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Thesis Proposal Siti Laila Barkah
Thesis Proposal Siti Laila Barkah
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
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A. Writing ................................................................................................... 7
1. Definition of Writing .......................................................................... 7
2. Purpose of Writing ............................................................................. 9
B. Text ......................................................................................................... 9
1. Definition of Text .............................................................................. 9
2. Types of Text ...................................................................................... 10
C. Genre ....................................................................................................... 11
1. Definition of Genre............................................................................. 11
2. Kinds of Genre ................................................................................... 12
D. Descriptive Text ...................................................................................... 14
1. Definition of Descriptive Text............................................................ 14
2. Social Function ................................................................................... 14
3. Generic Function and Textual Elements ........................................ 15
4. Linguistic Features ............................................................................ 15
5. Example of Descriptive Text ............................................................. 16
E. Scientific Approach .................................................................................. 18
F. Writing for Specific Purposes ................................................................ 20
1. Need Analysis .................................................................................... 21
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2. Material Development ........................................................................ 22
a) Material Design ............................................................................. 24
b) Material Evaluation ....................................................................... 24
G. Syllabus .................................................................................................. 25
1. Multimedia ........................................................................................ 25
2. Curriculum of Multimedia Study Program ........................................ 26
H. Relevant Studies ..................................................................................... 27
I. Conceptual Framework ............................................................................ 30
REFERENCES ................................................................................................. 40
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
which has to be mastered by the students , they are reading, writing, listening and
speaking that wellknown as language skills.The language skills are divided into
two ways, the first one is receptive skills and the second is productive skills.
Reading and listening are included on receptive skills while speaking and writing
possible. Without reading skill, no writing skill is possible.So, the four skills go in
pairs. From those four language skills, writing is the most important skill that
should be learned by the students well because by having this skill they can
people. By reading and doing all the guided exercises, the students will find
themselves enjoy in writing. English has some genres in language learning, one of
2017, descriptive text is one of genres which is learnt in senior high school.
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In some cases, students get some problems and get difficulties in writing
and some irrelevant texts that they learn. This happens because the book used by
vocational school is the same as high school, it is certainly not suitable because it
does not match with the students‟ need. However, one of the considerations in
SMKN 1 Dolok Masihul use Buku Bahasa Inggris published by Pusat Kurikulum
dan Perbukuan, Balitbang, Kemendikbud, in 2017. The researcher also finds that
the materials used by the students in SMKN 1 Dolok Masihul is generally same
with senior high school materials, eventhough their need is different. In fact,
based on the questionnaires distributed to the students, it is found that the students
in the school actually need the writing material topics which is related to
multimedia study program. They need text which is related to their study program
to build their vocabularies and ease them in learning English, especially in writing
descriptive text.
irrelevant descriptive texts were found in Buku Bahasa Inggris published by Pusat
1 Dolok Masihul namely Tanjung Puting National Park, Tajmahal and Visiting
Niagara Falls. The researcher thinks that the existing materials in the English
book are not suitable for the students in multimedia study program. Some texts
that are there in the book do not contain technical terms related to multimedia
study program in SMKN 1 Dolok Masihul, the content of descriptive texts in the
book are more related to tourism study program. Furthermore, the texts are also
Beside that, based on the interview that has been conducted in SMKN 1
Dolok Masihul, the English teacher said that she teaches the students by using the
resource, but sometimes she also uses the other materials that she gets from the
internet resources. At the interview session, she also argues that she feels it is very
support the students‟ study program in build students‟ more understanding. The
materials used for vocational school should be more specific than senior high
school because in vocational school actually should uses English for specific
purposes. It can be planned based on the basic competences in the syllabus and
also the students need, that is the study programs of the vocational school itself.
For example, it could be the materials about places that have relation with
will get more understanding about multimedia terms and knowledges that will be
people in the multimedia field are the most sought after. Many professions can be
content creators, and many more. In the multimedia study program also includes
office administration within actually. Hence, beside able to operate the computer
system well, the multimedia students are also expected to be able to write and
through the writing text materials used by the students in the school. If the writing
materials used is relevant with the students needs, they will be easier to apply this
Based on the problem stated above, the researcher will develop English
Dolok Masihul.
B. Identification of Problem
Based on the background of the study, there are some problems that can be
identified in SMKN 1 Dolok Masihul. The first problem is about students‟ low
understanding and the second problem is the material used. So, in this research,
the researcher will try to develop the existing materials (descriptive texts) in the
Balitbang, Kemendikbud 2017 based on the syllabus and the students‟ need in
Based on the background of the study above, the problem of the study is
Dolok Masihul. The materials will be developed are the writing materials of
descriptive text for one year of study which is consist of three texts included in
the topic of historical building or the famous places that will be linked with
The significances of this study are divided into two parts, they are
1. Theoretically
students also are more interested in learning English because of their needs
which have been completed and surely it can improve their motivation in
learning English.
2. Practically
a. The teacher
b. The students
For the students, it will assist them in finding future work according to their
The following terms bellow are clarified for the purpose to explain all the
terms related to the theory of writing, text, genre, descriptive text, materials and
also scientific approach so that both reader and researcher have some perception.
A. Writing
1. Definition of Writing
final version.
1. Planning
way to warm up the writers‟ brain before they write. The writers need
to think about three main issues of writing process. First, they have to
audience they are writing for and thirdly, they have to consider the
2. Drafting
In this stage, writers “go” at text is often done on the assumption that it
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In this process, writers read through what they have written to see
where it works and where it does not. The students‟ feedback do not
also can help students in the revising process. Revising is not only
checking for language errors, this process also can improve global
4. Final version
In this process, the writers have edited their draft and produce their final
version. Surely, the writing product is different from the planning and
drafting process because the things have changed in the editing process.
The writers edit their own or their peer‟s work for grammar, spelling,
Linse (in Masitoh and Suprijadi 2015: 38)) also stated that writing is a
and working with them until they are presented in manner that is polished and
comprehensible ro readers.
deliver some creative ideas from humans‟ brain to be some texts on the paper
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sheets. In produce a good writing, there will be some plans and number of
2. Purpose of Writing
accurate language use and because they think as they write, it will provoke
into their minds.. Hosseini (in Indrilla 2018: 405) have stated that by
having a good writing ability, it will give good impact in life. Through
writing activity, people are required to read more from various sources and
Based on the theory, the researcher concludes that the aim of writing is
to match the writers‟ mind with the writers‟ writing product. It must the
writers‟ think in their mind. In the other hand, writing also can influences
our life in the future, it can change our mindset to think more creatively.
B. Text
1. Definition of Text
verbally in which the someone who delivers and someone who receives
likes the writer and the reader understand the meaning and produce a
communication.
2. Types of Text
There are three types of text. (Knapp and Watkins 2005 : 30-31). Those
texts are :
1. Literary Text
way that lifts readers beyond the everyday. Literary texts might
include the broad range of texts that reflect and interpret individual and
social life, whether real or imaginary. Literary texts often use language
engage with the text and incorporate their own meanings and
2. Factual Text
Factual text is all the texts that have the primary aim of
they include all of the texts that we use from day to day to „get things
done‟.
3. Media Text
Media text is any texts (whether literary or factual) that are used in
C. Genre
1. Definition of Genre
Watkins 2005: 22) writes : First, genre is an organising concept for our
involves knowing the appropriateness principle for any genre, knowing the
kind of margin you have with it, being able to vary it, knowing how to
shift from one to another and how many factors would be involved in any
such shift.
Ann (in Dirgeyasa 2016) also stated that genre includes in a type of
2. Kinds of Genre
a. Recount
literary term, experience is what we do, feel, hear, read, even what we
dream. The generic structures of this genre are orientation, events, re-
b. Descriptive
c. Narrative
Narrative is a text that has function to amuse, entertain and to deal with
language to create images in the readers‟ mind and enhance the story.
d. Explanation
explanation.
e. Procedure
D. Descriptive Text
text which has specific function to describe or illustrate some objects such
as thing, person or place vividly so that the reader can visualize the object
described. Suryana (in Dirgeyasa 2016: 57) also stated that descriptive text
is also used to create image of the people, place, even of units, times of the
days, or seasons.
2. Social Function
such as :
4) It shows, rather than tells, through use of active verbs and precise
modifiers.
generic structure and textual elements, the first is identification and the
second is description. Each element has its own function and purpose such
as bellow :
1. Identification
be described.
advisable.
2. Description
identification text.
include :
topic/theme described.
common are :
a) It tends to use the verb such as seems, looks, sounds, and like,
etc.
Identification
Mini Indonesia Indah), Jakarta. The location is right in front of the Non-
Blok summit friendly monument. The area of the museum is about 1000
Description
elementary school, junior high school, senior high school, and also family.
technology, training in the design of props, science fair, science camp, star
facilities for Jakarta residents, but also has an outreach activity program to
portable props. The presence of this museum looks very useful for anyone
and anywhere.
Therefore, from the example above, everybody knows the way how to
write the descriptive text well. Firstly, the writer writes the general statements in
the identification part. Secondly, the writer continues his/her writing in the
description part, it is larger than identification. In this part, the writer write more
specific sentences in which to describes and illustrates more about the general
statements in the identification part and gives more and detail informations about
E. Scientific Approach
curriculum, there are five main learning steps that need to implied in the
following ;
1) Observing
This step is very useful for fulfilling the curiosity of students, so that the
learning process has high meaning. By this step, the students find the
fact that there is a relationship between the object being analyzed and the
2) Questioning
various sources in various ways. Students can read various sources, pay
out experiments.
4) Associating
In this process, there are reasoning activities within the framework of the
5) Communicating
activity can be done through writing down or telling what was found in
a) Student-centered learning
Based on the theory, the researcher will try to design writing materials of
occupational needs and goals. Hutchinson and Waters (1987: 8) also defined
work or study.
There are five phases in development of English for specific purposes (ESP),
namely:
1. Register analysis
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2. Discourse analysis
meaning.
This phase refers to the use of language by learners based on the situation,
thet situation.
learners to cope with the surface forms, for example guessing the meaning
5. Learning-centered approach
Thus, from the theories above it can concludes that it is very important to
give the authentic materials to the students in vocational school in order to prepare
the students‟ skills that can work directly in accordance with the needs of
Business and Industrial World (DUDI) and in accordance with the department
1. Need Analysis
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1. Target situation analysis and objective needs analysis (e.g. tasks and
factors that affect the way they learn (e.g. previous learning
will run.
materials. Hutchinson and Waters (1987: 59-60) stated that the analysis of
2. Material Development
and learning process. The materials that given by the teacher can Influence
formulated goals, both the final goal and the intermediate goal.
whole. So a teaching material must contain all the parts in one book as a
contain materials that can increase the reader's knowledge regarding the
5. User friendly, that is, every instruction and exposure to information that
appears is helpful and friendly to the wearer, including the ease with
a) Material Design
b) Material Evaluation
that the material evaluation can be divided into four steps namely
matching.
G. Syllabus
Waters (1987: 80) stated that a syllabus is a document which says what will
(or at least what should) be learnt. In this research, the researcher uses the
English syllabus revision edition 2017 of Senior High School as the guidance
and 4.4 (descriptive texts) in which the texts are about the historical building
and the famous places, the materials will be developed in order to supports the
a syllabus is the most important thing that must be analyzed before develop
learning.
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1. Multimedia
Multimedia study program becomes the favorite one in this digital era.
which can operates by user such as movie and television. While interactive
contents, and learning materials, also the methods which are used as
will guide the teachers design the materials which are suitable for the
students‟ needs.
competences and basic competences. The students who take multimedia study
1) Present information more easily so that the audience can understand the
information provided.
H. Relevant Studies
this research. Beside, by considering the relevant studies, it can helps the
Puji Sumarsono and his three friends (2017) , their journal with
research Vol.3, No.6, pp. 29-31, November 2017 also had done their research.
office study program. The results of their research indicated that there were
conducted his study to figure out the effectiveness of using authentic materials
The results showed that the participants showed positive opinions in learning
“When English Rings A Bell” Course Book”, on her journal Kajian Linguistik
dan Sastra Vol. 1, No.2, Desember 2016. This study used qualitative
descriptive method to describe the results.There are some pros and cons in the
improvement. The revision is necessary since there are unequal content based
on scientific approach and the syllabus. Thus, the content should be developed
the course book are important to meet the needs of the students.
Teaching Writing” on Lingua Cultura journal Vol. 12, No.4, November 2018
also has conducted her study. Her research uses a quasi-experimental design
with a type of nonequivalent control group design with pretest and posttest.
The results are (1) there are significant differences in writing achievement
among the students taught by using the scientific approach, CTL approach,
and conventional approach. (2) The use of the scientific approach and the CTL
approach are more effective than that of the conventional approach in teaching
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writing. (3) The use of the scientific approach is not more effective than that
scientific approach and CTL approach are the effective approaches in the
teaching and learning writing need a creative teacher and active learners. A
creative teacher surely chooses and uses a good approach to make students
Genre Based Approach (GBA) at the Eight Grade Students of SMP Islam
Terpadu Fitrah Insani” on their ELTIN journal Vol.3, No. 1, April 2015. They
research. The result showed that GBA has a significant impact on improving
SMKN 1 Dolok Masihul. The English writing materials will be associated to the
students‟ needs in multimedia study program so that the materials will be suitable
and can be implemented by students when they will get to work in the future.
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I. Conceptual Framework
Somebody feel that writing is a difficult skill to learn because in its process we
must master on some studies like grammar, vocabulary, punctuation, and also
express their mind and feeling about something and also to examine their
learning process and should be match with the students‟ need. In this case, the
process especially for English teachers who teach in vocational school. The
materials that given by the teacher can influence the students‟ motivation in
the classroom, so the teacher should be able to design the good and creative
material contents to make the students easy to understand the teaching and
Dolok Masihul. The material will be develop is the existing material in the
Kemendikbud, in 2017. The researcher does not design the new materials, but
only develop and still follow the syllabus of English in 2013 curriculum which
text based on scientific approach by conducting some steps, they are : the first
and English teacher and also English learning activity which is taken from
students‟ need based on the data and informations. The third is designing the
English writing materials of descriptive text based on the syllabus and the
students‟ need by using scientific approach. In this step, the researcher tries to
looking for some texts about the historical building and the famous place
create a better contents include the worksheet and also design a lesson plan to
developed material by experts. The fifth is revising the material based on the
this product will be given to the English teacher of SMKN.1 Dolok Masihul
and will be shared to the students for apply in the English class.
Research and Development (R&D) proposed from Borg and Gall as the
research design. Those consist of six steps, they are: gathering information
media and final product. The researcher hopefully this product will supports
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the English teacher in SMKN.1 Dolok Masihul as the supporting material for
Analyzing Data
Revising material
RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
method (R&D). Borg and Gall (in Sumarsono,P. and friends. 2017: 30)
stated that “R&D is the method which does not satisfy the curiosity on
Gathering
Need Designing the
information
Analysis product
and data
Validating
Final product Revising
by experts
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The subjects of this research are the English teacher and the grade X
the researcher‟s subject is because they only use textbook Buku Bahasa
The sources of data used in this research are the existing materials used
obtain the research data. The data are collected by observing the existing
and interview.
1. Observation: In this case, the researcher was taken the data from
syllabus, lesson plan, and the existing materials that used by the
teacher in the English class. The researcher found that the existing
actually match with the basic competences in the syllabus, but it does
not suitable with the students‟ need in the multimedia study program.
material experts and the students to obtain the data about the quality
the need analysis to find out the target needs and the learning needs.
were asked to the English teacher to get informations and data about
3) Analyzing of Questionnaires
material‟s experts and students to get the related data. Then, the data
preparing what the materials are appropriate for the students in SMKN
scientific approach.
developed materials to the experts. In this case, the experts are the the
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