TASK 1

EMAIL WRITING
You are advised to spend about 25 minutes on this task
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Using all the notes, write
a reply of at least 100
words in an appropriate
style
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ANALYSE PLAN PRESENT

THE YOUR YOUR
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FROM : Didimohd@gmail.com

To : Linda linda@gmail.com

SUBJECT : Online Business

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Notes : Yes, ...

Hello my dear Linda. Thank you for

Hi, how are you?
your email. Yes, life has been great
Hope you are doing
for me so far. I am flourishing with the
great.
family business I currently ventured
into, and receiving news from you is
like a breath of fresh air.
 Alas, the chance to join the online
Paragraph 2 business talk last week was missed due
Notes : Agree! ... to my forever busy life. I totally forgot
about it! And when I finally remembered
it from your email, I was crestfallen. I wish
I was there. I definitely agree that online
business is indeed an interesting way of
The speaker stated that doing business nowadays. is indeed an
online business is more interesting way of doing business
popular than the nowadays. Personally, I think online
traditional way of doing business is easier to set up and manage,
business especially if you are thinking of opening a
small business that is only managed by
you. And the modal is not that big as well.
Paragraph 3 Knowing you, I think you will be very
successful if you ever think of undertaking
Notes : Suggest two... such business. In my opinion, you should
try to sell stuffs you love and use yourself.
I know you love shopping for clothes and
you definitely have a knack of being a
fashion designer. You could try selling
Do you have any
clothes according to your taste. I am sure
suggestions?
it will be very popular since I am also in
love with your fashion sense. You can also
sell those pre-loved clothes of yours that
you can let go. It will lessen the modal you
need to open your business.
Paragraph 3 Or, what about your make-up kits?
Notes : Suggest two... You can always be your own make-
up agent and sell it online? Those
make-up video tutorials you did on
instagram during your free time
would be an immense help in
Do you have any promoting the make-up brand you
suggestions? choose to be an agent of. I am sure
your online business will be a great
success if you choose to do what you
love and combine your interest with
your money-making endeavours!
 Talking about this is seriously
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tempting me to join you in setting up
Notes : No, because.. an online business. Perhaps maybe
one day in future. For now, I am
extremely busy with my family
business in Kota Bharu. My father has
just appointed me to be a new branch
manager in Pengkalan Chepa. I
Would you like to join seriously lack the time and energy to
me in setting up an join you setting up an online business.
online business? Nonetheless, I wish you all the best in
your new undertakings. I will be here to
help you whenever you need it.
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Do ring me up anytime. I would love
to hear more from you and your
new world of online business.
Maybe we can do a joint venture
sometimes in future.

Love, Didi
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