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Writing Exercise2B - Mendenueta
Writing Exercise2B - Mendenueta
AW100
Communities all over the world face various challenges that require urgent attention from
local and national governments. These challenges range from infrastructural deficiencies to
environmental degradation, health crises, and social inequality. However, in this essay, I will
focus on one of the most pressing issues in my community that requires immediate attention
from authorities. The issue I have chosen is the poor transportation system in my community,
The community where I live suffers from a poor transportation system. The roads are
crowded, and the public transportation system is inadequate, leading to traffic jams and long
normal travel time, it will only take me about 20 minutes, but because of the lack of proper
transportation system, it doubles. Sometimes, it will even take me almost an hour because of the
waiting time, and I must walk about 10 minutes because jeepneys in my area are hard to find.
When going home, I need to wait for the jeepneys at SM, and since jeepneys going to my place
are not that many I must wait there for almost an hour because there are a lot of people waiting
inconvenience for residents, particularly those who rely on public transportation to travel to work
or school. The poor transportation system in our community is primarily caused by the following
immediate factors: The public transportation system is inadequate, with limited routes and
frequency, resulting in long wait times and overcrowded vehicles. The roads in our community
are crowded, leading to traffic jams and long commute times. There is a shortage of parking
spaces, forcing drivers to park illegally or on the street, contributing to traffic congestion.
The poor transportation system in our community is also influenced by the following
remote factors: The local government has not invested enough in transportation infrastructure,
such as building new roads, expanding public transportation routes, and improving parking
facilities. The rapid growth of the population in our community has led to an increase in the
number of vehicles on the road. Limited availability of affordable transportation options, such as
public transportation and bike lanes, forces many residents to rely on cars, contributing to traffic
To address the problem of poor transportation system in our community, I propose the
following solution: Invest in expanding public transportation routes and increasing the frequency
of jeepneys to reduce congestion and long wait times. Improve road infrastructure: Invest in
building new roads and improving existing ones to reduce congestion and improve traffic flow.
Provide affordable transportation options: The local government should provide affordable
transportation options, such as bike lanes and carpooling programs, or at least provide safe and
The proposed solution addresses the immediate and remote causes of the poor
congestion and long wait times, improving road infrastructure will improve traffic flow, and
encouraging alternative modes of transportation will reduce traffic congestion and air pollution.
The solution is viable because it considers the current state of the transportation system in our
community and proposes concrete actions that can be implemented to improve the situation.