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Paragraph Two There are three disadvantages of living in a small town. First of all, it is hard to get information in a small town. In Korea, the most important factor of getting information is people. The number of people you have known hasequal amount of possibility with the number of information that you can get. Secondly, there is lack of transport facilities compared with a big town. In a big town, it is easy to find public transportation such as subway, bus, taxi. Otherwise, it is hard to find public transportation in a small town. Lastly, there is lack of entertaining stuffs in a small town. For instance, there is at least one swimming pool in an apartment complex which is located in big city. However, it is hardly find swimming pool in a small town. That is why many people want to live in a big town.

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To become a good sports coach, one should possess three qualities. First, one needs knowledge on the certain event. One should know what the proper move or skill is to lead his player in a right way. Second, one should have sharp analyzing ability. Once he analyzes his players strong and weak point, he can tell what his players should fix to improve their record. Finally, one should have good communication skill with his players. Even though he knows what his players problem is and how to fix it, he cannot make his players understand those if he has poor communication with players. Therefore, those conditions are essential qualities of good coach.

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There are so many kinds of drivers in the world. However, there is only one basic mental attitude for them. The mental attitude is concerned with defensive drive. You may have heard of defensive drive. The basic idea of defensive drive is thoughtful mind. In the process of being considerate to other drivers on the road, they usually take off his or her mask. This means that when people are driving, their real personality is reflected on behaviors. If you want to know someones real characteristic, you just take his car, and see his behaviors carefully. Nobody knows whether person who is passive in school always lose his temper throwing dirt when he is

driving. There, of course, are also pacifists on the road remind us of battleground. Traffic law cannot always regulate each driver effectively. Therefore, if these all kinds of drivers have thoughtful mind, we can celebrate the end of traffic war without blood. Because, defensive drive such as making way for others is came from thoughtful mind; Im after you.

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People should know three qualities To be great parents. First of all, they should support children with anything they can do. For example, They have to give financial support for kids' demands, counsel their youngs if they have stress, lead the way when kids are confused, and show they love their children anytime. Also, they must have strong will and big goals of life. Setting the destination and direction will encourage people to live hard. Children can learn how strong will and big goals affect their attitude of their lives and the life itself. Final need for good parents is always follow morality. The reason is, children show the behavior of them unconsciously when they are grown up. For instance, they must never make problems when they are drunken. It leads their children not to be in trouble when they are grown up. In conclusion, people should learn supporting their child completely, having a great will and goal, being a moral ones to grow their juniors perfectly.

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Qualities of good friend

People judge qualities of good friend in three points. First, people think characteristics of their friends. People consider ones inner being greatly in order to be familiar with. Generally, people prefer kind and friendly person. They also prefer congenial friend. Second, people want to do not feel uncomfortable from their friends. For instance, not only conversations between each other but also social class can make people uncomfortable. In other words, people usually have friends in similar environment. Last, people want friend who can help when they are in trouble. Everyone experience hard time at least once in a life time. In that time, friends can be powerful supporter for you. Most of people remember who support them and, it connected to image of good friend. In conclusion, ones personality, background and cooperative nature are the most significant aspects of a good friend.

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The kind of Rock

One of the famous music genre, rock, is hard to define for having tremendous kinds. Therefore Id rather introduce some of rock than define what rock is. First, Im going to talk about Hard Rock. It is heavy-sound music led by electric guitar, which is based on rock'n'roll and blues. Led Zeppelin, Deep Purple, and AC/DC are representative bands. Then Id like to introduce Punk Rock for the second one. Punk rock which is the most political and defiant rock used to deny glamour of songs by doing such as using a little guitar code. Sex pistols, Ramones, and Green day are representative bands. For the last one is Modern Rock. Modern rock is the mixture of several rock genres, therefore it is especially hard to define it or distinguish it from others. Nirvana and Alice In Chains are representative bands. There are quite many kinds in rocks that I didnt introduced. How about finding a rock genre that you can fully love?

Ki Tae, Park 10/4/2011 Paragraph Two

As the youngest family member, I think the youngest has three benefits. First of all, compared to only children, the youngest has other family members to avoid his loneliness. In my home, I and my sisters usually have a joke each other and sometimes play together, so I have never felt being alone. Second, older family members help you whenever you need. For example, they can help your homework assignments. Indeed, you can receive your friends' help, but you might feel uncomfortable to ask your friends problems difficult to solve. In contrast, you can ask your older family members for the problems, without any concern. Third, having other family members provides more opportunity for you to have diverse experiences. For instance, my sister likes to blow a flute. Since she has such a hobby, she has taught me how to blow it. Therefore, I could learn how to play the flute to a certain degree. To sum up, because of these advantages, I think that the youngest of the family can be grown under beneficial conditions.