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Tema 4
Tema 4
Tema 4
Paragraphs are the basic building blocks of texts. Well-organized paragraphs help
readers understand the argument and help writers to structure their ideas effectively.
The sentences in most well-written paragraphs may be analyzed into four general
functions. First, there are paragraph introducers, which are sentences that establish the topic focus
of a paragraph as a whole. Second, there are paragraph developers, which present examples or
details of various kinds that support the ideas set forth by the paragraph introducers. Third,
there are viewpoint or context modulators, which are sentences that provide a smooth transition
between different sets of ideas. Fourth, there are paragraph terminators, which logically
conclude the ideas discussed in the paragraph in a psychologically satisfying manner. Not all
pieces of writing will conform to this analysis; however, most successful paragraphs usually
contain some combination of these four sentence types. (117 words)
The way we use banks is currently changing. This is partly because of the introduction
of new technology in the last ten years. The personal computer and the internet, for instance,
allow customers to view their accounts at home and perform operations such as moving
money between accounts. At the same time banks are being reorganized in ways that affect
both customers and staff. In the past five years over 3,000 bank branches have closed in Britain.
The banks have discovered that staffing call centers is cheaper than running a branch network.
To make a text as concise and informative as possible, things may be said in various patterns. In the table below, three versions of the same
informative type of sentences are presented in a gradual transformation. These ten sentences form a paragraph.
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Consider the following sentences: Version 1 Version 2 Version 3
1. An unbroken series of simple An unbroken series of simple An unbroken series of simple Apart from being dull and
sentences is dull. sentences is dull; it is boring; and sentences is dull, boring; and it boring, unbroken series of
2. It is boring. it is often difficult to read. is often difficult to read. simple sentences is often
3. It is often difficult to read. difficult to read. Why?
4. There is an explanation for this. There is an explanation for this: The explanation is that: people Because people have
5. People have learned to expect variety. people have learned to expect have learned to expect variety learned to expect variety in
variety. in every aspect of their lives. every aspect of their lives.
6. They expect it in every aspect of their They expect it in every aspect of
lives. their lives.
7. They like to eat different types of They like to eat different types of They like to eat different types They like to read different
food. food; they like to wear different of food, wear different types of types of sentences as much
8. They like to wear different types of types of clothing; and they like to clothing; and (as much as as they like to eat different
clothing. read different types of sentences. anything else) read different types of food or wear
9. They like to read different types of types of sentences. different types of clothing
sentences.
10. They like to read different types of They like different types of
sentences as much as anything else. sentences as much as anything
else.
Now that you have read the model, please try your skills to process the following set of sentences into as concise paragraphs as possible. In
your endeavor, please consider the two examples on the preceding page.