Topic: Many countries are in danger of losing their
cultural identity on account of globalization. Discuss
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this problem and say what could be done to avoid
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Globalization is a phenomenon that has been
popularized widely in our world, which leads to an
urgent issue of losing the traditions of many
countries. The problem can include misled
developments of the young generation, lacking
preserving customs,... due to the idea of following
the changes of foreign countries. (=> câu này thừa)
Fortunately, there are solutions that can be done to
solve these problems by governments, companies,
and even citizens. (=> ko cần chi tiết các đối tượng
thực hiện trong phần mở bài) Both problems and
0 / 3 Mai Bích Thụy solutions will be clarified in this essay.
In the world of today, many countries are at risk of
losing their cultural identity due to globalization. This
essay will discuss (=> chưa rõ là discuss problems
or solutions) and propose some possible solutions
0 / 3 Nguyễn DIệu Thảo to avoid this problem.
Today, the more society develops, the more
globalization occurs in countries. This has led to the
Firstly, globalization can cause problems that affect
loss of cultural identities of many countries. In this
cultural identities and even diminish them.
essay, I will discuss this problem and offer solutions
0 / 3 Hoàng Yến Chi to avoid this.
These days, as a consequence of globalization's
increasing considerably, many nations are at the
risk of losing their cultural identity. This essy will
discuss the main causes (=> nhầm yêu cầu) and
also propose some possible solutions to prevent
0 / 3 Đỗ Trần Bảo Thy this phenomena.
Various nations across the world are facing the risk
of losing their cultural identity due to globalization.
As far as I'm concerned, there are many different
reasons for this phenomenon (=> lạc đề) and
therefore certain methods need to be done in order
0 / 3 Đặng Vũ Minh Đức to reduce its influence.
Due to worldwide integration, the cultural
uniqueness of many nations is now on the verge of
vanishing. In this essay, I would discuss this issue
0 / 3 Nguyễn Hà Anh and outline several ways to prevent it.
In this day and age, many people are increasingly
concerned about the situation that many countries
at risk of losing their cultural identity due to global
integration. This essay will discuss the problem
associated with this situation and propose some
0 / 3 Nguyễn Hà Nam possible solutions to avoid .
In this day and age, many countries in all over the
world are about to lose their national character(=>
ko chính xác) due to the internationalize (=> sai
dạng từ) And (=> ko dùng đầu câu) this has
resulted in serious problems such as: the economy
will be passively influenced, decrease religion, and
become a colony. (=> ko dùng mệnh đề sau such
as) But (=> ko dùng đầu câu) there’re (=> ko viết
tắt) also some actions from goverment, parents, and
0 / 3 Trần Hà Anh companies that can solve these problems.
Nowadays, as a consequence of globalization,
many countries are facing the trouble of cultural
assimilation. This essay will go through the main
problems result from this phenomenon and present
0 / 3 Bùi Thị Minh Anh some possible solutions.
The first topic sentence (body paragraph 1) The first topic sentence (body paragraph 2)
Globalization is actually a positive change, sadly, if
Prompt ideas to solve these problems are
not responded to the right way, several problems
required, first from the government.
around losing cultures would appear.
Globalization gives people the chance to learn and
explore the cultural identity of other countries but it
However, people can avoid this problem with
causes people to gradually change their traditional
some possible solutions.
culture and even have a negative view of them. (=>
ko rõ)
Secondly, to avoid that, people needs to have
solutions that are suitable for each country. (=>
thay cách diễn đạt vì cấu trúc câu giống văn nói)
Another problems to concerned is there is
Fistly, one of the main reason for globalization is
mounting evidence that a large number of
considered as the threat to national's indentities is
minority languages are on the verge of extinction
that it can led to the dominance of certain lifestyles
as people prefer to transaction businesses and
and fashion trends, including eating habits. (=> lạc
communicate in widely used common tongues
đề)
like English or Spanish. (=> lạc đề)
In order to keep our cultural identity unique, there
First of all, let us take a look at the root causes of
are some simple but effective solutions which
what adverse effects globalization has on a
can be done to prevent losing our cultural
country's cultural identity. (=> lạc đề)
identity.
First, it is obvious that the disappearance of many Second, there are a number of actions people
societal features on the ground of globalization is a can take to keep their country clear of losing the
broad issue and this could bring a lot of adverse cultural characteristics during the globalizing
impacts on these countries. process.
When it comes to solutions to these problems,
Two most outstanding problems are language using a neutral language and renting or
conflict and excessive consumerism borrowing instead of buying (=> chưa rõ) are
some reasonable ones.
One of the first problems of those are the losing the Another important problem is that the countries
religion which residents can obey to not decrease will become a colony. (ko cần, mà cần noi đến
cultural identity. (ko rõ ý) solutions)
That many countries are in danger of losing their
Actions must be taken right away (=> thay từ) to
cultural distinctiveness has serious influences on
prevent these problems from being worse.
the world's cultural diversity.
 Topic: Many countries are in danger of losing their
cultural identity on account of globalization. Discuss
The first topic sentence (body paragraph 1) The first topic sentence (body paragraph 2)
this problem and say what could be done to avoid
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Globalization, the process of increasing
interconnectedness and integration of economies,
societies, and cultures, has brought many benefits
The spread of Western culture through
to the world. However, it has also led to the
globalization is facilitated by the influence of mass To avoid losing cultural identity, it is essential to
homogenization of culture, as the dominant cultures
media, the Internet, and the spread of international take deliberate measures to preserve and
of the Western world are often spread to other
brands. (=> đây ko phải là câu mở đoạn vì nó quá promote cultural heritage.
countries, leading to the erosion of local cultures.
chi tiết và là 1 dữ liệu thực tế)
This has resulted in many countries losing their
cultural identity, which is a serious problem that
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