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In many careers, previewing materials is essential to getting a job done well. Previewing
strategies also help readers and writers keep focused as they work with and create
texts.
Sometimes the way you do a job really affects the final result. For example, a high
school senior decided to paint his old worn-out car. Not being the mechanical-or
artistic type, he washed his car and dried it, and then be painted it with nine cans of
red, high gloss, bargain-brand spray paint. You can probably imagine the outcome. The
painting process he used resulted in the creation of what he and his friends came to call
"The Bloodmobile." Indeed, the process he used affected the quality of the outcome.
The same principle is true for reading and writing. The early steps are important.
Carefully following these steps wiJI help you confidently begin the integrated reading
and writing journey.
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What you do before you read a text can determine whether or not you understand
what you read. We call these before-reading steps pre-reading strategies. See "Four
Pre Reading Strategies" shown here. Let's look at these.
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Previewing
Previewing means looking over a text without reading it word for word. To preview, look
over and read each of these parts and ask the questions given in "Preview Questions about
Text Elements." The goal of previewing is to get a sense of what a text will present.
Introduction • After reading the introduction paragraph, can I figure out the topic?
and Conclusion • Does the conclusion paragraph restate the writer's main idea
or confirm my idea about the topic?
A careful preview of the reading can help you figure out what the reading is
about-its topic. Being able to determine the topic of a reading is one of the most
important reading skills. The topic can be expressed in a word or a short phrase. It
will not be a complete sentence because a topic does not express a complete thought;
it is only the subject or content with which the text is concerned.
The next example is not a topic because it is a complete thought and is thus
presented in a complete sentence.
Not a topic: Although many schools are rushing to purchase iPads for
their students, little research shows that learning on iPads is more effec
tive than other methods of learning.
The Title Often Presents the Topic. A title like "Five Weight-Training
Techniques" is very helpful, as it clearly describes the topic of the reading. Not
all titles, however, are as revealing. A title like "Alternatives" does not give us
much information about the topic.
Headings Give Clues about the Topic. Flipping through the text to exam
ine its headings and subheadings will give you clues about the topic. Consider the
textbook chapter headings in "Previewing Headings."
PREVIEWING HEADINGS
By studying the title, heading, and subheadings of the textbook chapter shown in
"Previewing Headings," we can learn several things:
■ This chapter is about how humans learn.
■ There are theories about how humans learn.
■ Two theories are classical conditioning and operant conditioning.
Some readings present a number of different elements, any one of which could
be the topic. In such readings, asking what all these elements share may give you the
topic of the reading. For example, consider these subheadings from a magazine
article:
Biodiesel Engines
Natural Gas
Hydrogen-Based Automobiles
Vehicles Electric
Cars
All the subheadings refer to vehicles that use alternative forms of energy. Thus, the
topic of the article is likely to be alternative-fuel vehicles.
Early one morning, Bob is in the shower. While he showers, his wife enters
This passage illustrates
the bathroom and flushes the toilet. Scalding hot water bursts down on Bob, classical conditioning.
caus ng him to yell in pain. The next day, Bob is back for his morning shower, The bold-faced font tells
and once again his wife enters the bathroom and flushes the toilet. Panicked us the term is important.
by
Two other important terms
he sound of the toilet flushing, Bob yelps in fear and jumps out of the shower
are in italics: neutral
stream. Bob's panic at the sound of the toilet illustrates the learning process stimulus and meaningful
of classical conditioning, in which a neutral stimulus (the sound of a toilet stimulus.
flush ng) becomes associated with a meaningful stimulus (the pain of
scalding hot water) and acquires the capacity to elicit a similar response
(panic).
By noticing the formatted words in this selection, we might conclude that the two
it.alicized words-neutral stimulus and meaningful stimulus-are important for
under standing classical conditioning, the term we find in boldfaced letters.
Giraphics Will Relate to the Topic and Main Idea. A preview should
also Jr 1volve looking at any graphics. Graphics include photos, illustrations,charts, tables,
and aJ twork. As you preview readings, you may find infographics, which are illustrations
that COmbine artwork and text to convey information or explain topics. Maps are a
common ty pe of infographic, like the illustration shown in "Previewing an
Infographic."
PREVIEWING AN INFOGRAPHIC
Before Conditioning
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Conditioning After Conditioning
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Pavlov's Classical Conditioning In one experiment, Pavlov presented a neutral stimu-
1s (bell} just before an unconditioned stimulus (food). The neutral stimulus became a
onditioned stimulus by being paired with the unconditioned stimulus. Subsequently,
1e conditioned stimulus (bell) by itself was able to elicit the dog's salivation.
.ey: US = unconditioned stimulus; UR = unconditioned response; CS = conditioned stim
lus; CR= conditioned response.
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epeated Words and Phrases Can Hint at the Topic. Another method
1r identifying the topic is to briefly scan the reading. Scanning, or skimming, simply
1volves glancing at each paragraph, perhaps reading a sentence or two on each page,
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and getting a sense of the kind of content and the kind of writing in the text. As you
scan the reading, note any words that come up again and again. Look also for syn
onyms. Tmagine skimming over an article and seeing these words constantly
repeated:
flying
phobia fear nervousness
flights
paranoia calm worry
fear of flying
travel anxiety uneasiness
These words suggest that the reading's topic is the fear of flying. Notice that some of
the words are synonyms. Anxiety, worry, uneasiness, nervousness, fear-these
words are all somewhat related in meaning. Finding the recurring words and
synonyms will help you identify the topic at a glance.
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Previewing a Textbook Chapter
Study the title, headings, and photo below, taken from a chapter of a textbook
entitled Criminal Investigation. Then answer the questions that follow.
Introduction
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Blood (Courtesy Dr. Richard R. Souvlron, DDS,
Lip Cosmetics. DNA. and Lip Prints
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4. The chapter outline lists a number of items, such as hair, blood, and lip
cos metics. What are these? What information do you think the chapter will
present about these items?
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Identifying Topics
Use previewing to read each passage and identify its topic.
Predicting
After you have previewed the text carefully, a natural step is to make some
predictions. Thinking about what you have seen and read, ask yourself the questions
in "Making Predictions."
MAKING PREDICTIONS
;.Do you think the writer will provide information, or will the
·,writer try to convince me of an opinion?
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Jot down your answers before you read. After reading, go back and see if your
predic tions were correct. The better you get at previewing, the better you will
become at making good predictions about what the writer will say.
Recalling
Have you ever read a textbook one day and, the next day, completely forgotten what
you read? Most people have had this experience. One trick for understanding and re
membering what you read is to tie the new information (what you are reading) to old
information (what you already know). For example, if you are reading a chapter
about the use of DNA evidence in criminal investigations, think about what you
already know about the topic. Your knowledge may come from movies or television
shows, but that is okay! By recalling what you already know about the topic, your
brain can sun ply add the new information to the existing information. When you try
to remember what you have read, your brain has a "file" it can refer to.
One way to recall is to take out a sheet of paper and make two columns. Tn the
left hand column, make a list of things you already know about the topic. After you
read the article, go back and write down information you did not previously know in
the right-hand column. Here is an example of a student's recalling activity.
Asking Questions
Finally, before you read, think of some questions you would like the text to answer.
By finding the answers to these questions, you will be more likely to understand and
re member what you read.
After you preview the text, what questions come to mind? Jot them down. If no
questions come to mind, create some questions using the 5 W's and 1 H questions:
Who? What? Where? When? Why? and How? Here are some questions you might
ask after previewing a reading on DNA:
• What exactly is DNA?
■ How much does a DNA test cost?
■ Who uses DNA? Do all police
• How accurate are DNA tests?
depart ments gather DNA evidence?
• Where is DNA testing done?
• When is DNA useful? When is it not
■ Why does it take crime labs so long
useful?
to return DNA results?
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Topics
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After you have created questions, read the selection. Take the time to find and jot
down the answers to your questions.
PRACTICE e
Using the Four Pre-Reading Strategies
What follows is a passage, "Hierarchy of Needs," from Understanding Your
Health, by Wayne A. Payne, Dale B. Hahn, and Ellen B. Lucas. Use the four
pre-reading strategies described in this chapter and summarized in the list be
low. As you do, write your thoughts on a separate sheet.
■ Preview: What do you notice when you preview the text?
■ Predict: What do you predict the topic will be?
• Recall: What do you already know about the topic?
■ Ask: What questions do you have about the text or the topic?
Abraham Maslow has been one of the most significant contributors to the un
derstanding of personality and emotional growth. Central to Maslow's contribu
tion to twentieth-century American psychological thought was his view of
psychological health in terms of the individual's attempt to meet inner needs,
what he called the hierarchy of needs.
Maslow's theory is a positive, optimistic theory of human behavior. He be
lieved that people are motivated to grow and fulfill their potential, referring to
this phenomenon as self-actualization. In Motivation and Personality, he de
scribed self-actualization as "the need to become more and more what one is,
to become everything that one is capable of becoming." Maslow differentiated
between two categories of needs: basic needs and metaneeds. Basic needs
physiological needs, safety and security, belonging and love, and esteem
needs-are the deficiency needs and are essential and urgent. Metaneeds
come into play once the basic needs are met and include spirituality,
creativity, curiosity, beauty, philosophy, and justice. Maslow's hierarchy of
needs is ar ranged with the basic needs on the bottom, as they are the most
fundamental and powerful needs. Lower-level needs must be met before the
next level of
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Reaching one's full
potential
BASIC NEEDS
L..HM Self-worth
Affectionate
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Employment
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needs can be satisfied. Maslow believed that people must fulfill their me-
taneeds in order to become completely developed human beings. Left unful
filled, people can become cynical, apathetic, and lonely.
Maslow arrived at this model by examining people whom he considered to
be exceptionally healthy, people he defined as having developed to their fullest
potentials. People whom Maslow identified as self-actualized included Albert
Einstein, Albert Schweitzer, Eleanor Roosevelt, and Abraham Lincoln. He per
ceived these people to share similar personality characteristics, such as being
self-assured, principled, innovative, compassionate, altruistic, goal-oriented,
and internally motivated.
PRACTICE
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Monitoring Your Understanding
Now that you have completed pre-reading in Practice 3, go on to read and an
notate "Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs." When you finish, answer the questions
that follow. Use a separate sheet for your answers.
1. What is the topic of this selection?
2. List one prediction you made about this reading. Was your prediction
cor rect or not? Explain your answer.
3. Explain how you used the "recall" pre-writing strategy.
4. On a separate sheet, answer the questions you created during
the pre-writing process.
5. How did the pre-reading strategies help you to understand the selection?
Do you think your understanding improved by using pre-reading strate
gies? Explain.
directions, then you need to create your own page of instructions. Create an assign
ment page by listing answers to these questions:
• What is the topic?
• Is research required? If so, what kind of research is expected?
• Is research (or the use of sources such as the Internet) prohibited?
• What is the writing purpose-to inform, to analyze and evaluate, or to persuade?
■ What is the due date?
• What is the length requirement?
■ What formatting is expected? Has the instructor specified font type and size,
spac ing, and heading format? Do you need to include a word count? Do you
need to use a particular documentation style, such as MLA (Modern Language
Associa tion) style or APA (American Psychological Association) style?
Finally, take note of who will be reading your paper. You will need to consider
your audience as you make decisions about what to include and how to word your
ideas. Often with academic writing tasks, the instructor is the only person who will
read what you write. Even though the instructor is an audience of only one, keeping
in mind that you are writing for your professor is very important, as it will help you
choose content, terminology, and a style appropriate for academic writing. Academic
writing assignments always require formal writing, so avoid contractions and slang,
use correct grammar and mechanics, and use third person.
Original instructions: Write an essay in which you examine how credit card
companies exploit college students by giving students credit cards, even
when the students are unemployed. In your paper, include a discussion of
why credit cards can be a problem-especially for college students.
BRAINSTORMING STRATEGIES
Start with your • What are you interested in? What are you
passionate about? What aspect of these interests
can you write about?
11own interests.
I Free your
Imagination.
• if you had the time, money, energy, and ability,
what would you want to learn about? How could
you write about these topics?
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• Which world events affect or interest you? Are there
Reflect on the
world around you. issues about which you are passionate? What
might you write about these events or issues?
I Check out
Internet sites.
• See what other people are talking about by going to
sites such as CNN.com, Yahoo News, or ProCon.org.
Remember, you are looking for topic ideas, not for
actual articles.
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PRACTICE
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Finding Topics of Interest
Imagine that your writing instructor asks you to choose a current event or an issue
that is important for your classmates to consider. The assignment is to select the
is sue and write an informative essay about it. What event or issue would you
choose? Use one or more of the topic-selectiontechniques to choose a topic.
1. Your topic: _
2. What process did you use for choosing this topic? Explain in one or
two sentences:
Narrowing Topics
The topic you choose for an essay or other writing assignment (and sometimes even a
topic that is assigned to you) needs to be narrow enough for an essay. For example,
Raphael was considering majoring in music. His instructor asked students to write an
essay that discusses the daily activities involved in a job of interest to them. Raphael
decided to write about a job in the music industry. Though Raphael plays several in
struments, he did.not want to pursue a career as a performer. So he narrowed his topic
to jobs that do not include performing music.
To narrow the topic, Raphael started by breaking the subject into parts or types.
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Next, he chose one type of music career-being a teacher-to discuss in his essay.
After choosing "teacher," Raphael identified the following three kinds of teachers.
At this point, Raphael determined that these topics could be narrowed even fur
ther. Thus he identified three types of "college music instructors."
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INSTRUCTORS BAND MUSIC
DIRECTORS HISTORIANS
Raphael was then able to choose a narrower topic-the daily job activities of a
band director-that was suitable for his assignment. To check whether he had suffi
ciently narrowed his topic to fit the scope of an essay, Raphael asked himself the
ques tions shown in "Raphael Narrows His Topic."
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As Raphael did, you can use these questions to determine whether the topics you
select are suitable for essays.
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PRACTICE
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Narrowing Topics for Essays
Use the questions in "Raphael Narrows His Topic" to consider each topic
that follows. If the topic is suitable for an essay, write "Suitable for an essay."
If the topic is too broad, narrow it so that it would be suitable for an essay.
1. The programming on cable 6. Stress
television
7, Homelessness
2. The importance of healthy
lunches for schoolchildren
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PRACTICE 0
Using Discussion for Prewriting
Imagine your task is to write an essay about a current trend, such as getting a
tattoo or wearing a certain style of clothing. You must determine why the trend
is popular and how it developed. Use discussion to (1) identify a trend, (2)
make a list of the possible reasons for its popularity, and (3) determine, if
possible, how the trend developed. Jot down your answers on a separate
sheet.
Notice thatLuisa wrote down everything she could thinkof. She didn't censor any ideas.
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Using Listing for Prewriting
Drawing on your own experience as a student or a parent, think about your
K-12 education. Imagine that you plan to write an essay on the changes
that
could have improved your education. First, turn the topic into a question. On a
getting a
driver's
license
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Using Clustering for Prewriting
Use clustering to come up with examples or illustrations for an essay. The topic
for this essay is family traditions. On a separate sheet, first, turn the topic into a
question, and then draw a clustering chart to prewrite about this topic. Some
items you might consider are types of traditions, problems with traditions, and
feelings about traditions.
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Keep in mind that you may not need to use all the information these questions
will produce. At this stage, do not censor any information. If you wish, use a
computer to type in your ideas. The example below shows Carolina's questions and
answers about a particular topic.
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Using 5 W's + 1 H Questions for Prewriting
Consider the issue of cheating on tests. Use the questions to explore this
issue. Write your answers for the following questions on a separate sheet.
Topic: Cheating on tests
1. Who is involved?
5. Why does it happen?
2. What happens?
6. How does it happen?
3. Where does it happen?
7. What can we do to prevent it?
4. When does it happen?
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Questions: What are the effects of sleep deprivation? How can one avoid I
sleep deprivation?
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r,chool. cat1't live life well if !jOU don't 3et enoU!jh r,leep. mur,t take time
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Using Freewriting for Prewriting
Imagine that you are required to write an essay about the decline of manners
in public. Give yourself two to three minutes to freewrite. On a separate sheet,
write down everything that comes to mind during this time period. If you get
stuck, write a key word like rude or polite or manners over and over until you
think of new ideas.
PRACTICE
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Using Freetalking for Prewriting
Find a quiet place where you can talk to yourself or to your cell phone or digital
recorder without distraction (or embarrassment!). Imagine that you have been
assigned a paragraph or an essay on a social issue about which you are very
concerned. More specifically, your assignment is to explain why this issue is
worth our time and our attention. Examples of such issues are global warming,
the eradication of poverty in a certain place, and the improvement of every ele
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mentary school. Use freetalking to explore why your chosen social issue is im
portant. Write down at least three·ideas you discover.
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These include keeping a "gratitude journal," where you record a running list
of things for which you're grateful; making a conscious effort to "savor" all the
beauty and pleasures in your daily life; and writing a "gratitude letter" to some
important person in your life who you've never properly thanked.
These gratitude exercises all sounded pleasant enough, but would they
work for me? While I'm not currently depressed, I'm very aware that
depression runs in my family: I'm the only person-including the dog-who has
not yet been on Prozac. So I decided to indulge in all three of these exercises
over a six-week period, risking the possibility that I might become an
insufferably happy and cheerful person.
I emailed University of Miami psychologist Michael McCullough, a leading
gratitude researcher, to ask what he thought I could expect as a result of my
gratitude overdose.
"If you're not experiencing more happiness and satisfaction in your life after
this six-week gratitude infusion," he wrote back, "I'll eat my hat!"
Getting Grateful
My first step was to get a gratitude journal. Luckily, a year earlier my
recently retired father had stumbled across a bookstore that sold "quotable
journals" blank books with inspiring quotes on their covers. My father, always a
sucker for inspiration, sent me seven of them. I settled on one with a cover
that said, in all caps, "Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating
yourself." Given my experiment in manufactured happiness, this seemed
appropriate.
Journal at my side, I decided to start by taking a happiness inventory (avail
able, along with a bunch of other quizzes, at authentichappiness.org, the web
site run by positive psychology guru Martin Seligman). I scored a 3.58 out of
5, putting myself ahead of 77 percent of participants, but still leaving plenty of
room for improvement-as evidenced by my first journal entry.
"It's been a somewhat depressing day," starts my gratitude journal. "Or,
rather, week."
At first, it felt a little awkward to keep a journal specifically for gratitude-I felt
as if I should plaster my car in cheesy bumper stickers ("Happiness is") and
call it a day. But even on that first downbeat afternoon, my journal did make
me feel a little better about things. Listing things I was grateful for made me
feel, well, grateful for them-and since I'd also decided to jot down moments
each day that had made me happy (another positive psychology-endorsed
exercise), I had a concrete list of cheerful experiences to look back on when I
was feeling down. Thanks to my journal, I know that on January 18th I was
happy because I'd exercised, had a good Chinese lesson, and spent 15
minutes dancing around my room to Shakira's "Hips Don't Lie." On January
30th, I was grateful for my perseverance, the Pacific Ocean, and the fact
that I have really, really good cholesterol.
I've always kept a journal, but once my initial excitement about my new
project had passed, my writing schedule felt a bit contrived-I often had to
force myself to stay awake for a few minutes before bedtime so that I
wouldn't miss an entry. But I quickly found that encouraging myself to
focus on the good in my life instead of dwelling on the bad was helping me
gain a
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Happy Meal
To celebrate finishing my experiment-not to mention filling up my journal-I
took my boyfriend out for dinner at a restaurant here in Berkeley called Cafe
Gratitude. It's a place that is anathema to my cynical New York roots: cheery
waitresses who call everyone "darling," posters on the walls that ask
questions like, "Can you surrender to how beautiful you are?" and, worst of
all, a menu of organic, vegan dishes, all named with life-affirming sentences.
For example, saying to your seNer, "I am fabulous" means that you would like
some lasagna. "I am fun" indicates that you want some toast. Unfortunately,
there is no or ganic, vegan interpretation of "I am about to vomit."
My boyfriend and I settled on being generous, fulfilled, and accepting (gua
camole, a large cafe salad, and a bowl of rice), and in honor of my
experiment, I insisted on ordering the "I am thankful" (Thai coconut soup,
served cold). To offset the restaurant's unrelenting cheer, we both ordered
alcohol (luckily, even in Cafe Gratitude, a beer is just a beer).
While nibbling on carrot flaxseed crackers ("I am relishing"), we talked
about the past six weeks. McCullough doesn't need to eat his hat-I
definitely had experienced moments of feeling happier and more
consciously grateful as a result of the exercises, and by the end of my
experiment, my happiness index had gone up to 3.92. But I also found that
there are times when I need to allow myself to feel bad without fighting
against my negative emotions. And my cynical side continues to dream of
opening a rival restaurant next door called the Cantankerous Cafe, with
menu items like "I am depressed" and "I am resentful.''
My biggest question was how long these exercises' effects would last.
"Sometimes positive psychologists sound like we're trying to sell miracles
to people. There are no miracles There are no long-term quick fixes for
hap
piness," said Peterson, when I asked him how I could maintain my happiness
boost. "So if you become a more grateful person and you add those exercises
to your repertoire, you'll be different six months or a year from now. But if you
say okay, I'm done with the story and I'm going back to the way I was, it'll just
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have been a six-week high. There's nothing wrong with that, but it's not going
to permanently change you."
Perhaps that's why, when I got home from dinner, I went straight to my
bookcase where I keep stuff my dad has sent me-and picked out another
journal.
Kendra's Prewriting
Kendra used clustering to come up with ideas:
After prewriting, Kendra looked at her ideas. She decided to narrow her paper to
focus on myths about happiness.
Kendra's Outline
After narrowing her topic, Kendra continued prewriting. She used her ideas to create
a rough outline for her essay.
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Outline
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Introduction parairaph: I' II talk a little about Catherine Price' idea . and then
I'IIend with mg t e i tafement.
r The i Statement: Three mgth about happine½ are that happine½ come
from ffon_g . that nappirte½ come from achievement . and tnat happirte½
come from relation hip .
Bod!1 Para3raph 2: Another mgth i that per nal achievemenfo lead to happine½.
Coviclu ion para9raph: I'II _go oock to Catherine Price' idea to how that
happine½ come lrom in ide people.
After creating her rough outline, Kendra continued prewriting. She came up with
ideas to put in her body paragraphs and added them to her outline. Next, she wrote a
rough draft. She revised and edited her rough draft, and she created a correctly
formatted final draft. Here is Kendra's final draft.
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Hayworth 2
about what makes people happy that are simply wrong. Three myths Thesis statement
about happiness are that life satisfaction comes from owning things,
can just buy that new car, afford that better apartment, or get that
new smartphone they will definitely be happy. But most people know
just another gadget. It does not make its owner happy anymore. It is
just a smartphone. People who believ that things can make them
television will do the trick. Maybe having a great sound system will
result in true sat isfaction. The problem is, things cannot provide
"When I lose twenty pounds, I'll be so happy." It is true that Supporting details
achievements bring some hap piness to people. But achievements
fade. The day after graduation, the graduate wakes up and is the
same person. Even though losing twenty pounds can make a person
Achievements are enjoyed in the moment when they are made. Day-
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waking hours looking for a romantic partner. Some believe that the
partner will "complete" them. It is easy to see the falsity of the idea
riages end in divorce, and the number of break-ups for people who
part ner be the key to lasting happiness? Even people who do stay
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to gether have to work at their relationships. There are plenty of
relationships lead to lasting happin ss. So what, exactly, does make peo
ple happy? S::9Jfierine Price writes about gratitude and fiow res
lnfo_rniation from
Eic:frchers haveshovy!l tha_f'pra'difing gratit1,1d -results in true, daily af-ffde
happiness.·
changing our minds, changing what goes on inside our heads, and not
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berkeley.edu/article/item/stumbling_toward_gratitude.
76 Reading and Writing as Integrated Processes
Example: I didn't have time to study, so I looked over my notes in a hasty fashion.
I didn't have time to study, so I looked over my notes in a cursory fashion.
List each of the five words you plan to use this week, and make note of a context in
which you could use the new word.
Example: Cursory. I can use this word to teach my kids the difference between cleaning their room thor
oughly and cleaning their room in a cursory way.
e ADDITIONAL ASSIGNMENTS
1. In Practice 8, you wrote down ideas about changes that would improve
education. Using your prewriting, select two to four changes you believe would
transform public education. Write an essay in which you present your ideas.
2. Reread "Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs," a textbook selection from earlier in this
chapter. Maslow theorizes that people can work on meeting higher-level needs
only after their lower-level needs have been met. Do you agree or not? Write a
paragraph explaining your point of view. Provide examples (either real or
hypothetical) to support your point of view.
®) EMOTIONAL INTELLIGENCE
A recent experiment shows the importance of optimism, a tendency to
feel hopeful and positive about the future. A psychologist tested stu
dents at the University of Pennsylvania to determine whether optimism had
an effect on grades. The experiment showed that by analyzing the level of
optimism students had, researchers could more accurately predict the students'
college suc cess than by analyzing their SAT scores! Students who were on the
optimistic end of the scale earned better grades than did students who were
pessimistic.
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Think about optimism, pessimism, and how they affect a person's success.
Think of someone you know who is always optimistic. Has optimism made this
per son a better student or worker? Think of a pessimistic person you know. Has
pessi mism decreased this person's effectiveness? Write a paragraph in which
you speculate on this topic.
®) METACOGNITION
Did you know that students can change their learning ability over time?
If you were never successful in math in the past, that does not mean you
cannot learn to do math well now. Your ability to learn can develop and
in
crease over time. What seemed unattainable last year might prove quite
achievable this year.
Make a list of your assumptions about your strengths and weaknesses as a
learner. Note any subjects about which you have thought, "I'm just not good at that."
Next, think of a skill you found difficult at one time but later came to master. Write a
paragraph explaining how you learned the skill. Finally, write a paragraph about
whether you believe you can learn one of the weak subjects or skills you listed earlier.
In your paragraph, explain the reasons for your beliefs.
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appeared on Greater Good, the online magazine of the Greater Good Science Center at UC Berkeley.
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Understanding Your Health, 12th ed. New York: McGraw-Hill Education, 2012. 37-38; Page 57:
Source: Maslow, Abraham H., Motivation and Personality, 3rd ed. Longman, 1987; Page 53: King,
Laura, Experience Psychology, 2nd Edition. Copyright © 2015 McGraw-Hill Education. 171. Used
with permission of McGraw-Hill Education.