MY
PORTFOLIO 
 
 
Saavedra Mejía, Alexandra

Instituto Cultural Peruano Norteamericano

Advance 06
Focus on grammar 5C

Lazzo, Kelly
 
 

April, 2022 
WRITIG 1 DRAFT
In this essay, I will explain why I am against the dress code at my high school,
especially the one that applies only to girls. Because boys are the ones that can attend
high school with clothes that do not limit them when it comes to decide whatever they
want to do. Well, at my high school the dress code only apply to girls. It consists of
always wearing a skirt, a white shirt and black shoes.

First of all, they just don't care if it's winter or if it rains, they teach us that we always
have to be uncomfortable but "pretty" everywhere you go, and they also hypersexualize
us since we are little girls. Of course, a lot of grownups doesn’t understand this point
because they’ve been raised like this but if you compare the drees code of the boys you
will see a huge difference.

Another point, that you will obviously see is how our dress code is for be stay in one
place, like little dolls and to not enjoy our childhood. I said this because it’s going to be
clearly difficult to us play as the boys with a skirt.

Finally, I think that boys and girls will have the same dress code because it’s obvious
the preferences between the genders. So of course, I’m against it.
WRITIG 1 FEEDBACK
In this essay, I will explain why I am against the dress code at my high school,
especially the one that applies only to girls. Because boys are the ones that can attend
high school with clothes that do not limit them when it comes to decide whatever they
want to do. Well, at my high school the dress code only apply to girls. It consists of
always wearing a skirt, a white shirt and black shoes.

First of all, they just don't care if it's winter or if it rains, they teach us that we always
have to be uncomfortable but "pretty" everywhere you go, and they also hypersexualize
us since we are little girls. Of course, a lot of grownups doesn’t understand this point
because they’ve been raised like this but if you compare the drees code of the boys you
will see a huge difference.

Another point, that you will obviously see is how our dress code is for be stay in one
place, like little dolls and to not enjoy our childhood. I said this because it’s going to be
clearly difficult to us play as the boys with a skirt.

Finally, I think that boys and girls will have the same dress code because it’s obvious
the preferences between the genders. So of course, I’m against it.
WRITIG 1 FINAL COPY
In this essay, I am going to explain why I am against the dress code at my high school,
especially the one that applies only to girls. Because only boys can attend high school
with clothes that do not limit them when it comes to deciding whatever they want to do.
Well, at my high school the dress code only applies to girls. It consists of always
wearing a skirt, a white shirt and black shoes.

First of all, they just don't care if it's winter or if it rains, they teach us that we always
have to be uncomfortable but "pretty" anywhere you go, and they also hypersexualize us
since we are little girls. Clearly a lot of grown ups doesn’t understand this point because
they’ve been raised like this but if you compare the drees code of the boys you will see
a huge difference.

Another point, that you will obviously see is how our dress code is for be stay in one
place, like little dolls and not to enjoy our childhood. I said this because it’s going to be
clearly difficult to us play as the boys with a skirt.

Finally, I think that boys and girls will have the same dress code because it’s obvious
the preferences between the genders. So of course, I’m against it.
WRITIG 2 DRAFT
At the moment I’m studying a career in the UPC, the las March 22nd was my first day of
classes. My university is located in San Miguel and I live in Los Olivos, so I had to got
up very early to arrive on time. When I realized that that I would have to wake up 2
hours earlier to go to classes I was terrified I thought that I couldn’t have enough time,
even though I had plenty of time to get ready and arrived at the University on time.

The March 22nd I woke up at 6am because I have classes every Friday at 9am, so I took
a shower, got dressed and also have breakfast. Finally, I leave home at 7:15am with my
brother in his car, and I arrive at the university at 8:20 am. As soon as I was in the
university, I called my friends to see where was our classroom.

Already in the classroom, I met my teacher, she was very kind and also tried to made us
comfortable, because she knew thar it was our first day of classes after two years in
virtuality. She also said us that her course was very easy, that only if we didn´t read, we
will repeat the course, but then everything was going to be easy.

After classes me and my friends went to a restaurant to have lunch. And even though I
was very nervous and I didn’t know anything about the campus, I ended my first day
successfully.
WRITIG 2 FEEDBACK

At the moment I’m studying a career in the UPC, the las March 22nd was my first day of
classes. My university is located in San Miguel and I live in Los Olivos, so I had to got
up very early to arrive on time. When I realized that that I would have to wake up 2
hours earlier to go to classes I was terrified I thought that I couldn’t have enough time,
even though I had plenty of time to get ready and arrived at the University on time.

The March 22nd I woke up at 6am because I have classes every Friday at 9am, so I took
a shower, got dressed and also have breakfast. Finally, I leave home at 7:15am with my
brother in his car, and I arrive at the university at 8:20 am. As soon as I was in the
university, I called my friends to see where was our classroom.

Already in the classroom, I met my teacher, she was very kind and also tried to made us
comfortable, because she knew thar it was our first day of classes after two years in
virtuality. She also said us that her course was very easy, that only if we didn´t read, we
will repeat the course, but then everything was going to be easy.

After classes me and my friends went to a restaurant to have lunch. And even though I
was very nervous and I didn’t know anything about the campus, I ended my first day
successfully.
WRITIG 2 FINAL COPY
At the moment I’m studying a career in the UPC, the las March 22nd was my first day of
classes. My university is located in San Miguel and I live in Los Olivos, so I had to get
up very early to arrive on time. When I realized that that I would have to wake up 2
hours earlier to go to classes I was terrified I thought that I wouldn’t have enough time,
even though I had plenty of time to get ready and arrived at the University on time.

The March 22nd I woke up at 6am because I have classes every Friday at 9am, so I took
a shower, got dressed and also had breakfast. Finally, I leave home at 7:15am with my
brother in his car, and I arrive at the university at 8:20 am. As soon as I was in the
university, I called my friends to see where was our classroom.

Already in the classroom, I met my teacher, she was very kind and also tried to made us
comfortable, because she knew thar it was our first day of classes after two years in
virtuality. She also told us that her course was very easy, that only if we didn´t read, we
will repeat the course, but then everything was going to be easy.

After classes me and my friends went to a restaurant to have lunch. And even though I
was very nervous and I didn’t know anything about the campus, I ended my first day
successfully.