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IELTS17AC - Test 4 Task 2 Sample Answer (Band 7.5)
IELTS17AC - Test 4 Task 2 Sample Answer (Band 7.5)
This is a strong, detailed and well-developed response. There are lots of appropriate
ideas, the candidate’s position is presented at the end of the first paragraph and it is
evidenced consistently. To improve this response, the candidate could give more detail
about ‘alternative medicines’ and make the conclusion more relevant to the question.
There are lots of ideas presented and the response is organised into three lengthy
paragraphs. Breaking the ideas down into smaller paragraphs and having a separate
paragraph for the conclusion would improve the response. However, cohesion is used
well throughout, except for [Despite / Although].