Rockets LLC.

Review
16 November 2022
17:59

Plan
 First Paragraph
o Talk about what Rockets LLC. intends to do with the island
 They are making a large family resort that will divide the
island into four quadrants and establish a public
transportation network
o Provide background information on the acquisition of the island -
mention how they bought Theodopolopodos from Shootit, Baggit
and Runn inc.
o End the paragraph with a citizens opinion on it
 Second Paragraph
o Include Statistics about the island and the resort
 How big is it?
 How long will the construction take?
 What is going to be included in this resort?
 What are the downsides?
 Will this affect the locals?
 Is the resort open to everyone and will it cater to all people?
o Give a sense of scale, don't just mention the statistic
 'Almost as big as London
 'The same height as [important building e.g. Shard or
Victoria Tower]'
o End with another citizens opinion, or an explanation from a Rocket
LLC. representative
 Third Paragraph
o Talk about the cons of the resort
o Get a quote from a citizen on what might be wrong with it
o Talk about all the cons
 Is it non-inclusive?
 Is it too expensive?
 Are the things they offer not live up to expectations?
 Who might it not appeal to?
 What are the issues that you don't like?
o Finish with a quote from a representative on how they plan to fix
these issues
o Add a citizens concern on the construction
o Mention how the company says they will expand/combat problems
in the future
o End with a quote from a civilian
 Fourth Paragraph
o Talk about the future of Rockets LLC.
 How might it expand?
 Will there be issues for their infrastructure in the future?
 Could there be problems that arise that they didn't plan for?
 Does it pose a threat to the residents?
  Conclusion
o Be concise
o Have a clear point on what you think about the resort
o Compare your opinion with the unobjective facts about the resort
 'I didn't like the fish, but the fish was very fresh'
 'The rooms didn't appeal to my taste, however the rooms
were very expensive and worth the price'
o Finish with your final opinion on it in one sentence

Review

Rockets LLC. is the most recent owner of Theodopolopodos, an Aegean island

that had previously been the home of the company; Shootit, Baggit and Runn.
So far the company has only made claims as to what will be developed. They
have gone on record to say they plan to make an island resort that will be
perfect as a 'family getaway for the summer'. The resort itself will be split up
into four quadrants, each having one purpose. The plans currently available to
the public show: a business sector for people that either work on the island or
need to work on holiday; an entertainment sector that will include bowling, VR,
go-karting and other such activities; a dedicated nature reserve for a rare
species of puffin; and finally a residence sector which will contain new purpose-
built villas and apartments as well as the indigenous village. We decided to ask
a local Theodopolosian what they had to say about the creation of an island
resort directly adjacent to where they live.

"I honestly don't know too much about this company, but they have promised
not to intrude on us, which is a good sign. I really hope they keep their
promise. Overall I'm not all too bothered by them; they seem to know what we
want and claim they'll make sure we get it."

Overall the first part of the review is overall positive. Slightly

apprehensive
Authority is good
Humour is rare but this is the first paragraph
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