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A Suburban Soliloquy
EXTENSION TWO ENGLISH MAJOR WORK
Tuna-potato chip casserole steamed on Raymond’s plate as his flustered
wife, Lois, found solace in twisting a loose thread on her apron. He stared offensively
at the plate as though a tortured rodent was strewn there. Not surprisingly, the initial
intake of his dinner fuelled an enthusiastic monologue about the booming Chevrolet
Corvette business.
probably couldn’t understand,” whilst shuffling through the usual talk of Pennant Blue
Corvettes as opposed to the Polo White ones. She smiled, nodded. Raymond
thought very highly of the jingle by Dinah Shore, ‘See the USA in your Chevrolet,”
although, his rendition was well off-key. He looked at Lois wide eyed, bouncing his
head in affirmation of his own statements. Then he looked away, trailed off into the
jingle again and verbalised mental notes about speaking to Frank at work tomorrow
Lois interrupted, sweet and nervous, while Raymond steadied, his casserole
balancing on a fork. She put her hand on the table, inviting her husband to place his
hand in hers. He did not. Nevertheless, she informed him of the pregnancy that
Doctor Cowan had just that morning confirmed. His hand confronted hers on the
table and he looked genuinely excited beneath his usual façade of austerity. To the
The prattle continued; this time about taking the boy (or perhaps a girl) to
town in the new ‘Chevy.’ He spoke about Lois dolling up a little and smirked,
congratulating himself on his new idea. Lois was instructed to call the Anderson’s
over for a barbecue tomorrow and her spiralled hair bobbed on her shoulders as she
acquiesced. A hybrid feeling of surprise and relief spun her to the rotary telephone
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and she began tugging the dial. Raymond nonchalantly swung on the back two legs
of his chair and lit another cigarette... hungrily puffing, he mumbled something
inaudibly…
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I tried to pry a clue from his stiff posture about what he had just requested. I
couldn’t ask, his fleeting excitement and courtesy had been stifled with the next
cigarette. The intuition that comes with my gender, or maybe with my wedding band,
told me he wanted the hot chiffon pie to wash down the casserole and the ephemeral
thrill of his wife becoming more domesticated. I saw right through his fleeting
pleasure. But he couldn’t see through me. I suffer with no moan, just with a bitter
“Hello? Margaret! Yes, it’s Lois. Yes, he’s doing fine. Now Marge, we want
you two over tomorrow, you and Robert? We’ll have a backyard barbecue. We
have…news, actually” The soprano squeak pinged in my ear. I ignored it. “So if you’ll
bring a dish? Yes, green salad is great. Thanks Margaret, see you and Robert
I imagined a giddy Margaret fumbling with the phone before it settled back on
its hook. I pulled a TV tray from the bench, slapped a slice of pie on for him and put it
on his lap with a touch of levity. I skulked into the cavernous chair that exudes
my skin, and into something his face appeared to love more than it ever has me. I
was the dowdy vessel, merely a tool, allowing him to thrive in the American dream.
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“But, doll, I have to say. I hope she can cook a better casserole than you,
tonight wasn’t your best work. I think chicken pot pie is your expertise. But hey, if it’s
a boy, I hope he’s not as outspoken as me!” He laughed from his stomach and
How is it that he is, so invulnerable and chock full of power? My casserole was fine.
Cold water stung my face and rollers attacked my white scalp. Spray peppered my
hair and stung my nostrils. I lifted my blouse over my head. The glimmer of pale skin
looked smooth, like the brass cup of a trophy. I tugged a nightie down over my head
***
I slithered out of the linen, stumbled into the ensuite and I gently brushed out
each curl to channel Doris Day. Then I pulled on the boxy top and queerly cut skirt
Margaret had coerced me to buy when we went into town last month. Baby blue
matched my eyes; Raymond told me when we first started dating how they danced
when I smiled. Today, I would remind him of that. I whipped up some scrambled
eggs with bacon, sliced up a peach and served toast with marmalade on the side.
It was rather royal the way Raymond walked out into the dining room that
morning. Freshly shaved and smelling of Orange Spice Creed, he kissed me on the
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forehead and then again on my apron. He patted my stomach and whispered “hello
“Do you think the Anderson’s would like fruit punch, Ray? I haven’t made that
in a while.”
“You tell me doll, I’ll just be in charge of the portable Big Boy. He’s in the shed
isn’t he? Do you think we should set him up on the patio or on the lawn? I’ll say the
patio. I can’t wait to put a fire in the grill, it’s been too long since we’ve had a
“Yes, the patio is fine. I was thinking corn on the cob, some patties… or
“Definitely the chicken. Leave it to me, you just do the simple stuff with Marge
“Excellent. We haven’t got a lot of time, we had a bit of a sleep in! A lazy
cigarette on the back lawn as he tried to remember how to assemble the barbecue,
of course without the instructions. I wiped the benches, peeled the corn husks,
washed the potatoes, cleared breakfast and hardly stopped to notice that my own
nervous palms had tattered my apron’s hem. Two essential hours reduced to
minutes before I heard an automobile door shutting and a yappy voice chew at
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Margaret wore her hair in tighter curls than mine and had a brighter dress
than I. She was very attractive except for an unpardoning large nose and an even
larger voice. She was a real prize. Ray’s mother was exactly like her, so vivacious
yet proper. Robert is the laugh to every poor joke, a people pleaser. He was the only
one who could talk for hours with Ray about the wonder that is ‘Chevrolet Corvettes,’
and still be content with his humble Austin A40. “You can have any colour you want,
as long as it’s black” he always laughs with Raymond. Ray sneers, nearly every
time.
Very quickly, Marge looked natural and familiar in the kitchen. She looked in
place, exactly like the enviable scene you would find on the front of a Lifestyle
magazine. Robert was out on the patio with Ray seconds after greeting me. Guffaws
rolled through the house from the backyard and mindless chatter buzzed in the
kitchen.
“You know Lois. I really didn’t know when you guys were going to, you
know…conceive! You two have been married for nearly a year now, am I right?
Everyone is having babies, my neighbours, my cousins, Donald and his wife from the
corner shop, hell, even my aunties are getting old and having the babies they
previously couldn’t afford! The economy has never been better. Which kind of led me
Barren! Shocking, isn’t it? That a young, married woman with a house in the suburbs
“Margaret, I didn’t say I was pregnant, you do realise.” I looked out the kitchen
window and onto the green front lawn. The living doll from across the road was
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I hate gardening.
“I know you didn’t Lo, but logic tells me that you are. Come on! Tell me I’m
right?” She gleamed with cheeks the size of her cockiness. “You had to get clucky
sooner or later, it is only natural for us women! A little secret, if you’d like…Robert
and I are trying for a baby! No such success yet, but we haven’t been married as
behind the cycle most women worship. Just the same, I can count on her to give me
tortured apron.
“Let’s get out to our husbands, they’ll be hungry. If you could bring the plate
with the potatoes and corn, oh – and the green salad, then I’ll bring out the punch
and cutlery.” Never phased was Margaret. She didn’t care I had not confirmed my
pregnancy to her, she had done her bit, reminding me that I am supposed to have a
The punch was O.K, perhaps a bit too sweet. I had cans of Tang in the fridge I
brought out to create a diversion as I took the punch bowl inside and tipped it down
the basin. Ray led the conversation, talking about the usual Chevrolet business and
his suspicion about the local mechanic, Harold, and his wife being ‘Reds.’ Robert
nodded and tactfully fed Ray’s ideas with a spoon of gentle caution about the
severity of such an accusation. Although, Rob was so diffident that Ray presumed
with an obligatory arm around my waist. “I cannot tell you a time I have been
happier.” He paused. “Maybe when the bomb was dropped on Hiroshima just 9
years ago-“
taken aback. A stern glance rolled down his nose and cast a silence over me. He
“Honey, it was completely justified. Our government had the foresight, the
courage, the wisdom and ability to…Anyway, enough of that! He sighed, rolled back
his shoulders, and then smiled, “Alright, maybe, I was last happiest when I made my
wife’s eyes dance for the first time. We were at the dance in town, and I made her
“Ahh that’s it.” He looked into the distance of the backyard with his hand
around my delicate waist, basking in his American Dream. “Well, this news has
made me just as happy, if not happier than I’ve ever been. Lois is going to have a
baby.”
We, are going to have a baby. I wanted to correct him but I knew the point
was mute.
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The squawk of a parrot slipped through Margaret’s lips and she threw her
hands in the air. Robert congratulated us both, a handshake for Ray and a kiss on
the cheek for me. Marge let the rest of the neighbourhood know something exciting
was happening on our block through a shriek that could curdle milk. Although, I’m
fairly certain I heard Heather across the road scream like that when her husband
bought her a new Mix Master, so maybe it didn’t brand itself as a “you’re pregnant”
squeal. Margaret followed through with her overly audacious comments as per usual.
“Well, a healthy child is a good child…” he paused. “And so is a quiet one that
works hard and presents well…” Ray winked at Robert and gave him a playful punch
to solidify the joke. “I will be blunt – I’d love a boy.” I should be shocked. But I wasn’t.
It still hurts. I could almost feel the foetus bury its subjectively loved head in a crevice
of my womb. Ray gave his glamorous grin. “Like I said, in all honestly, this time, a
“Yes, well you would want a boy wouldn’t you Ray! Imagine, like father like
son! He’d probably work in the automobile business, just like his father, hey?”
Margaret sparkled when she spoke, knowing that she was saying exactly what his
“You’re spot on the money Margaret. But, only the Chevrolet business, none
of that Austin rubbish…” he winked at Robert and a comfortable Rob bobbed his
“It’s natural to want a child of your own gender, I’m sure! I’d love a girl, fingers
crossed! To teach her to cook and sew, just like my mother taught me. And you’re
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mother would have taught you, right Lo? She was the doyenne of quilting! Rob would
love a boy though I’m sure, to take into town to teach him the tricks of the trade!”
I felt like the eye of a tornado. I was the emptiness from which this egotistic
conversation gyrated. That is the trouble, the eye of the tornado is never applauded
for its stability in the storm. Yet, the ostentatious outer wind is celebrated for its
The bed felt colder and harder than usual. The lace on my nightie felt prickly,
like small cockroach legs fringing my nightgown. I lay awake as alert as the disquiet
in my chest. Tomorrow wouldn’t bring any new notes to this deathless requiem.
Tomorrow demands the routine that polishes my brass bodice and cements the
plaque of ownership to my husband at my base. I’ll get up, powder my face, pull a
sash around my dress and cover it all with a fraying apron. I’ll slice some peaches
and toast some bread. I’ll smile and nod a few times. I’ll clear away the plates and
kiss him goodbye. Then I’ll date the duster for an hour, flirt with the cleaning
cupboard. I’ll wash my hair and make the bed. Just like I am sure Ray’s own mother
did, it would confuse and infuriate him to anything different. Curse the Oedipus
complex.
I will mirror the actions of the day before, as stripped of choices as a thrall in
the Soviet. Is there a point? A meaning? A purpose? Surely, I shouldn’t dare ask
myself these questions, however silently. I must be delusional. My ennui was the
tempting serpent, and I ate the forbidden fruit as I let my neuroses cultivate in
virginal imagination.
I liken this imprisonment to a caged painter, with a canvas in view, but not
within arm’s reach. Will I give birth, possibly to a daughter, in this very same cage?
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The very same damned cage that is cold and uncomfortable and suffocating and
claustrophobic? Or will it be a son, who will have a royal palette in his right hand with
“It’s just the pregnancy Lois, it happens. We’ll talk about it tomorrow, go to
sleep now.” He cradled himself in the quilt and his eyes fluttered in the final moments
Like most mornings, a maze of hot capillaries spread through my cheeks like
beet juice on a napkin. I wouldn’t enter the living room until powder concealed my
facial woes and my posture upheld the sweet manner of decorum. I extracted
strength from the air and faced yet another day of the life that women from other
lands could only dream of. Yet, I burned with a pervasive discontent for superficial
This morning’s meal was waffles with cream and chilled grapefruit. Raymond
always scrunched his nose at the sour grapefruit pith but refused to make a
comment that could be interpreted as a weakness. That was the right thing to do, he
vulnerability; even if it was only to forfeit his stern facade to a fruit. His own father’s
shoulders never shook, even when his own wife contracted polio and died. It had
the bright décor. Each item of our living and dining room was as modern as we could
afford. Our ottoman chair set combined a royal red leather for Raymond’s and a
sandy yellow for mine. The coffee table was a queer shape but Margaret had
assured me it was in vogue to have awkward thin table legs protruding from the
timber top. I always tried to have a perky bundle of gerberas on the coffee table from
the garden. Our whole living room colour scheme was a fraudulent reflection of our
marriage.
He inhaled the waffles and all that remained was a battered napkin on his
plate. I sulked around in the kitchen as he ate and didn’t immediately sweep his plate
to the basin like I usually would. He stiffened, astonished. Ray saw my eyes set on
the front lawn and he watched my thoughts dripping from my ears into nothingness. I
“Nothing, Ray. I’m only tired.” His nostrils flared as a hot exhale escaped. My
only movement was a gentle tugging at the unravelling threads of my apron. I don’t
“Then I suggest that you polish up your act, Lois. You’re not making this
pregnancy pleasant in the slightest for me.” Then he left. The rubber soles of his
patent leather shoes primly clicked as he walked to the car. He looked smart in his
suit, with small but stylish buttons on the points of his collar.
***
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Steam moistened the mirror cabinet in the bathroom. I performed a pathetic
Nothing.
I was not at all erotic, or humorous. A reflection of a forlorn body stood across
from me. My appearance was undesiring and my movements were artless. The
foggy mirror was the only element stopping even closer scrutiny. I slid into the
shower and the hot water seemed to rob me of the dwindling energy I had reserved
for washing my hair and body. I slipped down the shower wall, the bumps of my
spine grated on the tiles and grout. I collected my limbs in a small bundle on the
The hot droplets turned to relentless cold darts after so long. I shamelessly
slept on the shower floor. It could have been for half an hour, or closer to three
hours. Time seems senseless when one’s mind is as tempered as Lucifer’s furnace.
The most pitiful part, was that the only thing that bothered me enough to get up and
dress was that I couldn’t bear to look at my stomach any longer. I was repulsed by
the warm little home I had made for a child who I did not know that I could love.
***
sweat felt as thick as honey. My heart burned for the hatred I had for my son. Then
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my bones ached for the sorrow I had for my daughter. I peeled myself from the
read. I craved to be understood. No, that’s not so. To be heard. I yearned for an
organ to hail my words. Not even a heart, just an ear, however deaf. It would be
unprecedented. I Imagined, I might even suffer a heart attack, and choke on my own
shock collapsing to the ground in a frail mound. Who’d know I was gone? No one!
That’s the joke! The bitter, hilarious scenario! I smirked wickedly and clawed at the
notepad. I choked a pen with my whole fist and took it to the weak, thin page.
I loved it.
How do I begin to describe this eternal lullaby? I’m feeling malicious tonight. I
don’t often. I mean, I usually feel rancorous, but now I feel absolutely murderous. You see,
I’m laughing!
My finite imagination fails to think of worse news for little Lois to receive! You see,
there is the chance that I could have a boy. A little privileged boy, my very superior
Raymond would love that! He was the oldest child of three. All boys! We could create a
perfect modern replica of his own family. But having a boy, is just another shark to add to
the pond, when you look through my lens. The fish will parade around the tank, flashing
each of their scales, showing their domesticity, their cooking skills and their ability to be a
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submissive lover. My son will viciously circle the tank until he expertly picks his favourite,
Do you see, my dear reader? That I’m going to give birth to a monster? I am
How do I go about such destruction? How can I use the same hands that have sewn
quilts and massaged dough, to terminate the cycle of my gender’s subjection? It would mar
these delicate fingers, stain them with defiance for propriety. I couldn’t just do it to him,
I’d have to take myself too. How do I fetter the jumping pulse under my skin?
Killing.
Myself.
But why would I go through with that? I am not worth such a masterful plan!
Such creativity should not be wasted on stupid, little, Lois. Poisoning a page with such
How do I use this position? I’m screaming through my fingers. I feel like a deranged
opium addict, shamefully seeking a euphoria this cage doesn’t offer. How do you propose I
break from this cage, dearest Ray? Can you help me, my darling husband?
Brilliant light burned the sleep from my eyes. It felt like my skull had melted to
I battled to the pantry to pull down my apron and splashed water on my face
over the basin. I boiled water for coffee and quickly wiped down the benches.
Scrambled eggs seemed like the best option; their name was a reflection of the
current situation and my mental state. Then the usual occurred. He hadn’t even
noticed that his wife was not asleep next to him, or at the least, he didn’t care
enough to mention it. He went off to work after kissing my stomach and reminding
I tidied unnecessarily to distract myself from the fervent night that was. I had a
short lived romance with the Singer vacuum before it nearly ate the only passion I
had shown in a very long time. The victimised page had landed under the table
during my disgruntled sleep. Fortunately, it had hidden itself from Ray. I would have
been mortified! Although, I am not sure why, whether it was the idea of Raymond
reading the contents, or if he had seen the childish cursive script. I’d already begun
not to care.
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My eyes darted around the alphabet soup. When read, it was only just more
than a string of unintelligible syllables. Cries for an ear had definitely gone
unheeded.
The last words knelled like great brass bells at a funeral. I wanted to crawl
between the hasty black lines of ink until I found the answer hidden in the question. I
imagined myself slinking through the illegible lettering until I reached “here,” curling
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Lois propped the mattress onto her knee. Her blinded hand felt around over
the wooden slats until she gripped the thin photo album. The mattress fell with a
simultaneous thump and expulsion of dust. With a robotic poise Lois walked to the
dresser and grimly reviewed the records of past fatalistic depressions. Each page
detailed numberless miseries. Lois’ posture did not succumb to the page’s terror.
She maintained equanimity as she punctiliously pasted the letter of the previous
night on one of the few pages not already sullied with gloom. Meticulously, she
printed the date: 26th of March 1954. Flipping through the pages, focused eyes settled
on random sections of her historical miseries, like a frog’s tongue would survey
insect larvae.
“Should I be concealing my grades? Some of the girls talk glamorously of Wellesley College.
I don’t deem it fair to harbour such brave dreams, when trends show that I will find a husband to
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“The more I observe my parent’s relationship in retrospect,
I realise that it was far more her that took on a masculine role,
“I’m battling with an iron ball and chain every tedious day.”
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“I spent the day on the settee. Ray gave me a stern word.
Lois carefully closed the album and slid it under the mattress. The room
smelled of a disturbing distance. She adjusted her posture and prompted her
The kitchen light shone vitality onto the dining table where Lois comfortably
pushed and pulled a thin sewing needle through the cotton of her loyal apron. The
petite rose petals that detailed the fabric’s print slowly began to look less as if they
had been trampled by boots near the hem, and more like a nurtured garden. The
delicate science of sewing her apron was a reconciliation process. Lois’ hands
loosened as she sewed, like her fingers were moving with the ebb and flow.
The apron looked proper and proud, gathering at the waist marvellously. It
boasted of indulgence, ostentatiously showing the new shiny satin ribbon tied around
her back. Lois danced around the kitchen with a sweet smile that met no eyes.
“Martha Deane’s Cooking for Compliments” lay open on the bench as Raymond’s
wife spun through the kitchen cooking noodles and grating cheese.
At six o’clock predictably, Raymond pulled into the drive way. With a desirable
nonchalance, he alighted from the maiden voyage of his Red Chevrolet Corvette. He
simultaneously supported his quiff with his left hand as he admired the shining paint
on his car. Lois bounced out of the house with an eager smile and joined the scene
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of an evening television advertisement. She congratulated her husband on the
spontaneity of his purchase and warned him not to wait long outside because dinner
was steaming on the counter. Before he had the chance to light an impatient
cigarette, his fork was shovelling dinner into his talkative mouth. Raymond
commended his wife on its crunchy perfection. As though she had the mouth of a
ventriloquist’s dummy, her face obediently quirked into a smile. Lois ate dinner, not
hidden by her apron, but supported by it. And hence, another day came to an end
and another tuna-potato chip casserole was consumed at the altar of the American
Dream.
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