Practice 1: Guided Writing

Read the essay below. Identify the

 Content and elaboration in this essay.
 Connectors / cohesive devices.
 Type of sentences: Simple/Compound/Complex

Did you know, why we need to celebrate Mother’s Day? It is because Mother’s
Day is the day where children show an appreciation to their mothers. A mother should
be appreciated because they are the one who take care of us since bundle of joy.

As for me, I would buy a chocolate bouquet for my mother on Mother’s Day. The
chocolates bouquet is a combination of chocolates and fresh flowers. This chocolates
bouquet represents a symbol of love to my beloved mother.

Apart from that, the reason I would buy chocolates bouquet for my mother is
because she really loves branded chocolate such as Ferrero Rocher, Kisses and
Cadbury. Moreover, the price of one chocolate bouquet is quite affordable for me as a
student which is only RM 50.

Furthermore, I will buy it at Amira Bouquet Shop which is nearby my house. The
shop is very famous among local people because they always offer affordable prices.

In conclusion, we should take this opportunity to showcase our love and grateful
to our mother to have her as a mother in our entire life.