Cam 17 Test 2 Writing Task 1

The table and charts below give information on the police budget
for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where
the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

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Cam 17 Test 2 Writing Task 2

The table demonstrates police budget of an area in Britain and its
sources while the two pie charts describe how this budget was
allocated for three main purposes which was measured for two years
from 2017 to 2018.
Overall, all the purposes of the police budget in that increased after
two years and the money that is use for paid salary outnumbered the
ones for technology, buildings and transport.

National government contributed the most amount of money to the

police budget, at around 175.5m and 177.8m, followed by that of the
local taxes, which accounted for 91.2m and 102.3m in 2017 and 2018
seperately. In 2017, other sources (eg grants) had spent 38 million
pounds in the police budget and it went up a little bit to 38.5 million
pounds in the following year. In total, the police budget of the area
rose sharply by under 20 million pounds only in a year.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.

Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative

development?

In this day and age, children tend to use more time in

smartphones more than attend in other activities. there are many
reasons that lead to this trend. From my perspective, I think this trend
bears many drawbacks which can leave a lot of consequences for the
young.
One of the main reason of this development is parents spending
less time to take care of their children. To be more specific, lives
nowadays are getting more vibrant, that is why adults have to spend
most of their time on working which is leading to less time will be
spent on teaching the children. As a result, children are allowed to use
smartphone sto relax on their own so that their busy parents are not
distubed and bothered after work. Moreover, social media required
children to check out regularly so that they can communicate with
their friends because of its fast pace. If not, these children will be
isolated with their friends or their communities.
 Spending a lot of time on smartphones can leads to many
diseases and health problems. In fact, looking into the screen for too
long can lead to near-sightedness, this happen because brights can
ruin the cells of eyes and reduce our eye sight. In addition, paying too
much attention in these devices prevent the kids to join in other
physical activities that can help them to improve their health. Also,
their academic peformance will be reduced soon in case that children
are overusing smart devices since they may be temped by video
games, random videos and posts in social media.
In conclusion, it is no doubt that overusing smartphones for a
long time gives the children a lot of terrible impact. I firmly believe
that it is better when we can taking down the number of children who
are spending time too much for smartphones.

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