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    The writer loved Alex's story and found it relatable, ridiculous, concise, and entertaining. They particularly enjoyed the line "I breathe in the flavored air and embrace lung cancer" and how well the narrative conveyed the absurdity of being too high. The dialogue felt real and the writer's voice came through clearly. The writer felt the protagonist seemed appropriately unreliable due to being very high and encouraged leaning into that aspect more to make it even more ridiculous and weird. Overall the story was enjoyed despite some grammar issues, which are common in first drafts.

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    The writer loved Alex's story and found it relatable, ridiculous, concise, and entertaining. They particularly enjoyed the line "I breathe in the flavored air and embrace lung cancer" and how well the narrative conveyed the absurdity of being too high. The dialogue felt real and the writer's voice came through clearly. The writer felt the protagonist seemed appropriately unreliable due to being very high and encouraged leaning into that aspect more to make it even more ridiculous and weird. Overall the story was enjoyed despite some grammar issues, which are common in first drafts.

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    Alex Story Letter

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    cassie
    The writer loved Alex's story and found it relatable, ridiculous, concise, and entertaining. They particularly enjoyed the line "I breathe in the flavored air and embrace lung cancer" and how well the narrative conveyed the absurdity of being too high. The dialogue felt real and the writer's voice came through clearly. The writer felt the protagonist seemed appropriately unreliable due to being very high and encouraged leaning into that aspect more to make it even more ridiculous and weird. Overall the story was enjoyed despite some grammar issues, which are common in first drafts.

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    Hey Alex!

    I fucking loved your story. Relatable? Check. Ridiculous? Absolutely. Concise and entertaining?
    Immensely. Great work. “I breathe in the flavored air and embrace lung cancer” is so fucking
    hilarious and I really like how well this narrative conveys the absurdity of being too damn high.

    Your dialogue feels real and honest, and I really like how well your voice shines through.
    Obviously, you’ve lived through something akin to this situation, as have most people who
    smoke. It’s easy to see that your protagonist is a tad unreliable (aka blazed to hell) and I think
    you should lean into that a little more. It’s already pretty solid, but I feel like you can really go all
    in. With stories like this, the ridiculousness is what makes them great. Get crazier. Get weirder.
    Please GOD.

    I really really did enjoy it and I have very few notes. There are some grammar issues, but I’m
    sure you know that. All stories have grammar issues in the first draft, and I’m not going to beat
    up your story because of it. Great work, really.

    Thank you for sharing,

    Andy

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