Braybrook College

Student Report
2023 - Semester One

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Teachers
Ms Deborah McCORMACK
Mr Michael NGUYEN
Ms Christina PSEVDOS
Mr Barry SCHEELE
Ms Sylvia TE'O
Mr Chris THEAKER
Mr Nghia TRUONG

Included Subjects:
9 CAREER EDUCATION

9 ENGLISH

9 HUMANITIES

9 LAW

9 MATHEMATICS

9 SCIENCE

9 SPORT EDUCATION
 PARENT ADVICE
YEAR 7 - 10 REPORTS

The Year 7-10 reports are designed to meet the guidelines for reporting by Victorian Schools. The Victorian Curriculum outlines
what is important for students to learn as they progress in their learning from Prep to Year 10. It includes Achievement Standards which provide a common state-wide scale
against which student progress can be assessed.

Students achieve the standards by successfully completing a wide range of learning and assessment activities. The activities for assessment vary in different subject areas
and may include written tasks and tests but also performance in practical tasks.

Parents should note that the curriculum is designed for students to be working at the ‘Expected level of achievement’. While working at the ‘Expected level’ students may
achieve a range of results from ‘Satisfactory’ through to ‘Excellent’. They do not have to be achieving above the ‘Expected level’ to be doing well. Students learn at different
rates and a lower result does not mean that they are not trying hard or doing their best.

For students who are studying English as an Additional Language (EAL), the Victorian Curriculum EAL Pathways Strand shows their development. Students progress from
Stage 1 to Stage 4 as they develop their English language skills.

PASS / FAIL POLICY

The College expectation is that students will work consistently in class and attempt all set work.
At Year 7 to 10, an overall pass is determined by a student’s effort in class, reported in the ‘Work Habits’ section, together with their results in the ‘Course
Requirements/Assessment Tasks’ section of the report.

COURSE REQUIREMENTS / ASSESSMENT TASKS

VCE REPORTS

To get a satisfactory result at the VCE level, the College requires students to:
• Meet the Outcomes to a satisfactory level
• Complete all the work listed by the classroom teacher
• Have satisfactory attendance

Course requirements and Assessment tasks will be awarded letter grades ranging from A+ to E, ‘S’ (Satisfactory) or ‘N’ (Not Satisfactory). In VCE, an ‘S’ result is given for
assessed work that is submitted after the due date and without an approved extension. Work that does not meet the minimum requirements will be given an ‘N’ result.

In VCE, ‘NA’ is used where a student is unable to be assessed because they are a recent enrolment or have not attended due to an extended approved absence and cannot
reasonably be expected to have caught up on the task.

NOTE: Year 12 results are subject to change due to VCAA verification and moderation processes. This means that the results given by teachers may change and therefore
should only be taken as an indication of the level of performance at this stage of the year.

VCE (Vocational Major) REPORTS

Course requirements and Assessment tasks will be awarded ‘S’ or ‘N’.

‘S’ - indicates Satisfactory
‘N’ - indicates Not Satisfactory

In VCE (VM), ‘NA’ is used where a student is unable to be assessed because they are a recent enrolment or have not attended due to an extended approved absence and
cannot reasonably be expected to have caught up on the task.

VICTORIAN PATHWAYS CERTIFICATE (VPC) REPORTS

Course requirements and Assessment tasks will be awarded ‘S’ or ‘N’.

‘S’ - indicates Satisfactory
‘N’ - indicates Not Satisfactory

VET (Vocational Education and Training) REPORTS

An official certificate of attainment is issued to each student from the relevant Registered Training Organisation (RTO).
Course requirements and Assessment tasks will be awarded ‘Competent’ or ‘Not Yet Competent'
 Victorian Curriculum
Eren (Eren) MUSTAFA 9F MUS0027
Braybrook College - 2023 - Semester One

Victorian Curriculum

Level 7 Level 8 Level 9 Level 10 Beyond Level 10

English

Reading and Viewing

Speaking and Listening

Writing

Health and Physical Education

Health Education

Physical Education

Mathematics

Measurement and Geometry

Number and Algebra

Statistics and Probability

Science

Science

The Humanities

Civics and Citizenship

Economics and Business

History

Legend
Previous result, x months ago

Your child's achievement this semester

Your child's progress

The expected level of achievement

 9 CAREER EDUCATION
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Teacher: Mr Barry SCHEELE
Braybrook College - 2023 - Semester One

Career Education is designed to assist students in making informed decisions on how to access the job market. Students are taught how to identify
the employability skills in the tasks they undertake. The subject covers resume writing, interview techniques, job searches and exploring career
pathways.

Semester Result Overall Result S

Work Habits

Not Satisfactory Satisfactory Good Very Good Excellent

Effort in class

Behaviour in class

Homework

Knowledge and Skills Development

Not Low Medium High Very High

Satisfactory

Demonstrating an understanding of employability

skills and their relevance to the workforce ✓
Investigating pathways to further education,
training and employment ✓
Understanding current and future trends in the
labour market ✓

Assessment Tasks

Career Investigation Assignment A

Research Activities A

Workbook – Completion of Class Tasks A

General Comments/Areas for Improvement

Eren has completed an excellent semester’s work in Career Education. Most tasks were completed to a high degree of accuracy and knowledge.
His job investigation assignments and case studies clearly demonstrated the ability to source and present relevant information. He completed a
range of job seeking tasks highlighting a solid depth of skills and knowledge in this area.
Suggested strategies for improvement include acting on teacher feedback and continuing to work to capacity to maintain this excellent standard of
work.
 9 ENGLISH
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Teacher: Ms Christina PSEVDOS
Braybrook College - 2023 - Semester One

Year 9 English seeks to develop the skills of reading and viewing, writing, speaking, listening and understanding the English language. It aims to
expand awareness of the possibilities of language and encourage reading for pleasure, understanding and enrichment. Emphasis will be placed on
the stimulation of a more complex response to a range of literary and informative texts.

Semester Result Overall Result S

Work Habits

Not Satisfactory Satisfactory Good Very Good Excellent

Effort in class

Behaviour in class

Homework

Knowledge and Skills Development

Not Low Medium High Very High

Satisfactory

Justifying views on texts ✓

Using persuasive language ✓
Writing for particular audiences and purposes ✓
Using accurate expression and conventions ✓
Using effective speaking and listening skills ✓
Developing independent study habits ✓
Reflecting on values in texts and society ✓

Course Requirement / Assessment Task

Narrative Writing B

Persuasive Writing A

Text Study C

Course Work A

General Comments/Areas for Improvement

Eren has made consistent effort in English this Semester. He has successfully completed all necessary Outcomes and Coursework. Eren's
Narrative Writing Task followed taught structures to craft an interesting plot, but he needs to focus on correctly incorporating character dialogue. His
Persuasive Writing Task utilised many persuasive devices and conveyed well researched ideas. He also effectively appealed to his audience for
greatest effect. Finally, Eren's Text Response Essay depicted thorough knowledge of the text but required more careful analysis of filmic elements.
Generally, Eren needs to proof read his work for punctuation, but I commend him on his enthusiasm to the subject.
 9 HUMANITIES
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Teacher: Ms Deborah McCORMACK
Braybrook College - 2023 - Semester One

Students investigate the causes and effect of the Industrial Revolution. Students also study the movement of people between Britain and Australia.
This includes a focus on convicts and migrants, and how European settlement and Indigenous resistance shaped 19th century Australia. Students
also study an overview of World War One.

Semester Result Overall Result S

Work Habits

Not Satisfactory Satisfactory Good Very Good Excellent

Effort in class

Behaviour in class

Homework

Knowledge and Skills Development

Not Low Medium High Very High

Satisfactory

Analysing how colonisation affects intercultural

relationships in Australia today ✓
Understanding different perspectives and cause
and effect ✓
Evaluating information to draw conclusions about
past events ✓
Explaining motives and actions of people at the
time ✓
Critically analysing primary and secondary
sources ✓

Developing opinions based on historical evidence ✓

Publishing ideas and information and using the
internet for research ✓

Assessment Tasks

Workbook C

History Essay C

Oral Presentation B

Document Study D

General Comments/Areas for Improvement

The final major assessment task was a historical essay exploring the causes and consequences of the British colonisation of Australia. The required
essay structure was the TEEL format, which Eren followed reasonably well. However, the essay contained some inaccurate historical references
and Eren did not use appropriate in-text citation when using a quote. Although Eren needs to take more comprehensive notes, tasks completed in
the workbook illustrated a steady progression in the understanding of key history concepts and the development of skills required in the study of
history.
 9 LAW
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Teacher: Ms Sylvia TE'O
Braybrook College - 2023 - Semester One

Law is the study of Australia’s legal system including; government and democracy, laws and citizens, rights and responsibilities. Students are
required to complete research tasks, oral presentations and class work.

Semester Result Overall Result S

Work Habits

Not Satisfactory Satisfactory Good Very Good Excellent

Effort in class

Behaviour

Homework

Knowledge and Skills Development

Not Low Medium High Very High

Satisfactory

Discussing the role and operation of the

Australian Government; including elections, ✓
policies and law making

Understanding Civil Law; including purpose, main

torts and remedies ✓
Understanding Criminal Law; including purpose,
categories of crime and sanctions ✓
Discussing the key principles of Australia’s justice
system; including Police Powers, the Victorian ✓
Court system and sanctions

Explaining the rights and responsibilities of young

people ✓

Assessment Tasks

Civil Case Studies C

Criminal Law Project B

Workbook B

Unit Tests B

General Comments/Areas for Improvement

Eren has worked very hard this semester to achieve very good results in Law. Eren worked consistently well to complete most tasks to a
commendable standard and has demonstrated a thorough understanding of the topics covered. He actively participates in all class discussions and
activities. To improve further, Eren should continue to revise all subject materials frequently and make every effort to catch up on any work he may
have missed.
 9 MATHEMATICS
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Teacher: Mr Nghia TRUONG
Braybrook College - 2023 - Semester One

This semester the subject involves the study of the following topics: indices, algebra, financial maths, probability, Pythagoras’ Theorem and
measurement. Students are required to complete extended response questions, class work and homework.

Semester Result Overall Result S

Work Habits

Not Satisfactory Satisfactory Good Very Good Excellent

Effort in class

Behaviour in class

Homework

Knowledge and Skills Development

Not Low Medium High Very High

Satisfactory

Applying prior knowledge to new contexts ✓

Using new knowledge to solve routine problems ✓
Applying knowledge to solve more difficult
problems ✓

Setting out problems and solutions correctly ✓

Using a variety of representations to express
ideas and information ✓

Maintaining an organised and complete workbook ✓

Assessment Tasks

Indices Test A

Algebra Test B

Financial Mathematics Test D

Probability Test D

Pythagoras Theorem Test A

Extended Response Questions B

General Comments/Areas for Improvement

Eren has worked very well this semester. He works well with other students to understand new concepts and this effort is reflected on his test
results. He has a good attitude to Mathematics and completes his work in class as well as his homework. The next step for Eren is to continue to
extend himself by working on extension questions to deepen his understanding.
 9 SCIENCE
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Teacher: Mr Michael NGUYEN
Braybrook College - 2023 - Semester One

Students explore the atom in depth and study how it is affected by nuclear decay. They learn the concept of conservation of matter by balancing
chemical equations and investigating chemical reactions of acids and bases. Students learn how to differentiate between endothermic and
exothermic reactions, and they explore interdependencies between biotic and abiotic components of an ecosystem.

Semester Result Overall Result S

Work Habits

Not Satisfactory Satisfactory Good Very Good Excellent

Effort in class

Behaviour in class

Homework

Knowledge and Skills Development

Not Low Medium High Very High

Satisfactory

Demonstrating theoretical knowledge and

understanding ✓
Demonstrating scientific understanding in the
form of practical investigations ✓
Demonstrating independent learning and time
management skills ✓
Demonstrating a range of strategies to represent
ideas and explain thinking processes ✓
Synthesising information from multiple sources to
demonstrate own understanding ✓

Assessment Tasks

Acids and Bases Scientific Poster B

Practical Reports A

Topic Tests B

Workbook A

General Comments/Areas for Improvement

Eren has shown considerable interest in Science this semester. He has made a very good effort to ensure all set classwork, homework, and project
work is completed. To improve his test results, Eren needs to revise periodically throughout the topic and seek advice on complex concepts.
 9 SPORT EDUCATION
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Teacher: Mr Chris THEAKER
Braybrook College - 2023 - Semester One

Sport Education aims to increase students' knowledge and skills in a range of sports. During practical classes students will develop their physical
skills while applying knowledge and strategies learnt during theory classes. Students will take an active role in officiating, refereeing/umpiring
games. Students will be required to complete a practical presentation of a chosen sport.

Semester Result Overall Result S

Work Habits

Not Satisfactory Satisfactory Good Very Good Excellent

Effort in class

Behaviour in class

Knowledge and Skills Development

Not Low Medium High Very High

Satisfactory

Developing skills in Badminton, Netball and

Hockey ✓
Negotiating roles and delegating tasks within a
team environment ✓
Evaluating theoretical and strategic knowledge in
Badminton, Netball and Hockey ✓
Understanding of ancient and modern Olympic
Games ✓

Course Requirements / Assessment Tasks

Practical Participation A

Facilitating a Practical Class C

Workbook A

Origin of Sport Presentation B

General Comments / Areas for Improvement

Eren has completed a successful semester’s work in Sport Education, completing both theoretical and practical work enthusiastically. He has
displayed a high level of knowledge and understanding of the key ideas covered. Eren was able to present information clearly and accurately to the
class on his chosen sport, while his practical presentation was well planned and organised, showing good initiative. Suggested strategies for
continued progress and improvement include seeking teacher assistance when needed and responding to feedback.