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OfeliaPineda - Kindness Essay Final Draft
OfeliaPineda - Kindness Essay Final Draft
OfeliaPineda - Kindness Essay Final Draft
Ofelia Pineda
Professor Smith
ENGL 1021.96
26 Sept. 2022
I can still recall the day when Ms. Colombo had reached out to me during a time of
despair. When I believed that I was not worthy of being known as a person, her simply
comforting me during a difficult time helped me understand that I was just as worthy of being
It was a rather cold and gloomy morning. The sickening aroma of eggs and bacon were
adrift in the air as I sluggishly crawled out of my covers and propped myself up with my right
arm atop my slightly damp pillow. While I gradually managed to sit myself upwards, I glanced
down at my trembling feet as I could feel the sting of my eyes well up with tears.
It was time.
Many days of anticipation had passed prior to this moment in time that, for me, felt like
an eternity. Encapsulated by the suffocating hold of anxiety, I held my breath, counted to 10, and
exhaled a sigh that temporarily rid my chest of the heaviness residing in my heart.
Being schooled online for 8 years of my life had clearly taken a toll on my mental.
Learning at your own pace is nice, but… school doesn’t exactly teach you about the most
efficient ways to manage your time, although they always emphasize its importance.
I never got many opportunities to connect with people my age in person, either.
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encouraged me to make the decision of spending my final year of middle school someplace new.
Clumsily wiping tears away with my trembling hands, I mustered up the strength to kick
For the first time in my life, breakfast had never been so nauseating. The rest of my
family gave me a concerned look as I poked and prodded around at the loose grains of rice on
my plate. Holding back tears, I hesitantly chewed on cold pieces of eggs and bacon, ignoring
how each spoonful I swallowed made my empty stomach churn. I was almost ashamed of how
there was still food left on my plate, as I was normally a spotless eater.
I splashed my face with cold water to freeze away any leftover anxiety from breakfast.
With the lights off, I stared at the mirror, desperately looking for a reason to stop getting so
worked up. As I touched up my outfit and hair one last time, I used my remaining energy to
I clutched my backpack to my chest while staring at the sky, still overcast. The chilly air
eventually crept its way to my body, which left me shivering the rest of the car ride to school.
My feet met the slightly damp sidewalk, and I took in the sights of an unusually small
building that called itself a school. After being welcomingly greeted by the line of teachers
waiting by the entrance, I made my way towards the empty classroom that was soon to be filled
with students I was anxious to meet. After curiously pacing around through the silent space, I
found a little hiding spot that was labeled as the “break room.” Ornamented with various fidgets
and coloring sheets on the shelves, I shut the door behind me and found a spot in the corner for
me to hide. I snatched a block of rubber cheese from the fidget box to twiddle my fingers with as
I sat in silence.
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Finally, I was alone. My folded body rested against the wall neighboring the door, hiding
from the small panel of light that shone through the wooden opening. I held my knees to my
chest, and buried my face in my arms, hoping that the dismissive voices in my head would go
away. Laughter and chatter could be heard within the classroom outside, which amplified those
Stop.
The rubber cheese I was fidgeting with seconds ago had fallen to the floor as I clutched to
my knees even tighter, my crouched body shriveling up in response to a monster that I couldn’t
even see. I felt myself succumbing, spiraling into a rabbit hole of false truths that my mind
would inject into my heart, which spread through my body like poison. With my eyes wide open,
I defensively held my arms against my ears, my hands clawing through my hair, when suddenly-
“Ofelia?”
I could feel my eyes slowly dilate back and forth as light began to overtake the shadows of the
little storage room. The silhouette of a tall, slender figure gently engulfs the warm sunlight
creeping in. Although my eyes were still glued to the floor, the sight of her subtly curled hair was
I felt a hand gently placed atop my shoulder, warmth radiating within the touch. Unable
to say a word, I trembled as my eyes slowly found its way to meet lovely orbs of hazel.
As soon as I looked up, I found myself in a warm embrace, which completely caught me
off guard.
Her voice was reminiscent of the warmth only my bed could give after a long day, and
the arms that she wrapped around me slowly warded off the rainclouds residing in my head. The
scent of faint lavender filled the air as I could feel my eyes begin to overflow through silent,
muffled sobs. Slowly, I could feel the weight in my heart dissipate as the warm light from the
classroom began to illuminate the shadows, as was her gentle presence with the shadows that
After pulling away from the embrace I briefly sought comfort in, Ms. Colombo took my
hand and helped escort me back to the classroom. Though I was still trembling from the episode,
the welcoming sight of each student’s smiles and excitement made me realize that, maybe this
Without my lovely teacher’s intervention, this memory would have been engraved in my
psyche as a painful recollection of my flawed state of mind. Though it may be true that people
may not always be present in every instance you are in despair, a single encounter is enough to
sever the rift between your heart, and hearts of others. Words do not necessarily have to be
exchanged to break that invisible barrier set by the haunting voices of anxiety. Sometimes,
simply going out of your way to acknowledge someone when they do not feel seen is enough to