Essay Evaluation

Essay Title: Social networking

Points of Evaluation Evidence

1st paragraph
Does the essay have a thesis statement?
□ Yes □ No

1st – 4th Paragraph

Do the supporting paragraphs expand the thesis statement?
□ Yes □ No

1st paragraph
Does the introductory paragraph provide the background to
the essay?
□ Yes □ No

The concluding paragraph doesn’t wrap up the essay well.

Does the concluding paragraph wrap up the essay well? The concluding paragraph is too simple and doesn’t/t
□ Yes □ No conclude all aspect of supporting sentences.

All the paragraphs have topic sentences. Which is How

Do all the paragraphs have topic sentences? social networking has affected society in a negative way
□ Yes □ No

1st Paragraph – 4th paragraph

Do the supporting sentences expand the topic sentences?
□ Yes □ No

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Do all the paragraphs contain adequate linking words &
phrases?
□ Yes □ No

There are variation of sentence length in the paragraphs

Is there variation of sentence length in the paragraphs?
□ Yes □ No

There are some Grammatical errors and incorrect

Are there grammatical errors (such as incorrect use of punctuations. ( 2nd paragraph )
tenses, articles, singular/plural) and incorrect use of
vocabulary (such as informal words instead of formal
words)?
□ Yes □ No