The document provides a marking scheme for a higher writing assessment with 3 questions. Question 1 is worth 20 marks and asks students to write 80-90 words on a topic. It is marked on communication/content and linguistic knowledge/accuracy. Question 2 is worth 28 marks and asks students to write 130-150 words on a topic. It is also marked on communication/content and linguistic knowledge/accuracy. Question 3 is worth 12 marks and involves translating a passage from one language to another. It is marked holistically based on how well the overall meaning and language is conveyed.
The document provides a marking scheme for a higher writing assessment with 3 questions. Question 1 is worth 20 marks and asks students to write 80-90 words on a topic. It is marked on communication/content and linguistic knowledge/accuracy. Question 2 is worth 28 marks and asks students to write 130-150 words on a topic. It is also marked on communication/content and linguistic knowledge/accuracy. Question 3 is worth 12 marks and involves translating a passage from one language to another. It is marked holistically based on how well the overall meaning and language is conveyed.
The document provides a marking scheme for a higher writing assessment with 3 questions. Question 1 is worth 20 marks and asks students to write 80-90 words on a topic. It is marked on communication/content and linguistic knowledge/accuracy. Question 2 is worth 28 marks and asks students to write 130-150 words on a topic. It is also marked on communication/content and linguistic knowledge/accuracy. Question 3 is worth 12 marks and involves translating a passage from one language to another. It is marked holistically based on how well the overall meaning and language is conveyed.
NAME QUESTION 1 / 20 MARKS QUESTION 2 / 28 MARKS QUESTION 3 / 12 MARKS TOTAL / 60 MARKS
QUESTION 1 (80–90 WORDS) – 20 MARKS
COMMUNICATION AND CONTENT* LINGUISTIC KNOWLEDGE AND ACCURACY* 1 • Communicates brief information relevant to the task with little development 1 • Uses straightforward grammatical structures, some repetition 2 • Limited adaptation of language to narrate, inform and interest; straightforward personal 2 • Produces brief, simple sentences, limited linking of sentences 3 opinions are given with limited justification • Variable accuracy with language and structures, variable success when referring to past, • Expresses straightforward thoughts and ideas; uses common, familiar language with present and future events, regular ambiguity; often errors prevent meaning being repetition conveyed • Variable use of appropriate register and style 4 • Communicates information relevant to the task, with development of the occasional key 3 • Uses mostly straightforward grammatical structures, occasional repetition 5 point and idea 4 • Produces occasionally extended sentences linked with familiar, straightforward 6 • Some effective adaptation of language to narrate and inform; attempts are made to conjunctions interest and give convincing personal opinions which are occasionally successful • Some accurate language and structures, including some successful references to past, • Expresses mainly straightforward thoughts and ideas with the occasional individual present and future events, some ambiguity; often errors occur that hinder clarity of thought/idea; some different examples of common, familiar language communication and occasionally prevent meaning being conveyed • Appropriate use of register and style is evident but with inconsistencies 7 • Communicates information relevant to the task, with development of some key points and 5 • Different examples of straightforward grammatical structures are evident 8 ideas 6 • Produces some extended sentences that are linked with familiar, straightforward 9 • Mostly effective adaptation of language to narrate and inform, some effective language to conjunctions interest and give convincing personal opinions • Frequently accurate language and structures, including mostly successful references to • Some examples of creative language use to express individual thoughts and ideas; a past, present and future events, occasional ambiguity; sometimes errors occur that hinder variety of mainly common, familiar language with the occasional example of uncommon clarity of communication language • Appropriate use of register and style is evident but with occasional inconsistency 10 • Communicates information relevant to the task with expansion of key points and ideas 7 • Some variation of grammatical structures, occasional complex structure 11 • Effective adaptation of language to narrate, inform, interest and give convincing personal 8 • Produces frequently extended sentences, well linked together 12 opinions • Generally accurate language and structures, including successful references to past, • Frequent examples of creative language use to express individual thoughts and ideas; a present and future events; occasionally errors occur that hinder clarity of communication variety of vocabulary and expression, some examples of uncommon language • Appropriate use of register and style throughout with minimal inconsistency
QUESTION 2 (130–150 WORDS) – 28 MARKS
COMMUNICATION AND CONTENT* LINGUISTIC KNOWLEDGE AND ACCURACY* 1 • Communicates occasionally detailed information relevant to the task with occasionally 1 • Uses a variety of mainly straightforward grammatical structures, occasional examples of 2 effective development of key points and ideas 2 repetitive complex language 3 • Some effective adaptation of language to narrate, inform, interest/convince 3 • Occasional sequences of fluent writing, occasionally extended, well-linked sentences 4 • Occasional examples of creative use of language to express individual thoughts, ideas and • Straightforward grammatical structures are largely accurate with occasional accurate use points of view, occasional justification; variety of mainly common, familiar language, of complex language, some successful references to past, present and future events but occasional examples of uncommon language some ambiguity; errors occur that sometimes hinder clarity of communication • Appropriate use of register and style with the occasional inconsistency 5 • Communicates some detailed information relevant to the task, frequently effective 4 • Some variation of grammatical structures, including some repetitive instances of complex 6 development of key points and ideas 5 language 7 • Frequently effective adaptation of language to narrate, inform, interest/convince 6 • Prolonged sequences of fluent writing, some extended, well-linked sentences 8 • Examples of creative use of language to express some individual thoughts, ideas and • Generally accurate language and structures, frequently successful references to past, points of view, some justified; some variation of vocabulary and expression with some present and future events, occasional ambiguity; errors occur that occasionally hinder examples of uncommon language clarity of communication • Appropriate use of register and style with few inconsistencies 9 • Communicates detailed information relevant to the task, with mostly effective 7 • Uses a variety of grammatical structures, including some different examples of complex 10 development of key points and ideas 8 language 11 • Mostly effective adaptation of language, to narrate, inform, interest/convince 9 • Predominantly fluent response; frequent extended sentences, mostly well linked 12 • Creative use of language to express a range of individual thoughts, ideas and points of • Mostly accurate language and structures, mostly successful references to past, present view, most of which are justified; variety of vocabulary and expression, frequent examples and future events; errors occur but they rarely hinder clarity of communication of uncommon language • Predominantly appropriate use of register and style 13 • Communicates detailed information relevant to the task, with consistently effective 10 • Uses a wide variety of grammatical structures, including complex language 14 development of key points and ideas 11 • Fluent response throughout with extended, well-linked sentences 15 • Consistently effective adaptation of language to narrate, inform, interest/convince 12 • Consistently accurate language and structures, consistently successful references to past, 16 • Creative use of language to express and fully justify a wide range of individual thoughts, present and future events; any errors do not hinder the clarity of the communication ideas and points of view; wide variety of vocabulary and expression, many examples of uncommon language • Consistent use of appropriate register and style throughout
QUESTION 3 (TRANSLATION) – 12 MARKS
MARKED HOLISTICALLY (STUDENT’S RESPONSE ACROSS WHOLE PARAGRAPH SHOULD BE CONSIDERED)* 1 • Meaning of some individual words or phrases is conveyed; frequent omissions/incorrectly communicated words and phrases/mother-tongue interference 2 • Some straightforward structures are accurate but regular errors prevent meaning of individual phrases/sentences being conveyed 3 4 • The meaning of the passage is partially communicated, some words and phrases are omitted/incorrectly communicated 5 • Language and structures are accurate in some phrases and sentences but some errors prevent meaning being conveyed 6 7 • The meaning of the passage is mostly communicated, occasional words are omitted/incorrectly communicated 8 • Mostly accurate language and structures; errors occur that occasionally hinder clarity and in rare instances prevent meaning being conveyed 9 10 • The meaning of the passage is fully communicated 11 • Consistently accurate language and structures, any errors do not hinder clarity 12
*For additional guidance on the mark scheme, please see the Sample Assessment Materials.
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