Professional Documents
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Genre Analysis in Tender Notices
Genre Analysis in Tender Notices
Introduction
Tendering is such common practice for all sorts of construction projects and services such as
in universities and government institutions. It is extraordinarily wide for obvious reasons, but
what remains hidden is the information in each other's bids that competing tenderers would
like to know about and the processes that go behind the decision of a successful tender bid.
Although the tender issuer may inform a vendor on how his company's bid became the chosen
one, in most cases, how a tender bid is selected may not be widely disclosed as the discursive
processes in choosing the successful tenderer is often occluded and confidential. This may be
due to commercial aspects of rivalry and confidentiality, and the perceived ethics of not giving
too much information as practised by the tender issuer. This study will focus on the common
tendering process beginning from the genre of Invitation to Tender (ITT). However, it will not
delve into the hidden and inaccessible practices of how a tender application gets accepted.
Companies, large businesses, public and governmental institutions invite bids and
tenders for certain projects and activities such as engineering, construction and architectural
works or even purchasing particular equipment and goods. They issue a Request For Tender
(RFT) which is a formal and structured invitation to qualified vendors or suppliers to submit
competitive offers to provide raw materials, goods, or services (Smith, 2017). This invitation,
which is also known as an invitation to tender (ITT) or tender notice, marks the beginning of
the tender process. The ITT is advertised to the public and contains specific prescriptive
which is “a formal offer to execute work or supply goods at a fixed price” is submitted by a
prospective supplier to the client (Mukherjee, 2005, p. 2240). Once the tender is received by
the client or organization, it goes through a well-defined tender process within a specific
timeline. This regulated procedure is supposed to guarantee a fair and transparent selection
process between the company that issues the tender and the supplier (Lewis, 2007). For the
company, it needs to ensure that all potential bidders receive similar information specified
in the ITT (Chrysostom, 2019). In short, all the specifications in the ITT are regulated to
ensure fair competition. These specifications that equally function as the rhetorical features
typically used in this type of genre will be the main focus of this study.
The ITT is regarded as a professional and specialised genre. As stated by Bhatia (2008),
the producer and receiver of a genre belong to specific discourse communities and maintain
their specific professional practices. Additionally, since a genre is a form of social action of
the community that practices it (Miller, 1984), it has communicative purposes or intentions
(Swales, 1990). For ITT, it functions to regulate the specific receiver’s actions via instructions
in order to serve the demands and needs of the producer. According to Thorpe and Bailey
(1996, p. 2), a tender notice invites relevant parties to make an offer to the principal which
must be capable of accepting the offer, thereby creating a legally binding contract. It involves
a “complex business process and generates a series of contractually related legal liabilit ies”
(ibid.).
described in business and construction websites which usually contain links to governme nt -
related procurement procedure guides or policies that direct suppliers on what needs to be
done (Wood & Fitzalan, 2015). Such guides tend to be country and company-specific, for
instance the UK has its “England and Wales Public Procurement Policy 2020”; Malaysia has
its Government Procurement Policy (Xavier & Chew, 2012); the Sime Darby company has its
Procurement and Vendor Governance which sits under the Code of Business Conduct.
Research on tender have largely focussed on what comes after the tender invitation
but seldom on the invitation itself, i.e. tender offers or bids by the suppliers, tender evaluation
(Chrysostom, 2019), and contextual factors of the clients and suppliers. For example, using
case studies on abuse of position, falsified documentation and unreasonable price, Othman
et al. (2010) investigated the weaknesses of Malaysia's public procurement system and found
abuse, tampering and corrupt practices in the procedures. The study concluded that the large
involvement opportunities opened avenues that increase the risk of system abuse,
profiteering and corruption. This grim scenario is further analysed in a policy-related paper
open competitive tendering, and lack of monitoring and evaluation. All these are said to have
led to “cases of procured goods, services and works that are being paid for well above market
procurement methods in the Middle East construction industry in order to identify the
preferred procurement method, the factors affecting the bidding strategy of the contractors
and the factors that are taken into consideration by the contractors before deciding to bid for
a project.
Numerous studies have also argued for ethical and good governance when confronted
procurement-related legislation and regulatory (Adham & Chamhuri, 2012; Jones, 2013),
most studies have centred on challenges and strategies for improvement. Xavier and Xavier
(2016) insisted on reform to Malaysia’s public procurement principles with better regulation,
Ismail et al. (2017) found non-compliance by suppliers where they falsify their documents
during the tender application submission stage, which may reduce the competitiveness of
tenders and affect the overall project performance. In a descriptive cross-sectional survey
weaknesses on the tender notices prepared by procuring entities as they comply by only 78%.
Hossam, Ibrahim and El-Malt (2019) conducted a survey to identify factors which affect
quality of tender documents and also the importance index to the factors affecting the quality
of tender documents. The respondents of the survey were expert contractors and consultants.
Findings revealed thirty-four sub-factors categorized under nine main factors whereby the
respondents placed high importance on the cover letter, the name and address of the
procuring entity, the explanation of where and when tenders must be submitted and where
and when the tenders will be opened, tenderer information (brief description of the work and
its cost), description of the work, location of the site, site boundaries, names of parties and
Tender Procedure
outlines seven main steps in a tender process: 1. The issuing organisation determines a
tender process. Here the organisation determines what it needs from the vendors and issues
a tender which can be of various types. 2. The Request for Tender is prepared where it
outlines what is required, along with contractual requirements and how the tenderers should
respond. This tender request or invitation to tender is commonly found in the form of Tender
Notices which are usually advertised in newspapers and online. 3. This notice invites the
suppliers or vendors "to provide a competitive proposal to win a contract for the supply of
their products and services" (Rajpurohit, 2013, p. 11). It also describes the goods or services
requirements. The issuing company states the terms and conditions that must be followed
by the tenderer, and this include mandatory qualifications of the supplier, e.g. performance
Information on how to purchase the tender documents, price of documents, the tender
briefing, and submission of the tender is also outlined in the tender notice. 4. The supplier
or vendor must observe the requirements and meet all the criteria for successful tender
project submission. 5. The tender proposals are evaluated by the issuing organisations based
on how well the service or goods offer value for money and quality. 6. The supplier is then
informed on the result of their tender submission. 7. Finally, the successful supplier and the
relevant organisation will establish a formal contract and agreement. This study limits itself
only to the analysis of tender notices as a genre and determining the move structure.
While all these studies have dealt with the socio-cultural disciplinary practices
surrounding the ITT, this study analyses the rhetorical structure of the ITT following
Swales’ (1990) genre-based approach and moves analysis framework and identifies the
language features that are typically used in this specialised genre that have governed the
social practices of tendering. This is in line with Hodge and Kress’s (1988, p. 7) notion that
“genres only exist in so far as a social group declares and enforces the rules that constitute
them”.
Genre is often described as a class of communicative events that are formed in response to
some shared set of communicative purposes (Swales, 1990, p. 58). For example, in the
[the genre’s] production and reception, including its historical and cultural associations”
The genre-based approach which was established by Swales (1990) revolves on the
procedure of move analysis to understand how a text is organized and also how the socio-
cultural context influences the production of the genre. In his analysis of research
introductions, Swales presented a model of four moves to explain the rhetorical structure of
the moves in the article introductions. The model, Create a Research Space (CARS), mentions
that each move is comprised of a series of steps to instantiate the move. A move is described
as a unit of language that includes the writer’s communicative purpose, which defines the
characteristics of the genre. For Biber et al. (2007, p. 30), moves are “semantic and functional
units of texts that have specific communicative purposes”. Each move possesses its particular
intention and helps to achieve the overall text’s purposes. The length of the move can vary
from less than a sentence to much longer stretches (Biber et al., 2007, p. 31).
Moves can be described on the rhetorical level (by looking at the move’s purpose)
and on the linguistic level (by looking at the usage of sentence connectors, mood, tense, etc.).
Each move can be instantiated by one step or a certain number of steps, the alternative ways
of accomplishing the purpose of the move. Mirador (2000) contends that a move is a logical
strategy adopted by the communicators in written and spoken discourse. Such a strategy is
spoken text. For Swales (1990), the “move” and “steps or sub-steps” is a regular pattern that
appears in a certain order. “Move” as a unit refers to the author’s purpose, where the author
expresses the target message through a move structure. A “step” is lower than “move” in the
text unit, and it assists the move to provide a more detailed perspective.
A move in the text is a functional unit for a set of identifiable rhetorical purpose. It
can vary in size but usually contain at least one proposition. Also, moves and steps combine
to give a text its internal coherence. To identify the moves, the analyst looks for the
communicative purpose in all the sentences or parts of sentences (Bhatia, 1993). Genre
members of a particular community) are the motivating factors in shaping the structure of a
text. Bhatia’s main idea (1993) in genre analysis is to describe genre texts and how the social-
cultural context influences the genre. It investigates not only how a text is organised and what
lexico-grammatical features form the genre but also why the written features are different
Another aspect that Bhatia (2005) introduced is the practice of genre-mixing, which
especially in professional discourse. These mixed genres are also called hybrid genre (Bhatia,
2004). Hybridity is an umbrella term for all kinds of blending, mixing, and combining that
occur in genres and texts (Mäntynen & Shore, 2019). For example, Catenaccio’s (2008)
analysis on the generic features of press releases revealed elements of hybridity. The textual
and linguistic features of press releases indicate that their communicative purposes fall within
the informative-promotional continuum. Her study also indicated the demarcation between
informative and promotional textual features found in advertisement-like features such as the
company logo and contact details. This hybrid nature of discourse can also be seen in the
discourse of motherhood where good mothering is commodified and marketized for public
Tender notices, i.e. open tenders, are extensively advertised in a variety of media, to allow
all interested suppliers an opportunity to bid for the project. Wood and Fitzalan (2015, p.
4) explain that in terms of the legal status of ITT or RFT, when an ITT is issued by a client
of which the tenderer responds, negotiate, and make an offer with a contract in mind.
However, because a legally binding contract is not usually established until the tender
process has been completed and a tender has been accepted, an ITT is regarded as an initia l
formation towards a process contract (p. 6). This gives the ITT a quasi-legal characteristic.
In addition, the quasi-legal nature of ITT can be seen in the language used, which
usually contains terms and conditions, standard regulations and requirements that are typical
in prescriptive legal discourse. It is also promotional with the presence of peripheral features
like letterheads with company logos, company credentials, targeting the market and soliciting
genre, the tender notice does not strictly attempt to promote the company’s services or
product, but rather to promote the company by displaying its engagement with other
companies and that the company still exists and is thriving. In an analysis of university’s
recruitment posts or job advertisements, corporate and commodity advertising are combined,
allowing a mixture of policy and promotional discourse (Feng, 2019). Different communicative
functions such as promotional, informational, regulatory, instructive and relational are blended
Bhatia (1993) argues that the description and evaluation of a product or service in a
positive manner are the most used strategies in promotional discourse in advertising. The
tender notice can be seen to use four of Bhatia’s (2004) nine moves of advertisements, i.e.
letterhead with company logo, company credentials, targeting the market and soliciting a
response. For the semiotic element in the letterhead, the study followed Bateman’s (2009,
p. 1502) Genre and Multimodality model (GeM) which argues that “social practices are
seen as the context for the production of multimodal artefacts”. These artefacts are linked
to the rhetorical layer of the text and form a text-image (verbal-visual) relationship. This
means that a move or step may extend its communicative functions to a semiotic feature.
While advertisements can be informal, the tender notice leans more towards the language of
legality with its high degree of formality, its professionally exclusive nature and archival in
a sense that it relates to rights and obligations (Jackson 1995). Its quasi-legal status gives the
tender notice a prescriptive and descriptive communicative function and may also fall under
what is called substantive provisions, which is principally concerned with establishing legal
Apart from analysing the move structure of a genre, the linguistic features are also
analysed to distinguish the communicative purposes. The linguistic features and pragmatic
function of a particular text are essential as they also contribute to the communicative
function of a genre. For instance, a text that requires an action to be taken uses performative
utterances. Especially in prescriptive legal texts, “the legal performative is considered the
performative utterance is, in turn, the most straightforward class of speech acts” (Kurzon,
1986, p. 54). As tender notices require an action to be taken by the bidders, it follows the
prescriptive nature of legal texts. With legal requirements, prescriptive legal texts contain an
abundance of implicit performative classes, e.g. when regulating human behaviour, the
modal auxiliaries shall, may and must are intrinsically performative (Palmer, 2001).
Method
Data
Thirty tender notices or ITT were randomly selected by using an online search. They are
categorised under open tender which allows anyone to submit a tender to supply the goods
or services required, and offers an equal opportunity to any organisation to submit a tender.
The data consisted of an array of deliverables, e.g. construction, supplies and other services.
All the ITT belonged to Malaysian companies of which eleven are in the Malay language and
nineteen in English. Malay tender notices were included for the simple reason that genre exists
across languages and according to Hyland (2002, p. 2) “language is seen as embedded in (and
constitutive of) social realities since it is through recurrent use and typification of
conventionalised forms that individuals develop relationships, establish communities and get
things done”. Genres are the consequences of the action of discourse participants acting within
their specific contexts and who possess the awareness of existing generic types (Kress, 1989).
This study argues that such conventionalised rhetorical forms in tender notices are similarly
practised in both English and Malay tender notices. All tender notices were published by big
and small Malaysian companies from diverse backgrounds that include both private and
government agencies. Data collection was carried out until it reached a saturation point.
Analytical Procedure
Mix-method research was used in this study where the data analysis was done in two phases:
i) the qualitative analysis of tender notices to find move and steps was done by manually
annotating the data for moves and steps, ii) the quantitative analysis to find the frequency of
moves and steps in the data. In the first phase, the analysis followed Biber et al. (2007, p. 34)
in determining the genre’s rhetorical purpose, identifying and grouping functions in text
segments, refining the coding of moves with inter-rater reliability check and finally,
developing a protocol for moves and steps. Coding involved assigning attributes or categories (in
this case, labelling of move or step using gerunds to emphasize primary author agency) to specific,
meaningful units of analysis such as a sentence, phrase or word in the documents. These meaningful
units or segments must each contain at least one proposition. Following Moreno and Swales (2018)
segmentation protocol for moves and steps, the segments were interpreted based on the
communicative functions inferred from the sentences used and also by reference to linguist ic
clues from Bhatia’s (2004) move structure of advertisements and secondary literature on
tender. Clear-cut cases happen when a meaningful unit contains a particular single attribute or
proposition. However, in cases where embedding of several different new propositions occur
The study adopted Mayring’s (2002, p. 120) notion of evolutionary coding where
categories evolve from theoretical considerations into a full-fledged operational list based on
empirical data. Several revisions were made to the coding schema which was mainly about
deciding which segments that can be listed under a particular move, and thus becoming the
steps for that move. It was decided that if a segment contained related information to the
previous proposition in a move, then the segment was maintained as a step under that move
(for example, see Table 4.1 for the four steps for Move 7).
features that required the coding schema to be refined. Both features pertained to the generic
design and layout of the text. The first is the use of tables which Bateman (2009) termed as
layout unit, and the second is the letterhead (company logo combined with the name of the
company) which is a base unit. Most of the tender notices had 1 to 2 tables placed in the
centre of the document. The placement of such elements gives them more informational value
(Kress & van Leeuwen, 1996), and they are functionally motivated (Bateman, 2009). These
tables (a minimum of 1 to 4 rows with 2 to 8 columns) contained new, important but brief
information about the tender project, e.g. title of tender and tender number, tender
tender document and tender submission, time of selling tender document, tender
opening/closing date and location, qualification of tenderers and so forth. Each tender notice
may or may not have the same categories displayed in the table, and the arrangement of the
categories in the table was also different across texts. Following the tables are usually long
paragraphs and sentences which sometimes reiterate the same points from the tables. On
closer inspection, the sentences appeared to be the standard regulations to be followed by the
supplier.
Hence, the decision was made that since there were tables in the middle of the texts,
analysis of the texts began from the top centre where the letterhead is positioned, moving
down to the left and to the right repetitively till the end of the document. For the tables, the
analysis began from the left-most column to the right-most in order to derive the moves and
steps. This is in line with Bateman’s (2009) notion of text flow which is linear-interrupted
text, where diagrams, images, tables and such may occasionally interrupt text-flow, but the
two-dimensional space is not used to communicate additional meanings. For the second
element, which is the letterhead, the study categorised it under Establishing Credentials. This
is because a letterhead acts as the first introduction of a company’s image, distinguishing the
company from another (Holly, 2018). It also gives a good impression to the audience as it
The reputation of the company is heightened as the letterhead aids in adding authority
to the company's branding. Also, a letterhead is often used in all official correspondences
because it is considered a legal document. For the second phase of analysis, the moves and
steps were quantified for the frequency of occurrences. The study also consulted a
disciplinary expert from the industry to further understand and clarify the information in the
The move-step structure of the ITT is presented in Table 4.1. The study identified nine moves
in the data, highlighting six moves that are obligatory (present in 80% or more), two to be
usual (50–79% present) and one as optional (< 50%). Table 4.1 also displays the quantitative
results of the moves and steps (in percentages) found in the data. Tables 4.2 to 4.6 display the
moves and steps in the tender notices, along with examples taken from the data. The linguist ic
features that signal the moves and steps are marked in bold in order to highlight their usage.
The six obligatory moves form the core communicative functions of an Invitation to
Tender (see Table 4.1). The first obligatory move-step combination (M1s1, Establis hing
credentials - Display of letterhead) can be seen in the form of the company’s logo and name
signalled with either a coloured or monochrome image (see Table 4.2). With a 100%
occurrence, this is the most common and important attention-getting device practised by
companies issuing the tender notice. According to Longacre (1992), a letterhead serves to
identify the organisation that has sent out the document. Pragmatically, the indication of
the author is most likely to be given in the text when the necessity is high, in order to
demonstrate authority and impose rules on people (Dubroskaya, 2012), which is the case
for ITT. Move 1 contains another three steps, M1s2 (Stating the website of the company),
M1s3 (Stating company registration number) and M1s4 (Introducing the company). These
three steps are used mainly by private companies rather than government ones, probably due
to the need to impress the international crowd and show good reputation. The registrat i on
number of the company is signalled by a noun phrase Company no. and numerical digit s ,
e.g. 902884.
In M1s4, the writer introduces the company with a short yet impressive background
of the company and its core business. It usually states how the company began, signalled by
passive verbs like is established, was set by, is engaged in the exploration, development and
production operations for the Garraf Oil Field pursuant to…. These are the peripheral features
The second obligatory move (M2 Declaration of the document) (Table 4.2) refers to
the name of the genre itself, which can be varied, e.g. Tender Notice, Notice of Tender, Tender
Announcement, and Tender Offer. It is written in a matter of fact manner and clearly placed
at the top position of the ITT to announce the client’s intention. As stated by Dubroskaya
(2012, p. 303), notices are “not simply a linguistic accompaniment to the physical
environment: through language forms they construct our living environment, imposing
certain forms of social behaviour and inculcating particular values in the community”. The
third obligatory move (M3 Inviting the vendor) (93.7%) is where the writer or client tenders
are invited, and this is followed by Specifying the vendor (Step 1) accounting for 86.7% of
the total corpus. Along with the author, another important pragmatic element in genre analysis
is the recipient of the notice, i.e. somebody whose social behaviour is regulated by notices.
For this purpose to be achieved, addressees must be able to identify themselves as part of the
target audience (Durbroskaya, 2012). This move is signalled by the company inviting the
suppliers, using the performative verb invite, sometimes in the present tense invite prospective
constructions, Tenderers are invited from contractors…/ Tawaran adalah dipelawa … (Offers
are invited…).
Searle (1976) classifies invitations as directives, whose illocutionary point is that the
hearer does a future action which is tender submission. By initiating an invitation, the speaker
wants the hearer to supply the goods or services via tendering. This move is substantiated with
a step, Specifying the vendor in terms of qualifications (M3s1), signalled by the past tense
verb registered followed with the general qualifications of the tenderers, e.g. …contractors
registered with CIBD (Construction Industry Development Board) with specified grade and
category/ Ministry of Finance Malaysia under the relevant code and types of registration…
Specifying the exact vendor along with prerequisites from the beginning enables potential
vendors or suppliers to decide early on their eligibility status for the project and also sends a
stringent message on the kind of suppliers that are approved by procurement laws.
The regulation of potential suppliers begins early in the ITT with the exact specification
of the type of vendor. Contractors or tenderers are immediately narrowed down to what the
client requires. For government tenders, construction suppliers are mostly required to be
registered with the Malaysian Construction Industry Development Board (CIDB) which is a
national body established by an Act of Parliament (Act 38 of 2000) to oversee the sustainability
and growth of construction enterprises across the country. If the tender relates to technical
supplies, then the supplier must be registered with the Ministry of Finance. In short, the
tenderer must be Malaysian registered companies. However, ITT from private companies does
not state this specification as only contractors seeking to participate in public sector
infrastructure delivery must be registered. This can also be seen for the tender briefing where
conditions are not specified for the tenderer if the client is from the private sector.
1.
2.
M1s2: Stating the website of the company
1. https://www.petronas.com/join-us/be-our-partner/pcihby-tender
2. www.utar.edu.my
exploration, development and production operations for the Garraf Oil Field
pursuant to a Development and Production Service Contract (DPSC) with South
Oil Company of Republic of Iraq.
2. ECERDC is a statutory body established under the East Coast Economic Region
Development Act 2008 to implement all programs and initiatives identified under
East coast Economic Region Master Plan
1. NOTICE OF TENDER
2. TENDER ANNOUNCEMENT
1. PCIHBV, as the operator of the Garraf Oil Field, hereby invites prospective
bidders…
1. Tenderer(s) are invited from contractors registered with CIDB with specified
grade and category, which is still valid and are allowed to tender at the point of
tender with the following:
2. Tender are invited from the contractors registered with the Ministry of Finance
The fourth obligatory move Detailing vendor’s scope of work (M4) (100%), describes the goods
and services to be procured, the work involved, technical specifications or details relating to
requirements, deliverables or outcomes of the project (Rajpurohit, 2013). One obligatory step is
distinguished for this move, Stating tender number and title of project (M4s1). The tender notice
must have the tender number for easy reference and record purposes (see Table 4.3). Stating
of the service needed, is usually written following existing standards like upper case font, with
nouns that relate to putting something in place at a particular area, e.g. SUPPLY, DELIVERY,
EXPRESSWAY. The common nouns used are supply, delivery, installation, testing, construction,
the ITT include supplying computer servers, ballot boxes, loose furniture and interior design,
repair works, building offices, toll collection system, traffic surveillance system, signage,
transportation systems, security services, led lighting and fire extinguishers. The upper case title
is intended by the writer as a way to emphasise the specificity of the intended job scope that the
company requires from the supplier. This probably functions as a reminder to indicate that a
tender bid can fail if the vendor does not keep to the specifications.
In another step, Requirement on vendor qualifications (M4s2) (73.3%), the writer provides
extended requirements of the goods or services to be delivered and specific qualifications of the
vendor in terms performance history, licensing, magnitude of completed projects, technical and
financial capabilities and a high paid-up capital. M4s2 is signalled by nouns regarding the
supplier’s grade, category, license, certification, registration, code number and years of
experience (see Table 4.3). The common ones would be the grade, category and specialisation
of the supplier. These specifications are important in order for the vendor to understand his
company’s suitability and ability to manage the project, and increase the chances of getting a
1. TURNPIKE-SUKE-T-TCS-029
2. UiTM/B2/PR/SHR/B/1118/0052
Commission of Malaysia
2. CIDB
Grade: G5 and above
Category: B and/or CE
Specialization: B11 and/or
CE13
For Move 5 Instruction on tender briefing/ site inspection (70%), the vendor is instructed by
the client/company to attend a tender briefing, usually indicated by the noun phrase Tender Briefing/
Taklimat (see Table 4.4). The briefing is held before the tender submission is due. Three steps follow
this rhetorical move, Stating the time, date and venue of the briefing (M5s1) (60%), Indicating
compulsory attendance with conditions (M5s2) (50%) and Stating condition for tender briefing
(M5s3) (36.7%). The former is simply signalled by nouns, e.g. Date, Time, and Venue where venue
refers to the address where the briefing is conducted. For the latter step, compulsory attendance to the
diwajibkan menghadiri taklimat tender… The word mandatory, compulsory and diwajibkan is often
Tender briefings are usually indicated as compulsory in the tender notices that pertain to
construction and engineering. According to Zemaitis (2019), pre-tender briefings allow vendors or
suppliers to ask questions and get new information as some tender descriptions might be vague.
Vendors can also go for site inspection at the tender briefing in order to gauge the feasibility of the
project. Apart from that, there will be an opportunity to meet the competitors who are eyeing for the
same project, and vendors can, therefore, improve on their proposals. In M5s3, the conditions for the
attendee who comes to the briefing is also strictly regulated in terms of qualifications of the contractors.
Among the conditions found in the ITT were for suppliers or representatives to produce/present valid,
original, certified true copy of certificates from the governing agency, to have a minimum number of
representatives attending the briefing, and that the supplier will be disqualified if he failed to turn up
at the briefing (see Table 4.3). A possible reason for the stringent requirement on who can attend the
briefing is it allows the company or client to control the number of vendors attending the briefing and
ensures that those who attend are the resolute and competent ones who fulfil the briefing conditions,
e.g. The participation will not be considered if the interested company fails to attend the briefing
(example from ITT). This practice also saves time as the process of tender submission is rather
1. The project brief which provides details of the documentation fees and date of
purchase of the Tender Document will be distributed during the Project Briefing
Session
2. Tenderers are also requested to confirm their interest to attend the briefing
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If the scope of work suits the vendor or supplier, the tender document will be
purchased. In the next obligatory move Instruction for purchasing of the tender document
(M6) (100%), the terms and requirements are outlined to the vendor which involve four
obligatory steps: Stating time, date and venue of opening and closing date for document
purchase (M6s1) (100%); Stating the price of the document (M6s2) (83.3%); Specifying
methods of payment (M6s3) (86.7%); Stating additional requirements for tender purchase
(M6s4) (86.7%). In Move 6 (see Table 4.5), the vendors are required to buy the tender
document, and this is usually signalled by the performative modal verbs shall and will.
The modal verb shall is used as a directive in a conditional sentence, e.g. Tender documents
shall only be sold to tenderers who attend the briefing. For M6s1, specific expressions
used were on the date (day/month/year), time (during office hours from 8.30 am to 4.30
pm), and venue to purchase the document (address of the place PUTRAJAYA HOLDINGS
SDN BHD, Level B1, Menara PJH, No.2 Jalan Tun Abdul Razak, Precinct 2,
PUTRAJAYA). This is followed by M6s2, Stating the price of the document, which is
usually indicated by the currency of Malaysia (RM530 per copy, Ringgit Malaysia Four
e.g. must be in the form of + Bank Draft or Bankers Cheque or Payment shall be made
purchase the tender document, the client requires the tenderer to show proof of company
status via valid documents and proof of purchaser/representative status. For proof of
company status, a tenderer must give evidence on the status of his company, using valid
signalled by the verb phrase required to present + valid original and copy registration
certificates issued by + relevant authorities. The other proof is regarding the purchaser of
the document. Move 6 begins with what appeared to be clear instructions on purchasing
the tender document and later proceeds with the importance of the relationship between
the purchaser of the document and the person who attended the tender briefing. The person
who is going to be responsible for buying the tender document must attend the Briefing
session, e.g. Tender Documents shall only be sold to tenderer(s) who attended the briefing.
This is another way for the company to monitor the seriousness of the tenderer in taking
up the project, that is, through consistency. Besides, important information will not be lost
if the same tenderer attends to the whole tendering process and avoid having
representatives from his company to replace him. That is why the requirements of the
person attending the briefing need to be very competent, one who is experienced and senior
knowledge… and duly authorised by the company. The modal verbs will and should are
used to indicate the obligatory condition that needs to be followed by the representative to
purchase the tender document. This is a probable way to maintain the confidentiality of
1. The Tender documents will be displayed and made available for purchase
from the date, time and location specified in the above table.
2. Tender Documents shall only be sold to tenderer(s) who attended the briefing.
M6s1: Stating time, date and venue of opening and closing date for document purchase
1. In the form of Bank Draft or Bankers Cheque only under the name of
TURNPIKE SYNERGY SDN BHD
2. Payment shall be made through Bank Draft/ Money Order/ wang pos in
favour of Kumpulan Wang Suruhanjaya Pengangkutan Awam Darat.
Once a vendor responds to the tender notice, the next stage is the preparation and
submission of the response. This can be seen in the specifications and rules on submission,
which is the sixth obligatory move Instruction for submission of tender documents (M7) (90%)
signalled by the modal verb shall, should and must are directives that must be followed in
order to submit the tender, e.g. Completed Tender Document shall be submitted, the company
This move has four steps, although with only one obligatory step - Stating address,
venue, closing date and time for tender submission (M7s1), e.g. Venue of submission and
closing date and time; The closing date of the Tender is on 23rd November . Step 2 of this
move (Specifying mode for tender submission) (M7s2) is only a regular move with 63.3% of
occurrence in the whole corpus prescribing the mode for tender submission using modal verbs
shall, should, must and the mode of submission used is a sealed envelope that is marked
envelope/ should be submitted in separate sealed envelopes/ These envelopes must be marked
with../ Dokumen tender yang telah disempurnakan hendaklah dimeterai, ditulis nombor
rujukan tender di sebelah sudut kiri sampul surat (Completed tender documents must be
sealed, written with the tender reference number on the left corner of the envelop). The other
optional steps are M7s3 (Stating vendor’s responsibility for any incurred costs, 26.7%) used
the directive shall, e.g. (Tenderers shall bear all cost/shall be borne); and M7s4 (Indicating
condition for late submission, 33.3%) mainly used the modal will to show certainty that late
submissions will not be accepted or considered. Opening and closing dates are crucial as
organisations only offer and accept project tenders for a limited amount of time (Rajpurohit,
2013).
Towards the end of the ITT, companies usually provide some disclaimers (Move 8).
Move 8 Stating company disclaimer (70%), is used depending on the nature of the goods or
services needed. This move is usually signalled by the noun Tenderers/bidders + modal shall +
bear/be borne + all costs.../ will bear the… This move is also signalled by the proper noun The
issuing company + verb reserves the right/ is under no obligation/ not be liable/ is not bound/ does
not bind itself + to accept the lowest bidder/to award or not to award. In quasi-legal texts such
as certain contracts or municipal notices, disclaimers are used as a defensive measure, for the
purpose of protection from unwanted claims or liability (Williams, 2007). Modal verbs such
as will, shall and can are used to express the necessity of the action verbs. The word shall is
implementation is verified (Wheatcraft, 2012; Williams, 2007). The modal will is used to
indicate a statement of fact. It also shows the action that can or will be taken in the future. For
example, Tender documents will only be issued.... The word will show the future action of the
Secondly, imperatives are used to show commands, requests and demands. In tender
notices, imperatives are used to give a command to the supplier. An action must be taken in
order to bid in the services. For instance, the expression Tender applicants are required to…
indicate a command by the writer to the suppliers who are interested in bidding. The word
required indicates an action that should be taken in order to bid with the offers. Thirdly, the
performative verb invite in simple present and past tense indicates a polite tone to what is
mainly a prescriptive and formal genre with several discursive actions to be performed by the
tenderer/vendor. It is also noticed that there is minimal difference between the Malay and
English tender notices and the language features appear to be direct translations with each
other. This further strengthens the notion that genre is practised according to the typical norms
of the discourse community that uses it and language is merely the mode to convey similar
communicative functions.
Finally, Move 9 is one of the optional moves which is Soliciting response, typically
signalled by the noun phrase further enquiries/any queries + please contact + person’s
name /email/ phone number. An ITT may have information that is not so clear to the
recipient. Hence, further elaboration can be provided when the writer provides contact
details for the tenderer to use. As stated by Diah Kristina et al. (2017, p. 431), the function
of this final move is to prompt future tenderer’s response “through a follow-up contact for
a future mutual benefiting cooperation.” Since this move is optional, it may or may not be
included in the ITT. Its absence may indicate the established reputation of the company and
M7s1: Stating address, venue, closing date and time, for tender submission
1. The closing date of the Tender is on 23th November 2017 at 12.00 noon.
2. All expenses incurred relating to the preparation and submission of this exercise
shall be borne by the respective participating bidder.
1. Submission of bid after the closing date and time will not be accepted.
2. Late submissions will not be considered
1. The Landowner reserves the right not to accept the highest offer or any offer
2. The ECER Development Council is not bound to accept the lowest or any
tender.
2. Any queries pertaining to this tender shall be in writing and faxed to 03-2095
The discussion above has shown how writers from government and private companies
produced the rhetorical features of a typical ITT published in Malaysia. Although the selection
of ITT is limited to Malaysia and that the data covered various kinds of request for services
and supplies, the typification of rhetorical action (Berkenkotter & Huckin, 1995) of this quasi-
legal genre can still be captured in the analysis. The particular practices of the experts in the
related field have influenced the structural make-up of the ITT where according to Miller
(1984), a genre is a form of social action and a response to a social need of the situation. The
quasi-legal nature of ITT dictates and prescribes the recipients on the terms and conditions to
be adhered to in order to guide the recipient towards submission of the tender bid of the project.
The ITT is a necessary antecedent (Swales, 2004) to another genre which can be a tender
submission and so forth. This is in line with Wood and Fitzalan’s (2015) claim that the ITT
genre arose due to a need of the company to procure some services which initiated an invitation
From the structure of the ITT, the stages or step by step process reflect the recipient’s
discursive practices which most probably begin with the decision on whether the recipient can
provide what the client needs and want to participate in the tendering process. This proceeds
to a matching of the tender’s requirements with the supplier’s company status, and finally to
respond to the ITT either by giving a call to attend the tender briefing and so forth. For the
recipient, the goal-oriented purposeful activity of ITT is to prepare and secure the tender, sign
the contract between both parties and execute the service (Wood & Fitzalan, 2015). For the
sender or company, the ITT is a form of regulation on how to procure supplies and services in
a controlled, transparent and ethical way. Hence, the purpose-related rationale gives rise to the
While this study has investigated the traditional mode of ITT as advertised in the
newspapers, a new form of ITT has emerged a few years back via internet websites.
Technology, economy and user preferences have affected the fluidity, dynamic nature of genre
and produced new forms of genre (Swales, 1990). As mentioned in the literature, the unethical
practices in the procurement procedure in Malaysia have changed the social landscape of
tendering to an online-based procurement system. Adham and Chamchuri (2012, p.1631) stated
that “The Malaysian Government has aggressively taken up efforts in transforming its
government procurement system to ensure the best value for money and reduce corrupt
practices”. The E-procurement system has enabled most government agencies to publish their
(Perbadanan Kemajuan Negeri Selangor), JPJ (Road Transport Department) e-bid, to name a
few. In some of the government websites, the traditional layout and structure of an ITT are no
longer available, unless the website provides the downloadable pdf file of the ITT. The long
sentences in the moves analysed previously have been replaced with a point-form format where
the information is slotted into a table format. Among the different features are the letterhead as
that is not needed anymore since we are already accessing the particular agency’s website,
tender documents can be purchased online now but only if one has attended the briefing, and
any registration that needs to be done by the tenderer can be performed online with the required
Conclusion
The advent of e-commerce and IT infrastructure have changed the way certain genres
are written and executed by the sender to the receiver. It has also adapted to the way the
audience read online. Long-winded and packed information is no longer compatible with those
hit and run, skim and scan readers nowadays. This can be seen in the truncated style of new
ITT in e-commerce websites where one can see a gradual phasing out of the linear structure
be placed using links and in a non-linear format. Readers can skim and scan from one page to
another for the information they are more interested in rather than reading methodically in a
prescribed sequence. A question that arises is how ITT writers maintain the communicative
functions of the genre where the main propositions may change due to hypertext discourse.
According to Santaella (2014, p. 218), in the hypertext world, the concepts of writing and text
suffer considerable changes as “cyberspace appropriates and mixes, without limitation, all pre-
existing systems of signs and genres”. In light of what has been said, one would have to return
to the idea that genres are constantly evolving and they are sites of contention between stability
and change (Swales, 1990; Berkenkotter & Huckin, 1995). As long as the discourse community
maintains the discursive practices involved in the tendering process, the ITT genre may still
Studies similar to this can also be done on ITT from other countries. Professional or
specialised genres like the tender notice are mostly learnt in the curriculum of civil engineering
(Hosny, Ibrahim & El-Malt, 2019; Hossam, Ibrahim & El-Malt, 2019) and business law degrees,
but it has never received its fair share of research in the linguistic world. By analysing the move
structures of this genre, one can understand how the rhetorical organisation of the ITT specifies
the needs of the clients and regulates the actions of the recipients. Moreover, the genre-mixing
quality of ITT realises the intentional pragmatic function of the text itself. Although there is a
slight influence of promotional element, this quasi-legal text leans more towards regulation
and requirement in the tender process. Since genre analysis of tender notice has never been
researched, this study provides a stepping stone for future researchers by providing them with
Acknowledgements
We would like to thank Bikash Chandra Taly, Muataaz Riyadh Khalil and Fawziah Faez
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