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Cause and Effect. Advanced
Cause and Effect. Advanced
Cause-and-Effect essays
I. WRITING INSTRUCTIONS
SUGGESTED STRUCTURE
1. Introduction
- Background statement (you can use ‘nowadays/today/these days’ to start):
- Detailed background statement
- Paraphrase the statement
- Say what you’ll write about in your essay (causes & effects) – THESIS
- Give an outline of the essay
2. Body paragraph 1 – causes
- Topic sentence
- Cause 1 – with explanation/details
- Example of Cause 1
- Cause 2 – with explanation/details
- Example of Cause 2
3. Body paragraph 2 – effects
- Topic sentence
- Effect 1 – with explanation/details
- Example of Effect 1
- Effect 2 – with explanation/details
- Example of Effect 2
4. Conclusion
- Restate the problem and sum up the causes and effects that you described in your body paragraphs
- Prediction/ recommendation
TEMPLATE
1. Introduction
- Nowadays,…
- Specifically…
- Therefore, there is an evident scenario that…
- This situation is brought about by a variety of catalysts and has enormous influences on…
- This essay aims to establish the underlying causes of the problem and examine the consequences
of this worrying trend.
2. Body paragraph 1 – causes
- Before establishing the repercussions of the phenomenon, we need to understand what has
prompted…
- … is the deciding factor to + PROBLEM. This is partly due to the fact that… For example,…
- Another reason for+ PROBLEM is…, which leads to…
- … can also be a source of + PROBLEM resulting in…
3. Body paragraph 2 – effects
- The outcomes of + TOPIC are varied.
- The most significant negative impact is… This can even lead to…
- Another adverse effect is…, hence + SUPPORTING effect 2.
- … is also a possible result of + PROBLEM. For example, …
4. Conclusion
- To sum up, it is evident that there are several culprits of …, and a variety of serious implications.
- It is therefore necessary that steps be taken to prevent this problem from deteriorating further.
- If…, I am sure…
Ex 2: Do you think a cause or an effect should be put in the gap in front of or after the words/phrases
below? Write C or E.
Ex 4: Fill the sample answer with the phrases from the list.
Obesity in children is a serious problem in a number of countries.
What are the causes of obesity in children? Discuss the possible alarming effects of this problem in the
future.
For example, As a result, leading to, affects, lead to, risk of, possible consequences, main causes of
One such ill-effect, On the whole, Moreover, To embark upon, For example, Over the past few years
1.____, developed countries have encountered various cases of children suffering from the problem
of obesity. This essay will discuss the possible causes for this increasing problem among children and also
suggests the possible consequences that may result in case of negligence.
2.____, one of the 3.____ obesity among children is poor diet as they are often seen eating junk food.
At almost every corner of the street, one can found restaurants offering mouth tempting fast foods. Kids at
home also are found to eat processed food because their parents do not find sufficient time for preparing the
food. 4.____, packaged foods are purchased and kept in fridge for days. This food is not fresh and healthy,
hence 5.____ their health, 6.____ the build-up of fat and compromising their fitness.
7.____, there are many 8.____ faced by the children. 9. ____ is the 10.____ developing health related
severe diseases like diabetes. This kind of debilitating illness implies that the child would need to be injected
with insulin for the whole life. 11.____, overweight children are often found to be bullied. 12.____, many
overweight kids are found disturbed facing the negative stigma of being obese.
13.____, it is evident that there are various causes responsible for obesity among children and
can 14.____ serious consequences in the future. Also, it is the duty of their parents and relatives to ensure
that appropriate steps are taken to prevent this problem from getting worst in the future. (279 words)
Ex 5: Read the following question and fill each gap in the model answer with ONE suitable word.
Nowadays more and more children are being brought up in single parent families. What are the causes of
this? What effects can be seen as a result of this?
1. ……….. over the world it has become more common to raise the children in the families with only
one parent. There 2. ………. to be two main causes involved, and a variety of damaging 3…………. on
people and on their future generation, which we will 4…………. here.
Probably the main 5. ……….. of bringing up the children in this type of family is that the current
generation does not appreciate family values. This means that people are not struggling to save such treasure
as family. After few conflicts, they just get a divorce, 6. ………. born child that needs the contribution of
both parents. If parents spend more time with patience, they will bring up their child as well-mannered
person with normal perception of ground rules. The other major 7. ………. is the accidental pregnancy. This
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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 – CAUSES AND EFFECTS
happens because people do not consider about aftereffects of hanging out in nightclub. Pregnant women 8.
…………. often bring up her child alone and she is forced to be a breadwinner for the family. Therefore,
most of the time she cannot be immersed into education of the child and sometimes cannot be in touch with
her own child. That may have big 9…………. on upbringing of the child.
There are, of course, 10………… effects of being raised in single-parent families on future
generation. The 11………… of these is that the lack of educational processes from one of the parents might
12……….. to having problems with pattern of behavior which is forming during the childhood. Another
possible 13……….. that loss of one parent has could be the cause of disruption in codes of conduct. It can
be the problem, leading to disrespectful behaviors to other people and may also trigger outbreaks of violence
in future generation.
14……………, we can see that divorces and accidental pregnancy are the main 15…………… of
the single-parent families and that this inconsiderable change leads to lack of the integral part of upbringing
and can entail serious problems for the next generation. (328 words)
Ex 6: Complete the following essay as an answer to the given question. Use the words/phrases from
the list.
Nowadays people around the world are choosing to self-medicate rather than seeing a doctor and using
conventional medicine. What are the causes of this change and what effects can be seen as a result?
To sum up, Another possible effect is that, The greatest, steps are taken, a variety of negative effects,
The other major cause is that the, This means that, The effects of this have been and will continue to be
serious, The main cause of, If, This essay will discuss some reasons why
All over the world it has become common to protect yourself from doctors and try to be cured by
self-medicine. 1. …………………………………………… this has occurred and examine the consequences
of this trend.
2. …………………………….. using self-treatment is that the medicine nowadays is too expensive
for people with average or low salary. 3. …………………………….. in many hospitals you can be ripped
off for few procedures in order to detect the illness and prescribe the treatment. 4. ……………………….
doctors make prices more suitable then people will better attend hospitals and accept the tips and the
remedies given by doctors. 5. ………………………………….. overwhelming majority does not trust
doctors, thinking that the internet can be the great source of finding the way of treatment. Furthermore, they
use this tip without any consultation of the high-qualified professionals in this area.
6. ……………………………………………………. for people and for next generations. 7.
……………………………. of these is that remedies and pills can treat the illness but it also triggers new
disease, leading to more serious and damage consequences for the person’s organism. 8.
…………………………….. it can initiate disruption of microorganisms in human’s body and in
consequence may evoke degradation of some organs in future generation, making them weak and dependent
on permanent medicine.
9. ………………………, it is evident that there are several causes and 10. …………………………
on people. Society must ensure 11. ……………………….. to prevent this problem from increasing further.
(263 words)
Ex 8: Reorder the phrases for each of the sentences so that they make a complete answer to the
question given.
People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reasons behind this?
What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
Para. 1
that everyone should / While / try to get / a solid eight hours / the reality is much different / experts agree /
of sleep every night, /. /
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sleeping less and this / People are / is resulting / outcomes / in a range of alarming / . /
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of sleep are / The reasons / on our lives / for this shortage / enormous, / and the / relatively evident / lives of
those / and its impacts / around us are /. /
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worrying trend / This essay aims / of the problem / the underlying causes / and examine the / to establish /
consequences of this /. /
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Para. 2
for the current / Modern technology / sleep / of the blame / should shoulder much / dearth of /. /
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daytime / of our phones, / The screens / and other devices, / which tells / volume of blue light, / emit a high /
our brains / it is / . /
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to know / Obviously, if / we try to sleep, / in bed before / it will / we use a phone / for our nervous system / it
is time / to sleep / be much harder /. /
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work and / Another principal / cause / of our / is the organization / school lives / insomnia / . /
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they will struggle / In other words, / society is / to get out of bed / organized around / at dawn the next day /
an early wake-up time, / and if people / to sleep on time, / when they have / are not getting / . /
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Para. 3
perspective of the individual, / From the / not sleeping enough / physical and / can lead to / mental
problems / . /
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Ex 9: Use the clues to write complete sentences which together make a complete answer to the
question given. You may need to change or add words.
Almost everybody nowadays is found using personal vehicle for travelling purpose. What are the reasons
for this increasing trend? Explain what negative outcomes may be faced in the society due to this.
Para. 1
demands / private means / transportation / travelling / rapidly growing / modern people.
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Initially, / essay / suggest / biggest causes / phenomenon / be poor public transportation / comfort zone /
living standard / argue / changes / environment / financial burden / most detrimental ramifications.
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Para. 2
To begin / foremost reason / travel / personal vehicles / generally public transportations / considered
undesirable / due / over-crowding, non-availability / flexible hours, heavy fare and so forth.
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result, / people prefer / safest, easiest and most affordable way / travelling through / own means /
transportation.…………………………………………………………………………………………………..
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instance, / survey conducted recently / BBC News / revealed / 55% / world population / using /
automobiles / commute / other purposes.
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