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Bravery Emerges After Fear Final Draft
Bravery Emerges After Fear Final Draft
Bravery Emerges After Fear Final Draft
As I stood on the sidelines, watching my friends frolic in the chilly water during that
memorable summer vacation, laughter and sun-kissed memories filled the air. However, my
heart was weighed down by an irrational fear of swimming. Thoughts of drowning and
helplessness plagued my mind, casting a dark shadow over my enjoyment near water.
Then, that fateful day arrived when the sun blazed high in the sky, and my worst nightmare
unfolded before my eyes. One of my closest friends found themselves in a perilous situation,
struggling against the relentless surf. Panic surged through me as I realized my own inadequacy
in saving them from the depths. Helplessness enveloped me like a vice, overshadowing the joyous
summertime vibe.
But just when I thought all hope was lost, my other friend appeared like a guardian angel. With
confidence and quick strokes, she bravely approached our struggling companion, swiftly pulling
them to safety just in the nick of time. Relief washed over me, accompanied by an overwhelming
flooded my being, and I vowed never to let fear dictate my actions again.
Witnessing my friend's struggle became the catalyst for change. I made a solemn commitment to
I wasted no time and immediately enrolled in professional swimming instruction. Starting from
the basics of buoyancy, stroke technique, and water safety, I confronted my fears head-on. Each
step I took was infused with the understanding that courage did not mean the absence of fear, but
Weeks turned into days as I persisted, fueled by newfound determination. I embraced the
challenges that came with learning to swim, celebrating even the smallest victories along the
way. With each stroke, my self-assurance grew, and the fear that once held me hostage gradually
The metamorphosis became evident as the summer break drew to a close. I found myself moving
through the water with a grace and fluidity I had never imagined possible. The once-hostile
element transformed into a source of empowerment and progress. No longer content with
observing from the sidelines, I reveled in the freedom of movement afforded by the talent that
Yet, the true triumph lay not only in my improved swimming skills but also in the profound
personal development I had undergone. The encounter with my friend had ignited a fire deep
within me—a fire that fueled my determination to transcend limitations and extinguish my
worries. I had discovered that even amidst the most trying circumstances, courage and resilience
could be found.
Ghalya Al-kaabi 3
1st June 2023
ENGL 104 - 302
Dr. Anne Schmalsting
As I stood at the water's edge, looking out into the vast expanse before me, I was keenly aware
that my adventure had only just begun. Armed with the strength to conquer my fears, I emerged
on the other side with a skill that held the potential to save lives. Taking a deep breath, I dove
into the water, eager to embrace the seemingly boundless possibilities that lay before me. The
strength of my friend's bravery and the unbreakable spirit of friendship had forever changed me.
The water enveloped me, it’s cool embrace serving as a reminder of the journey I had
undertaken. With every stroke, I marveled at the newfound elegance and fluidity I possessed. The
rhythmic sound of my breathing synchronized with the gentle lapping of the waves, creating a
As I swam, I reveled in the vibrant tapestry of sensations that surrounded me. The water
caressed my skin, whispering tales of serenity and renewal. The sunlight filtered through the