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Tone-Ometers: A Deb Hanson Craftivity
Tone-Ometers: A Deb Hanson Craftivity
A Deb Hanson
Craftivity
Name _______________________________________
Directions: Read the story in the box.
Choose the word in the tone-ometer below the story that describes the author’s tone. Color the
mercury red to the level of the word you chose.
What do I want to be when When I grow up, I intend to be a
I grow up? Let’s see. Careers baker. In particular, I want to make
usually last forty years or so, those fancy cakes and cupcakes that
so I want a job that I enjoy. I I see on TV. I want to do this for
need to find a career that three main reasons. First, I love
matches my hobbies and frosting, and I would be surrounded by
personality. I like to be that flavorful gift of sweetness each
outside. I am on the swim and every day. Second, I adore art.
My art teacher at school says I am
team. I’m very social. What’s
quite a gifted artist. Decorating a
the job for me? I know! I will
cake is like creating an edible artistic
be a lifeguard when I grow up.
masterpiece. Finally, everyone would
I will move to a city along the be nice to me. (Aren’t you nice to
coast and I will be a lifeguard. people who bring sweet treats to
That’s the perfect career for you?!?) Clearly, I will be a talented
me. baker someday.
1. 2.
funny confident
cold funny
relaxed thankful
hopeless concerned
When I grow up, I want to be When I grow up, I’m going to
a teacher just like Mrs. Crowl. be a professional wrestler. I
She was my fourth-grade would make a ton of money
teacher, and she made school so since I do have the perfect
much fun! I will always remem- body type. Aren’t tall, thin guys
ber the Space Day she planned, the type of person you think of
and the spring play when we when you hear the words
performed for our parents. She “professional wrestler”? I am
was the teacher who helped me certain that my long, skinny
set goals. She believed in me arms could do a lot of damage.
and helped me to realize that I I know this is a career that
should believe in myself. I want would make my mom proud.
to be a teacher so that I, too, After all, she simply loves
can make a difference in the watching wrestling on TV. Yes,
life of a child. professional wrestling is the
career for me.
3. 4.
humorous confident
admiring sly
embarrassed sarcastic
playful cold
I am not sure what my future What will I be when I grow
career will be, but I know one up? That’s a good question.
occupation that I will not even If you ask my mom, she
consider. I will NOT be a nurse. would tell you that I’m going
First of all, I do not want to give to be a lawyer. If you ask my
shots to a bunch of innocent dad, he would tell you that
little kids. Getting a shot doesn’t I’m going to be a doctor like
bother me now, but when I was him and my grandfather.
little, I was terrified to go to the Neither of those options
doctor’s office because I sound interesting to me. I
thought the nurse was going to think I might enjoy being a
give me a shot. Secondly, I professional dancer or an
cannot stand the sight of blood. artist, but my parents would
Just the thought of if makes me never allow that. I suppose I
queasy. No, I will never become will be a doctor or a lawyer
a nurse. as I am expected to be.
5. 6.
bossy disrespectful
greedy bitter
defiant selfish
depressed jealous
1. relaxed
2. confident
3. admiring
4. sarcastic
5. defiant
6. bitter
* If you are looking for another tone activity, feel free to take a peek
at my tone task cards. (It includes 24 passages that your students to
read and determine the author’s tone.) It’s available in my store!
Directions
1. Read each story.
Credits
By Deb Hanson © 2013
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