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PINEDA Argument Final
PINEDA Argument Final
Ofelia Pineda
Professor Smith
ENGL 1021.96
12 Dec. 2022
As we progress through our lives, we are often faced with problems that only seem to be
more difficult than the ones that came before. At one point, these problems may reach the point
where they become too overwhelming to manage by oneself. In addition to this, most individuals
become busier as they get older, leaving them with less downtime to work these problems out.
While this situation can apply to anyone, this is a very common predicament for high school
students, especially for students who find themselves swarmed by busy work on a daily basis.
Because of this, students may end up feeling helpless and exhausted, yet they may also feel that
they must also keep these issues to themselves. Although mental health has been a topic
prevalent in many schools as well as Mahtomedi High School, students often refuse the open
opportunity to see a counselor, and only utilize counselors’ guidance for school-related matters
rather than personal issues that should be brought into light. Therefore, Mahtomedi High School
should establish a peer facilitator office consisting of students trained by counselors because it
will be more comfortable for students to open up about their problems and advocate for
Much like how schools have student tutors for certain subjects and grades, having a
student emulate a role similar to a counselor’s can encourage students to open up about their
school-related concerns as well as exercise emotional openness in the student body. Having these
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student mentors available will be more attractive to other students, as they will not be as
intimidated about expressing their feelings as opposed to having to open up to an adult who most
students find little to no commonalities with. This is not limited to personal and emotional issues,
however, as this openness can also help with figuring out where exactly a student may need
assistance in a certain academic area. In a 2016 model proposed by social workers Elizabeth
Harbeck Voshel and Shoshana Hurand of the University of Michigan, integrating a peer-
facilitator-to-student model within a literature class can actually benefit students on both sides.
According to the results of the source, facilitators gain the benefit of better understanding the
challenges students face in the subject, while the students participating in the facilitation develop
a better sense of trust and comfort expressing their opinions within the class. This model may
have been optimized for students in the literature class mentioned in this source, but it still
follows the same format for a general student peer facilitator program in the high school, which
Unless a student displays extremely negative behavior, such as acting out in class or
visibly misbehaving, it is often easy for the school to overlook more subtle, concerning behaviors
that some students may exhibit. This often results in many of these students feeling unheard, as
well as feeling invalidated themselves, because they are not at a “level” where they need to seek
counseling. In an article written by Melissa Ezarik, a journalist for the news hub Student Voice,
many students have been visibly struggling after the pandemic, but few actually take advantage
of the resources and help that is always available. According to one of the statistics provided in
the article, only 15% of students utilized the counseling services available within the college. If a
peer facilitator office were enforced within the school, then students part of this organization will
be more likely to recognize students who may need counseling. Because these students are more
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involved within the student community, they can easily identify peers who may need assistance
during a difficult time, especially if they happen to be a close friend or acquaintance. In this case,
peer facilitators can reach out to these individuals and offer them company in order to help ease
the situation. However, if matters are serious, they can refer that individual to a counselor/social
worker in the school, as well as helping them find time to meet said counselor/social worker.
When facilitators meet with students who have concerns that do not hold the same
magnitude as issues that should be addressed to a counselor/social worker, peer facilitators may
actually find it easier to empathize with another student’s problems as well as help them navigate
the situation. While a counselor may be able to provide better guidance, student facilitators are
able to help students take the first step in advocating for themselves in regards to their personal
issues. In a study published in 2014 conducted by Khe Foon Hew, the Associate Dean of the
University of Hong Kong, Hew discusses how asynchronous contact between facilitators and
students can actually strengthen connections within the mentorship. One result of this learning
approach showed that participants (students) “felt more at ease” because they often worry about
saying something that is potentially wrong to the instructor (counselor). Because there is less of a
sense of authority present within the discussion being shared by the facilitator and the student,
Granted, there will be drawbacks with this process as student mentors can only do so
much to help their peers in serious situations, even with proper training. In a 2021 model
proposed by instruction librarians Jonathan Cornforth and Sarah Parramore of the California
State University, scheduling a facilitation session can prove challenging as the facilitator may not
always be available. While this source is discussing this issue regarding a different learning
environment, this also applies to a general school environment perspective. One of the main
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reasons that students are unable to reach out to a counselor is often due to their busy, hectic
schedules, making it more difficult to find a good time to ask for guidance. However, in the
absence of a counselor, peer facilitators can help relieve some duties for counselors who are
already busy. Once the counselor finds time for their students after working with school-related
matters, the peer facilitator can either follow up with the counselor or assist in setting a time with
the student they were “counseling.” Like any other individual, peer facilitators have personal
concerns of their own that even they may need counseling for. This can potentially leave them in
a scenario where the student is not well-equipped enough to aid another student during a time of
need. According to a 2018 study on a similar model written by Associate Deans Michael C.
Brown and Audrey B. Kostrezewa, there are limitations to training processes that can be carried
out for facilitators-in-training, which may hinder the facilitation experience. Students, especially
in high school, only have so much life experience to derive their advice from, which is a crucial
element in counseling that cannot be taught by counselors alone. In addition, students’ emotional
intelligence can vary from one person to another, ranging from high to low. This can also
determine a peer facilitator’s ability to take on issues that can be emotionally difficult to process,
either due to lack of experience or a poor ability to view someone’s situation from a different
perspective. While proper guidance from multiple counselors will be provided for peer
facilitators in training, there is a possibility that there is only such a high extent to what can be
taught to these individuals in a short period of time, especially towards high school students.
Despite the fact that trained students may not hold the same amount of expertise a
counselor has, their connection with the rest of the consultation staff can allow their referral to an
authorized counselor when faced with difficult topics or more serious matters. As more students
become involved within the student peer facilitator program, this strengthens the connection
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between not only the facilitators, but the facilitated students as well. Availability issues can
easily be avoided as well. Tracing back to Hew’s 2014 study touching on different learning
styles, the article also touches on students’ preferences in regards to peer facilitation sessions.
These preferences include asynchronous learning as well as synchronous learning. One benefit
that was mentioned in the asynchronous facilitation approach is that students are better able to
voice out their opinions and insights, rather than wording said concerns in a way that would
please the instructor/counselor. Because of the flexibility within the peer-facilitation model, this
can allow facilitated students to become more accustomed within the program from a more
passive approach until they become comfortable enough to potentially want to meet and discuss
in person.
The topic of mental health and self-advocating has been prevalent in many schools, but
there seems to be little being done to act on issues regarding these topics. Students are often
reluctant to talk to school counselors as they are often intimidated, or hold on to the predisposed
belief that even an adult would not have the ability to understand the extent of their problems,
regardless if they are school-related or not. Having student facilitators trained by counselors
should be able to bridge this gap, as these trained students can work as a stepping stone towards
self-advocating for themselves, building up this specific skill as their life goes forward. In
addition, students with mental health issues are more likely to open up to the mentors who also
happen to be their peers. However, this does not mean a peer-facilitator bears all the
responsibilities an actual counselor may have. For more serious matters, facilitators always have
the option of recommending a counselor for advice, with some initial help provided with the best
of their abilities. While there may be challenges ahead, having more people available to help
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with a range of issues can aid in decreasing stress and encouraging openness within the students
Works Cited
Brown, Michael C., and Audrey B. Kostrzewa. “Implementation and Evaluation of Near-
source is credible because it was published within the last ten years, and the
Pharmacy. This source will help me in writing my paper as beneficial results have
been provided after integrating the peer facilitator group into the club.
Ezarik, Melissa. “Students Struggling but Not Seeking Campus Mental Health Support.”
www.insidehighered.com/news/2021/04/14/students-struggling-not-seeking-
despite how counselors are often advertised as “help centers” for students who are
has been published within the last ten years, and the author specializes in college-
related issues. This will help my paper as it involves a few good reasons why
students may be hesitant in reaching out for help, even when it is always
available..
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published within the last ten years, and the author is an Associate Dean in the
interactions, this can support my paper as it reinforces the fact that students find it
easier to discuss personal views to other students rather than individuals who are
environments. It also discusses how one may support and improve on the program
encountered along the way. This source is credible as it has been published within
the last ten years, and the authors, which are instruction librarians at the
California State University’s library, have written this source based on their
observations and experiences using this learning model. This will help my paper
as said observations and experiences will be able to provide a framework for what
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can be expected when trying to integrate a similar learning model into a high
school environment.
facilitators-to-create-a-dynamic-field-seminar-learning-environment/. Accessed 5
Dec. 2022. This source is about potentially improving the work environment
work as many students found issues in the learning format to them. This source is
credible as it has been published in the last ten years, and the author is a licensed
workers, and is affiliated with the University of Michigan. This source can