Looking at the table, New Zealand's population slightly increased between 2011 and 2012.

During that
year, the young generation, 0-39 aged people, decreased while the older people increased.

First, the under 15 and 15-39 aged people population shrank by 0.2 per cent for each period. For under
15-year-old people reduced by 1750 from 801750 and became precisely 800000. An older group who are
under 39 age is bigger than roughly twice the young generation, is dropped by a fifth of one hundred
thousand.

Second, the 40-64 aged population was around three times bigger than +65 aged people in 2011. Then
in 2012, older people sharply rose by 400000 while the 40-64 increased by 46000.

In conclusion, New Zealand's population rose slightly during the period, which was influenced by people
aged 65+ years old. The population of under 39-year-old people number is fallen.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree
or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Intro

In modern days music industry is changing like a sonic wave while every part of the universe developed
its genre of music. It can assist human phycological health when listening to them. That essay will extend
the consideration of the on-music purpose.

First, whole music is based on human sensations such as love, respect, and drama. Therefore, how music
reflects on humans is from what situation they want or are in. For instance, if someone who is frustrated
like thunder could listen to a calm and peaceful song, it can provide a stable mind. Music motivates
those who are present mentally, especially when people do sporting activities and mostly play high-
toned music like Titanium. It is more beneficial to do a workout with no hesitation and stress, and also,
agitating something during training can hinder the result.

Second, the local ancestors use it for national cultural purposes and music. The reason is that countries
should have their own identity and differentiation. It appears in their music through their voice and tone.
For instance, our traditional music genre is a long song that sings soft but not short. Also, we have a lot
of famous artists in that style, and they contest themselves on how much time can sing when they are in
one breath. Therefore, music has some functions in countries' cultures that remain throughout the era.

In conclusion, there are various ways of functioning for music, culture and reducing the pressure on the
mind. Also, these purposes have many reasons and have their illustration, even though it is just for the
sense of hearing. From all these thoughts, music has an immense function instead of lessening stress.

Music gives many benefits to people.

Building community

Marketing

Body1

Disagree
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Agree

Conclusion

Feedback

The writing is improving. However, you need to practice your academic grammar and try to combine the
skills of accuracy and cohesive features.

Learn and practice some IELTS writing tips on YouTube and other sources. Daily, use various academic
words in IELTS and practice them a lot.

Writing needs more patient practice and effort.