Introduction to Esports: Task 3 – Esports

Internationally
Peer Feedback Form
Overall rate the student’s presentation based on the following criteria
Comment on each
YOUR NAME: Zak O’Loughlin

STUDENTS PRESENTING: Josh, Xander, Antonia

COUNTRY: Japan

RATING OUT
0 OF 10: 5/10

Verbal presentation: Clearly spoken but they were directly reading from there slides which
made them stutter a lot.

Presenter engagement: They were looking at the slides more than the camera which made it
feel less engaging than it should have.

Quality of slides: The presentation was great thanks to the images and the transitions but
they were very text heavy.
 Pacing and timing of presentation: The pacing was rushed but overall, it allowed the
information to be brought across to the audience. The timing between speakers made it feel
as though it flowed well but that flow was kind of ruined by the reading of the titles on each
slide.

Clarity of information: The information was perfect just a lot to take in.

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