Writing Feedback Form- Level 2 - Assignments

Student’s Name: Date: September 3, 2022

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Mohammed alwajeeh
25/8/2023
Skills 2
My father my hero

My hero is my father. His name is Abdul Rahman. He is from Yemen. He was born in 1965
in Taiz city. He works as a policeman. He works from 8 o'clock until 2 o'clock p.m. He catches
all bad peoples like thieves, killers, and more. My father found a lot of challenges in his life. One
of them, he wanted to study in the University^ but he didn't have a lot of money to study. so, he
worked in a restaurant to get money. He worked ^ 12 Hours to collect the money. After that, he
studied in the University^ and he got high marks. He is my ideal and l want to be like him in my
life.

Note: There was a lack of details, and effects were not mentioned. 8.5

Feedback Level 2 - Assignments

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 Writing Feedback Form- Level 2 - Assignments

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Plagiarism Detected 0
7.7
Writing grade for this task 5
*Conventions specific for genre:
While the rules of spelling, punctuation, capitalisation, and grammar are necessary for all texts, some genres have their own sets of rules and principles to follow. These features help the reader to
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