IELTS

For and against essay

Working from home is improved a lot during the COVID 19 pandemic

year, especially with the advanced technology and the rise of internet

technology from day to day. Some people claim that telecommuting has a

lot of benefits, whereas other people argue that it also has some drawbacks.

The arguments on both sides of this issue will discuss in the essay.

To begin with, telecommuting has many benefits. First of all, the most

important advantage of teleworking is increased productivity which means

that you can manage your own task in a great deal of time without any stress.

For example, you can create not only a personalized working environment

but also enhance your focus and efficiency by working from home.

Secondly, another positive effect is that you can also saving money in

commuting time since you do not have to go to work very often. Therefore,

this will also help to reduce traffic congestion and environmental pollution.
 On the other hand, there also have some drawbacks for teleworking.

To begin with, another negative aspect is the lack of social communication.

This is because if you used to work in an office environment you can

interact with your colleagues and coworkers but when you work from home,

you will be suffered loneliness and get bored. Furthermore, you'll also get a

lot of distractions when you don't have a specific individual workspace. This

means that you can't focus on your work because of family members or from

some Facebook notifications. So, you can get distracted from personal

affairs if you're not managing your workspace very effectively.

In conclusion, my personal view is that although some people like to

work in a remote work environment, but others may prefer to work from

home to get better personal time management.

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