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INTRODUCTION
In English language, there are four skills to be mastered, they are: listening,
speaking, reading, and writing. Beside that, there are components of English such
important to be learnt. One important skill that should be achieved in Senior High
important as other activities, the people must learn how to communicate their
ideas to make the reader understanding the meaning information ideas and
writing is something that gives ideas and expresses writing so that it is interesting
The problem with students is when they are faced with thinking about an idea
in written form. and that makes students confused in determining the type of topic
problems appear in writing genres at least five areas: they are problems in content,
The first problem is content. There are many students who still have
knowledge to develop a topic and have difficulties to express their idea in writing
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easily. The ideas contained in genre of texts can be organized in many different
ways. The students still ignore the organization pattern in writing, they can not
difficult for students to convey their ideas. and also students sometimes write with
inappropriate words and make their writing difficult to understand. The students
still can not apply a rules of grammar properly. Many of them still have
writer makesa paragraph easy to read, and that will attract more readers, some
Writing is one of the important skill, that must be mastered by students and in
SMA N 02 North Lampung study about it. Writing as one of skill that be taught
activities which need of knowledge about what we are going to write. Writing is
very important for the students because they can express their ideas, feeling,
The researcher have a relate to the topic discussed. The researcher also does
tenth grade. From the data, the researcher has found some problems faced, by the
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students in writing class. First, from students side, some students have lack of
writing skill. It happened because in the learning process, some students lazy and
feel afraid to make mistake, they do not care and do not pay attention when the
teacher explained the lesson, they have less opportunity to focus on study. But,
there are also some students who are diligent, caring, and focused when learning
descriptive text.
Then, students are various or random, there are students who are quick to
respond, there are students who are slow to respond to lessons. Actually, all
students are able to receive descriptive text lessons, only back to the students
themselves, there are students who are lazy, and there are also those who are
dilligent. If students who are diligent are all capable, but if students are lazy there
are some who are less able to master the material. If there are obstacles, it seems
condition Covid-19 pandemic, students are divided into two shifts A and B.
Students learn in various ways, some are through video, face to face, Google,
Google class room, Zoom, WA, voice message, there are many ways to learn.
text is a text, describes a person, animal or thing. It can also be used to attract,
motivate, inform, and entertain the students. The generic structure of descriptive
text are identification and description. Identification means identify of the object
Based on the background of the problem, the researcher would like to state the
problem as follow :
1. What are the types of difficulties of the students in writing descriptive text at
2022/2023?
text at the tenth grade of SMAN 02 Kotabumi North Lampung academic year
2022/2023?
Based on the statements of the problems which were written above, the
2022/2023.
1. Theoretically,
This benefit is expected for future student knowledge, and can also be used to
2. The Practically,
This research can give solution or information for teacher to increase students
This study can arrange and can make a descriptive text well based on the standard
of writing.
The research could be used as an additional references for other next researcher
Writing is a skill in English that everyone should learn. Writing can also
provide ideas, ideas, opinions and things to communicate in written form. Writing
Writing is the result of thinking, compiling and having procedures that must
conveying ideas into a paragraph and its purpose is to communicate to the public
through writing.
one's feelings through writing. writing skills are information, ideas or feelings of a
person in written form and the activity of stringing words together to become a
There are three stages of writing activity. The first stage is pre-writing, the
second stage is writing and the third stage is revising. all stages are tailored to the
needs. According to Tompkins and Hokinson in Andriyani (2017, p.14) there are
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1. Pre-write
Andriyani (2017, p. 15) explains that in the pre-writing stage using an exploration
to find a subject.
2. Draft
At this stage, the writer begins to embody and develop his ideas. The author
focuses on getting ideas. Activities at this stage, the author begins to prepare all
thoughts that are more real and clear, the author focuses all ideas to start an
activity in writing.
3. Revise
In this stage the activities are revising errors in writing, namely adding
4. Editing
In this stage, the author focuses on editing the writing. the author edits by
structure and so on. Linse (2005, p. 102) says that writers read other people's
writings or students make sure there are no errors in content or grammar and
5. Publishing
In this stage the writer put their writing in the final finishing format and
share to the appropriate audience. When you are writing, you must follow the
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all of the process. Each of the process related each other. You must follow the
first until the last of the writing process. Not only that, to make your writing is
better, you should give attention to the six elements of writing namely:
a. Create Interesting Ideas, ideas are the result of the author's work and
b. Logical And Effective, in making ideas you have to think about things that
are logical and effective so that the reader can find out something in the story
c. Feelings, feelings are a way of conveying to someone when they read the
d. Good Words, in writing, you should use good and appropriate writing so that
e. Expressive, are sentences that make readers easy to understand and feel fun
when reading
So, it can be concluded that, the writing process of students was encouraged
to improve and practice students to use the writing process stages when they write
student draws the idea by writing it down on paper as a rough concept. After that,
revise the rough draft, edit and correct the rough draft into good and correct
writing whose process involves checking grammar and share it with others. The
There are four skills that must be possessed, namely speaking, listening,
reading and writing. This writing skill is a skill that uses the mind to be written in
written form. Hyland (2003, p. 9) says that the definition of writing is like a
ideas in order to achieve them into a paragraph, that is what students must have.
opinions into written form. and its purpose is to convey information to others in
written form.
addressed in three ways at the individual level. These common approaches to writing
problems are not mutually exclusive and should be used together in most classroom
holder or grip by using a word processor instead of writing with a pen. Allow more time
2. Change task requirements. For example, reduce the font size. Task: Change the
instruction, modeling, imitation, and practice of instruction. Teach the use of effective
The purpose of writing is to provide ideas, give messages so that they are
conveyed to the reader. The specific purpose of writing is the need for a writer to
provide information to the general public. It can be concluded that the purpose of
writing is to provide ideas and please the reader. according to Cholipah (2014, p.
explanation is retelling to others. For example, when writing, you want to explain
objectives:
the main purpose of writing is to convey ideas so that they can be read by readers
do not develop because of their difficulties in learning English. Students also find
it difficult to find ideas and topics they will write about, and students are confused
develop written language skills, just as oral language appears to be pre-programmed. For
this reason, direct written instructions are usually required to prevent problems.
Westwood Sousa (2004, p.108). Students also do not know how to make good
correlations from one sentence to the next, or from paragraph to paragraph, and their lack
Students who are struggling often find it very difficult to learn to write clearly and
effectively. According to Graham & Harris of Grin et al. (2006, p. 98), the difficulty of
1. Lack of mastery of text writing skills, a common mistake in spelling, case sensitivity,
and punctuation.
2. Lack of knowledge about the technical content of the script being written, or the
So, it can be concluded that writing difficulties and students' lack of writing
skills, can cause students to not be optimal in writing. Problems of writing that
writing is a difficult skill, because it requires a high ability in choosing words and
sentences.
Before conducting teaching and learning writing, the teacher should know
well about some factors which influence students ability in teaching and learning
writing process. Some factors that influence students ability in writing are their
level, age, and interest. Three of them give big positive contribution for students
in following teaching and learning writing process. Students level and students
age are essential factor which take an essential part when the teacher determines
and decides the appropriate task that relate to the students ability in writing.
Meanwhile, the students interest also gives important contribution for the
students to get interest to the material in their lesson and follow the teacher
instruction in teaching and learning writing. It means that by having interest with
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the lesson, students will take a part for getting an opportunity to create choices
writing which can help the teacher to determine the best method in teaching
writing in a classroom. The first, integrate practices of good writers. The next,
balance process and product. After that, account for cultural/literary backgrounds.
The fourth, connect reading and writing. And then provide as much authentic
writing as possible. The last one is framing your technique in terms of prewriting,
attention into these principles. It will determine the writing result of the students
several aspects that need to be explained in order to measure a student's writing ability.
according to Brown (2004, p. 135) says that writing has 5 types, namely organization,
1. Content, in this case explain in it, namely the content, discussion, evaluation,
2. Structure, discusses how paragraphs are well structured or not, explaining must
4. Grammar
Students use effective complex sentence contractions and make few mistakes in
applying grammar.
5. Mechanics
appearance of the words, how they are written or placed on paper.Mechanic is the
regulates spelling, use of capital letters and punctuation. The following are some
punctuation marks, namely: the use of periods (.), question marks (?), exclamation
points (!), commas (,), colons (:), semicolons (;), brackets (()), signs brackets ([]),
quotation marks (' ), hyphen (-), hyphen (_), double quotation mark (“ ”), and
single quotation mark („ ). Spelling must be in writing so that it is easy for others
possible to separate all components to create good text. Therefore, in order to write good
In writing, there are types of writing and their characteristics. Students must
have the ability to write. According to Anderson (2003, p. 3-5) the types of
1. Cheat
Telling something pristiwa with a plot that is not easy to guess. The structure is:
2. Recount
3. Report
Tells the real thing, namely the surrounding environment and natural phenomena,
4. Analytical exposition
C. Re-orientation : closing
5. News items
To provide information about events to the reader, the generic structure is:
6. Anecdote
Share happiness with others about funny things, the structure is:
D. Reaction : crisis
7. Narration
C. Complications : crisis
E. Re-orientation : if any
8. Procedure
A. Purpose : by command
C. Steps : command
9. Description
11. Explanation
A. Position as a reader
B. Structured explanation
12. Discussion
B. Argument : explanation
C. Conclusion : closing
13. Review
It can be concluded, there are 13 types of writing that have been described and
something. A good explanation is a picture of a word: readers can draw things, places,
or people in their minds. Descriptive text is sensory and conveys what something looks,
feels, smells, tastes, and hears. Writing descriptive means describing something,
placeor people in order to lead the reader feel writing itself. According to Schacter
(2007, p. 15), descriptive text describes a person, place, or thing so that the reader can
object, location, or person. The descriptive text is actually different from other types of
text. According to Nunan (2003, p. 88) says that writing is an activity that must be
Based on the definition of descriptive text above, we can conclude that descriptive
text is one of the English genres that describe a particular person, place, or object to write
a. Generic Structure
learn the general structure of the descriptive text. The general structure of a
The general structure is the genre in the writing of the text. That
1. Identification
reader. For example from objects, animals, public places, plants etc.
2. Description
In this case, it consists of many paragraphs that begin with a topic. Each
paragraph describes and goes into detail about the subject. E.g. Physique,
3. Conclusion (Optional)
In this case discussing the conclusion of the topic which means ending the text or closing.
Based on the above definition, researchers conclude that the general structure is
describes the parts, the qualities, and the characteristic of phenomenon. The
researcher can describe about habit, behavior, shape or feature of person, thing,
Descriptive text have language features. Based on the manual "Easy English
Learning" (2007, p. 6), the description has several elements, which are the
c. Relational Use the verb . Example: My Favorite is my cell phone because is important
to me.
d. Use of thought verbs. Example: I think it's a smart animal. Example: Use of action
f. Use of mental verbs. Example: She felt unhappy and she liked to dance.
2. Vocabulary
The writing vocabulary contains all the words you can use in writing. The word written in
many does not occur frequently in that language , writers generally use a limited
b. The passive vocabulary (passive voice) is a word that they understand but never
produce.
appearance of the words, how they are written or placed on paper. The mechanism in
that the mechanism has punctuation and spelling. Punctuation marks used to
because it helps to understand the author's ideas. Both things must be accurate.
the spelling is wrong, the meaning will be different. So it can be concluded that
characteristics there are identification and description. The conclusion is that only
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described.
Based on definition above, the writer concludes that the grammatical features
feature descriptive like: noun, simple present tense, adjective, and etc. Vocabulary
in the descriptive text. Then in the mechanics, at least there are three components
should be used, that are spelling, punctuations, and capitalization. Using spelling
the right meaning, it also help the student to be able write comprehensibly and to
text to describe something. As you know, descriptive text is text that describes
something, such as a person, place, or thing. Therefore, it usually takes three forms.
different. You're probably already familiar with some complex issues, as you're often
asked "what to do and how to do it". The answer can be an ID card, an impression, or a
a. ID You can provide an ID, but you'll want to go further. Identification is primarily used
in official records and documents, with only specific statistics (height, weight, age),
visible features (hair, skin, eye color), and recognizable features (scars, bruise). It will be
configured.
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convey their overall impression. Although many details may be missing, the author gives
a general sense of the subject with some wide strokes. Impressions are usually less
complete and less informative than identification, but they are more effective at capturing
sketch. They are also called profiles, literary portraits, and biographical sketches. As the
name implies, a character sketch represents a person's character, or at least its main
personality trait. In doing so, it may include identification and impression, but it does not
just tell what people look or look like: it shows what they look like. Character sketches
can be revolved around types rather than individuals to reveal characteristics shared by
members of groups such as: Examples: Campus Jock, Cheerleader, Art Student, Religious
Fanatic, TV Fan.
2. Description of location .
When describing a place such as a room, what do you need to explain first? City wall?
Floor (Yuka? Unlike time-series paragraphs, there is no fixed pattern for placing
sentences in descriptive paragraphs. You don't have to start in one area and move to
another. Nevertheless, the statement should not be placed unplanned. The description
should be structured so that the reader can clearly imagine the scene being described. To
make the paragraph more interesting, you can add a keynote that expresses your attitude
and impression of the place being described. The placement of the description details
3. Explanation of things
In order to write an explanation for something, the writer needs to have a good idea of
what should be explained. We also use appropriate nouns and effective verbs to make our
a. In addition to entering specific details and idioms in the usage description for the
We know Important verbs are stories from 444 to , but effective verbs are Also, add a lot
to the description. The author uses verbs to make the explanation more specific, accurate,
and interesting.
description of things. In the kinds of descriptive text, the student can describe
their environment, how beautiful the scene around them. Then, they can describe
animal in their around, like cat, goat, lion, etc. Descriptive text can also describe
the physical color of the skin, eyes, body that can describe itself. Descriptive text
also tells something that feels, smells, looks and sounds. And students can
Lampung academic year 2022/2023..” The researcher found some previous related
The first related study is a thesis from Rahmadiyah (2020) that mention the
Tenth Grade of State Vocational High School 1 Pangkalan Lesung. This research
study addresses student difficulties in writing explanatory text. Information from the
survey shows that it is difficult for students to write descriptive text in high school. The
average student has a hard time writing descriptive text using vocabulary.
The second related study is a thesis from Marlina Surya Indriani (2017) that
study about, the grammatical errors in writing descriptive text. The information of
analysis, that the kinds of error made by the students in using tenses. There are
errors made by the students although it is the same percentage with the using of
The last related study is a thesis from Liliana Harahap (2018) that mention the
case study entitled, “An Analysis of Students’ Ability in Writing Descriptive Text
at The Tenth Grade of Senior High School 1 Tambang”. This research study
about, the analysis of the writing ability by using case study method. The results
showed that students representing middle and high school achievers had
descriptive text using the qualitative approach. This study aimed to find students'
ability to write explanatory texts. The survey was conducted in the 10th grade of
based on the philosophy of positiveism, used to study the state of natural objects (rather
than experiments), researchers are the key, and data collection techniques are
triangulation (coupling), The analysis performed by the data is inductive / qualitative, and
the results of the qualitative research further emphasize the importance of generalization.
In addition, there are several aspects to consider when choosing the right research
approach. These different aspects are the researcher's assumptions, the design and method
of the study, and the nature of the problem of the study. Based on this, some aspects of
this study have been identified as qualitative approaches. Perreault & McCarthy (2006, p.
176) Explain that a qualitative survey is a type of survey aimed at a thorough and open
without giving them much guidance or direction. The research process includes new
questions and procedures, data normally collected from participants' environments, data
analysis guided from the details of common problems, and researchers interpreting the
meaning of the data. It will be. Researchers get data from school observations and
interviews.
This research will conduct at SMA N 02 Kotabumi North Lampung. This school
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will do at the students writing skill, at the tenth grade of SMA N 02 Kotabumi
North Lampung, as place to do research because it has been good school, and then
Data source in this research are students in writing skill, The participants are
the school, researcherresearching tenth grade IPA 1. Tenth grade IPA 1, consists
of 12 male students, and 22 female students. In this class, the grades and abilities
of the students are higher than other classes.Even though, there are still students
To get the data source, the researcher will choose the students who got low
score of writing. From 32 students, consist 10 students who got low score.The
researcher will analyze students who get low scores, who have difficulty in
writing descriptive text. Therefore, researcher will get information about the
through measurements. One of the hallmarks of qualitative research is the method used
to collect and analyze data. ary et al (2010, p. 430) states that there are three ways to
collect data used in qualitative studies: observation, question, and document or artifact
analysis. In this survey, investigators use two tools: interviews and documentation.
1. Interview
Researchers use interviews as a tool to carry out this research. Interviews are conducted
to ask students how difficult it is to write a descriptive text, and collecting a second piece
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TABLE 1
SPECIFICATION INTERVIEW GUIDELINES
No Aspect Indicator No of
Intervie
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1 Lack of proficiency in Which is frequent errors in 1,2,3
the text production spelling, the use of upper and
skills lower case, and punctuation
2. Documentation
Documents are communicable materials such as text, audio, video, CDs, and
DVDs, and these tools can be used to explain the attributes of an Object system or
method in some way. The documentation supports the result of the student's writing
ability in the descriptive text. The documentation provides the results of qualitative
research. In this study, researchers use textual documents. In other words, create a student
answer sheet.
a. Interview
The method usedby researcher is the interview method. This method can be used
interviewers who ask questions in face-to-face contact with others..By interview then
observation.
b. Documentation
Documents are communicable materials such as text, audio, video, CDs, and DVDs,
and these tools can be used to explain the attributes of an Object system or method in
some way. The documentation supports the result of the student's writing ability in the
descriptive text. The documentation provides the results of qualitative research. In this
study, researchers use textual documents. In other words, create a student answer sheet.
In this study, the researcher collects the data from teacher and students at SMA N
organizing data to make it easier for researchers to present their research results to others.
Before you can analyze the data, you need to process it so that it can be converted into
information. When working with data, you need to perform several steps, such as:
a. Analysis of Interviews
Interviews with English teacher and students, to support the result of students’
specific problems.
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b. Data Reduction
In thisstage, where here researcher obtain data a large numberof fields for
which researcher need to reduce or summarize, select the main things and focus
on important things.
c. Display
The step of analyzing the data, the researcher presents the data in the form of a
brief
conclusion.In addition , the researcher used interview with the teacher and student
Researchers plot the data after explanation and interpretation of the data, and
based on what they find from step-by-step analysis. Data analysis is already
provided to get a proper and clear representation of the description. The result of
the study is an analysis of the descriptive study of the student's ability to write
descriptive texts.
investigation, as the equipment used must be valid and reliable before it can be used to
collect data in the investigation. When answering the validity of research data,
researchers need to know if the data is valid. Researchers used triangulation techniques to
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determine the reliability of the data by using different techniques to check the data from
If the data received is clear, it can be considered valid. Researchers use questions to
retrieve data from teachers and then interview teachers who teach writing skills to
enhance the data to capture information about the student's ability to write and understand
descriptive text. After that, the researcher will conduct a triangulation of techniques
to confirm, the results of interview and interview for teacher who supporting