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Writting 3 - Cause-Solution Essay
Writting 3 - Cause-Solution Essay
Writting 3 - Cause-Solution Essay
What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and
what solutions can you suggest?
OUTLINE
Introductory Paragraph
Body Paragraphs
Problems
- Anonymity
Internet users can easily conceal their identity and even impersonate
others
-> Many crimes such as identity theft and child abuse / criminals can
operate anonymously online
- Younger ones spend too much time on websites and lack face-to-
face communication
-> it can become an addiction creating both physical and mental issues.
Solutions
Concluding Paragraph
DRAFT 1
DRAFT 2
First, as we all know the Internet’s capacity to offer its users a minimum
of a modicum of anonymity is, theoretically, one of its greatest strengths.
Without it, dissident, marginalized, and otherwise ignored populations
couldn’t make their voices heard. But at the same time, many crimes such
as identity theft and child abuse can be operated. These crimes damage
estimates around billions of dollars annually and also human cost in terms of
ruined reputations, loss of trust and general deterioration in morals is
immeasurable. Additionally, online social networking has a significant effect
on people’s physical and mental state. Research shows that Internet use
can possibly result in the user experiencing health problems like
depression, OCD, low family relationships and anxiety. However, nowaday,
more people, especially younger ones, spend an excessive amount of time
on websites and lack face-to-face communication and do not socialize.
The issues caused by the use of the Internet show that it is necessary to
improve the culture of effective Internet usage in society and families using
appropriate education. Parents need to keep tough control over their
children, encourage them to engage in outdoor and community activities.
Children should be educated to comprehend the implications of Internet
addictions and learn teamwork and social skills essential for later life.
Furthermore, it’s necessary for countries to become more agile in updating
or developing national cybersecurity strategies, as well as legal and
regulatory framework regarding cyberspace.