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Project 2 Critique Essay

Kaung Myat Htet

Centennial College

COMM171-017

Glenn White

31 July, 2023
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Project 2 Critique Essay

Have you ever imagined about buying an electric vehicle makes you feel helping the
world greener but facing problems with charging it? There are a lot of people in Canada who
owns electric vehicles and having problems with charging it because the charging stations are
significantly lesser than the vehicles. “Not again. All the electric vehicle charging stations were
taken, and I knew I was in for at least a 30- to 40-minute wait. And yet, the app on my phone
showed two chargers had been available five minutes ago.” (Hara,2023, Para1) Hara stated her
experience that she was happy about making a decision to buy an electric vehicle in the first
year, but in the second year, life is not smooth as expected. Hara’s narrative is relevant and
underscores the importance of addressing this issue to support the widespread adoption of
EVs, which aligns with current efforts by governments, businesses, and communities to develop
robust charging networks.
In “I love my electric car but I didn't realize my life would revolve around charging it” article,
Hara shares her journey of embracing electric vehicle (EV) ownership and the challenges she
faced in accessing charging infrastructure. Despite initial excitement and the hope of installing
EV chargers in her condo, the proposal was rejected due to concerns about cost and equity. The
author reflects on missed opportunities to share her story and advocate for sustainable
transportation at a crucial meeting. However, she remains passionate about EVs and expresses
a desire for easier access to charging stations. She highlights the importance of individual
actions, engagement with local communities, and continued support for promoting EV adoption
and a greener future.
The author effectively conveys her personal journey and experiences with EV ownership in a
relatable and authentic manner. Through her storytelling, Hara successfully portrays the
frustrations and challenges faced by many EV owners in accessing charging infrastructure. The
article's personal perspective allows readers to empathize with the author's passion for
sustainability and understand the significance of addressing the infrastructure gaps hindering
the widespread adoption of EVs. By sharing her story, the author brings attention to the
importance of accessible charging infrastructure and encourages readers to consider the
environmental impact of their transportation choices.
While the personal narrative in this article effectively conveys the frustrations and
challenges of accessing EV charging infrastructure, it lacks a comprehensive exploration of
alternative perspectives. The article primarily focuses on the author's experiences and desires,
which limits the overall depth of the discussion. It would have been valuable to include
interviews or viewpoints from individuals who hold contrasting opinions, such as those
concerned about the cost or feasibility of installing electric vehicle chargers in condominiums.
By incorporating diverse perspectives, the article could have provided a more balanced and
nuanced understanding of the issue. The article could be improved by providing more specific
information about the challenges of finding a place to charge an EV in Vancouver. The author
mentions that she often has to wait in line for a spot at a public charging station. However, it
would be helpful to know how long the wait typically is and how often the author experiences
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this issue. Also the same thing in providing about the cost of electricity in Vancouver. The
author mentions that the cost of electricity is relatively high, but it would be helpful to know
how much more expensive it is than the cost of gasoline. These specific information are not
that essential to know but when they are contrasted, it effectively draws readers attention in
addressing the issue.
The article effectively conveys the author's passion for EV ownership and hertheir
commitment to sustainability, but it could benefit from a stronger emphasis on the broader
societal benefits of transitioning to electric vehicles. While personal anecdotes and experiences
are valuable, the article missed an opportunity to present a more robust case for the
environmental advantages and positive impacts of widespread EV adoption. By incorporating
data and research on reduced greenhouse gas emissions, air pollution mitigation, and energy
independence, the article could have made a more compelling argument for the importance of
supporting EV infrastructure. Providing a more evidence-based perspective would have
strengthened the article's impact and relevance to a wider audience concerned about climate
change and the urgent need for sustainable transportation solutions.
(Hara,2023, Para 9,10) The perspective of Hara in the strata council, presents a valid
concern about the financial burden that may be imposed on residents. While the article
advocates for sustainable transportation and accessible charging infrastructure, it could benefit
from further exploring the economic impact of such initiatives. Hara's viewpoint sheds light on
the potential cost implications of implementing EV chargers, not just for affluent EV owners but
for the entire community. Without addressing this perspective, the article may come across as
one-sided, failing to acknowledge the need for inclusive decision-making that considers the
interests and financial capacities of all residents. A more balanced approach would have
examined potential strategies to mitigate the financial burden, such as exploring funding
opportunities, or incentives provided by local governments. Overall, the article “I love my
electric car but I didn't realize my life would revolve around charging it " is a valuable resource
for anyone considering buying an electric vehicle in Vancouver. Hara provides a clear and
concise overview of the challenges involved, and she raises some important points about the
current status of electric vehicle infrastructure in Vancouver.
Hara’s Article is important because narrative contributes to raising public awareness about
the challenges faced by EV owners and the need for supportive infrastructure. Does this
narrative relevant with other EV owners who are hardly charging their cars? Hara’s article
shows that we can collectively pave the way for a greener and more sustainable tomorrow by
addressing the hurdles faced by EV owners and promoting widespread access to charging
infrastructure.
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References

Katie Derosa, (2023, April 19). EV drivers face gaps when it comes to charging up along B.C.
highways. VANCOUVER SUN.
https://vancouversun.com/news/local-news/ev-drivers-face-major-gaps-when-it-comes-to-
charging-up

Calvillo Christian F., Turner Karen, (2020). Analysing the impacts of a large-scale EV rollout in

the UK – How can we better inform environmental and climate policy? Ene

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Akiko Hara, (2023, May 31). I love my electric car but I didn't realize my life would revolve

around charging it

https://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/first-person-electric-car-1.6858857

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