The chart indicates the change (-> changes) of the percentage of citizens (chưa

đúng -> the percentage of the number of urban residents) in four countries in Asia
from 1970 to 2020 (chưa paraphrase) and the predictions (chưa paraphrase) for the
period of 2030 and 10 years later.
*thiếu overview*
Initially, the line graph shows the grown-up trend and Indonesia has a dramatic
change. Firstly, the percentage of the population living in cities in Malaysia highest
(thiếu động từ tobe) in 2040 at about 85 percent has increased (-> which increased)
in almost year except for the period from 1980 to 1990 it went down (-> when it
declined). Next, the percentage of citizens in the Philippines and Thailand have the
same trend and Thailand will be the fourth and the higher will Philipines (grammar
error)
Turn (-> turning) to the last country which has (-> had) a huge change in study
years. The figure for Malaysia’s popularities (word choice error) live (-> living) in
cities was stand (grammar error) in fourth then it has grown (-> increased) fastly (-
> rapidly/ sharply) and become second in the last years in the graph at about 60
percent.
Task achievement: 5
Coherence and cohesion: 5
Lexical resource: 4
Grammatical range and accuracy: 4
Total band score: 4.5