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Advantage Disadvantage Essay
Advantage Disadvantage Essay
Essay Structure
1) Introduction
Paraphrase the question
Outline sentence – state your answer to
both questions
2) Main body paragraph 1 – Answer
question 1
Topic sentence – state your answer
Explanation – develop the idea
Example – give an example
3) Main body paragraph 2 – Answer
question 2
Topic sentence – state your answer
Explanation – develop the idea
Example – give an example
4) Conclusion Summarise both questions
and answers
This structure will give us a well-balanced
essay with 4 paragraphs.
We now need some ideas to add to the
structure and we’ll have everything we need
for our essay.
# 2 Generate ideas
The next task is to generate some ideas to
write about.
There are several different ways to think up
ideas. I cover them fully on the IELTS Essay
Planning page.
We’re going to use the ‘friends technique’.
This is the method I prefer as it allows you to
take a step back from the stress of the exam
situation and think more calmly.
Here’s how it works. Imagine that you are in a
casual conversation with a friend over a cup
of coffee and they ask you this question.
What are the first thoughts to come into your
head? Plan your essay around these ideas.
Doing this will help you to come up with
simple answers in everyday language rather
than straining your brain to think of amazing
ideas using high-level language, which isn’t
necessary.
You might want to try this yourself before
reading on for my ideas.
Here are my ideas as I thought of them:
How can we conserve these resources?
Become more energy conscious & more
energy efficient
Use more renewable energy sources –
solar panels
All new homes should be built with solar
panels on
Use car less – walk, cycle, public
transport, only travel when really
necessary
Energy-efficient light bulbs
# 3 Vocabulary
During the planning stage, quickly jot down
some vocabulary that comes to mind as you
decide which ideas you are going to write
about, especially synonyms of key words.
This will save you having to stop and think of
the right language while you’re writing.
For the ideas I’ve chosen, useful words will
include:
sustainable
renewable energy
energy-efficient
It should:
Have 2-3 sentences
Be 40-60 words long
Take 5 minutes to write
Outline statement:
This essay will discuss how we can help to
prevent our non-renewable resources from
becoming depleted by using our cars less
frequently and it will name some natural
forces that can be harnessed to generate
power.
Note my use of synonyms to replace key
words in the question. You don’t have to
replace every key word but do so where
possible whilst ensuring that your language
sounds natural.
So, let’s bring the two elements of our
introduction together.
Introduction
This introduction achieves three important
functions:
It shows the examiner that you
understand the question.
It acts as a guide to the examiner as to
what your essay is about.
It also helps to keep you focused and
on track as you write.
Introduction:
Here is the same information formed into a
conclusion: