that provide ideas
for the readers about its information. The main thought or ideas of the research are summarized in
the title as it employs few words to succinctly describe the topic. In the abstract part, it was not
The authors have appropriate academic and professional qualifications as they focused on
the other hand, Asif Hosain is from The University of Burdwan, Golapbag, Burdwan, 713104,
The research has a concise abstract. It clearly defined each major aspect of the study. It
contains a summary that provides details of the research The abstract includes the main problem in
the research. It gives prediction to the outcome of the study. It elaborated on the morphological
variables of butterfly species. The research interpreted and shows the data of three plants in terms
of the frequency of visits of the butterfly species. On the other hand, the abstract does not indicate
the methods used in the research. But it contains specific details about the species and proboscis of
butterflies which is the main topic discussed in the research. In concisely, the abstract contains the
major finding of the research. As a result, butterflies with shorter proboscis cannot access nectar
In the introduction, the problem was stated, which is the flower preference of seven species
from the Lycaenidae family as these species contain very short proboscis, lower body length, lower
body weight, and wing span than the other species. The rationale was not clearly stated in the
study. The research has limitations and only conducted the flower preference of seven species from
the Lycaenidae family. In the framework, it was indicated the Proboscis length of the butterfly
species.
The literature review was not up to date. On the other hand, it identified the theoretical
framework. It contains significant concepts which help determine the problem in the study. It was
not presented a balanced evaluation of the material as there were different literature reviews in the
study. Yet, the important reference was not omitted as the previous studies guide the present study.
The research used an experimental approach as it include a hypothesis and variable that was
measured and compared in the study. The hypothesis was not unambiguous as it helped the
research progress and link the underlying theory of the study. In addition, all terms used in the
The methodology showed that the research used an experimental approach as it provide
specific details about the process, measurement, and test of the research. And the subjects were
comprehensively defined.
Conclusively, the sample subject of the research was clearly stated because it identified that
butterflies with long proboscis can access the nectar from the deep flower. On the other hand,
butterflies from the Lycaenidae family which have shorter proboscis cannot access nectar from
deeper flowers.
The sample selection approach was congruent with the method, seven species from
weight and wing span than the most species belonging from Nymphalidae, Pieridae, Papilionidae,
and Hesperiidae
Morphological variables of these Lycaenid butterfly species correlate with flower selection,
which plants are preferable by the butterfly species and how these flowering plants plays a role to
conserve these species and how butterfly species helps in pollination of these plants by measuring
frequency of visits of the butterfly species because higher the frequency of visits positively related
to higher the chances of pollination because during collection of food the pollen grains are attached
The sample size is clearly stated under the materials and methodology it states there the
sample size, species sampling as well as the study area, the measurement of morphological
variables, and floral biology for the flowers. Data collection procedure that is being used the
Multivariate analysis of variance (MANOVA), Kruskal-Wallis’s test followed by post hoc Dunn’s
test, Pearson’s correlation analysis, Principal component analysis (PCA) and cluster analysis. There
is description of the preparation of materials like Proboscis length (PL) of the butterfly species
were measured by inserting a needle in the coiled proboscis and length of the proboscis was
determined by the distance from the labial palps to the tip of the proboscis by the use of electronic
digital Vernier calliper (Thermocare) (Kunte 2007). The distance between two wing tips considered
as the length of the wing span (WS). The body length (BL) was determined from the area between
eyes to the tip of the abdomen (Van Dyck 1997). For determination of body weight (BW) first the
taken in a digital electronic balance machine. After that butterflies were acclimatized for 1 h to
regain flight ability and then they were release without noticeable harm (Mukherjee and Hossain
2020).
The validity and reliability of instruments are clearly stated where under measurement of
morphological variables, the ways how to perform or use the instruments are described .
There may not be any human participants in the study, no set of guiding principles for
research designs, no informed consent, confidentiality, or possibility for harm, and no disclosure of
the study's findings. In truth, the outcomes of this study were determined subjectively by the
research participants; as a result, there may be no confidentiality issues with the paper. In order to
improve research validity and preserve scientific integrity, this article seeks to show us that both
researchers and scientists should always abide by a specific code of conduct when it comes to
The result are clearly presented, where the Pearson’s correlation plot and PCA biplot show
body length, body weight and proboscis length maintain a strong positive correlation but wing span
maintain weak relation with proboscis length. The classical clustering based on algorithm UPGMA
for frequency of butterfly visits in three plants (groups) by using Euclidian distance and presence-
absence records in the three plants by using Jaccard index. The classical cluster analysis based on
Euclidian distance proved that Syndrella nodiflora (SNO) and Ocimum americanum (OAM) are
quite similar but Tridax procumbens (TPR) is dissimilar from both those groups in terms of
wherein the apparent presence or absence of each butterfly species are recorded in the three plants
namely Tridax procumbens (TPR) and Ocimum americanum (OAM) and Syndrella nodiflora
(SNO) showed that Tridax procumbens (TPR) and Ocimum americanum (OAM) are related but
Syndrella nodiflora (SNO) is dissimilar from both these groups (Fig. 8).
There is a description arrangement of data that we can used, in a form of graphs and tables.
The discussion is balanced it shows the results of seven butterfly species from Lycaenidae family,
the reason of less frequently visit of butterfly species on Syndrella nodiflora, it is also observed the
butterfly species with high wing load capacity and the butterfly species with shorter proboscis.
The weaknesses of the study are acknowledged, when the visitor butterfly species do not
visit in these two plants because the corolla length of the flowers exceed the proboscis length of the
butterfly species (Corbet 2000; Tiple 2009). The reason of less frequently visit of butterfly species
on Syndrella nodiflora (SNO) may be less food source in that flower. There are clinical
implications, nectar robbers with longer proboscis gain more energy (Kunte 2007) because species
that containlonger proboscis access nectar from deeper flowers (May 1992), but the butterfly
species with shorter proboscis cannot access nectar from the deeper flowers and they solely
depends on the flowers having shorter or equal length of the proboscis length of the butterfly
species. It is also observed that butterfly species with high wing load capacity visits clustered
flowers but the species with low wing load capacity visit solitary, less nectar rich flowers (Corbet
2000). Heavier butterfly species require larger wings for flight (Dennis 1993) and thus require
flowers that are rich in nectar (Tiple 2009). But in case of butterfly species with lower body weight
with shorter wing load capacity and shorter proboscis visit solitary and flowers with shorter corolla
tube because this enables them to collect food from this particular type of flowers and fulfil their
energy requirements. The research question is all answered through the results whereas the present
study proved that butterfly species visits frequently in Tridax procumbens (TPR), Ocimum
americanum (OAM) but less frequently in Syndrella nodiflora (SNO). So, that study determined
the butterfly species helps in pollination of these herbs that in turn helps the conservation of these
butterfly species. There are explanations of the results, the seven butterfly species from Lycaenidae
family visit Tridax procumbens (TPR) and Ocimum americanum (OAM) frequently rather than
Syndrella nodiflora (SNO). It was also found that all the species visit Tridax procumbens (TPR),
three species visit Ocimum americanum (OAM) and two species visit Syndrella nodiflora (SNO),
but no butterfly visit in Lantana camara (LCA) and Catharanthus roseus (CRO) which corolla
(TPR) has the highest visit rate followed by Ocimum americanum (OAM) and Syndrella nodiflora
(SNO) respectively. So, the visitor butterfly species do not visit in these two plants because the
corolla length of the flowers exceeds the proboscis length of the butterfly species (Corbet 2000;
Tiple 2009). The reason of less frequently visit of butterfly species on Syndrella nodiflora (SNO)
may be less food source in those flowers. In case of nectar robbers with longer proboscis gain more
energy (Kunte 2007) because species that contain longer proboscis access nectar from deeper
deeper flowers and theysolely depends on the flowers having shorter or equal length of the
proboscis length of the butterfly species. Itis also observed that butterfly species with high wing
load capacity visit clustered flowers but the species with low wing load capacity visit solitary, less
nectar rich flowers (Corbet 2000). Heavier butterfly species require larger wings for flight (Dennis
1993) and thus require richer and abundant food to fulfil their energy requirements so they restrict
their visit in clustered flowers that are rich in nectar (Tiple 2009). But in case of butterfly species
with lower body weight with shorter wing load capacity and shorter proboscis visit solitary and
flowers with shorter corolla tube because this enables them to collect food from this particular type
of flowers and fulfil their energy requirements. During feeding on flowers butterfly also contribute
the pollination of the plants (Lewis 1989; Goulson et al. 1997; Weiss and Papaj 2003). The present
study aims to identify flowering plants those are preferred by the Lycaenidae family and comments
in their potential role in pollination, thereby conservation of the host plant species and in alteration
of conservation of butterfly species with shorter proboscis, wing span, body length, and lower body
The conclusions are all supported by the results obtain during the analysis. Tthe
implications of the study are identified, it shows the ability and potential of the study impact to
the text acknowledgment, an author's efforts, accurate author information, and appropriate citation.