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Article Critique
words). [4 marks]
Title:
To begin with the title of the research article is “Relationship between Ego Integrity,
Origin:
The concept of ego integrity and despair came from the theory of Erikson. Erikson (1963)
proposed that when humans go from one psychological stage to the next, they tend to balance the
inner and outside worlds. External and internal social strain. Within each stage, the individual is
challenged with negative opposing forces, such as despair, which is antagonistic to ego integrity.
Ego integrity versus despair is the last stage of personality development that involves accepting
one’s life as it is (Erickson, 1963). The older adults who are successful at this feel content with
their life and experience a feeling of completeness and those who are not fall into despair.
Purpose:
The purpose of this study was to explore the inter-relationship between despair, ego
integrity, social support, and health-related quality of life in older adults. Moreover, it aimed to
identify ego integrity and social support as predictors of health-related quality of life.
Methodology:
A correlational study was conducted on a purposive sample of 100 older adults from
Lahore. The sample consisted of 50 men and 50 women. Each group completed a series of
questionnaires including Ryffs’s Ego Integrity Scale (EIS), Medical Outcome Studies Social
Support Survey (MOS SSS), and Short Form 36 (sf36) Health Survey. Informed consent was
taken, permission to conduct research was taken as well. Respondents filled a demographic sheet
and the information was collected about the participants, such as name, age, marital status, and
Findings:
Correlation study revealed that as ego integrity grows, so does social support and the mental
and physical health of older persons. The present study's findings also suggested that older
persons with high levels of social support had high levels of ego integrity and are mentally
healthy, despite having poor physical health. Furthermore, the analysis of variance revealed that
economic stability is vital in sustaining ego integrity and mental and physical health, but social
support is more important in maintaining mental health. Multiple regression study revealed that
ego integrity and social support are significant determinants of mental health, whereas age,
exercise, presence of chronic disease, and employment status are important predictors of physical
health. Thus, correlational research revealed no significant association between ego integrity and
physical health or social support. Finally, there is no relationship between mental and physical
health.
2. What new thing did you learn from this article? (Around 300-500 words).
[2 marks]
There were many new things and concepts that I cam across with in this research
psychological, and social aspects of wellbeing and which the individual perceives
as ideal health.
Further, I learnt about the concepts of ego integrity and despair by Erikson as the
last stage of personality development and accepting one-self by reviewing the life.
And how despair is related to hatred and repentance and if an older person is
Moreover, the tools that were used for assessment were new to me, and the
dimensions they were measuring intrigued me. For example, Form 36 Health
Survey (SF-36) had 8 subscales measuring physical and mental health. In which,
Physical functioning includes, Role physical, Bodily pain, General health etc. and
Mental health is tested using 5 items and Health transition domain as well.
Statistical analysis done in the research article made my previous concepts clearer
like how we can use correlation to find out strength and relationship among the
variables, and how regression analysis can be done to find out predictors of our
dependent variable.
Moreover, I learnt that we could see physical and mental health components of
Besides, results were quite intriguing that how social support is a significant
predictor of mental health in older adults but not of physical health, and employed
older people have high level of physical functioning, unemployed having lower
means on ego integrity, and retired having high levels of mental health than
unemployed group.
Another important and intriguing finding that was new to me was apart from ego
integrity and social support demographic variables of age, exercise habits and
employment status were the factors that significantly predict physical health.
physical and mental health component of the targeted population which is another
Last, I learnt from the given article that physical and mental health of older adults
is accounted for by the degree of social support, age, presence of any chronic
3. Do you agree with the sampling strategy? Explain your response? (Around 100
words). [1 mark]
Yes, I agree with the sampling strategy that is used in the research article. As the
participants according to the defined criteria of population of interest and in this research,
the researchers have defined their inclusion and exclusion criteria, random sampling
could have not been useful in this case. So, the purposive sampling where you can choose
the desirable sample based on your expertise and judgements is highly recommended in
such situations. Although, with the defined criteria you get much smaller sample that
cannot be generalized for the whole population and isn’t representative of broader groups,
but it does help explaining, making conclusions and fulfill the purpose of the research
[2 marks]
There are few shortcomings in this research that are as follows:
First, one demographic variable marital status which is mentioned in the purpose
section of the article as well as in methodology section that the researchers were
The researchers did not mention why they excluded this variable which
Moreover, the data was not large in number, the larger data can be taken to make
The data was collected just from one city of the country where the people belong
to diverse background and culture so the findings cannot be generalized and used
The data was collected from the older people of one urban city, so the research
article does not explain the phenomenon for older people living in rural areas.
introduction part is 60 onwards and the data was collected making age range 65
Equal number of men and women were taken so it was better to find out mean
5. What are the plus points of this research? (Around 200 words).
[2 marks]
There are many plus points in this research which are as follows:
First, the article was brief but comprehensive, and easy to understand.
The scales used in this research to measure ego integrity, social support, and
health related quality of life were the Urdu versions as the population was older
people so it was easy for them to comprehend and understand the questions.
Another plus point about scales was that they were measuring different
dimensions of the variable, making the research more authentic and valid. For
example, the social support scale was measuring 5 important dimensions of it.
Moreover, short form health survey was measuring both physical and mental
health.
The researchers conducted statistical analysis and provided results for both
physical and mental health components of life which are considered in very few
researches.
As per the information given in article, ego integrity as a whole component was
measured which has been done in very few research even in western culture,
employment status, and exercise were considered and interesting results came up.
This research article did not only tell us about interrelationships between the
variables, but also conducted regression analysis and gave detailed information
about the predictors telling cause and effect relationship among variables.
Moreover, mean differences were also found out of different employment status
If I had to use a mixed method approach both quantitative and qualitative research
methods would have been incorporated in the research to draw conclusions for the target
The quantitative stage will go as it has been explained in the given research article
Ego integrity scale, Medical Outcome Study Social Support Survey (MOS SSS), and
Short Form 36 Health Survey (SF-36) to get quantitative data for statistical analysis.
Data will be collected through purposive sampling and the minimum requirement will
be 200, with 100 men and 100 women. Furthermore, data can be analyzed and
regression analysis. T-test can also be conducted to find out mean differences between
This stage entails gathering qualitative data to augment the quantitative findings.
part of the research as well to get the data from the desired population. The qualitative
data might be utilized to get in-depth insights into the participants' experiences,
feelings, and attitudes towards the notions of ego integrity, despair, social support,
and quality of life. Thematic analysis is the most appropriate method to be used in
data to uncover themes that emerge from the transcripts and recordings of the
The last stage is combining quantitative and qualitative data. To understand the
link between ego integrity, despair, social support, and quality of life, quantitative and
qualitative data can be compared. The study findings will be significantly stronger
and more conclusive if the two stages are combined. So, using a mixed methodology