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Factual Writing - Riyan Septi Aji
Factual Writing - Riyan Septi Aji
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Exercise 2
1. After that, the bride’s dress is tied to the groom’s scarf, and they walk around the five
seven times.
Correct: After that, the bride’s dress is tied to the groom’s scarf and they walk around the five
seven times.
3. Then the groom arrives at the bride’s home with his family and his friends.
Correct: After the groom arrives at the bride’s home with his family and his friends.
5. The party may go on until midnight, everyone is pretty tired at the end.
Correct: The party may go on until midnight everyone is pretty tired at the end.
Exercise 3
Cross out two sentences that break the unity of the paragraph.
Artichokes are vegetables that look like green pinecones but taste delicious. If you have
rever eaten one, you may not know how or where to start. Lobster is another food that is difficult
to eat. Here's how to cook and eat an artichoke. First, cut off the stem with a knife. "Then cut off
the end of each leaf with scissors. Steam the whole artichoke in a pot of water until it is soft. To
eat it, pull off one leaf at a time, hold the cut end, and dip the leaf into melted butter or
mayonnaise. Then put the dipped end into your mouth. Pull the leaf through your teeth and
scrape off the soft part. Throw away the tough part. Continue doing this until all of the leaves are
gone. Next, take a spoon, scrape out the fuzzy part in the center, and throw it away. A lobster
also has parts that you don't eat. The remaining part of the artichoke the bottom is the heart,
which is the best part. Cut the heart into pieces, dip each piece into the sauce, and enjoy the
delicious taste.
Practice 1