Analyzing the student essay

A. Respond to student essay by answering the questions below in full

sentences.
1. Which sentence was presumably written by the writer to grasp the
readers’
interest on the topic?

This problem was almost unheard of only 15 years ago.

2. In the article, to what aspects does the writer give his/her reaction?
The writer give statement that cyber bullying is a new problem for the society

3. How does the writer relate cyber-bullying with the problem faced by people
in
using technology nowadays?
more and more people are now using the Internet. On the Internet, it is easier
for people to hide their identity. This can encourage bullies to use the Internet
to engage in this kind of harmful behavior.

4. In your opinion, what are the limits of freedom of speech?

You can speak freely but you can't discriminate and give hate speech to a person

5. Do you agree or disagree that the writer recommending the article to

teenagers or students? Why?
I agree, because in America or in other places cyber bullying is more common in
young people
B. Examine the organization of the essay by answering the
questions below.
1. Write down the hook.
Cyber-bullying is a form of online harassment of a person.
This problem was almost unheard of only 15 years ago. However,
more and more people are now using the Internet. This is creating
new problems for society.

2. Re-write the background information in the first paragraph using

your own word
Cyber bullying is online harassment in internet. It is very common
nowadays because it happen massively within the internet user and
you can hide your true identity in internet

3. Write the thesis statement. Does it mention the aspect of body

paragraphs?
There are many ways that cyber-bullies use the Internet to hurt their
victim.
Yes, the body paragraphs tell the reader about the ways of cyber
bullying

4. What aspects does the writer explain in each paragraph?

1st Paragraph the definition or what is cyber bullying

2nd paragraph is explain the ways of cyber bullying
3nd paragraph the cyber bullying as a problem of society impact the
unwise use of technology
5. Does the conclusion restate the thesis statement?

Yes it does, about how the technology impact society