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- contents: OK, related information
- words and grammar: simple,
because good phrases (one of, the other),
grammar errors

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they're
- organization: full form
- contents: OK, related
information
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grammar errors, repeated words
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- contents: related, interesting
information
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- contents: related information
- words and grammar: simple, grammar
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close phrase