Writing Task 2 – Model Answer

Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say
they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?

Children are the tender buds of the society and they are required to be taught true values of
life. Therefore, some people tend to believe that feeling of competition should be infused in
them while others believe that the possession of cooperative values is required for them. I will
discuss the merits and demerits of both aspects before reaching to any opinion.

To begin with, there are many reasons why children should be having competional values?
Firstly, competition motivates youngsters to accelerate their efforts to attain a higher level in
education and in other activities. They start doing work hard to compete with others and
understand the value of hard work. This dedication and hard work help them to stand first
everywhere. Secondly, competional values inculcate self-confidence and self-independence in
children. When they participate in activities and compete with others, they are more likely to
have a feeling of self-achievement and fulfillment. They feel themselves worthy that provide
them balanced and peaceful mind. They tend to become self-reliant and that result in best
decision talking ability in them. Moreover, sense of completion is the need of the hour.
Undoubtedly, in the modern era, people since their childhood till adults, face completion for
example- in school there are a dance competition, race competition, poem competition and
when they grow adults, they face competition in taking a job while taking admission in college
and even face competitive in an exam. Thus, a value is highly required.

On the other hand, it is needless to say that how important is it to inculcate the value of
cooperation. This is the only feeling by which a child can learn teamwork, team spirit, co-
existence, tolerance, and patience. Moreover, if the history is seen it becomes quite evident
that the well-known icons of the society are only those who had a helping and sacrificing
attitude. A self-centered human being cannot earn fame in society. Secondly, incessant
preaching for competition may result in rivalry feeling for the peer group and others. These
rivalry feelings take no time in turning in to jealous and personal grudges. A heart full of
jealousy for others can never hold good for themselves and for others.

To conclude, after gauging both, competitional and cooperative values, I feel that both values
have its own importance. Thus, a child should be brought up by imparting both equally.